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期末专项培优 书面表达
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 西城区期末）2023年每个人都有自己难忘的瞬间，这个瞬间可能发生在课上学习时，在家读书时，在餐厅品尝美味时或者在外面堆雪人时，无论是快乐的还是悲伤的，它都值得我们记录和回忆。
假如你是李华，学校英文网站正在开展以"My Unforgettable Moment of 2023"为题目的征文活动。请你向网站投稿，分享你2023年的一个难忘瞬间。内容包括：让你难忘的瞬间是什么，这个瞬间发生了什么，为什么会让你难忘？
请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：snowball，fight，excited，enjoyable，laugh，difficulty
提示问题：
（1）When was that moment and what happened？
（2）Why is it unforgettable for you？
My Unforgettable Moment of 2023
________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024秋 临邑县期末）汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利，随着经济的快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的私家车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以"私家车的利与弊"为主题，写一篇作文。
优点 人们可以节省时间：不必花费长时间等公交车。 使得旅途更容易，享受沿途美丽的风景
缺点 （1）私家车的数量变多，交通拥挤。 （2）浪费能源。 （3）空气污染…… 事放频发，由于驾驶员相心，
你的建议 司机应该…… 行人……
提示词：
私人的 private 风景scenery 行人passers﹣by 优点advantages 粗心 carelessness 能源energy
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars._____________
The more careful we are，the safer life we will have.
3．（2024秋 宁河区期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tony想了解你的家乡—宁河，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英文短文，向他介绍家乡的情况。
提示：
（1）位于天津东北部。
（2）人们勤劳善良，待人友好。
（3）物产丰富，盛产大米、鱼等。
（4）风景优美，七里海风景如画。
（5）历史悠久，天尊阁有几百年历史。
（6）……
参考词汇：东北的 northeast；天尊阁Tianzunge
要求：
（1）词数：80词左右；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you.
Yours
Li Hua
4．（2024秋 德州期末）请你根据表中提供的材料，为小学生们写一篇题为"Always Be Careful"的短文。
在家里 1.看完电视后及时把它关掉。 2.独自在家时，不要让陌生人进屋或者邀请网友来家里。
在学校 1.不要在教室里或者楼道里相互追逐。 2.运动时，注意保护自己。
在路上 1.遵守交通规则，比如：骑车时不要听音乐，过马路时要注意交通灯。 2.自己发挥
提示词：网友 friends online；追逐 run for；陌生人 strangers
要求：
（1）书写工整，词数在80词左右，可适当发挥；
（2）内容包括所提示的要点，意思完整，但不要逐句翻译，言语规范；
（3）文中不能出现真实地名、姓名和校名。
Always Be Careful
As a primary school student，you should try to stay away from danger.The problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.______
5．（2024秋 信宜市期末）假设你是李华，你在英语周报上读到了以上文章，你很想申请加入观鸟协会，请根据以下内容写一份申请表。
要点包括：
（1）自我介绍（第一中学8年级学生，喜欢的科目等）；
（2）说明想加入协会的原因（不少于2个）；
（3）联系电话或联系方式。
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄在答题卡上。
参考词汇：biology生物：member会员
Dear Chairperson，
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 百色期末）辞旧迎新，学校举办"回顾2023年，展望2024年"（Looking back on 2023 and Looking forward to 2024）的英语征文活动。假如你是来自八年级一班的李华，请根据下面的要点，写一篇英语征文。
内容要点：
（1）总结2023年的不足之处（如运动、学习、成绩、与同学关系等）；
（2）制定2024年的计划（如多锻炼、认真学习、提高成绩、改善同学关系等）；
（3）如何实现计划。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名；
（4）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：get on well with（与……相处融洽）；communicate with（与…交流）
Hello，I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 8.___________
7．（2024秋 临邑县期末）汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利。随着经济的快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的私家车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以"私家车的利与弊"为主题，写一篇作文。
要点：
优点：（1）人们可以节省时间：不必花费长时间等公交车；
（2）使旅行变得更容易：享受沿途美丽的风景。
缺点：（1）私家车的数量变多：浪费能源；
（2）事故频发：由于驾驶员的粗心。
（3）说说你自己的看法。
提示词：私人的 private　粗心 carelessness
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars.
______
8．（2024秋 肥西县期末）走进安徽，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加安徽旅游活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格及文字提示，以"Welcome to Hefei"为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进合肥，品味合肥文化，感受合肥之美。
Welcome to Hefei
Location（地理位置） in the center of Anhui Province（省）
Population over 10，000，000
History the hometown of Lord Bao（包公），over 2000 years old
Famous places the Garden Expo Park（园博园），Sanhe Ancient Town
River between Yangtze River and Huaihe River
注意：
（1）词数：80左右。
（2）内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
（3）文中不得出现本人真实信息。
Welcome to Hefei
____________
9．（2024秋 蜀山区期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Alex 来信告知近期要来合肥参观园博园，请给他回信介绍相关情况。
要点如下：
信息 合肥东南，9：00﹣17：00 开放
体验 风景，美食，文化
事项 安全
注意：
（1）词数 80 左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
（4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Expo Garden of Hefei 合肥园博园
Dear Alex，
Happy to know you will visit the Expo Garden of Hefei.Here is something about it.______
Yours，
Li Hua
10．（2024秋 南开区期末）寒假就要到了，为了使同学们度过一个健康、安全的假期，你们班将举行一次有关"安全教育"的主题班会，请你写一篇发言稿，说出自己的想法和建议。
要点提示如下：
饮食安全 多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品
交通安全 遵守交通规则，过马路时注意交通信号灯，不要与朋友并排骑自行车
居家安全 注意用水、用电安全，不接触火源
户外安全 禁止在结冰的路面上玩耍
陷入困境时 我们应该……
参考词汇：electricity 电 icy 结冰的
要求：
（1）词数：80 词左右
（2）发言稿要包括所有提示要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
（3）开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear boys and girls，
The winter holiday is coming!How can we have a healthy and safe winter holiday？________
Have a nice winter holiday!
