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Part 4　Writing
眼部健康
写作题目
　　假定你是校报记者李华,针对全校学生视力检查情况,你对校医院眼科医生宁医生进行了一次采访。请根据采访内容写一篇英语短文。以下是采访的具体内容:
基本信息:全校学生近视率达80%;
医生解读:近视主要是由过度用眼造成的,没有药物能治愈;
医生建议:重视视力保护,常做眼保健操,多参加室外活动。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.　　　　vi.专门研究(或从事),专攻
2.　　　　vt.确认;发现;显示
3.　　　　vi.发生,(由……)引起
4.　　　　vt.恢复;修复
5.　　　　vt.& vi.调整;适应
6.　　　　vt.限制;约束
7.　　　　　　全力解决;努力处理
答案　1.specialize　2.identify　3.arise
4.restore　5.adjust　6.restrict　7.wrestle with
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍采访对象和内容
(1)I had an interview with Doctor Ning　　　　 　　　　 　　　　　　　　(专门研究眼部保护的)about the eyesight test among us students.
第二段:介绍全校学生的近视情况、医生的解读以及诊治难度
(2)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(测试结果发现)that 80% of students in our school were short-sighted.
(3)Doctor Ning explained that 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(它主要是由……引起)the overuse of the eyes.
(4)No medicine could 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(治愈和恢复)it.
第三段:介绍医生的建议
(5)When she was asked how to wrestle with this, she recommended students to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(调整和限制自己的学习时间).
(6)She 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(提到经常做眼保健操)and more outdoor activities were beneficial to our eye health.
答案　(1)specializing in eye protection
(2)The test results identified　(3)it mainly arose from　(4)cure and restore　(5)adjust and restrict their learning time　(6)mentioned that regular eye exercises
2.句式升级
(7)把句(3)和句(4)合并为一个主从复合句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用状语从句的省略改写句(5)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)Doctor Ning explained that it mainly arose from the overuse of the eyes and that no medicine could cure and restore it.
(8)When asked how to wrestle with this, she recommended students to adjust and restrict their learning time.
连句成篇
Recently, I had an interview with Doctor Ning specializing in eye protection about the eyesight test among us students.
Surprisingly, the test results identified that 80% of students in our school were short-sighted.Doctor Ning explained that it mainly arose from the overuse of the eyes and that no medicine could cure and restore it.
When asked how to wrestle with this, she recommended students to adjust and restrict their learning time.She mentioned that regular eye exercises and more outdoor activities were beneficial to our eye health.
写作积累
词块
be common among teenagers在青少年中很普遍
a survey carried out by WHO世界卫生组织开展的一项调查
keep a good sitting posture保持良好的坐姿
take a short break every hour of reading每读一个小时就短暂休息一下
do eye exercises做眼保健操
句子
We are investigating a problem—short-sightedness, which is very common among Chinese teenagers today.我们正在调查近视问题,这在当今的中国青少年中很普遍。
Students should not read in bed or in dim light.学生们不应该在床上或在昏暗的光线下看书。
If we obey the rules above, we can prevent our eyes from becoming short-sighted.如果我们遵守上述规则,我们就可以防止我们的眼睛变得近视。
Our eyes need rest.我们的眼睛需要休息。
It is a good habit not to read books or newspapers for a long time.不长时间看书或看报纸是个好习惯。
Watch green grass and other plants from time to time.不时地看看绿草和其他植物。
The eyes are the window of our soul.眼睛是心灵的窗户。
When reading or writing, we should keep a standard posture.在阅读或写作时,我们应该保持标准的姿势。
实战演练
假设你是李华,因为学生们越来越多地接触高科技产品,学生近视的问题日益严重,请你给《中国日报》写一封信,呼吁重视学生近视问题,内容包括:
1.学生近视的原因;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 3　Fit for life
Part 4　Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua. I'm writing to appeal to people to pay attention to the severe problem of students' short-sightedness.
Nowadays, students are becoming more and more exposed to high-tech products like smart phones and tablets. Besides, the heavy learning burden adds to the problem.As a result, there's a growing tendency for students to have worse eyesight.
Obviously, it's time to attach great importance to the problem. One good way to protect our eye is to take part in outdoor activities regularly, which will reduce the use of eyes. Besides, raising awareness of protecting our eyesight is also of great significance, always reminding us to use our eyes properly.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①appeal to 呼吁　②be exposed to 接触……　③add to增加　④as a result 因此　⑤attach great importance to 重视　⑥raise awareness of 提高……的意识
2.亮点句型
①As a result, there's a growing tendency for students to have worse eyesight.(不定式短语作定语) 因此,有一个增长的趋势就是,学生的视力越来越差。
②One good way to protect our eye is to take part in outdoor activities regularly, which will reduce the use of eyes.(which引导非限制性定语从句)保护我们视力的一个好方法就是经常参加户外活动,这会减少用眼。
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