资源简介

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 锦江区校级期末）假设你是 Mary，寒假即将到来，你的朋友Linda写信给你想了解你的寒假生活并想随你一起参加学校的一个冬令营（winter camp），请你给她写一封回信。
要求：
（1）写出你的寒假计划（2条） 及其原因；
（2）比较所给冬令营信息（3条）；选择你心仪的冬令营并阐明理由（2条）；
（3）若你们有机会参加其中一个冬令营，描述可能出现的情况（2条）；
（4）注意文章结构完整，字数80﹣100。
Dear Linda，
Thanks for writing to me.
Yours，
Mary
2．（2024秋 黑龙江期末）假如你是李华，你班留学生Peter给你发来电子邮件，邀请你下周六下午去参加他的生日聚会，但你有事无法接受邀请。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
（1）表示感谢；
（2）委婉拒绝；
（3）原因：下周六下午要参加一场篮球比赛，但可以帮忙做一些聚会的准备工作；
（4）送祝福。
Dear Peter，
_______________
Yours，
Li Hua
3．（2024秋 黑龙江期末）假设你是学校电台"Ask Me For Help"的栏目编辑王英。你校学生Tom给你们的栏目组打来电话，讲述了他最近遇到的一些问题。请根据下面表格的提示，用英语写一篇短文给Tom一些建议，并告诉他这样做可能产生的结果。词数：80词以上。
Tom's problems Your advice Possible consequences（结果）
Having no free time to relax Improving ways of learning. If...will...
Having a fight with his friend sometimes Trying to be friendlier
Big boys often laugh at him Telling his parents or teachers about it
Hello，Tom!Sorry to hear about your problems.And I'm happy to give you some advice to help you solve your problems.______
4．（2024秋 思明区校级期末）新的一年，新的征程。为了解同学们的新年目标和计划，School Daily报社对同学们的新年心愿做了一次调查，部分结果如图所示。请你写一篇80词以上的短文简要说明调查结果，并分享至少两条你自己的新年心愿，谈一谈你将采取的具体行动及其原因。
注意事项：
（1）内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文章首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Our school did a survey among 500 students about their New Year's Resolutions.Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2024秋 金牛区期末）青少年睡眠不足引发社会关注，你校英语校刊对此话题正进行征稿，请根据下图你校所获的调查结果，撰写题为"A Report on Teenagers' Sleep"的调查报告。
注意：
（1）请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
（2）须全面反映图文信息；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）词数：80词左右，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
A Report on Teenagers' Sleep
Last week we asked our students about their sleeping hours.
________
6．（2024秋 硚口区期末）寒假即将到来，你将如何度过一个修养身心又有意义的寒假呢？假设英语老师给你布置了一项作业，要求用英文写一篇短文和同学们交流。请根据下列内容提示从保持健康、陪伴亲友和改善学习等方面谈谈你的寒假计划。
内容提示：
What will you do to keep healthy？
How will you spend your time with your family or friends？
What do you plan to do to improve your schoolwork？
Something more about your plan.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60左右：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Winter vacation is coming.How can I have a relaxing and meaningful vacation？__________________
7．（2024秋 长清区期末）新的一年，"一起向未来"。你决心在哪些方面有所改变？请围绕"改善学习状况"、"增强身体体质"、"面对困难和麻烦"等三个方面写作，适度发挥。
要求：1）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
2）字数80﹣100词左右；
3）条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The start of the year is often a good time to make resolutions.