11．（2024秋 蜀山区期末）上周是你校的安全教育周，学校邀请了一位交通警察给全体学生进行了一场交通安全教育讲座。假如你是校英文报的记者，请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇新闻报道。
要点如下：1．时间：12月15日；
2．地点：学校图书馆；
3．目的：让学生更加关注道路安全；
4．内容：观看交通事故的视频；了解事故起因；学习交通规则；
5．感受： ……
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：safety（n.安全 ）；rule（n.规则）
Hello，everyone! .
12．（2024秋 和平区校级期末）假如你所在的学校的英文校报正在举办征文活动，题目是Following traffic rules （遵守交通规则），请你根据下列提示内容，写一篇80﹣100词的英文短文，参加这次征文活动。
提示：1）不要在马路上玩游戏；
2）过马路要走人行横道线；
3）不要和同学肩并肩骑车；
4）注意：红灯停，绿灯行；
5）当你过马路的时候不能听音乐或打电话等。
参考词汇：crosswalk 人行道线
Following traffic rules
13．（2024秋 西青区期末）假如你是校报英文专栏的小记者，昨天（1月5日）放学路上你目睹了一起交通亊故，你很难过。请根据以下提示写一篇事故报道，发表在校报上。
时间 昨天下午4：30
地点 在校门口附近的十字路口
事故的经过 一名男孩边走路边低头玩手机，他没有注意到红绿灯。 在绿灯将要变红灯时，一辆轿车快速冲过马路，撞到了这名男孩。
结果 男孩受伤严重；手机也碎了。过了一会救护车赶到了，把男孩送到了医院。
你认为 ……
要求：
（1）词数：不少于80词，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：十字路口 crossing；救护车 ambulance；低头 lower one's head
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th.
14．（2024秋 庄河市期末）丰富多彩的体育运动给我们的生活增添了许多生机和活力，游泳可以塑身，跑步可以培养耐力，打篮球可以增强团队精神. . .作为一名中学生，你最喜欢的运动是什么？请给校园专栏写一篇英语稿，介绍你的体育活动情况。
内容提示：
（1）What's your favourite sport？
（2）Why do you like that kind of sport？
（3）What can you get from the sport？
要求：
（1）中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
（3）100词左右。
15．（2024秋 河东区期末）假设你是李华，你的笔友Mary在上海游玩后打算去北京旅行，但她不知道哪种出行方式最好，她发邮件给你希望能得到一些参考意见。请根据下面表格要点给她回邮件。
Ways of travelling Good points Bad points
bus most convenient slowest，tired
train cheapest，safest book the ticket in advance
plane fastest most expensive，wait for hours at the airport
your opinion...
要求：
（1）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）行文连贯，可以适当发挥。
Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear from you._______
Well，have a great trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
期末专项培优 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 西城区期末）2023年每个人都有自己难忘的瞬间，这个瞬间可能发生在课上学习时，在家读书时，在餐厅品尝美味时或者在外面堆雪人时，无论是快乐的还是悲伤的，它都值得我们记录和回忆。
假如你是李华，学校英文网站正在开展以"My Unforgettable Moment of 2023"为题目的征文活动。请你向网站投稿，分享你2023年的一个难忘瞬间。内容包括：让你难忘的瞬间是什么，这个瞬间发生了什么，为什么会让你难忘？
请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：snowball，fight，excited，enjoyable，laugh，difficulty
提示问题：
（1）When was that moment and what happened？
（2）Why is it unforgettable for you？
My Unforgettable Moment of 2023
________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
My Unforgettable Moment of 2023
Life is like a journey with many fantastic stops.There are so many interesting things and wonderful people in my life.I had a very unforgettable moment.
Last summer holiday，I wanted to learn to swim.I went to the swimming pool with my father.He taught me how to swim.At first，I was afraid of diving in the water.And I felt uncomfortable in the water.But my father always encouraged me.He said he would protect me.Then I began to swim，but I couldn't swim forward at all.It made me upset.Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs.Slowly，I could move a little.It took me two hours to learn to swim.I felt so proud at that moment.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs.
然后我父亲告诉我如何移动，如何伸展我的手和腿。how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs使用了疑问词+动词不定式。
【高分句型二】
It took me two hours to learn to swim.
