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Part 4　Writing
体育活动
写作题目
　　假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom想了解你们学校的体育活动,请你给他回封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍学校的体育活动;
2.介绍你喜欢的体育活动并说明理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your email asking about our sports activities.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1.　　　　 adj.多种多样的,不同的
2.　　　　 n.马拉松赛跑
3.　　　　 n.追求的目标,夙愿;野心,雄心
4.　　　　 vi.参加
答案　1.diverse　2.marathon　3.ambition　4.participate
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:点明写电子邮件的目的
(1)I am writing to　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(与你分享一些细节).
第二段:介绍学校的体育活动
(2) Every week, we have two PE classes and we learn basketball, ping-pong, tai chi 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (等等) in the two PE classes.
(3)We also　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(参加多种多样的体育比赛) which are held in our school like marathons and football games.
第三段:介绍你喜欢的体育活动并说明理由
(4)Of all the sports, I like badminton best, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(使我受益匪浅).
(5)It can not only help me keep fit but also　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(给我面对挑战的毅力) in life.
(6)I believe having a healthy body and mind is　　　　 　　　　
　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(实现我们的雄心的关键).
答案　(1)share some details with you
(2)and so on　(3)participate in diverse sports events　(4)which benefits me a lot　(5)give me the strength to face challenges　(6)the key to achieving our ambition
2.句式升级
(7)用“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句改写句(2)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用过去分词作后置定语改写句(3)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)Every week, we have two PE classes, in which we learn basketball, ping-pong, tai chi and so on.
(8)We also participate in diverse sports events held in our school like marathons and football games.
连句成篇
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your email asking about our sports activities. I am writing to share some details with you.
Every week, we have two PE classes, in which we learn basketball, ping-pong, tai chi and so on. We also participate in diverse sports events held in our school like marathons and football games.
Of all the sports, I like badminton best, which benefits me a lot. It can not only help me keep fit but also give me the strength to face challenges in life. I believe having a healthy body and mind is the key to achieving our ambition.
Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于介绍体育活动的增分佳句
1.开头:举办体育活动的目的
①I hold the view that sportsmanship is more important than achievements.我认为,体育精神比成绩更重要。
②From my point of view, sportsmanship matters more compared with achievements.在我看来,与成绩相比,体育精神更重要。
2.主体:体育活动的好处
①I have joined the basketball team, where I not only learn the importance of teamwork but also strengthen my body, which is of great benefit to my mental health as well as physical health.我加入了篮球队,从中我不但懂得了团队合作的重要性,还增强了我的体质,这对我的身心健康大有益处。
②Sports are also very useful for character building.体育运动还非常有利于品格的培养。
③Not only does exercise improve our health but it also makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency.运动不仅改善我们的健康,而且使我们愉快,提高我们的学习效率。
　　3.结尾:表达期望
①Based on the above reasons, I think sportsmanship should be emphasized.基于以上原因,我认为应该强调体育精神。
②All in all, we should keep in mind that the spirit of friendship, solidarity and fair competition is the most important.总之,我们应该牢记,友谊、团结和公平竞争的精神是最重要的。
实战演练
你校英文报主编李华观察到近期的亚运会和校运动会把同学们的目光都吸引到了运动上,他决定举办一次题为“The Best Sporting Moment I Witnessed”的征文活动。请你写一篇80词左右的短文参赛。内容要点如下:
1.赛场上的情景;
2.你的简短评论。
The Best Sporting Moment I Witnessed
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 2　Sports culture
Part 4　Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The Best Sporting Moment I Witnessed
Nowadays, influenced by the 19th Asian Games and School Sports Meeting, students are becoming increasingly interested in sports.
One best moment I witnessed was when our class broke the school record in the 4×100m relay race. Sweat mingled with laughter, the race was highly spoken of. Tired as they were, all the participants ran as fast as they could. Finally, the team's hard work and dedication paid off, demonstrating the true spirit of teamwork. When I saw the victory, tears of joy filled my eyes.
In the end, I hope we students will actively participate in the sports both physically and mentally.
1.重点词汇
①become interested in对……感兴趣　②witness v.看到,见证　
③speak highly of高度评价　④tired adj.疲劳的　⑤pay off成功,达到目的
2.亮点句型
Tired as they were, all the participants ran as fast as they could. (as引导让步状语从句,形容词前置时用部分倒装)尽管他们很累,但所有的参赛者都尽可能地快速奔跑。
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