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Period 4 Writing
主题引领 情境写作
假定你是李华，你校英语报正在开展“感恩父母”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.父亲或母亲令你印象最深刻的一件事；
2.自己的感想和从中得到的启示。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
&1& 审题谋篇
&2& 遣词造句
巧妙对接单元词汇
1._________ v. 走近；靠近
2.________ 求助于
3.____________________ 跟某人聊天
4._______ v. 尊敬，敬重
5._________________________ 保持积极自信
approach
turn to
have a chat with sb.
respect
keep positive and confident
巧用单元句式、语法
［第一段］ 表达对母亲的尊敬和感激
1.我最尊敬和感激的人是我的母亲，因为她对我无尽的关爱。
______________________________________ is my mother because of her endless love for me.
The person I respect and appreciate most
［第二段］ 详细介绍事情的经过
2.我仍然记得我在中学的一次考试中不及格那一天。
I still remember the day ______________________________________
______.
when I failed in an exam in middle school
3.因为我没有人可以求助，我非常难过。
______________________________________， I was so sad.
Because I had no one to turn to for help
4.她下班后注意到我很沮丧，走到我跟前，和我温柔地聊了聊。
After work, she noticed my being upset，_______________________
___________________.
approached me and had a gentle chat with me
5.她告诉我失败是成功之母，并鼓励我保持积极和自信。（that引导宾语从句）
She told me _________________________________ and encouraged me ____________________________.
that failure is the mother of success
to keep positive and confident
［第三段］ 表达自己的感受
6.我永远不会忘记母亲为我做的一切。
I'll never forget all the things _________________________________.
7.做她的孩子是我最大的幸福。［动词-ing（短语）作主语］
_______________ is my greatest happiness.
（that） my mum has done for me
Being her child
靓化表达促提升
8.用with复合结构改写句3
____________________________________________
With no one to turn to for help， I was so sad.
&3& 衔接成篇
___________________________________________________________
One possible version:
The person I respect and appreciate most is my mother because of her endless love for me.
I still remember the day when I failed in an exam in middle school. With no one to turn to for help， I was so sad. After work， she noticed my being upset， approached me and had a gentle chat with me. She told me that failure is the mother of success and encouraged me to keep positive and confident.
I'll never forget all the things （that） my mum has done for me. Being her child is my greatest happiness.
假定你是李华，昨天你无意中在一本书刊中发现了一张与父亲一起跑步的旧照片，这让你回想起与父亲一起跑步的日子。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
1.父亲习惯早起慢跑；
2.自己一开始不喜欢和他跑步，并说明原因；
3.跑步最终让自己和父亲的关系得到改善。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_____________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
I was tidying my room yesterday when I found an old photo in a book, where I was going jogging with my father. The photo reminded me of the past.
My dad got used to going jogging at dawn. Two years ago, he asked me to go jogging with him, which I hated because I was unwilling to get up early and didn't know what to say with him. However, as time went by, we began to talk more while going jogging. Later, he even began to tell me jokes!
Now, I am glad that he made me go jogging with him because our relationship has greatly improved.
第一段
引出话题，写明引起回忆的原因/事物 1.Every time I see it, I can't help thinking of that unforgettable thing in my life.
每当我看到它，我就会不由自主地想起我生命中那件难忘的事。
2.The lovely memory came flooding back.
美好的回忆如潮水般涌上心头。
3.I came across a diary in my drawer yesterday, which reminded me of something in the past. 昨天我在抽屉里偶然发现一本日记，它使我想起了过去的一件事。
第二段
具体讲述回忆中事件的经过 1.My father kept encouraging me so that I could cycle around the garden shortly after my first try.
我父亲不断地鼓励我，使我在第一次尝试后不久就能绕着花园骑自行车了。
2.I suddenly had a high fever, and my father was out on a business trip. In a hurry, my mother took me to see a doctor.
我突然发高烧，而我父亲出差了，慌忙之下，母亲带我去看医生。
续表
第二段
具体讲述回忆中事件的经过 3.My mother was strict with my brother and me in study all the time.