我学游泳花了两个小时。It takes sb some time to do sth.花某人最长时间在某事。
【解答】
My Unforgettable Moment of 2023
Life is like a journey with many fantastic stops.There are so many interesting things and wonderful people in my life.I had a very unforgettable moment.（开篇点题）
Last summer holiday，I wanted to learn to swim.I went to the swimming pool with my father.He taught me how to swim. （爸爸教我游泳）At first，I was afraid of diving in the water.And I felt uncomfortable in the water.But my father always encouraged me.He said he would protect me. （我害怕，他鼓励我）Then I began to swim，but I couldn't swim forward at all.It made me upset.Then my father told me how to move，how to stretch out my hands and legs. 【高分句型一】Slowly，I could move a little.It took me two hours to learn to swim. 【高分句型二】（我学会了游泳）I felt so proud at that moment.（感觉）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2024秋 临邑县期末）汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利，随着经济的快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的私家车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以"私家车的利与弊"为主题，写一篇作文。
优点 人们可以节省时间：不必花费长时间等公交车。 使得旅途更容易，享受沿途美丽的风景
缺点 （1）私家车的数量变多，交通拥挤。 （2）浪费能源。 （3）空气污染…… 事放频发，由于驾驶员相心，
你的建议 司机应该…… 行人……
提示词：
私人的 private 风景scenery 行人passers﹣by 优点advantages 粗心 carelessness 能源energy
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars._____________
The more careful we are，the safer life we will have.
【考点】议论文；交通．
【答案】 With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars.More and more private cars have brought great influence to our life.
On one hand，private cars have many advantages.As we know，people can save time.They don't need to spend much time waiting for the bus.Moreover，private cars make it easier for people to travel.They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road.
Every coin has two sides.On the other hand，private cars also have a lot of disadvantages.First，the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste too much energy.At the same time，they pollute the environment.Second，more accidents have happened.Because of the drivers' carelessness，many people lost their lives.
In my opinion，we should use private cars properly.When we drive，we must be more careful.If we go somewhere not far，we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.Pedestrians must abide by traffic rules.
The more careful we are，the safer life we will have.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we drive，we must be more careful.当我们开车的时候，我们必须更加小心。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
If we go somewhere not far，we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.如果我们去不远的地方，我们最好乘公共汽车或地铁而不是开车。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars.More and more private cars have brought great influence to our life.
On one hand，private cars have many advantages.As we know，people can save time.They don't need to spend much time waiting for the bus.Moreover，private cars make it easier for people to travel.They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road.（优点）
Every coin has two sides.On the other hand，private cars also have a lot of disadvantages.First，the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste too much energy.At the same time，they pollute the environment.Second，more accidents have happened.Because of the drivers' carelessness，many people lost their lives.（缺点）
In my opinion，we should use private cars properly.When we drive，we must be more careful.【高分句型一】If we go somewhere not far，we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.【高分句型二】Pedestrians must abide by traffic rules.（我的看法）
The more careful we are，the safer life we will have.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2024秋 宁河区期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tony想了解你的家乡—宁河，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英文短文，向他介绍家乡的情况。
提示：
（1）位于天津东北部。
（2）人们勤劳善良，待人友好。
（3）物产丰富，盛产大米、鱼等。
（4）风景优美，七里海风景如画。
（5）历史悠久，天尊阁有几百年历史。
（6）……
参考词汇：东北的 northeast；天尊阁Tianzunge
要求：
（1）词数：80词左右；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you.
Yours
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；旅游景点．
【答案】Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you.I'm glad to introduce my hometown Ninghe to you.Ninghe is located in the northeast of Tianjin，a city known for its hardworking and kind people who are always friendly to visitors.Our land is rich in natural resources，especially rice and fish，which are abundant here.One of the highlights of Ninghe is its breathtaking scenery.Qilihai，a beautiful wetland，is a picturesque place that attracts many tourists every year.Moreover，Ninghe boasts a long history，with cultural heritage sites like Tianzunge，which has a history of several hundred years.There's much more to explore in Ninghe，from its delicious local cuisine to its unique traditional crafts.
I hope that you'll have the chance to visit one day and experience its charm for yourself.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Ninghe is located in the northeast of Tianjin，a city known for its hardworking and kind people who are always friendly to visitors.
翻译：宁河位于天津的东北部，天津以勤劳善良的人民而闻名，他们对游客总是很友好。
分析：句子中应用了who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Our land is rich in natural resources，especially rice and fish，which are abundant here.
翻译：我们的土地自然资源丰富，尤其是大米和鱼，这里盛产。
分析：句子中应用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you.I'm glad to introduce my hometown Ninghe to you.Ninghe is located in the northeast of Tianjin，a city known for its hardworking and kind people who are always friendly to visitors.【高分句型一】（介绍地理位置以及人们的品质）Our land is rich in natural resources，especially rice and fish，which are abundant here.【高分句型二】One of the highlights of Ninghe is its breathtaking scenery.Qilihai，a beautiful wetland，is a picturesque place that attracts many tourists every year.Moreover，Ninghe boasts a long history，with cultural heritage sites like Tianzunge，which has a history of several hundred years.There's much more to explore in Ninghe，from its delicious local cuisine to its unique traditional crafts.（描述城市的情况）
I hope that you'll have the chance to visit one day and experience its charm for yourself.
