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《兄弟俩和一只狗》
懂得永远比对错更重要!
My wife and I waned to share our new home with family and friends by nosting a small gathering in the early summer, She had prepared lots of snacks,while my iob was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play.There was just one thicg I hadn't counted on:My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up,I asked him to watch Tobby and keep him outside.ds to runan' piay, There was just one thicg ihadn't countedon:My brother chose t bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.Though friendly, he could easi!yknock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old :anddaughter. So, when my b:other:p,Iasked him to watch oby"andshoweckeep .im outside.
Why did I asked my brother to keep his dog ourside
What kind of dog is Tobby
an energetic and friendly big dog
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his enegy by running back and forth the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed.It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment.I didn't want Toby to be running aroud in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog.Eventually,my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.t-p
What was the weather like after supper
what was it an awkward moment
an energetic and friendly big dog
What was the solution
为了避免尴尬，哥哥带狗离开，为下文哥哥生气以及作者努力修补关系面下伏笔
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.p
why did I text my brother and whish him to come out again why response did I get
What did I do after being rejected by mybrother
Because I realized that my brother was unhappyandIwas wrong.(为不文当面找弟弟道歉埋下伏笔》
被哥哥拒绝，得知哥哥生气，我还自己安慰自己说哥哥会自己克服的。可推出作者是一个固执、自我为中心且不太考虑哥哥感受的人。(为作者态度转变，兄弟俩彼此理解和沟通买下伏笔)
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
What did my wife advise me to do What did I respond
Why did my conscience keep bothering me
Wrat did Toby mean to my brother
作者开始受到良心的谴责，学会换位思考了，为下文当面找弟弟道歉只弟俩破冰和解埋下伏笔。
& solutions
The conflict & solutions
表面冲突:
The energetie dog was kept outsice and forced to leave.
内在冲突:
I desire to keep the party in order without oonsidering my brother’s feelings.
my stubbornness
PK
my conscience
Solutions :
The dog wagged its tail wildly and barked energetically.
Solution:
I apologized to my brother.
My brother forgave me!
The two worked together to mend their family bonds!
I realized it was me who was at fault.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
①What was my fault
②How did I feel
③What did I decide to do and what did we prepare
①Who answered the door What was were their reactions
②What did I say and do What was my brother's response
③What did we do together
④what was the theme
注意:作者向弟弟道歉或者兄弟俩聊天的时候,没有心要把前文弟弟妻子去世的事情再说一遍!
I realized it was me who was at fault.
①What was my fault
这只狗对他来说不仅仅是宠物;这是他的家人。
The dog wasn't just a pet for him: it was his family.
我的不体谅迫使他和托比冒雨离开，无人理解。
My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood.
他一定感到多么孤独，我又是多么自私!
How lonely he must have felt and how selfish I was!
I realized it was me who was at fault.
②How did I feel
那天我哥哥离开时脸上受伤的表情一直萦绕在我的心里
The hurt look on my brother's face vhen he left that day lingered in ny heart constantly.
一想到这，我就感到内疚和羞愧，呼吸困难。
At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe.
I realized it was me who was at fault.
③What did I decide to do and what did we prepare
当我告诉妻子找的计划时，她表示支持，并建议烤一些我哥哥最喜欢的饼干。
The moment I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits.
由于迫切需要把事清做好，我抓起钥匙，跳进车里，毫不犹豫地朝哥哥家走去。
Driven by a desperate need to make things right, I grabbed my keys ,jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home wishout a second thought.
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn't just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain vithout being understood. how lonely he must have felt and how selfish I was! The hurt look on my brother's face when he left that day lingered in my heart constantly. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. The next few days witnessed my conscience being tortured deeply, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn't delay this apology any longer. The moment I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. Driven by a desperate need to make things right, I grabbed rny keys , jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
I realized it was me who was at fault.
②How did l feel
接下来的几天，我的良心受到了深深的折磨，感觉就像坐在针上一样.
The next few days witnessed my conscience being tortured deeply,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
一个内心的声一直在我脑海中回荡，我不能再拖延这个道歉了.
An inner voiee kept echoing in my min: that I couldn't delay this apology any longer.
I realized it was me who was at fault.
②How did l feel
接下来的几天，我的良心受到了深深的折磨，感觉就像坐在针上一样.
The next few days witnessed my conscience being tortured deeply,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
一个内心的声一直在我脑海中回荡，我不能再拖延这个道歉了.
An inner voiee kept echoing in my min: that I couldn't delay this apology any longer.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
①Who answered the door What was were their reactions
我还没来得及敲门，托比就从里面发出了充满活力的吠叫，抓着门。
Before I could even knock, Toby's vibrant barking erupted from inside. scratching at the door.
门做吱地开了，托比冲了出来，尾巴疯狂地摇着。
The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with its tail wagging wildly.
然后，我看到了一个瞬间的惊讶表情，夹杂着哥哥的冷漠和恼怒。
Then I was met with a momentary leek of surprise, mixed withind indifference and annoyance from my brother.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
②What did I say and do What was my brother’s
response
我深吸一口气。开始说:“兄弟，我怀着沉重的心情来到这里，完全意识到自己的粗心。托比和任何人类成员一样，都是你家的一员，我应该表现出更大的同情心。”
I took a deep breath and began."Brother, I come here with a heavy heart, fully aware of my thoughtlessness. Tohy is as much apart of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy.”
几乎立刻，他的眼睛被泪水湿润了，他接过饼子，示意我进去
Almost instantly, his eyes wet whtk tears, he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
③What did we do together
当我们坐在舒适的客厅里时，描尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事、笑声和泪水。
As we sat in the cosy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded,replaced by stories, laughter and tears.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
④What as the theme
通过真诚的对话，我们逐渐治愈了伤口，化解了我们之间的冰墙，证明了同理心和宽恕是修复破碎纽带的真正桥梁
Through open-heated conversations, we gradwally healed the wound and dissolved the icy wall between us, proving that empathy,forgiveness and commnunisation are the true bridges to mend broken bonds.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother s doorBefore I could even knock, Toby's vibrant barking erupted from inside.scratching at the ioor. The door creaked open an' out rushed Toby,with its tail wagging wildly. Then I was met with a momentary look ofsurprise, ri.ed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. Itook a ceep breath and began, “Brother, i come here with a heavy heart.full, aware of my thoughtlessness. oby is as much a part of yourfamily as any human member, ard l should have show greaterempathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tea:s he took thebiscuits and signalsd me to enter, As we sat in ihe cosy living room, theawkwardness slowly faded, replaced by sto:;es, laughter and tears.Through open hearted conversations, we sradually healed the woundand disse:ved the icy wall between us, proving that empathy,forgiveness and commnunication are tne true bridges to mend broken晨曦昌中央询bonds.

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