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Part 4　Writing
大众媒体的利弊
写作题目
　　假定你是李华,在今年的寒假期间,你的好友Tom迷上了网络新闻,请你帮他分析一下网络新闻的利弊,用英文给他写一封建议信。内容包括:
1.获取最新新闻,减少纸张的使用等;
2.存在虚假信息,易误导大众;
3.建议。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I heard that you were addicted to the Internet news.　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.　　　　v.发布
2.　　　　adj.批评的,批判性的;关键的
3.　　　　adj.错误的,不真实的
4.　　　　　　很多;许多
答案　1.release　2.critical　3.false
4.dozens of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明写信目的
(1)I'm writing to tell you that the news　　　　 　　　　 　　　　　　　　(网络上发布的)has both advantages and disadvantages.
第二段:介绍网络新闻的利弊并提出建议
(2)With the help of the Internet, we can use our mobile phones or other devices to get 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(很多资料)in a short time.
(3)　　　　 　　　　(另外), by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, and it is beneficial to the environment.
(4)However, the Internet news is also flooded with　　　　 　　　　 (虚假信息)and it 　　　　 　　　　(误导人们)easily.
(5)Therefore, you should be　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (有批判能力的新闻读者)and you won't be tricked.
答案　(1)released on the Internet　(2)dozens of materials　(3)In addition　(4)false information;misleads people　(5)a critical news reader
2.句式升级
(6)用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句(3)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(7)用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句(4)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用so that改写句(5)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(6)In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment.
(7)However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information, which misleads people easily.
(8)Therefore, you should be a critical news reader so that you won't be tricked.
连句成篇
Dear Tom,
I heard that you were addicted to the Internet news. I'm writing to tell you that the news released on the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
With the help of the Internet, we can use our mobile phones or other devices to get dozens of materials in a short time. In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment.However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information, which misleads people easily.Therefore, you should be a critical news reader so that you won't be tricked.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于网络新闻媒体的话题词汇和句式
话题词汇:
(1)种类、手段及现状
①media n.媒体,传媒
②online adj.联网的　adv.在网上
③Internet n.互联网
④website n.网站
⑤update v.更新;给……提供最新消息
⑥post v.发帖子
⑦comment v.发表评论
⑧popularity n.流行,普及
⑨obtain vt.获得,赢得
⑩get around(新闻或消息)传开
arouse wide attention引起广泛关注
(2)利弊、作用及未来
①advantage n.有利条件,优势
②disadvantage n.不利因素
③outweigh vt.比……重要
④positive adj.积极的
⑤negative adj.消极的
⑥have an effect/influence/impact on对……有影响
句式:
(1)开头
①As we can see, the online news media enjoys great popularity among people, especially young people.
正如我们看到的,网络新闻媒体在人们中非常受欢迎,特别是在年轻人中。
②It is clear that the online news media is becoming increasingly popular among Internet users all over the world.
很明显,网络新闻媒体在全世界的互联网用户中越来越受欢迎。
(2)主体
①One of the advantages of the online news media is that it can satisfy people's need for relevant information anytime and anywhere.
网络新闻媒体的优势之一就是它能满足人们随时随地了解相关信息的需要。
②On the one hand, the online news media allows people to release news information freely. On the other hand, it provides a whole new platform for people to interact.
一方面,网络新闻媒体允许人们自由发布新闻信息。另一方面,它为人们提供了一个全新的互动平台。
③Another negative aspect is that it can make false news spread more quickly than any other traditional media.
另一个消极的方面是,它可以使假新闻传播得比任何其他传统媒体更快。
④The online news media has more advantages over other traditional news media.
网络新闻媒体比其他传统新闻媒体更具优势。
⑤Compared with the traditional news media, the online news media has many advantages.
与传统新闻媒体相比,网络新闻媒体有很多优势。
⑥The online news media makes it easy for people to interact with others.
网络新闻媒体使人们与他人的交流变得容易。
(3)结尾
①With the improvement in people's understanding of the online news media, it will play a more important part in people's life.
随着人们对网络新闻媒体认识的提高,它将在人们的生活中扮演更重要的角色。
②The online news media will go hand in hand with other forms of the news media.
网络新闻媒体将与其他形式的新闻媒体携手并进。
实战演练
假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim听说直播购物(live-stream shopping)在中国很流行,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.你是否通过直播进行过购物;
2.你对直播购物的看法或感受。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
You're quite right about live-stream shopping being popular in China.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
How about your live-stream shopping in Britain Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
写作题目
　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
In Emily White's hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many people in the town. Many people tried out each year for it but so many were turned away. It could only include the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens—her music teacher—to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Emily's body and said, “Child, you just don't fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”
Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral(合唱的)room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, “Emily, you're next.” Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to do. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　Finally, the day of the performance came.　 　　　 　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.out of shape走形的;不健康,身体不好
2.make it幸免于难,渡过难关
3.recognize v.认出
4.performance n.表演
5.try out for...参加……选拔(或试演)
6.turn away把……拒之门外
7.reject vt.拒绝接受,不予考虑
8.hesitate vi.犹豫,迟疑不决
9.struggle vi.挣扎
10.suffer from...因……受苦
11.in pain感到痛苦
障碍词汇
accompany vt.为……伴奏
长难句
原句　She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
分析　该句是一个并列复合句,but连接两个并列分句。第二个分句中with her strange body figure作原因状语。
译文　她的确活了下来,但由于她奇怪的体形,每个人甚至从远处都能认出她。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:第二天,Emily紧张地看合唱室门上的名单(首句信息)→Emily被选上→Emily心情复杂,兴奋之余流露出不自信→Mr. Butler对Emily说了一番话,引导Emily接下来坚定信心,刻苦训练。
第二段:终于到了演出那天(首句信息)→Emily走上表演舞台后,观众因她的外表而产生不好的反应→Emily不受影响,全身心投入表演→Emily演出成功,观众的态度发生转变→Emily战胜自己,完成蜕变。
遣词造句
1.在横线上填入适当的单词
(1)to one's 　　　　让某人惊讶的是
(2)　　　　adj.神秘的
(3)remain 　　　　保持冷静
(4)with all one's 　　　　全心全意地
(5)come 　　　　遇到
(6)be used 　　　　 sth.习惯于某事
(7)　　　　 one's breath 屏息
(8)break 　　　　突然开始做某事
答案　(1)surprise　(2)mysterious　(3)calm
(4)heart　(5)across　(6)to　(7)hold　(8)into
2.完成句子
(9)She was 　　　　(喜出望外)but 　　　　(怀疑的).