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
4．（2024秋 德州期末）请你根据表中提供的材料，为小学生们写一篇题为"Always Be Careful"的短文。
在家里 1.看完电视后及时把它关掉。 2.独自在家时，不要让陌生人进屋或者邀请网友来家里。
在学校 1.不要在教室里或者楼道里相互追逐。 2.运动时，注意保护自己。
在路上 1.遵守交通规则，比如：骑车时不要听音乐，过马路时要注意交通灯。 2.自己发挥
提示词：网友 friends online；追逐 run for；陌生人 strangers
要求：
（1）书写工整，词数在80词左右，可适当发挥；
（2）内容包括所提示的要点，意思完整，但不要逐句翻译，言语规范；
（3）文中不能出现真实地名、姓名和校名。
Always Be Careful
As a primary school student，you should try to stay away from danger.The problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.______
【考点】说明文；安全与健康．
【答案】
Always Be Careful
As a primary school student，you should try to stay away from danger.The problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.
After watching TV，you should turn it off in time.If you're at home alone，don't open the door for strangers or invite friends that you have made online to your home.When you are at school，running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous.At the same time，you should remember to protect yourself while doing sports.Once you are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time.For example，never listen to music while riding a bike.Besides，always follow the traffic lights.When you ride a bike or walk on the road，you should always be on the right.
If all these are kept in mind，you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When you ride a bike or walk on the road，you should always be on the right.当你骑自行车或在路上行走时，你应该始终在右边。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
If all these are kept in mind，you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.如果所有这些都牢记在心，你一定会享受更安全的生活。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
Always Be Careful
As a primary school student，you should try to stay away from danger.The problem of safety is becoming more and more serious.
After watching TV，you should turn it off in time.If you're at home alone，don't open the door for strangers or invite friends that you have made online to your home.（在家里：1.看完电视后及时把它关掉。2.独自在家时，不要让陌生人进屋或者邀请网友来家里。）When you are at school，running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous.At the same time，you should remember to protect yourself while doing sports.（在学校：1.不要在教室里或者楼道里相互追逐。2.运动时，注意保护自己。）Once you are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time.For example，never listen to music while riding a bike.Besides，always follow the traffic lights.When you ride a bike or walk on the road，you should always be on the right.【高分句型一】（在路上：1.遵守交通规则，比如：骑车时不要听音乐，过马路时要注意交通灯。）
If all these are kept in mind，you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024秋 信宜市期末）假设你是李华，你在英语周报上读到了以上文章，你很想申请加入观鸟协会，请根据以下内容写一份申请表。
要点包括：
（1）自我介绍（第一中学8年级学生，喜欢的科目等）；
（2）说明想加入协会的原因（不少于2个）；
（3）联系电话或联系方式。
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄在答题卡上。
参考词汇：biology生物：member会员
Dear Chairperson，
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；个人情况．
【答案】Dear Chairperson，
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.My name is Li Hua．I was born on 20th October，2010．I'm in Grade 8 at No 1 Middle school．My favourite subjects are biology and English．I love nature and I'm very interested in animals and plants．I also want to know more about birds．I want to do some things to protect birds because I learned that the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club．You can call me on 0518﹣﹣87260039 or e﹣mail me at 8243657@qq．com．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I want to do some things to protect birds because I learned that the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller．我想做一些事情来保护鸟类，因为我知道它们的数量越来越少。这是because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club．如果我能成为你们俱乐部的一员，我会很高兴的。这是if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Chairperson，
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.My name is Li Hua．I was born on 20th October，2010．I'm in Grade 8 at No 1 Middle school．My favourite subjects are biology and English．（自我介绍）I love nature and I'm very interested in animals and plants．I also want to know more about birds．I want to do some things to protect birds because I learned that the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller.【高分句型一】（说明想加入协会的原因）
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club【高分句型二】．You can call me on 0518﹣﹣87260039 or e﹣mail me at 8243657@qq．com． （联系电话或联系方式）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024秋 百色期末）辞旧迎新，学校举办"回顾2023年，展望2024年"（Looking back on 2023 and Looking forward to 2024）的英语征文活动。假如你是来自八年级一班的李华，请根据下面的要点，写一篇英语征文。
内容要点：
（1）总结2023年的不足之处（如运动、学习、成绩、与同学关系等）；
（2）制定2024年的计划（如多锻炼、认真学习、提高成绩、改善同学关系等）；
（3）如何实现计划。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名；
（4）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：get on well with（与……相处融洽）；communicate with（与…交流）
Hello，I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 8.___________
【考点】说明文；学校生活．
【答案】 Hello，I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 8.In 2023，I didn't exercise often and I didn't study hard，so I couldn't get good grades.I even didn't get on well with my classmates，either.
The new year is coming，I have a new year's resolution.I promise to read more books and do more sports.Every morning I'm going to run for 30 minutes and I plan to play basketball at least three times a week.I'll try my best to get good grades.Also，I'll learn to improve the relationship with my classmates and parents by communicating more with them.What's more，I plan to take up a new hobby such as singing during the winter vacation，and I'm going to learn to cook，too.I hope that I can make it!