8．（2024秋 让胡路区校级期末）假如刘莹是你的朋友，她刚来你们班，请你根据下表内容写一篇80 词左右的英语短文，介绍她过去的生活。可适当增添内容，以使行文连贯。
born Nanjing，2008
her first school Xinhua Primary School
her character （性格） nice，good
her first teacher Miss Li，strict
her first friend Zhang Meng，good
her favourite sport swimming
9．（2024秋 泸西县期末）
My Dream Job
提示：未来总是让人充满憧憬，充满期待。你未来的工作将会是什么样的呢？请发挥你的想象，以"My Dream Job"为题，写一篇短文来描述你未来的工作。
要求：
（1）根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 60个；
（2）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
（3）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
（4）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
_______
10．（2024秋 南华县期末）提示：每个人都有自己的梦想。你的梦想是什么？你长大了想做什么？为什么会想从事这份工作？你又想到哪里去工作？你又准备怎样一步步实现这个梦想？请以"My Dream"为题写一篇英语短文阐述你梦想的职业。
要求：
（1）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；
（3）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
_______
11．（2024秋 平山县期末）假如你是李华，寒假即将到来，你校正在举办以"My Meaningful Holiday"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你将打算如何度过一个有意义的寒期，并说明理由。
活动 理由
读书 带来乐趣，开阔视野
锻炼 保持健康，多交朋友
…… ……
注意：
（1）词数 80﹣100 字，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现与本人相关的信息。
参考表达：开阔视野open one's eyes
My Meaningful Holiday
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.________
12．（2024秋 武汉期末）假设你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你的日常生活。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。请你根据以下内容提示完成短文。
内容提示：
What are your friends like？
Do you have any problems？
What are your resolutions for the new year？
Something more about your future life.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息。词数60﹣﹣80，开头结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mike，
How are you？Glad to hear from you.Now，I'd like to tell you something about my life. .
Yours，
Li Ming
13．（2024秋 博尔塔拉州期末）根据下面表格内容提示写一篇80个单词左右的短文，介绍Kim和家人在新一年的决心。
Family members New Year's resolutions
Mr.Green Find a new job to make more money
Mrs.Green Take better care of her family
Lucy Eat healthier food and exercise more
Kim Study harder and get better grades
______
14．（2024秋 包河区期末）2024年已经到来，假如你是李华，你的好朋友Helen写信想了解你的新年计划，请你给她回信，从以下三个方面描述你的新年计划，以及为实现这些计划你打算做什么。
（1）身体健康
（2）与家人朋友的关系
（3）学习计划
要求：
（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯。
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范。
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
（4）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Helen，
I'm glad to hear from you.______________
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2024秋 高新区期末）近期，成都市推出"新作息令"，以保障学生学习与休息的平衡。学生"课余活动安排"的话题随即引起热议。Teen Time 杂志社就"如何劳逸结合安排课余生活"向广大中学生征稿。请结合以下所提供信息，写一篇短文，向杂志社投稿。
要求： （1）谈谈自己"新作息"后的课余安排及原因；
（2）短文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）字数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
These days，our after﹣school schedule has changed a lot.Because of it，I can .
期末专项培优 写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2024秋 锦江区校级期末）假设你是 Mary，寒假即将到来，你的朋友Linda写信给你想了解你的寒假生活并想随你一起参加学校的一个冬令营（winter camp），请你给她写一封回信。
要求：
（1）写出你的寒假计划（2条） 及其原因；
（2）比较所给冬令营信息（3条）；选择你心仪的冬令营并阐明理由（2条）；
（3）若你们有机会参加其中一个冬令营，描述可能出现的情况（2条）；
（4）注意文章结构完整，字数80﹣100。
Dear Linda，
Thanks for writing to me.
Yours，
Mary
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】Dear Linda，
Thanks for writing to me.During winter vacation，the first thing I want to do is do something I enjoy to relax myself.I can listen to music，watch TV，run，etc.Then I will also help my parents with some household chores.Because they are also very hardworking.The activities of the sports summer camp are mainly sports，while the cultural summer camp focuses on traditional culture.The cost of a sports summer camp is cheaper，but it lasts longer.I will participate in the sports summer camp because I think its activities are more interesting.It can make us healthier and more relaxed.At the same time，its activity location is closer to my home.If I participate in this activity，I will ride my bike and play ball games every day.