(10)She hit her hand hard 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(却发现)she wasn't dreaming.
(11)Then Mr. Butler walked out of the room　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(带着笑容).
(12)Emily was 　　　　 　　　　(深受鼓舞), and she 　　　　
　　　　(坚定地点点头)and promised to practice hard for the performance.
(13)　　　　 　　　　 (一出现) on the stage, she was 　　　　
　　　　(受到) scornful eyes.
(14)The audience 　　　　 　　　　(爆发)thunderous applause.
(15)Mr. Butler was touched, and he gave Emily　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(一个大大的拥抱).
(16)Then he knew that Emily had 　　　　 　　　　(战胜了她自己).
答案　(9)overjoyed;doubtful　(10)only to find　(11)with a smile　(12)greatly encouraged;nodded determinedly　(13)Upon/On appearing;greeted with　(14)broke into　(15)a big hug　(16)overcome herself
3.句式升级
(17)用形容词作状语合并句(9)和句(10)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(18)把句(11)改写成倒装句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(19)用过去分词作状语改写句(12)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(20)用so...that...结构改写句(15)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(21)把句(16)改写成强调句,强调时间状语
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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答案　(17)Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn't dreaming　(18)Then out of the room walked Mr.Butler with a smile　(19)Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance　(20)Mr. Butler was so touched that he gave Emily a big hug
(21)It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself
连句成篇
The next day,Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. To her surprise, on top of the list was her name! Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn't dreaming. Then out of the room walked Mr. Butler with a smile. “Emily, we had another piece of good news for you,” he said in a mysterious voice. “We choose you to be the lead singer. Do you believe in yourself ” Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance.
Finally,the day of the performance came. Upon appearing on the stage, she was greeted with scornful eyes. But remaining calm, she began to sing with all her heart. Who knew how many such situations she had come across She was really used to it. When she finished her song, there was a moment of silence, as if the world were holding its breath. Suddenly, the audience broke into thunderous applause. Mr. Butler was so touched that he gave Emily a big hug. It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself.
写作积累
与“神态描写”相关的表达
1.脸上激动的表情:an expression of excitement on one's face
2.坚定的眼神:a determined look
3.满足的微笑/神情:a smile/look of satisfaction
4.灿烂的微笑:a brilliant smile
5.拉着长脸:draw a long face
6.怒视某人:glare at sb.
7.极度愤怒的神情:a look of burning anger
8.因愤怒而颤抖:tremble with anger
9.一丝微笑浮上她的脸庞。A smile appeared on her face.
10.她眼中含满泪水。Her eyes were filled with tears.
11.She looked up with a puzzled look on her face.她抬起头,满脸困惑。
12.I can tell from his gloomy expression that the situation is bad.从他忧郁的表情我能看出情况不容乐观。
13.Wretched, the little boy was in low spirits at the thought of parting from his friends.这个小家伙愁眉苦脸的,一想到即将和朋友分别就情绪低落。
14.Raising his eyebrows, he pretended to be surprised.他扬起眉毛假装很惊讶的样子。
15.Knowing that their team had won the game, they grinned from ear to ear.当得知他们的队伍赢得比赛时,他们笑得合不拢嘴。
16.She totally couldn't contain her inner delight, beaming at the new-born baby.她完全控制不住内心的欢喜,对着新生儿眉开眼笑。
17.Hearing his answer, they guffawed.听到他的回答,他们哄堂大笑。
18.He forced a smile but the pale face revealed his panic.他勉强笑了一下,但苍白的脸色透露了他的不安。
19.He chuckled, reaching out his hand and patting his son's shoulder.他轻声笑了起来,伸手轻轻拍了拍儿子的肩膀。
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 1　The mass media
Part 4　Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
You're quite right about live-stream shopping being popular in China.I'd like to share something about it with you.
I often buy things through live-stream shopping. For me, purchasing products through live-stream shopping has already become a habit. First, it's a more time-saving alternative than going to malls. Second, the live broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face, which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages. It's just like shopping in the real stores. Third, it enables consumers to have a more intuitive and comprehensive understanding of the products. More importantly, it has also created millions of jobs and boosted e-commerce and the express industry.
How about your live-stream shopping in Britain Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物　②purchase vt.购买　
③alternative n.可供选择的事物　④intuitive adj.直觉的;易懂的;有直觉力的　⑤comprehensive adj.全面的
2.亮点句型
Second, the live broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face, which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages.(which引导非限制性定语从句)第二,现场直播可以让我们和卖家面对面交流,这比只浏览介绍页面有优势。
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