【分析】【高分句型一】
Every morning I'm going to run for 30 minutes and I plan to play basketball at least three times a week.
翻译：每天早上我要跑30分钟，我计划每周至少打三次篮球。
分析：句子中应用了and连接的并列句。
【高分句型二】
I hope that I can make it!
翻译：我希望我能做到。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 Hello，I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 8.In 2023，I didn't exercise often and I didn't study hard，so I couldn't get good grades.I even didn't get on well with my classmates，either.（总结不足）
The new year is coming，I have a new year's resolution.I promise to read more books and do more sports.Every morning I'm going to run for 30 minutes and I plan to play basketball at least three times a week.【高分句型一】I'll try my best to get good grades.Also，I'll learn to improve the relationship with my classmates and parents by communicating more with them.What's more，I plan to take up a new hobby such as singing during the winter vacation，and I'm going to learn to cook，too.I hope that I can make it!【高分句型二】（说明计划以及如何实现计划）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作时要结合内情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和建议需要自主发挥。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
7．（2024秋 临邑县期末）汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利。随着经济的快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的私家车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以"私家车的利与弊"为主题，写一篇作文。
要点：
优点：（1）人们可以节省时间：不必花费长时间等公交车；
（2）使旅行变得更容易：享受沿途美丽的风景。
缺点：（1）私家车的数量变多：浪费能源；
（2）事故频发：由于驾驶员的粗心。
（3）说说你自己的看法。
提示词：私人的 private　粗心 carelessness
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars.
______
【考点】议论文；交通．
【答案】 With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars.More and more private cars have brought great influence to our life.
On one hand，private cars have many advantages.As we know，people can save time.They don't need to spend much time waiting for the bus.Moreover，private cars make it easier for people to travel.They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road.
Every coin has two sides.On the other hand，private cars also have a lot of disadvantages.First，the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste too much energy.At the same time，they pollute the environment.Second，more accidents have happened.Because of the drivers' carelessness，many people lost their lives.
In my opinion，we should use private cars properly.When we drive，we must be more careful.If we go somewhere not far，we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we drive，we must be more careful.当我们开车的时候，我们必须更加小心。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
If we go somewhere not far，we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.如果我们去不远的地方，我们最好乘公共汽车或地铁而不是开车。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 With the development of economy，more and more people can afford to buy cars.More and more private cars have brought great influence to our life.
On one hand，private cars have many advantages.As we know，people can save time.They don't need to spend much time waiting for the bus.Moreover，private cars make it easier for people to travel.They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road.（优点）
Every coin has two sides.On the other hand，private cars also have a lot of disadvantages.First，the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste too much energy.At the same time，they pollute the environment.Second，more accidents have happened.Because of the drivers' carelessness，many people lost their lives.（缺点）
In my opinion，we should use private cars properly.When we drive，we must be more careful.【高分句型一】If we go somewhere not far，we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.【高分句型二】（我的看法）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024秋 肥西县期末）走进安徽，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加安徽旅游活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格及文字提示，以"Welcome to Hefei"为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进合肥，品味合肥文化，感受合肥之美。
Welcome to Hefei
Location（地理位置） in the center of Anhui Province（省）
Population over 10，000，000
History the hometown of Lord Bao（包公），over 2000 years old
Famous places the Garden Expo Park（园博园），Sanhe Ancient Town
River between Yangtze River and Huaihe River
注意：
（1）词数：80左右。
（2）内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
（3）文中不得出现本人真实信息。
Welcome to Hefei
____________
【考点】旅游景点．
【答案】 My hometown is Hefei，It is a beautiful city in Anhui province.And the population of it is over 10，000，000 .Hefei located in the center of Anhui province.（位置和人口） Also，two famous rivers in China ，one is Yangtze River and the other is Huaihe River，both run through the city，which makes the city more different from other cities in the country. 【高分句型一】（特点）Besides the special location，there are quite a few scenic spots in the city too ，the Garden Expo Park and Sanhe Ancient Town are two of the famous places.In addition to，Hefei is a city with a history of more than 2000 years.Hefei also gave birth to the historical people who was called Lord Bao.（景点、历史和人物） If you come to Hefei，don't miss the scenic spots and local snacks.And if you're willing to take a holiday，it's a good choice.【高分句型二】（建议）
Hefei is my favourite city.I hope it will be better and better，and more and more people come to visit it.（愿望）
【分析】【高分句型一】
Also，two famous rivers in China ，one is Yangtze River and the other is Huaihe River，both run through the city，which makes the city more different from other cities in the country.
句中用了短语one...the other 表示"一个......另一个......"作为主语 two famous rivers 的同位语，使句子结构多了变化；句中还用了复合句 which makes the city more different from other cities in the country.作为定语从句。
句意：还有，中国两条著名的河流，长江和黄河都穿过这个城市，这使它与我国其他城市相比，更增加了它的不同之处。
【高分句型二】
If you come to Hefei，don't miss the scenic spots and local snacks.And if you're willing to take a holiday，it's a good choice.