Yours，
Mary
【分析】【高分句型一】
I will participate in the sports summer camp because I think its activities are more interesting.我会参加运动夏令营，因为我认为它的活动更有趣。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
If I participate in this activity，I will ride my bike and play ball games every day.如果我参加这个活动我会每天骑自行车和玩球类游戏。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Linda，
Thanks for writing to me.During winter vacation，the first thing I want to do is do something I enjoy to relax myself.I can listen to music，watch TV，run，etc.Then I will also help my parents with some household chores.Because they are also very hardworking. （寒假计划）The activities of the sports summer camp are mainly sports，while the cultural summer camp focuses on traditional culture.The cost of a sports summer camp is cheaper，but it lasts longer.（比较所给冬令营信息） I will participate in the sports summer camp because I think its activities are more interesting. 【高分句型一】It can make us healthier and more relaxed.At the same time，its activity location is closer to my home.（选择心仪的冬令营并阐明理由） If I participate in this activity，I will ride my bike and play ball games every day.【高分句型二】（可能出现的情况）
Yours，
Mary
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2024秋 黑龙江期末）假如你是李华，你班留学生Peter给你发来电子邮件，邀请你下周六下午去参加他的生日聚会，但你有事无法接受邀请。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
（1）表示感谢；
（2）委婉拒绝；
（3）原因：下周六下午要参加一场篮球比赛，但可以帮忙做一些聚会的准备工作；
（4）送祝福。
Dear Peter，
_______________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】Dear Peter，
Thank you for your invitation.I'd like to go to your birthday party，but I'm afraid I can't.I have a basketball game next Saturday afternoon.However，I'd still be glad to help out with any of the party preparations.
Hope you can have a good time.Happy birthday!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Thank you for your invitation.
翻译：谢谢你的邀请。
分析：句子中应用了以动词原形开头的祈使句。
【高分句型二】
I'd like to go to your birthday party，but I'm afraid I can't.
翻译：我想去参加你的生日聚会，但是恐怕不行。
分析：句子中应用了but连接的并列句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
Thank you for your invitation.【高分句型一】（表示感谢）I'd like to go to your birthday party，but I'm afraid I can't.【高分句型二】（委婉拒绝）I have a basketball game next Saturday afternoon.However，I'd still be glad to help out with any of the party preparations.（说明原因）
Hope you can have a good time.Happy birthday!（表达祝福）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
3．（2024秋 黑龙江期末）假设你是学校电台"Ask Me For Help"的栏目编辑王英。你校学生Tom给你们的栏目组打来电话，讲述了他最近遇到的一些问题。请根据下面表格的提示，用英语写一篇短文给Tom一些建议，并告诉他这样做可能产生的结果。词数：80词以上。
Tom's problems Your advice Possible consequences（结果）
Having no free time to relax Improving ways of learning. If...will...
Having a fight with his friend sometimes Trying to be friendlier
Big boys often laugh at him Telling his parents or teachers about it
Hello，Tom!Sorry to hear about your problems.And I'm happy to give you some advice to help you solve your problems.______
【考点】其他应用文写作；个人情况．
【答案】 Hello，Tom!Sorry to hear about your problems.And I'm happy to give you some advice to help you solve your problems.
Your first problem is that you have no free time to relax.I think that you should improve your ways of learning.If you do，you will be able to save time and then you'll have some free time to relax.Your second problem may have to do with what you are like.I think you should try to be friendlier to your friend.If you do，I'm sure he won't have a fight with you and that you can get on with each other.As for your third problem，it seems more difficult to solve.However，I think if they laugh at you again，you should tell your parents or teachers about it.If you do，they will certainly help you.
I hope all my advice will help you with your problems more or less.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Your first problem is that you have no free time to relax.
翻译：你的第一个问题是你没有空闲时间放松。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的表语从句。
【高分句型二】
If you do，you will be able to save time and then you'll have some free time to relax.
翻译：如果你这样做，你就能节省时间，然后你就会有一些自由的时间来放松。
分析：句子中应用了If引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 Hello，Tom!Sorry to hear about your problems.And I'm happy to give you some advice to help you solve your problems.
Your first problem is that you have no free time to relax.【高分句型一】（说明问题）I think that you should improve your ways of learning.If you do，you will be able to save time and then you'll have some free time to relax.【高分句型二】（介绍建议与结果）Your second problem may have to do with what you are like.（说明问题）I think you should try to be friendlier to your friend.If you do，I'm sure he won't have a fight with you and that you can get on with each other.（介绍建议与结果）As for your third problem，it seems more difficult to solve.（说明问题）However，I think if they laugh at you again，you should tell your parents or teachers about it.If you do，they will certainly help you.（介绍建议与结果）
I hope all my advice will help you with your problems more or less.
