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Unit 4
I used to be afraid
of the dark.
Section B 3a-3b
Writing
①To talk about changes in appearances,
personalities and hobbies.
②To master and use the sentence pattern:
…used to…，but now…
③To use the past tense and present tense to write a passage about your changes.
Learning Objectives
Best speakers
学校将举办以How I've changed为主题的演讲活动, 让我们写一篇演讲稿！
Notice
Let's review
Li Wen's changes Personality He used to be_______ and ________, but now he is more___________ and _________.
Study He used to be_____________classes and failed his ______________. But now he _____________.
Activities He used to ______ and he was not able to ________________, but now he make some ______________. He even ____________________________and become __________in many other activities.
lonely
outgoing
examinations
absent from
shy
good friends
unhappy
happier
studies harder
make friends
joins the school basketball team
active
How can we describe a person's changes？
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
Study
Activities
Appearance
She used to , but now .
In the past
Now
be fat
she is thin/of medium build
Let's compare
Appearance
She used to , but now .
In the past
Now
have short hair
she has long hair
Let's compare
Personality
She used to ， but now .
In the past
Now
be shy
she is outgoing
Let's compare
Hobbies
He used to ， but now .
In the past
Now
like playing mobile phone
he likes reading
Let's compare
Activities
She used to _________, but now ____________ .
In the past
Now
Let's compare
She didn’t use to like , but now she likes .
like painting
she likes singing
What about your changes in study？
I used to be poor/good at .but now I .
I didn’t use to like class. but now I .
Chinese
math
English
physics
chemistry
geography
biology
politics
history
music
art
computer science
P.E
In the past Now
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
Pre-writing
Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies.
3a
be tall / short
heavy/ thin,
have straight hair/
curly hair/
long/short hair,
wear glasses
Appearance
outgoing
shy
kind
friendly
active…
Personality
reading
singing
painting pictures
watching TV
playing games
Hobbies
3b
Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like Which change is the most important one, and why
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1：General introduction about the changes in your life
Paragraph 2：The most important change and how it happened
体裁
人称
时态
【思路点拨】
说明文
第一人称
一般过去时
一般现在时
How I’ve changed!
Beginning
(topic)
Body
(changes)
Ending
(feeling/hope)
My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
General changes (appearance, personality, hobbies ...)
The most important change
and how it happened
I hope ...
I will study much harder and make my life better.
Make an outline （列提纲）
Li Wen had some difficulties in school because he missed his parents. After his parents had a long talk with him, he understood his parents a lot. And now he studies hard than he used to. He comes to realize that his parents love him and they’re always proud of him.
What？
How？
Why？
who
what
He studies harder than he used to.
when
Because he comes to realize that...
Li Wen’s biggest change
How I’ve Changed!
How time flies! My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to _________________. Now I’m __________________. The biggest change in my life was __________________.This is the most important change because __________________.
...
You can write it like this:
评价指标 得分 （满分20分）
评分标准
1.文章是否突出了主题 4 4 = Excellent (优秀)
3 = Good (良好)
2 = Acceptable (合格)
1 = Rewrite (重写)
2.文章是否体现最重要的变化 4 3.文章是否写到外貌、性格、爱好 4 4.文章是否运用了本单元学过的有用的单词或短语 4 5.文章的语法是否正确 4
Post-writing
Evaluation
Show time
阅读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
Polish your writing
Homework
Must do:
1.Finish your writing.
2.Polish your writing.
Choose to do:
3.Share your changes with others.
It’s never too late to change.
It’s never too late to change.
改变从来都不晚
改变从来都不晚
Let's change now.
Sample writing
How I have changed
My life has changed a lot in the past three years.
I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in front of crowds, but now I am outgoing.
The biggest change was that I used to be interested in computer games, but now I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. This is the most important change because I think health is the most importent thing，I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books.
Thanks to these changes, they help me to study better and keep healthier. I hope I can get better and better in the future.

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