句子用了两个复合句if引导的条件状语从句，还用到了短语be willing to表示"愿意做某事......"。
句意：假如你来合肥，不要错过美景和当地小陈吃。假如你要来度假，也是一个很好的选择。
【解答】 My hometown is Hefei，It is a beautiful city in Anhui province.And the population of it is over 10，000，000 .Hefei located in the center of Anhui province.（位置和人口） Also，two famous rivers in China ，one is Yangtze River and the other is Huaihe River，both run through the city，which makes the city more different from other cities in the country. 【高分句型一】（特点）Besides the special location，there are quite a few scenic spots in the city too ，the Garden Expo Park and Sanhe Ancient Town are two of the famous places.In addition to，Hefei is a city with a history of more than 2000 years.Hefei also gave birth to the historical people who was called Lord Bao.（景点、历史和人物）
If you come to Hefei，don't miss the scenic spots and local snacks.And if you're willing to take a holiday，it's a good choice.【高分句型二】（建议）
Hefei is my favourite city.I hope it will be better and better，and more and more people come to visit it.（愿望）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间．写作时要结合表格内容对合肥情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和建议需要自主发挥．在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡，如题中的also，in addition to等等；也要适当运用复合句和固定搭配给自己的作文增加亮点，如题中的主从复合句if引导的条件状语句型和which引导的定语从句，还有短语be willing to 等等．句型结构多样，使用过渡词，使上下文连贯，语句通顺，结构安排合理，没有语法拼写错误，就是一篇优秀的作文。
9．（2024秋 蜀山区期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Alex 来信告知近期要来合肥参观园博园，请给他回信介绍相关情况。
要点如下：
信息 合肥东南，9：00﹣17：00 开放
体验 风景，美食，文化
事项 安全
注意：
（1）词数 80 左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
（4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Expo Garden of Hefei 合肥园博园
Dear Alex，
Happy to know you will visit the Expo Garden of Hefei.Here is something about it.______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】旅游景点．
【答案】Dear Alex，
Happy to know you will visit the Expo Garden of Hefei.Here is something about it.
Firstly，the Expo Garden is located in the southeastern part of Hefei，and it is very convenient to get there by public transportation.The the Expo Garden is open from 9：00 to 17：00 daily，so you can plan your visit accordingly.During your visit to the Expo Garden，you will have the opportunity to enjoy beautiful scenery，taste various delicacies，and learn about Chinese culture.The park features different themed areas.You can experience the culture and atmosphere of different countries.Please note that safety is a priority.
I hope that you have a wonderful time in Hefei.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Firstly，the Expo Garden is located in the southeastern part of Hefei，and it is very convenient to get there by public transportation.
翻译：首先，世博园位于合肥的东南部，公共交通非常方便。
分析：句子中应用了and引导的并列句。
【高分句型二】
I hope that you have a wonderful time in Hefei.
翻译：我希望你在合肥过得愉快。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Alex，
Happy to know you will visit the Expo Garden of Hefei.Here is something about it.
Firstly，the Expo Garden is located in the southeastern part of Hefei，and it is very convenient to get there by public transportation.【高分句型一】（介绍位置）The the Expo Garden is open from 9：00 to 17：00 daily，so you can plan your visit accordingly.（介绍时间）During your visit to the Expo Garden，you will have the opportunity to enjoy beautiful scenery，taste various delicacies，and learn about Chinese culture.The park features different themed areas.You can experience the culture and atmosphere of different countries.（描述体验）Please note that safety is a priority.（说明注意事项）
I hope that you have a wonderful time in Hefei.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
10．（2024秋 南开区期末）寒假就要到了，为了使同学们度过一个健康、安全的假期，你们班将举行一次有关"安全教育"的主题班会，请你写一篇发言稿，说出自己的想法和建议。
要点提示如下：
饮食安全 多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品
交通安全 遵守交通规则，过马路时注意交通信号灯，不要与朋友并排骑自行车
居家安全 注意用水、用电安全，不接触火源
户外安全 禁止在结冰的路面上玩耍
陷入困境时 我们应该……
参考词汇：electricity 电 icy 结冰的
要求：
（1）词数：80 词左右
（2）发言稿要包括所有提示要点，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
（3）开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear boys and girls，
The winter holiday is coming!How can we have a healthy and safe winter holiday？________
Have a nice winter holiday!
【考点】演讲稿；安全与健康．
【答案】Dear boys and girls，
The winter holiday is coming!How can we have a healthy and safe winter holiday？I think first we should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food.Second，we should obey the traffic rules.Pay attention to the traffic lights when we cross the road.Let's not ride our bikes side by side with our friends.Third，when we are at home，we should pay attention to the safety of water，electricity and no contact with fire sources.Fourth，we should ban playing on icy roads.Finally，when we are in trouble we should shout loudly for help or call 110.
Have a nice winter holiday!
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think first we should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food.我认为首先我们要多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Pay attention to the traffic lights when we cross the road.当我们过马路时注意交通信号灯。when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Dear boys and girls，
The winter holiday is coming!How can we have a healthy and safe winter holiday？I think first we should eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food. 【高分句型一】（饮食安全）Second，we should obey the traffic rules.Pay attention to the traffic lights when we cross the road. 【高分句型二】Let's not ride our bikes side by side with our friends.（交通安全） Third，when we are at home，we should pay attention to the safety of water，electricity and no contact with fire sources.（居家安全）Fourth，we should ban playing on icy roads. （户外安全）Finally，when we are in trouble we should shout loudly for help or call 110.
