资源简介

(共17张PPT)
UNIT 1
People of Achievement
单元写作
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1.Review the organization and structure of the reading text;
2.Write an introduction about someone you admire.
Learning Objectives
The organization of a biography.
Review
contribution accomplishment
birth
education
early career
Appearance
personalityAnecdotes
Death and comment
brief introduction
early life & background
achievements
struggles & challenges
personal characteristics
impact & legacy
major events
milestones
Difficult period
注意：
运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用一般过去时
3.常用描写人物的形容词:
determined (有毅力的)/ warm-hearted(热心肠的)
easy-going(温和宽容的)/ energetic(精力充沛)
generous(慷慨的)/ intelligent( 聪明的)
ambitious(有雄心的) /humorous(幽默的)
diligent (勤奋的)/attractive (有吸引力的)
patient (耐心的) /strict (严格的)
considerate(考虑周到的) /outstanding (杰出的) optimistic(乐观的) / enthusiastic(热情的)
bad-tempered (脾气不好的)/ reliable(可 信赖的)/confident(自信的) / respectable(值得尊重的)
dedicated(专注的；献身的)
skinny, good-looking, plain, elegant, neatly dressed, graceful, curly/wavy hair
1.介绍人物的爱好特长:
be good at /do well in/ be expert in/ have a talent for/have a gift for /be qualified for the job / be fit for the job/ have a good knowledge ( command) of/ with a great passion for
2.对人物的评价:
set a good example to us/ a model teacher /worker/is respected by all /think highly of ... /be honored as
Word Bank
写作积累
（1）引出人物介绍的开头句式
1. When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous .......
2. The person I admire most is...,
3. Of all the outstanding people, I admire… the most.
4. There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is...
（2）简单介绍人物背景 (出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
1. 出生于 be born in /on
2. 对……有强烈的兴趣 have/show strong interest in
3. 在……方面有天赋 have a gift/talent for
写作积累
（3）讲述该人物的主要经历和重要成就。
1. After graduating from…., he / she spent most of the time doing...
从……毕业后，他/她大部分时间都花在做……
2. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in.
凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功.
3. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them.
尽管有许多困难，他/她还是成功克服了
4. She poured his/her heart and soul into…and made great contributions to…
她全心全意投入…, 并为…做出了巨大贡献…
写作积累
（4）人物评价及对作者的影响。
1. As a great..., he/she will be remembered by us forever.
作为一位伟大的……，他 / 她将永远被我们铭记。
2. It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
正是他的决心激励着我在学习遇到困难时继续前行。
3. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
他为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，是位完全值得我们钦佩和尊敬的优秀人物。
Writing
Writing
（2020年全国1卷）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
思维导图引路
事例说明
how he/she inspires you
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Albert Einstein, who is perhaps the greatest scientists, is often considered + adj.
(be) acknowledged as
make numerous contributions to
out of one’s passion/responsibility for…,
The person I admire most is my mother. While she is not famous, she did something quite extraordinary.
She is a doctor in Beijing, and on 7 February 2020,she went with a group of doctors and nurses to Wuhan to help in the fight against COVID-19. I was nervous about her going, but she told me not to worry because she was doing what was required of her job to save lives. While she was in Wuhan, she had to work very long hours, with little sleep or rest in between. At one time, a colleague of hers collapsed from exhaustion. My mom was near the end of her own shift, but she chose to continue and take over the work from her colleague. My mom was helping some of the sickest patients, but this didn't stop her from carrying out her responsibilities. She's back home now, but I'm certain that she saved many lives from her hard work and dedication during those few weeks.
She is a hero and an inspiration to me, because she put herself in harm’s way in order to save many people. Thanks to her, I will strive to think of others more than myself and work hard to help people.
Write an introduction about someone you admire.
Writing
Writing
Sample
Reading for writing
姓名： 袁隆平
出生： 1930年，北京
毕业院校： 西南农学院
职业： 科学家
工作经历： 大学毕业后，他从事农业教学何研究工作
在1975年，他成功培育出了杂交水稻，
成就： 提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿
被誉为“杂交水稻之父”
西南农学院：
Southwest Agricultural College
他从事农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching
research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻产量，
有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
参考词汇
开头：
The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
中间：
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
结尾：
全文：110
The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地点/时间）, _______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一, 表现出对___________(方面）的热情。
在__________(学校）毕业后, 他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）.
为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。
写英雄/伟人/敬佩的人的模板
Writing
Exchange your draft with a partner.
1. Use the checklist to help you review your partner's draft.
Does the writer describe the person's appearance and personality
Does the writer tell an impressive story of the person's life
Does the writer say why the person is great
Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person
2. Take your draft back and revise it.
Share your introduction with the rest of the class.
Writing
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