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Unit 2 Writing
---write a travel plan
Xi’an used to be the capital city of China for 13 dynasties, so it’s rich in history and culture.
Lead in
Terracotta Army is a must-see historic site, and it is located in Lintong District.
the Terracotta Army
be built to guard the tomb of
Emperor Qin Shi Huang
more than 2,000 years old
thousands of clay soldiers with unique facial expressions and positions
What will you talk about when you write a travel plan
a travel plan
where
when
who
what
how
why
Richard has found a brochure about Terracotta Army and he plans to go to Xi’an.
brochure
Richard
Terracotta Army
TERRACOTTA ARMY
Come and see the Terracotta Army: more than 8,000 statues were made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang! Each statue has a different face, leading researchers to believe that each one is copy of a real soldier. The statues fill only one part of the emperor's huge tomb, which still has not been completely unearthed. More than 700,000 people worked for nearly 40 years to build this tomb. However, no one in modern times knew about the tomb or the terracotta statues until 1974, when some farmers discovered the tomb while they were digging a well!
Read the brochure and find out what aspects about the Terracotta Army are mentioned.
Terracotta army
History
Purpose
Size
Feature
Make span
Discovery
The third century BCE
To guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qin
more than 8,000 statues
Each statue has a different face.
Nearly 40 years
Some farmers discovered the tomb while they were digging a well
Read Richard’s email about his plan to his friend.
What aspects does Richard’s email talk about
Read the email and then finish the table.
Para Main idea Detail
1 main purpose for the trip
2 other plans for the trip
3
transport
4
final thoughts
go to see the Terracotta Army over the October
Shaanxi History Museum Xi’an City Wall
take the train
write again and send photos ask his friend’s plan
Underline the words and phrase used to express emotion in the email.
I love my new school and classmates.
I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can't wait to go.
It's amazing that there are more than 8,000 statues
To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.
5. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum.
How does the writer feel about the trip
unbelievable
amazing
How does the writer feel about the trip
It is ______________ .
What an ____________
it is!
What _______ her is its sight.
It's almost beyond______.
It's hard _________.
It is an____________ experience.
unbelievable
to believe
amazing that...
amazing sight
amazes
belief
key expressions
can’t wait to do
迫不及待做...
It‘s amazing that..
...是令人惊奇的
be planning to do
计划做...
key expressions
look forward to doing
期待做...
hear from sb
收到某人来信
Time for writing
study the structure of the travel plan
the destination
and the time
other plans for the trip
Transport
Final thoughts
输入标题
Summary
Paragraph
Main ideas
P1
P2
P3
who,when,where,why
the detailed plan
looking forward to the response
when to go and return
how to go and return
what to do
P1(开头语)
As the National Day is coming，my family are planning to visit Sanya to see the beautiful scenery. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the trip.
who
where
why
what
This month, I will fly to Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven day trip. I have an exciting travel plan to share with you.
when
when
who
where
how
what
P2（中间段）
1.We will set out on 10 June.
我们6月10日出发。
2.I will stay there for about three days.
我要在那儿待大约三天。
3.I'm planning to go there by train and come back by bus.
我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。
4.The activities include climbing the mountains,taking photos and .... What is more exciting is that we will ...
when to go
when to return
how to go and return
what to do
P3（尾段）
Sanya is an amazing city, which has a lot of famous sights. I can’t wait to visit it now! Do you have any plan for the coming holiday looking forward to hear from you.
express your feelings
expect to get response
have a try
[题目要求]
假定你是李华，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人下周去北京游览长城。请你给你的好友王明写一封电子邮件， 分享你的出行计划。
要点：1. 对长城的认识；
2. 其他旅游目的地(故宫和颐和园)及交通方式；
3．表达期望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City; 颐和园the Summer Palace
Key sentences
1．我和我的父母计划去游览长城。
_____________________________________________________________ (现在进行时表将来)
2．长城有着悠久的历史。
__________________________________________
My parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the
Great Wall.
The Great Wall has a long history.
3．它是由古代中国人民创造的一个伟大奇迹。
________________________________________________________
4．长城已经成为中国最著名的旅游景点之一。
_______________________________________________________________________________________
The Great Wall has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
It is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese
people.
Key sentences
5．我们迫不及待地想去参观。(wait)
_____________________________________
6．我们还计划参观北京的其他地方，如故宫、颐和园。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
We can't wait to visit it.
We're also planning to visit other places in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace.
Key sentences
7．我们将乘火车去那儿。(take)
_____________________________
8．希望早日收到你的来信。(hope)
___________________________
We're taking the train to go there.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Key sentences
假定你是小李，国庆你和家人要去广州旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
内容包含以下内容：
目的地 广州
时间 10月1日------10月7日
活动 白云山，广州塔， 广州博物馆
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
A reply to Richard’s email
写作体裁和主题
时态和人称
写作要点
布局
体裁: 应用文----告知信
主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。
时态：一般将来时、一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）③旅游的心得体会
第一段：对Richard的问候及来信评价
第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划
第三段：交通出行
第四段：体会+期待回复
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my travel plans for the coming holidays.
With national holiday coming, my parents and I are planning to travel to Guangzhou to enjoy its beautiful scenery and culture. We are flying there , leaving the day before the national holiday begins and will spend seven days there, from October 1st to October 7th. I have heard that Canton Tower is an amazing sight that I can’t wait to go. Other than visiting Canton Tower, we are also planning to take many other activities like going hiking, visiting Guangzhou museum and tasting local snacks. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also expand my vision. Look forward to your early reply.
Sincerely Yours, Li Hua

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