我妈妈对我和哥哥在学习上一直很严格。
4.With my special care, my mother recovered quickly.
在我的悉心照料下，妈妈很快就康复了。
续表
第三段
升华主题，总结说明这件事引发的思考与感悟 1.It is still one of my most precious things, for it was not only my first bike, but a symbol of my father's love as well as my courage.
它仍然是我最珍贵的东西之一，因为它不仅是我的第一辆自行车，而且是我父亲的爱和我的勇气的象征。
续表
第三段
升华主题，总结说明这件事引发的思考与感悟 2.From this experience， I have learned that if we don't understand our parents' decisions, we should have a heart-to-heart conversation with them and try to put ourselves in their shoes.
从这次经历中，我明白了如果我们不理解父母的决定，我们应该和他们坦诚地交流，并试着设身处地为他们着想。
续表
词汇积累 ［动作描写］ approach，chat，ignore，sigh，observe，apologise，admire，judge，settle，contain
［人物描写］ professional，talent，responsible→responsibility，jaw，beard，skin，slim，cheek
佳句积累 ［外貌描写］1.In his thirties， he was quite thin and pale， and he had red， bushy hair. Nowadays，he's well-built and tanned. He's always had a square jaw， but now he's grown a beard. Strangely，his beard is still red even though his hair is turning grey！
2.She still has smooth skin and straight black hair， and jogging has kept her slim and fit.
续表
佳句积累 3.I still have light skin and black hair，of course. But I usually wear my hair in ponytail these days as it has got a lot longer. Mum says I had cute rosy cheeks，but now I have freckles.
［动作描写］1.Alistair ran towards Jonny，caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line.
2.I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen.
［主旨升华］ I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.
续表
［场景呈现］为了庆祝母亲节，双胞胎决定为母亲做一顿早餐。但是由于这是他们第一次做早餐，他们搞得一团糟。看到一片狼藉，爸爸目瞪口呆。詹娜低下头，脸上流着泪水，为此向爸爸道歉。听到詹娜的解释，爸爸松了一口气。然后他说：“我们一起做吧！”爸爸帮助他们成功地做了早餐。手里端着早餐，双胞胎走近妈妈的房间时有点紧张。当妈妈睁开眼睛的那一刻，她无法抑制自己的情绪。她哽咽着说，“谢谢你们，亲爱的！”
1. _______________________，the twins decided to cook a breakfast for Mom. But it was the first time that they had cooked a breakfast so they made it a mess. Seeing the mess，2._______________________. Jenna lowered her head， and 3._________________________，with tears on her cheeks. Hearing Jenna's explanation，Dad 4._______________. Then he said，“Let's do it together！”
To observe Mother's Day
Dad's jaw dropped open
apologised to Dad for this
sighed in relief
Dad helped them and made the breakfast successfully. 5._________________________（with复合结构），the twins were a little nervous when 6._______________________. The moment Mom opened her eyes， she couldn't 7.___________________. “Thank you，my darling！”she choked.
With the breakfast in hand
approaching Mom's room
contain her emotion
短语必记 1.with anxiety 焦急地
2.with one's heart in one's mouth 提心吊胆
3.hide one's nervousness/anxiety 某人隐藏紧张/焦虑
4.sb.'s heart is in/flies into one's mouth心提到嗓子眼儿
5.have/with butterflies in one's stomach/one's stomach is full of butterflies心里发慌
必背金句 1.He was pacing nervously up and down in the room.
他在房间里紧张地踱来踱去。
2.Full of anxiety, he reached for his cellphone, only to find it out of power.
他满怀焦虑地伸手去拿手机,却发现它没电了。
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必背金句 3.When I took the stage, nervousness dried up my words.
当我登台表演时,我紧张得说不出话来。
4.She looked at the clock with growing uneasiness—he was already two hours late.
她看着钟表,心里越来越不安——他已经迟到两个小时了。
续表

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