Have a nice winter holiday!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024秋 蜀山区期末）上周是你校的安全教育周，学校邀请了一位交通警察给全体学生进行了一场交通安全教育讲座。假如你是校英文报的记者，请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇新闻报道。
要点如下：1．时间：12月15日；
2．地点：学校图书馆；
3．目的：让学生更加关注道路安全；
4．内容：观看交通事故的视频；了解事故起因；学习交通规则；
5．感受： ……
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：safety（n.安全 ）；rule（n.规则）
Hello，everyone! .
【考点】报道；安全与健康．
【答案】 Hello，everyone！To raise students' awareness of traffic safety，one traffic police officer was invited to give us a lecture in our school library on December 15th.At first，the officer presented us with some videos of traffic accidents，which made all the students surprised.Then，he explained what led to the accidents and told us the significance of following traffic rules.With his help，we learned a lot of traffic rules.We realized how to avoid being injured on the road and that we should attach great importance to obeying traffic rules as well.
【分析】【高分句型一】
At first，the officer presented us with some videos of traffic accidents，which made all the students surprised.首先，老师给我们展示了一些交通事故的视频，这让所有的学生都很惊讶。
which引导非限定性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
With his help，we learned a lot of traffic rules.在他的帮助下，我们学到了很多交通规则。
with one's help"在某人的帮助下"。
【解答】 Hello，everyone！To raise students' awareness of traffic safety，one traffic police officer was invited to give us a lecture in our school library on December 15th.（目的、时间和地点）At first，the officer presented us with some videos of traffic accidents，which made all the students surprised.【高分句型一】Then，he explained what led to the accidents and told us the significance of following traffic rules.With his help，we learned a lot of traffic rules. 【高分句型二】（内容）We realized how to avoid being injured on the road and that we should attach great importance to obeying traffic rules as well.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2024秋 和平区校级期末）假如你所在的学校的英文校报正在举办征文活动，题目是Following traffic rules （遵守交通规则），请你根据下列提示内容，写一篇80﹣100词的英文短文，参加这次征文活动。
提示：1）不要在马路上玩游戏；
2）过马路要走人行横道线；
3）不要和同学肩并肩骑车；
4）注意：红灯停，绿灯行；
5）当你过马路的时候不能听音乐或打电话等。
参考词汇：crosswalk 人行道线
Following traffic rules
【考点】说明文；交通．
【答案】
Following traffic rules
Most traffic accidents happen because many people don't follow traffic rules.So it is important to follow them.
Don't play games on the road.It's very dangerous.Always remember to use the crosswalk when crossing the street.Don't ride side by side with your classmates.When the traffic lights are red，we must stop and wait till they change to green.You mustn't listen to music or talk on the phone when crossing the road.
If everyone follows traffic rules，it will be much safer to walk or ride on the road.
【分析】【高分句型一】
So it is important to follow them.因此，遵循它们是很重要的。动词不定式作主语。
【高分句型二】
If everyone follows traffic rules，it will be much safer to walk or ride on the road.如果每个人都遵守交通规则，在路上走路或骑车会安全得多。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
Following traffic rules
Most traffic accidents happen because many people don't follow traffic rules.So it is important to follow them.【高分句型一】
Don't play games on the road.It's very dangerous.（不要在马路上玩游戏）Always remember to use the crosswalk when crossing the street.（过马路要走人行横道线）Don't ride side by side with your classmates.（不要和同学肩并肩骑车）When the traffic lights are red，we must stop and wait till they change to green.（注意：红灯停，绿灯行）You mustn't listen to music or talk on the phone when crossing the road.（当你过马路的时候不能听音乐或打电话等）
If everyone follows traffic rules，it will be much safer to walk or ride on the road.【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024秋 西青区期末）假如你是校报英文专栏的小记者，昨天（1月5日）放学路上你目睹了一起交通亊故，你很难过。请根据以下提示写一篇事故报道，发表在校报上。
时间 昨天下午4：30
地点 在校门口附近的十字路口
事故的经过 一名男孩边走路边低头玩手机，他没有注意到红绿灯。 在绿灯将要变红灯时，一辆轿车快速冲过马路，撞到了这名男孩。
结果 男孩受伤严重；手机也碎了。过了一会救护车赶到了，把男孩送到了医院。
你认为 ……
要求：
（1）词数：不少于80词，短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：十字路口 crossing；救护车 ambulance；低头 lower one's head
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th.
【考点】报道；交通．
【答案】
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th.I saw a traffic accident on my way home.
The accident happened at 4：30 pm at the crossing near the school gate.A boy was using his mobile phone while he was walking.He lowered his head and put her heart into the phone.He didn't pay attention to the traffic light.While the lights was changing to red，a car ran across the street quickly and hit the boy.The boy was badly hurt and his mobile phone was broken.What a terrible scene!After a while，an ambulance came and the driver sent the boy to the hospital quickly.