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
4．（2024秋 思明区校级期末）新的一年，新的征程。为了解同学们的新年目标和计划，School Daily报社对同学们的新年心愿做了一次调查，部分结果如图所示。请你写一篇80词以上的短文简要说明调查结果，并分享至少两条你自己的新年心愿，谈一谈你将采取的具体行动及其原因。
注意事项：
（1）内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文章首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Our school did a survey among 500 students about their New Year's Resolutions.Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】说明文；计划与愿望．
【答案】 Our school did a survey among 500 students about their New Year's Resolutions.Here are the results.400 students plan to improve their physical health.450 students plan to improve their schoolwork.250 students plan to improve their relationships with others.300 students plan their time planning.
My New Year's resolution is to improve my physical health and study hard.Firstly，health comes first.Without health，we wait to lose everything.Secondly，I will work hard to study and strive to be admitted to a key high school.I hope my dream can come true.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Secondly，I will work hard to study and strive to be admitted to a key high school.其次，我会努力学习，争取考上重点高中。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
I hope my dream can come true.我希望我的梦想能实现。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】 Our school did a survey among 500 students about their New Year's Resolutions.Here are the results.400 students plan to improve their physical health.450 students plan to improve their schoolwork.250 students plan to improve their relationships with others.300 students plan their time planning.（调查结果）
My New Year's resolution is to improve my physical health and study hard.Firstly，health comes first.Without health，we wait to lose everything.Secondly，I will work hard to study and strive to be admitted to a key high school. 【高分句型一】I hope my dream can come true.【高分句型二】（自己的新年心愿，谈一谈将采取的具体行动及其原因。）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024秋 金牛区期末）青少年睡眠不足引发社会关注，你校英语校刊对此话题正进行征稿，请根据下图你校所获的调查结果，撰写题为"A Report on Teenagers' Sleep"的调查报告。
注意：
（1）请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
（2）须全面反映图文信息；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）词数：80词左右，开头已给出，且不计入总词数。
A Report on Teenagers' Sleep
Last week we asked our students about their sleeping hours.
________
【考点】日常生活．
【答案】1.8
2.How
A Report on Teenagers' Sleep
Last week we asked our students about their sleeping hours.8% of students sleep and study for less than 6 hours a day.10% of students only sleep less than 7 hours a day.23% of students sleep 7﹣8 hours a day.59% of students sleep 8﹣9 hours a day.There are many reasons for insufficient sleep，such as students having a lot of homework and some students being addicted to playing computer games.In order for students to have better sleep time，I first suggest that they do not need to do so much homework.Secondly，they need to stay away from electronic products.Finally，they need to exercise more.
【分析】 【高分句型一】
There are many reasons for insufficient sleep，such as students having a lot of homework and some students being addicted to playing computer games.睡眠不足的原因有很多，比如学生有很多家庭作业，有些学生沉迷于玩电脑游戏。there be句型。
【高分句型二】
In order for students to have better sleep time，I first suggest that they do not need to do so much homework.为了让学生有更好的睡眠时间，我首先建议他们不需要做那么多家庭作业。I first suggest that+宾语从句。
【解答】1.8
2.How
A Report on Teenagers' Sleep
Last week we asked our students about their sleeping hours.8% of students sleep and study for less than 6 hours a day.10% of students only sleep less than 7 hours a day.23% of students sleep 7﹣8 hours a day.59% of students sleep 8﹣9 hours a day. （调查结果）There are many reasons for insufficient sleep，such as students having a lot of homework and some students being addicted to playing computer games. 【高分句型一】（原因）In order for students to have better sleep time，I first suggest that they do not need to do so much homework. 【高分句型二】Secondly，they need to stay away from electronic products.Finally，they need to exercise more.（如何解决）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024秋 硚口区期末）寒假即将到来，你将如何度过一个修养身心又有意义的寒假呢？假设英语老师给你布置了一项作业，要求用英文写一篇短文和同学们交流。请根据下列内容提示从保持健康、陪伴亲友和改善学习等方面谈谈你的寒假计划。
内容提示：
What will you do to keep healthy？
How will you spend your time with your family or friends？
What do you plan to do to improve your schoolwork？
Something more about your plan.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60左右：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Winter vacation is coming.How can I have a relaxing and meaningful vacation？__________________
【考点】说明文；计划与愿望．
【答案】 Winter vacation is coming.How can I have a relaxing and meaningful vacation？Here are my plans.First，I'll eat lots of healthy food such as fruit and vegetables.In order to have a strong body，I'm going to play sports every day.Then，during the Spring Festival，my family plan to visit our relatives and friends.We'll stay with them for several days.Also，I'll finish homework on time and read some interesting books.As we all know，winter vacation is a good chance to increase subject knowledge.I believe the more I practice，the better my schoolwork will be!
