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Period 4 Writing
主题引领 情境写作
假定你是高一学生李华，你进入高中已有一周，请根据下列提示用英语写一篇日记，介绍你新学校的情况。内容包括：
1.校园面貌；
2.同学情况；
3.校园生活。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Sunday， September 7th，2025
Sunny
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
&1& 审题谋篇
&2& 遣词造句
巧妙对接单元词汇
1.___________ 高中
2.___________________________________
给某人留下一个……的印象
3._________ n. 挑战
senior high
leave/make a（n）...impression on sb.
challenge
4.________ n. 压力
5._________ adj. 有信心的，自信的
pressure
confident
6._____________________________________ 参加各种各样的课外活动
take part in various after-school activities
7.__________ 全力以赴
go all out
巧用单元句式、语法
［第一段］ 简单介绍个人情况
1.从我升入高中以来，已经一周了。
________________________ I entered the senior high.
It has been a week since
［第二段］ 对新学校、新同学的印象
2.新学校给我留下了深刻印象。
The new school ___________________________________.
leaves/makes a deep impression on me
3.新校园绿树环绕，既大又漂亮。（with复合结构）
The new campus is large and beautiful _________________________
______.
with a lot of trees all around
4.我们班有45名学生，我们都非常刻苦。
There are forty-five students in our class and ______________________.
5.我们学校的操场很大，在那里我们可以进行各种各样的课外活动。
The playground in our school is big and ________________________
_________________________ there.
we are all hard-working
we can take part in various after-school activities
［第三段］ 个人感受
6.我知道高中生活会充满压力与挑战。
I know _________________________________________________.
7.我决定全力以赴并勇敢面对它们。
I ___________________ and face them bravely.
8.我相信我能够在这里取得巨大进步。
I ________________________________________ here.
senior high life will be full of pressure and challenges
decide to go all out
am confident that I can make great progress
靓化表达促提升
9.用who引导的非限制性定语从句改写句4
____________________________________________________________
There are forty-five students in our class，who are all hard-working.
10.用where引导的非限制性定语从句改写句5
_______________________________________________________________________________________
The playground in our school is big，where we can take part in various after-school activities.
11.用although引导的让步状语从句合并句6和句7
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Although I know senior high life will be full of pressure and challenges, I decide to go all out and face them bravely.
&3& 衔接成篇
Sunday， September 7th，2025
Sunny
____________________________________________________________
One possible version：
Sunday， September 7th,2025
Sunny
It has been a week since I entered the senior high.
The new school leaves a deep impression on me. The new campus is large and beautiful with a lot of trees all around. There are forty-five students in our class，who are all hard-working. The playground in our school is big，where we can take part in various after-school activities.
Although I know senior high life will be full of pressure and challenges, I decide to go all out and face them bravely. I am confident that I can make great progress here.
假定你是李华,昨天参加了你校举办的以“我最喜欢的一本书”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记来记录此次活动,内容包括:
1.描述比赛的情况;
2.你的表现和感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Friday, September 5th，2025
Sunny
Yesterday afternoon I took part in the English speech contest held by my school. The topic is “The book I like best”.
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One possible version：
Friday, September 5th, 2025
Sunny
Yesterday afternoon I took part in the English speech contest held by my school. The topic is “The book I like best”.
At first, I felt a little nervous, but at the thought of the words “I can do it”, I calmed down. Soon it was my turn. When I said “The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller.
From the book, I realize that it is important to live every day happily and fully,” my teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on doing my best. Finally I won the first prize.
From this experience, I learned that I should try my best to do everything. I'll keep it in mind.
第一段 开门见山，简单介绍要叙述的事情 1.How time flies! It has been a week since I entered senior high.
时间过得真快！从我进入高中以来已经一周了。
2.This afternoon I took part in a carefully organised activity on the theme of “Human Activity and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum. 今天下午，我在科学博物馆参加了一个精心组织的活动，其主题为“人类活动与野生动物保护”。
第一段 开门见山，简单介绍要叙述的事情 3.We have just finished our military training. I have to admit that I have so much to say!