So we should obey the traffic rules and be careful on the road.I don't think that we should use the phone while walking.It's very dangerous for us.Do you agree with me？
【分析】【高分句型一】
A boy was using his mobile phone while he was walking.
翻译：一个男孩边走边玩手机。
分析：句子中应用了while引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I don't think that we should use the phone while walking.
翻译：我认为我们不应该边走边打电话。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
A traffic accident report
Yesterday was January 5th.I saw a traffic accident on my way home.
The accident happened at 4：30 pm at the crossing near the school gate.（介绍时间和地点）A boy was using his mobile phone while he was walking.【高分句型一】He lowered his head and put her heart into the phone.He didn't pay attention to the traffic light.While the lights was changing to red，a car ran across the street quickly and hit the boy.（介绍事故的经过）The boy was badly hurt and his mobile phone was broken.What a terrible scene!After a while，an ambulance came and the driver sent the boy to the hospital quickly.（介绍结果）
So we should obey the traffic rules and be careful on the road.I don't think that we should use the phone while walking.【高分句型二】It's very dangerous for us.Do you agree with me？（表达看法）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
14．（2024秋 庄河市期末）丰富多彩的体育运动给我们的生活增添了许多生机和活力，游泳可以塑身，跑步可以培养耐力，打篮球可以增强团队精神. . .作为一名中学生，你最喜欢的运动是什么？请给校园专栏写一篇英语稿，介绍你的体育活动情况。
内容提示：
（1）What's your favourite sport？
（2）Why do you like that kind of sport？
（3）What can you get from the sport？
要求：
（1）中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
（3）100词左右。
【考点】其他应用文写作；文娱体育．
【答案】
My favourite sports
Sports are part of our life.My favorite sport is basketball.At the age of 10，when watching the games Yao Ming played in NBA，I started to be fond of the game.I like not only watching basketball games with my friends in my spare time，but also playing basketball.
During the period playing basketball，I have benefited a lot from the sport.Firstly，it can help me to keep healthy and happy.Secondly，I can make a lot of friends through playing basketball and we can share our successes and failures.And it makes me understand that there is no "I" in the team.Every player should cooperate with other players in the team.So，I insist on playing it with my friends and classmates every day.
【分析】高分句型一
At the age of 10，when watching the games Yao Ming played in NBA，I started to be fond of the game.
翻译：10岁那年，当我看到姚明在NBA打球的时候，我开始喜欢上了这项运动。
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the games定语从句Yao Ming played in NBA省略了关系词that/which。
高分句型二
And it makes me understand that there is no "I" in the team.
翻译：这个运动让我明白团队中没有"我"。
分析：句子里，that引导宾语从句there is no "I" in the team。
【解答】
My favourite sports
Sports are part of our life.My favorite sport is basketball.At the age of 10，when watching the games Yao Ming played in NBA，I started to be fond of the game.【高分句型一】I like not only watching basketball games with my friends in my spare time，but also playing basketball.（最喜欢的体育运动以及理由）
During the period playing basketball，I have benefited a lot from the sport.Firstly，it can help me to keep healthy and happy.Secondly，I can make a lot of friends through playing basketball and we can share our successes and failures.And it makes me understand that there is no "I" in the team.【高分句型二】Every player should cooperate with other players in the team.So，I insist on playing it with my friends and classmates every day.（该运动的好处）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2024秋 河东区期末）假设你是李华，你的笔友Mary在上海游玩后打算去北京旅行，但她不知道哪种出行方式最好，她发邮件给你希望能得到一些参考意见。请根据下面表格要点给她回邮件。
Ways of travelling Good points Bad points
bus most convenient slowest，tired
train cheapest，safest book the ticket in advance
plane fastest most expensive，wait for hours at the airport
your opinion...
要求：
（1）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）行文连贯，可以适当发挥。
Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear from you._______
Well，have a great trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；交通．
【答案】Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear from you.There are three ways to travel from Shanghai to Beijing.Travelling by bus is the most convenient way but it is the slowest way.And you will feel very tired after a long journey.The second choice is by train.It is the cheapest and the safest.But you had better book the ticket in advance.Finally，you can go there by plane.It is the fastest way，but it's also the most expensive.And you have to wait for hours at the airport because of bad weather.I think you should go to Beijing by train.Because it is not only cheap and safe but also allow you to enjoy the sights along the way.
Well，have a great trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】 【高分句型一】
There are three ways to travel from Shanghai to Beijing.从上海到北京有三种交通方式。there be句型。
【高分句型二】
I think you should go to Beijing by train.我认为你应该乘火车去北京。I think+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear from you.There are three ways to travel from Shanghai to Beijing. 【高分句型一】Travelling by bus is the most convenient way but it is the slowest way.And you will feel very tired after a long journey.The second choice is by train.It is the cheapest and the safest.But you had better book the ticket in advance.Finally，you can go there by plane.It is the fastest way，but it's also the most expensive.And you have to wait for hours at the airport because of bad weather. （三种方式）I think you should go to Beijing by train. 【高分句型二】Because it is not only cheap and safe but also allow you to enjoy the sights along the way. （我的观点）
Well，have a great trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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