【分析】【高分句型一】
In order to have a strong body，I'm going to play sports every day.为了有一个强壮的身体，我每天都要做运动。In order to 为了。
【高分句型二】
I believe the more I practice，the better my schoolwork will be!我相信我练习得越多，我的功课就会越好!I believe+宾语从句。
【解答】 Winter vacation is coming.How can I have a relaxing and meaningful vacation？Here are my plans.First，I'll eat lots of healthy food such as fruit and vegetables.In order to have a strong body，I'm going to play sports every day.【高分句型一】（我会做些什么来保持健康？）Then，during the Spring Festival，my family plan to visit our relatives and friends.We'll stay with them for several days.（将如何与家人或朋友共度时光？）Also，I'll finish homework on time and read some interesting books.As we all know，winter vacation is a good chance to increase subject knowledge.（我打算做些什么来改进你的功课？）I believe the more I practice，the better my schoolwork will be! 【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2024秋 长清区期末）新的一年，"一起向未来"。你决心在哪些方面有所改变？请围绕"改善学习状况"、"增强身体体质"、"面对困难和麻烦"等三个方面写作，适度发挥。
要求：1）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
2）字数80﹣100词左右；
3）条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The start of the year is often a good time to make resolutions.
【考点】说明文；计划与愿望．
【答案】 The start of the year is often a good time to make resolutions.I decided to change mainly in three aspects.
First，I made a decision to improve my study.I am not good at English now，so I will study hard and spend more time in English.Second，I also need to exercise more to enhance my physical fitness.Third，I used to be afraid to face problems and difficulties.But my parents and teachers told me to be confident and brave to face them.In the coming new year，I will be more confident and braver to face problems and difficulties.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I am not good at English now，so I will study hard and spend more time in English.我现在英语不好，所以我会努力学习，花更多的时间在英语上。be good at擅长。
【高分句型二】
In the coming new year，I will be more confident and braver to face problems and difficulties.在即将到来的新一年，我将更加自信和勇敢地面对问题和困难。will be将。
【解答】 The start of the year is often a good time to make resolutions.I decided to change mainly in three aspects.
First，I made a decision to improve my study.I am not good at English now，so I will study hard and spend more time in English. 【高分句型一】（改善学习状况）Second，I also need to exercise more to enhance my physical fitness.（强身体体质）Third，I used to be afraid to face problems and difficulties.But my parents and teachers told me to be confident and brave to face them.In the coming new year，I will be more confident and braver to face problems and difficulties. 【高分句型二】（面对困难和麻烦）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024秋 让胡路区校级期末）假如刘莹是你的朋友，她刚来你们班，请你根据下表内容写一篇80 词左右的英语短文，介绍她过去的生活。可适当增添内容，以使行文连贯。
born Nanjing，2008
her first school Xinhua Primary School
her character （性格） nice，good
her first teacher Miss Li，strict
her first friend Zhang Meng，good
her favourite sport swimming
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】 Liu Ying is my classmate.She is new here.She was born in Nanjing in 2008.Her first school was Xinghua Primary School.She was nice and good.Her first friend was Zhang Meng.She was a good girl.They often did their homework together after school.Her first teacher was Miss Li.She was strict with Liu Ying，but Liu Ying liked her.Her favorite sport was swimming.She went swimming twice a week.She was very healthy.I really like her.
