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一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是高中生李华，你校下个月将举办主题为"When the buying stops，the killing can，too"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加此次活动，内容要点如下：
（1）野生动物生存现状；
（2）野生动物保护呼吁。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning!I'm honored to stand here to deliver my speech，whose theme is "When the buying stops，the killing can，too".
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That's all.Thank you!
2．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman，author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids，says， "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise，parents think they're building their children's confidence，when，in fact，it may be just the opposite.Too much praise can backfire and，when given in a way that's insincere，make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still，don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and，as a result，may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise？Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome，you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. "We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal，" says Donahue，author of Parenting Without Fear：Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out there every day and playing hard，you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard，cook dinner，or finish a book report.But whatever it is，praise should be given on a case﹣by﹣case basis and be proportionate（相称的） to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I still remember it，like it was yesterday when my parents told me the news.It was the week before Christmas on Thursday morning when my parents said， "Stacy，start packing your things so we can go to Florida for the holidays."
"Okay，" I responded.We do this every year for Christmas and New Year.It's kind of a family tradition we have.We go every year because we like to visit some family members living in Florida.There has never been a year when we've missed a trip to Florida for the holidays.I was so excited to go on this trip because Christmas is my favorite holiday，but to top it off I was going to get to celebrate it with my family.
The next morning，my mother entered my room."Stacy，wake up！We need to go to the airport so that we can get our plane tickets to Florida before they sell out."
I jumped out of bed and got ready as fast as I could.When we were on our way to the airport，I couldn't stop talking and smiling because I was too excited about getting our tickets.
"Aren't you just excited to go to Florida？" I asked.
"Yes，I am.We can finally catch up with the family and drink hot cocoa，" responded my mother.
The airport was so crowded.Some people were leaving to other countries and others were just visiting for the holiday.There was such a huge line in the airport because so many different people were buying plane tickets.
When it was our turn，my mother said，"Three tickets to Florida on Christmas Eve please."
The lady working there responded，"Well，you guys are lucky.You got the last three tickets to Florida."
My mother and I both smiled in relief and paid for our tickets and went back home to finish packing.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。
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When we arrived home，we found father was______
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After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money.____
4．Jatin and his younger sister，Neha，lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job，and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months，the landlord was breathing down their necks（盯着他们）.
One day，Jatin took Neha's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed，but he lost them on the way home.It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed，so he begged his sister to keep it secret.Neha agreed and the two decided to share Jatin's running shoes.Neha's school hours were in the morning，so she would wear them first.After school，she would rush back and give them to Jatin.He could then run to his school，which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could，Jatin often arrived late and was warned by the school.
A long﹣distance race was going to be held for the boys in the city.When Jatin learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes，he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived.Jatin had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Neha and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength，and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners，determined to finish third.Suddenly，as the finish line drew near，another runner collided（碰撞）with Jatin from behind and Jatin crashed to the ground.
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Jatin looked up and he saw the other boys rushing ahead._____
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Filled with pleasure，Jatin walked home in no time.________
5．A class pet can be an invaluable experience for elementary school children．The pet can teach responsibility，build a connection to the classroom，serve as a motivator，and be something for the children to love．If the teacher is willing to take on the added responsibility of caring for an animal in addition to all of the children in the classroom，a class pet can be a wonderful addition to a class．
Many factors need to be taken into consideration when choosing a class pet．It cannot be too big，as classrooms generally have limited space．Cost should also be considered since the teacher will likely have to pay for the pet，its food and its habitat．It must also be somewhat hardy （耐寒的）．Each particular type of animal has its advantages and disadvantages，and a teacher must weigh these and make a decision about which one is right for his or her class．
Birds are physically more delicate （娇养） than many other animals．They will not survive in drafts （气流） and need a somewhat regulated temperature in their environment．Many birds are quite social and do best with other birds or when being handled routinely by people who can be appropriate with them．Young children are not likely to have the skill to handle a bird without harming it，making it a poor choice for a class pet．
Some reptiles are beautiful to look at but are delicate，afraid of cold，light sensitivity or poisonous and shouldn't be handled by children．Others are more hardy but require expensive habitats．Most snakes eat rats and mice，which may be a frightening thing for small children to witness．
A hardy fish，such as a betta，is a good low﹣cost option for a class pet．They are obviously not huggable or able to be caught by children．Besides，they are inexpensive，have relatively long life spans，and can be kept in a simple fish bowl．
6．I was a taxi driver，a father of a 16﹣year﹣old boy at that time.My son was good at school，and he would graduate from senior high school and go to university，but he was hesitating to choose his future job and he always changed his mind.I did give him advice but he didn't follow it.And one Monday morning，I stopped at New York Hospital when I found a well﹣dressed man coming over.He was waving to me.I waited patiently until he jumped into the taxi."La Guardia Airport，please." He said.
As always，I wondered about my passenger.So I asked，"What do you do？" "I am working at the hospital." For some unknown reason，I decided to ask for his help.
"Could I ask a favour？" He didn't answer at first.But I continued，"I have a son，16.He's doing well in the school.He will graduate from senior high school.He wants a job this summer.Is there any possibility that you might get him a summer job？" After a minute，he said，"The medical students have a research project.Maybe he could fit in.Have him send me his school records." He searched his pocket and handed me a card.
