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Reading for Writing
写作
Explore theme parks
Be a Genre detective, talk about the structure of the passage.
(A)
(B)
(C)
Reading
What aspects does the writer use to introduce these parks
A B C D
Disney characters
Zhuhai, China
Complete the table and give headers for columns A to D.
Disneyland
(various locations)
Dollywood in ____________________________________
Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in_____
_______________
the Smoky Mountain in the southeastern USA
Travel through space; visit a ___________ ________________
________________
pirate ship;
enormous swinging ships;
scary free-fall drops
A parade of
____________________________
________________________ Thunderhead
___________________________put on performances there
Water fight against pirates; exciting roller coaster; water rides
Whale Shark Aquarium________ _____________ polar bears
Plenty of restaurants with ________________________
taste food for
every appetite
dolphin
and sea lion shows
An old wooden rollercoaster
Famous country music;
groups
Name
and
Location
Rides
Attractions
Food Restaurant
The writer use these aspects to introduce the parks.
What else can we write about for a park
(Name of park)in(place)
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Shows
Food
Attractions
Rides
Other
Organize your writing
Develop the general structure for an essay introducing the parks.
Theme Park/ National Park
Name and location
Rides
Attractions
Food/ Restaurant
Shows and others
Conclusions
Reading
What else can we learn from the writer Let’s read the details and find out more writing methods!
Video of Disneyland: The advertisement
Reading
The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street. Of course, Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free- fall drops. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
V-ing form
If clause+imperative
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Reading
Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America’s traditional southeastern culture. Famous country music groups put on performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors. People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass, and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of candy that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience. Riding on the only steam engine still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat. And for those who like rides, Dollywood has a superb old wooden roller coaster, Thunderhead. It is world-famous for having the longest track in the smallest e to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America’s historical southeastern culture!
imperative
3
V-ing form
4
V-ing form
5
Reading
Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world. Here you can walk under the Whale Shark Aquarium—the world’s largest—and see up to 20,000 fish, in addition to a whale shark 68 metres in length. Watching the dolphin and sea lion shows is both educational and fun. Of course, you can also see all kinds of interesting animals, including polar bears. The park has more rides than you can imagine: join a water fight against pirates, get turned upside down by an exciting roller coaster, or get wet in one of the water rides! Then at night, see the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and fireworks display. Hungry The park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite—you can even eat while watching the fish swim by. If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom!
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V-ing form
If clause+imperative
Reading for writing methods
Unit 3
adjectives
if-clause+imperatives
V-ing form
Build the structure
Name and location
Conclusions
Rides
Food/ Restaurant
Theme Park/ National Park
Fourfold Table writing method
Shows and others
Attractions
Step 1. Fold paper like this：
Step 2. Write down the name of the places：
Step 3. Write down the basic information in the first grid：
Step 4. The most distinctive feature is written in the second grid：
Step 5. Other information in the third grid：
Step 6. Don’t forget the conclusion：
It’s clear, isn’t it Let’s practice!
Read for new writing methods
There are various kinds of theme parks, with different parks for almost everything: food, culture, science, cartoons, movies, history, and so on.
【佳句提炼】 various kinds of
There are various kinds of rare wild animals, with different species of national protection: giant pandas, golden monkeys, swans, and so on.
【佳句仿写】
这里有各种各样的珍稀野生动物，有不同的国家保护物种：大熊猫、金丝猴、天鹅等等。
【佳句翻译】
主题公园种类繁多，应有尽有：美食、文化、科学、卡通、电影、历史等等。
Read for new writing methods
Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you!
【佳句提炼】
whichever and whatever; incredible; appeal to
Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible national wonder that will appeal to you!
【佳句翻译】
无论你喜欢什么，都会有一个令人难以置信的主题公园吸引你！
【佳句仿写】
无论你喜欢什么，都会有一个令人难以置信的国家奇迹吸引你！
Read for new writing methods
3. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
【佳句提炼】
If +…, imperatives
If you want to enjoy both the natural and man-made wonders , come to Sichuan Province！
【佳句仿写】
如果你想享受自然和人造的奇迹，来四川吧！
【佳句翻译】
如果你想玩得开心，而且不仅仅是开心，那就来迪斯尼乐园吧！
Read for new writing methods
4. Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland.
【佳句提炼】V-ing form, v-ing form or v-ing form are…
【佳句翻译】在迪斯尼乐园，穿越太空、参观海盗船、遇见可爱的童话或卡通人物都是可能的。
【佳句仿写】
在公园的小路上漫步是一次很棒的体验，你将有机会看到各种珍稀动物，包括熊猫。
Walking along the path in the park is a great experience that you will have a chance to see various kinds of rare animals, including pandas.
Writing task
你校校报正在征集《公园之美》栏目稿件，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个你去过的或者喜欢的公园，可以是主题公园，也可以是国家公园，内容包括：
1. 公园名称，地理位置；
2. 公园的著名景观/特色设施；
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受。
（词数不少于100；可适当增加细节使行文流畅）
Summary: Write an introduction!
Tip1：Build a structure with fourfold table
Tip2: What aspects we can write about
Tip 3:
Methods
1.Adjectives and phrases
2.If-clause and imperatives
3. V-ing form
Sample Writing
Jiuzhaigou National Park
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. Walking along the path in the park, you will have a chance to see various kinds of rare animals up to 54 species, including national protected animal giant pandas.
Enjoying the fascinating park, feeling the peace brought by nature, there was an idea occurred me. People have benefited quite a lot from the natural park, such as fresh air, clean water and the great view .It’s time for us to repay the nature and protect it if we want people to live in harmony with nature.
If you want to feel the beauty of nature and join the ranks of protecting nature, come to Jiuzhaigou National Park!
Jiuzhaigou National Park, which is located in the southwest of Sichuan Province, is considered one of the greatest natural wonders in China. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible scenery that will appeal to you!
Attributive clause
Adj and phrases
V-ing form
Adj and phrases
If clause+imperative
V-ing form
Adj and phrases
Sample Writing
Jiuzhaigou National Park, which is located in the southwest of Sichuan Province, is considered one of the greatest natural wonders in China. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible scenery that will appeal to you!
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. Walking along the path in the park, you will have a chance to see various kinds of rare animals up to 54 species, including national protected animal giant pandas. Enjoying the fascinating park, feeling the peace brought by nature, there was an idea occurred me. People have benefited quite a lot from the natural park, such as fresh air, clean water and the great view .It’s time for us to repay the nature and protect it if we want people to live in harmony with nature.
If you want to feel the beauty of nature and join the ranks of protecting nature, come to Jiuzhaigou National Park!
Assessment
Peer Checklist Scores Self Partner Teacher
Content Cover the name of places 1
Cover the location and other basic information about the places 1
Cover the place of interests？ 1
Cover the culture of the places？ 1
Cover the people's feelings and impressions about the places 1
Structure Use the Fourfold table writing method 2
Use connecting words 2
Language Use more than 3 adjectives we learnt in this class 3
Use at least 1 the v-ing form and 1 if – clause + imperative 4
Others Mention the theme of harmony between man and nature 4
Total 20

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