【分析】【高分句型一】
She was strict with Liu Ying，but Liu Ying liked her.她对刘莹要求很严格，但刘莹喜欢她。
be strict with sb.对某人严格要求，固定短语。
【高分句型二】
She went swimming twice a week.她每周去游泳两次。
twice a week一周两次，表示频率。
【解答】 Liu Ying is my classmate. （点题）She is new here.She was born in Nanjing in 2008. （出生时间、地点）Her first school was Xinghua Primary School. （第一所小学）She was nice and good.Her first friend was Zhang Meng.She was a good girl.They often did their homework together after school. （第一个朋友）Her first teacher was Miss Li.She was strict with Liu Ying，but Liu Ying liked her.【高分句型一】Her favorite sport was swimming. （喜欢的运动）She went swimming twice a week.【高分句型二】She was very healthy.I really like her.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2024秋 泸西县期末）
My Dream Job
提示：未来总是让人充满憧憬，充满期待。你未来的工作将会是什么样的呢？请发挥你的想象，以"My Dream Job"为题，写一篇短文来描述你未来的工作。
要求：
（1）根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于 60个；
（2）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
（3）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
（4）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
_______
【考点】说明文；计划与愿望．
【答案】
My Dream Job
Everybody has a dream job.I am going to be a doctor when I grow up.I want to help more people in need.To make my dream come true，I am going to study really hard and finish high school first.Then I am going to get into a university and study medicine for 5 years.At the same time，I am going to work as a volunteer in hospitals during summer or winter vacations.I think the experience in hospitals will help me become a doctor.After that，I am going to work in a poor area in Gansu province.
【分析】高分句型一】
I am going to be a doctor when I grow up.我长大后要当一名医生。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I think the experience in hospitals will help me become a doctor.我认为在医院的经历会帮助我成为一名医生。I think+宾语从句。
【解答】
My Dream Job
Everybody has a dream job.I am going to be a doctor when I grow up.【高分句型一】（是什么）I want to help more people in need.（理由）To make my dream come true，I am going to study really hard and finish high school first.Then I am going to get into a university and study medicine for 5 years.At the same time，I am going to work as a volunteer in hospitals during summer or winter vacations.I think the experience in hospitals will help me become a doctor.【高分句型二】（如何实现）After that，I am going to work in a poor area in Gansu province.（工作地点）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2024秋 南华县期末）提示：每个人都有自己的梦想。你的梦想是什么？你长大了想做什么？为什么会想从事这份工作？你又想到哪里去工作？你又准备怎样一步步实现这个梦想？请以"My Dream"为题写一篇英语短文阐述你梦想的职业。
要求：
（1）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；
（3）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
_______
【考点】说明文；计划与愿望．
【答案】
My Dream
My dream is to be a teacher．Do you know why？Because I can learn all kinds of knowledge with the help of the teachers．When I am in trouble，teachers always take good care of me．They do many things for me as my parents do．I like them very much．I want to work in Shanghai because it is a very big city.How can I make my dream come true？First，I must try my best to study hard at all subjects．Second，I will read more books，such as English，history，science and so on．In addition，I will get into a good university．
I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it．
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we are in trouble，teachers always take good care of us．
当我们遇到困难时，老师总是好好照顾我们。when引导时间状语从句，in trouble处于困境中，take good care of 好好照顾。
【高分句型二】
I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it．
我相信如果我全心投入，我的梦想就会实现。if引导条件状语从句，put my heart into it全心投入。
【解答】
My Dream
My dream is to be a teacher．（梦想当老师）Do you know why？Because I can learn all kinds of knowledge with the help of the teachers．When I am in trouble，teachers always take good care of me．【高分句型一】They do many things for me as my parents do．I like them very much．（想当老师的原因）I want to work in Shanghai because it is a very big city. （想在上海工作）How can I make my dream come true？First，I must try my best to study hard at all subjects．Second，I will read more books，such as English，history，science and so on．In addition，I will get into a good university． （怎样实现梦想）
I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it． 【高分句型二】（愿望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024秋 平山县期末）假如你是李华，寒假即将到来，你校正在举办以"My Meaningful Holiday"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你将打算如何度过一个有意义的寒期，并说明理由。
活动 理由
读书 带来乐趣，开阔视野
锻炼 保持健康，多交朋友
…… ……
注意：
（1）词数 80﹣100 字，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现与本人相关的信息。
参考表达：开阔视野open one's eyes
My Meaningful Holiday
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.________
【考点】说明文；日常生活．
【答案】
My Meaningful Holiday
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.I'd like to share my meaningful holiday with you.
Whenever I have a holiday，I will keep a habit of reading books，because I think it can not only our eyes，but also bring a lot of fun.Besides，reading is good for our Chinese learning.And then，I will also keep doing sports，such as playing basketball or table tennis.We can keep fit，make more friends and relax ourselves by doing sports.Finally，going out is also a good choice，especially with your family.Nature's beauty is worth admiring.