我们刚刚结束了军训，我不得不承认我有很多话要说！
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第二段 详细叙述事情发生的过程 1.Although we experienced several difficulties, none of us gave up.
虽然我们经历了很多困难，但没有一个人放弃。
2.Firstly, we watched the teacher doing it attentively and then it was our turn to do some practice.
首先，我们聚精会神地看着老师做，然后轮到我们做一些练习。
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第二段 详细叙述事情发生的过程 3.But, at first, I was afraid to have a try because I was worried that I couldn't make it.
但是，起初我害怕尝试，因为我担心我无法做到。
4.The foreign visitors were very surprised to find that we spoke English so fluently and we talked a lot about the history of the Great Wall.
外国游客很惊讶地发现我们的英语说得如此流利，我们谈了很多关于长城的历史。
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第三段 总结自己的感受及收获 1.It was not only an experience, but also a helpful lesson!
这不仅是一次经历，也是一堂有益的课。
2.All in all, I have benefited a lot from today's activity.
总之，我从今天的活动中获益良多。
3.Although the training is over, I have learned a lot which will be beneficial to my whole life.
虽然训练结束了，但我学到了很多让我受益终生的东西。
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词汇积累 ［情感描写］ curious， eagerness， butterflies in one's stomach， panic， in panic， pressure， calm， frightened， look forward to
［动作描写］ explore， organise， nudge， breathe， debate， argue， investigate， apply， graduate， go all out， refer to， struggle， exchange
［人物描写］impressive， confident， sharp， intelligent， volunteer
佳句积累 ［动作描写］ I woke up early and rushed out of the door in my eagerness to get to know my new school.
［情感描写］ When my English teacher stepped into the classroom， I was surprised to see the same man I had met earlier.
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佳句积累 ［比喻］ I tried to turn on my brain but the engine just wouldn't start.
［心理描写］ 1.With butterflies in my stomach，I breathed deeply.
2.I had been too nervous to pay attention when he introduced himself！
［主旨升华］ So， give your friends a hand when they need it. And this will make you feel good，too.
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［场景呈现］ 我全力以赴，申请成为即将到来的国际画展中的志愿者。在等待结果的过程中，我承受着巨大的压力。我非常害怕以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。我心里发慌，深深地吸了一口气。我努力让自己冷静下来。但我太好奇了，想知道谁会是那个幸运儿，被选为唯一的志愿者。听到我入选的通知后我喜出望外。多么惊人和令人印象深刻的时刻啊！我热切地盼望着这次画展的到来。
I had 1.____________________________________ in the coming international painting show. While waiting for the result， I was 2.___________________. I was 3._________________（so...that...） my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.4._____________________________（with复合结构），I took a deep breath. I 5._____________________________. But I 6.______________________（be+adj.+to do sth.） who would be the lucky dog and be selected as the only volunteer. I was overjoyed
gone all out to apply to be a volunteer
under great pressure
so frightened that
With butterflies in my stomach
struggled to calm myself down
was so curious to know
when hearing the announcement that I was chosen. 7.______________________________________（感叹句）！8.________________________________________ of the painting show.
What an amazing and impressive moment
I am eagerly looking forward to the coming
短语必记 1.hold one's breath 屏住呼吸
2.be anxious/eager to do sth.渴望做某事
3.to one's embarrassment令某人尴尬的是
4.be stressed out焦虑不安,精神极度紧张
5.be afraid/scared to do/of sth.害怕/畏惧（做）某事
必背金句 1.She looked at me in amazement. 她惊奇地看着我。
2.She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 她浑身发抖,感到如坐针毡。
3.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转向我,眼中充满了恐惧。
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必背金句 4.Last Sunday, I was walking in the street when I suddenly saw a dog run out of the street, which startled me and made me jump back quickly.
上周日,我正在街上散步,这时我突然看到一只狗冲出街道，吓得我迅速往后跳了一步。
5.He was very eager to be hired, but as for the interview, he was too nervous to show his true ability.
他非常渴望被录用,但就面试而言,他太紧张了而没能发挥出自己的真实水平。
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