This is how I spend my meaningful holiday.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Whenever I have a holiday，I will keep a habit of reading books，because I think it can not only our eyes，but also bring a lot of fun.Besides，reading is good for our Chinese learning.
翻译：每当我有假期，我都会保持读书的习惯，因为我认为它不仅可以我们的眼睛，而且还带来很多乐趣。此外，阅读对我们的中文学习有好处。
分析：句子中应用了Whenever引导的时间状语从句与because引导的原因状语从句巧妙结合。
【高分句型二】
Finally，going out is also a good choice，especially with your family.
翻译：最后，外出也是一个不错的选择，尤其是和你的家人。
分析：句子中应用了动名词作主语的用法。
【解答】
My Meaningful Holiday
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.I'd like to share my meaningful holiday with you.
Whenever I have a holiday，I will keep a habit of reading books，because I think it can not only our eyes，but also bring a lot of fun.Besides，reading is good for our Chinese learning.【高分句型一】（介绍读书方面）And then，I will also keep doing sports，such as playing basketball or table tennis.We can keep fit，make more friends and relax ourselves by doing sports.（介绍锻炼方面）Finally，going out is also a good choice，especially with your family.【高分句型二】Nature's beauty is worth admiring.
This is how I spend my meaningful holiday.
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
12．（2024秋 武汉期末）假设你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你的日常生活。请用英语给他回复一封电子邮件。请你根据以下内容提示完成短文。
内容提示：
What are your friends like？
Do you have any problems？
What are your resolutions for the new year？
Something more about your future life.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息。词数60﹣﹣80，开头结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mike，
How are you？Glad to hear from you.Now，I'd like to tell you something about my life. .
Yours，
Li Ming
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】Dear Mike，
How are you？Glad to hear from you.Now，I'd like to tell you something about my life.I have some good friends at school.They are as outgoing as me，we often play basketball together after school.My biggest problem is that I am not good at math，my best friend Andy always helps me with it.But I do well in Chinese，I like writing，I want to be a writer when I grow up.I am going to read more books during the coming winter holiday.I want to live in Shanghai in the future，I think it is a great city and it develops very fast.Anyway，learning is the most important for me now，I'll work harder.Wish you a happy winter holiday!
Yours
Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
My biggest problem is that I am not good at math，my best friend Andy always helps me with it.我最大的问题是我数学不好，我最好的朋友安迪总是帮助我。that引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
I want to live in Shanghai in the future，I think it is a great city and it develops very fast.我想将来住在上海，我认为这是一个伟大的城市，发展非常快。I think+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
How are you？Glad to hear from you.Now，I'd like to tell you something about my life.I have some good friends at school.They are as outgoing as me，we often play basketball together after school.（我的朋友是什么样的：他们和我一样外向，放学后我们经常一起打篮球。）My biggest problem is that I am not good at math，my best friend Andy always helps me with it.【高分句型一】（我的问题是什么：我最大的问题是我数学不好，我最好的朋友安迪总是帮助我。）But I do well in Chinese，I like writing，I want to be a writer when I grow up.I am going to read more books during the coming winter holiday.I want to live in Shanghai in the future，I think it is a great city and it develops very fast.【高分句型二】Anyway，learning is the most important for me now，I'll work harder.（我的新年决心）Wish you a happy winter holiday!
Yours
Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024秋 博尔塔拉州期末）根据下面表格内容提示写一篇80个单词左右的短文，介绍Kim和家人在新一年的决心。
Family members New Year's resolutions
Mr.Green Find a new job to make more money
Mrs.Green Take better care of her family
Lucy Eat healthier food and exercise more
Kim Study harder and get better grades
______
【考点】说明文；计划与愿望．
【答案】 New Year is coming.Kim and his family members have different resolutions.Let's have a look.Mr.Green is Kim's father.He hopes to find a new job to make more money.Kim's mother，Mrs.Green，wants to take better care of her family.Kim's sister Lucy wants to eat healthier food and exercise more.Kim's resolutions are studying hard and getting better grades.
We hope they will have a happy life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Kim's resolutions are studying hard and getting better grades.金的决心是努力学习，取得更好的成绩。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
We hope they will have a happy life.我们希望他们过上幸福的生活。We hope+宾语从句。
【解答】 New Year is coming.Kim and his family members have different resolutions.Let's have a look.Mr.Green is Kim's father.He hopes to find a new job to make more money. （Mr.Green的决心）Kim's mother，Mrs.Green，wants to take better care of her family. （Mrs.Green的决心）Kim's sister Lucy wants to eat healthier food and exercise more.（Lucy的决心） Kim's resolutions are studying hard and getting better grades. 【高分句型一】（Kim的决心）
We hope they will have a happy life.【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2024秋 包河区期末）2024年已经到来，假如你是李华，你的好朋友Helen写信想了解你的新年计划，请你给她回信，从以下三个方面描述你的新年计划，以及为实现这些计划你打算做什么。
（1）身体健康
（2）与家人朋友的关系
（3）学习计划
要求：
（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯。
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范。
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
（4）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数。
Dear Helen，
I'm glad to hear from you.______________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；计划与愿望．
【答案】Dear Helen，
How are you recently？I'm glad to tell you my plans in the new year.
Firstly，I want to become healthier and stronger.I will have a more balanced diet with more vegetables and fruits and do more exercise regularly.I'm thinking about jogging with my father every weekend which will also make me relaxed.
As for studying，it's the main task now.So I'll try my best to do better in all subjects.I must improve my learning methods and make full use of time every day.
Meanwhile，I will spend more time with my family.My parents are very busy every day.I should help with some housework to show my love for them.
Hope we all can be better in the new year.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】 【高分句型一】
I'm thinking about jogging with my father every weekend which will also make me relaxed.我想每个周末都和爸爸一起慢跑，这也会让我放松。which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Hope we all can be better in the new year.希望我们在新的一年里都能变得更好。省略that的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Helen，
How are you recently？I'm glad to tell you my plans in the new year.
Firstly，I want to become healthier and stronger.（身体健康）I will have a more balanced diet with more vegetables and fruits and do more exercise regularly.I'm thinking about jogging with my father every weekend which will also make me relaxed. 【高分句型一】
As for studying，it's the main task now.So I'll try my best to do better in all subjects.I must improve my learning methods and make full use of time every day.（学习计划）
Meanwhile，I will spend more time with my family.My parents are very busy every day.I should help with some housework to show my love for them.（与家人朋友的关系）
Hope we all can be better in the new year. 【高分句型二】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2024秋 高新区期末）近期，成都市推出"新作息令"，以保障学生学习与休息的平衡。学生"课余活动安排"的话题随即引起热议。Teen Time 杂志社就"如何劳逸结合安排课余生活"向广大中学生征稿。请结合以下所提供信息，写一篇短文，向杂志社投稿。
要求： （1）谈谈自己"新作息"后的课余安排及原因；
（2）短文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）字数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
These days，our after﹣school schedule has changed a lot.Because of it，I can .
【考点】其他应用文写作；学校生活．
【答案】 These days，our after﹣school schedule has changed a lot.Because of it，I can have more time to do what I want.
Firstly，I can go to bed earlier than before.With enough sleep，I study better and learn quicker the next day.Sharing school life with my family help us know each other better and have fewer fights.After finishing my homework，I can also read some books or take up some new hobbies to refresh my mind.To relax myself，I also go for a picnic with my family on weekends.
All in all，we should keep a balance between study and rest.I hope everyone can plan after﹣school time properly.
【分析】【高分句型一】
After finishing my homework，I can also read some books or take up some new hobbies to refresh my mind.完成家庭作业后，我还可以读一些书或从事一些新的爱好来提神醒脑。After引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I hope everyone can plan after﹣school time properly.我希望每个人都能好好计划好课后时间。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】 These days，our after﹣school schedule has changed a lot.Because of it，I can have more time to do what I want.
Firstly，I can go to bed earlier than before.With enough sleep，I study better and learn quicker the next day.Sharing school life with my family help us know each other better and have fewer fights.After finishing my homework，I can also read some books or take up some new hobbies to refresh my mind.【高分句型一】To relax myself，I also go for a picnic with my family on weekends.（"新作息"后的课余安排及原因）
All in all，we should keep a balance between study and rest.I hope everyone can plan after﹣school time properly. 【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页）
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)

展开更多......

收起↑