That evening，when I got home，I pulled the card from my pocket."Robbie，" I said proudly，"this could be a summer job for you.Send him your school records." Robbie took the card and read it out loud，"Fred Plum，New York Hospital." "Is this a joke？" he said in doubt.After I shouted and threatened to cut off his pocket﹣money，Robbie promised to send off his grades the next morning.
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Two weeks later，when I arrived home，the whole family waited for me excitedly.______
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Robbie got the job and did well at the hospital.______
7．A few years ago，I had taken a part﹣time holiday﹣season job in a video store at the local shopping mall.From inside the store，I'd begun to see the people rushing by outside.Then an elderly woman caught my eye.Although slow and unsure of steps，she moved with deliberation （从容），and there was no hesitation in her gestures.The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter.The daughter was clearly impatient，rolling her eyes，huffing and sighing，checking her watch every few seconds.
The older woman then separated from the younger one and began to tick through the DVDs on the nearest shelf，obviously expecting someone else to help.After the slightest hesitation，I walked over and asked if I could help her find something.The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title scrawled （乱涂乱画的） on a piece of paper.It was a bit unclear to make out.Clearly a person looking for it knew a little about movies，about quality.Rather than rushing off to locate the DVD for the woman，I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it.
Looking back，I think I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment.Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother，who'd passed away the previous Christmas.As we walked along the back of the store，I introduced her to the different sections：old television shows，action movies，cartoons，science fiction.The woman seemed glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation.
We found the movie，and I complimented her on her choice.She smiled and told me it was one she'd enjoyed when she was her daughter's age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had.Maybe，she said with a hint of wistfulness（一丝渴望），her daughter could enjoy it with her own young children.Then，when the older woman's turn in line came，she paid in cash，counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness she'd displayed earlier.
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As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag，I walked over to the younger woman._______
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The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.__________
8．The big Town Hall clock was striking midnight when Frank began to cross the bridge.The dark night air was cold and a little wet，and the street lamp gave little light.Frank was anxious to get home and his footsteps rang loudly on the silent night.
When he reached the middle of the bridge，he thought he could hear someone coming near behind him.He looked back but could see no one.However，the sound continued and Frank began to walk more quickly.Then he slowed down again，thinking there was nothing to fear in a town as quiet as this.
Just then，he heard short，quick steps closely behind him.By the time he reached the other side of the bridge，he could almost feel someone at his heels.He turned round and there stood a man in a large coat.A hat was pulled down over his eyes and very little of his face could be seen.
Frank said something about the weather in an effort to be friendly.The man did not answer but asked roughly where Oakfield House was.Frank pointed to a big house in the distance and the stranger continued his way.
Then Frank wondered why the stranger had wanted to find Oakfield House at such an hour.He knew that the people who lived there were very rich.Almost without realizing what he was doing，he began following the stranger quickly.
The man was soon outside the house and Frank saw him look up at the windows.A light was still on and the man waited until it went out.When about half an hour had passed，Frank saw him climb noiselessly over the wall and heard him drop on the ground at the other side.
注意：
1.续写的次数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
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Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do.
_____
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Frank couldn't just stand in the dark and wait.
_______
9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A friend of mine，named Jack，received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present.On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office，a street urchin（顽童）was walking around the shining car. "Is this your car，sir？" he asked.Jack answered， "Yes，my brother gave it to me for Christmas." The boy was surprised. "You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing？Sir，I wish…" He hesitated（犹豫），Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted，but what the boy said surprised him greatly. "I wish，" the boy went on， "that I could be a brother like that." Jack looked at the boy in surprise，and then he said again， "Would you like to take a ride in my car？" "Oh yes，I'd love to，" the boy answered.
After a short ride，the boy turned and with his eyes shining，said， "Sir，would you mind driving in front of my house？"
Jack smiled a little.He thought he knew what the boy wanted.He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car.But Jack was wrong again. "Will you stop where those two steps are？" the boy asked.
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He got out and ran up to the steps._____
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Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car._____
10．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At noon that day，I drove back to my house after the performance.Just as I entered the living room，I heard a gentle sound coming from the bedroom upstairs﹣it was the sound of my favorite violin.
"Thief!"
I dashed upstairs.Sure enough，as expected，a boy of about 12 years old was petting my violin.The boy had messy hair and a thin face，his oversized coat seemingly filled with something.At first glance，I found a new pair of shoes missing.It seemed that he was surely a thief.
Then，I saw his eyes full of fear and despair.My anger was immediately replaced by a smile，I asked，"Are you Mr.Ram's nephew，Michael？I'm his housekeeper.Two days ago，I heard his nephew living in the countryside will come.It must be you.You're really like him!"
On hearing my words，the boy was first astonished，but then quickly said，"Has my uncle gone out？I think I'd better first go out for a walk and visit him again in a while."
I nodded and asked the boy who was preparing to put down the violin，"Do you like to play the violin so much？"
"Yes，but I'm so poor that I can't afford it，" the boy replied.
"Then，I give this violin to you." The boy looked at me questioningly，but he picked up the violin.Going out to the living room，he suddenly saw on the wall my huge color photo I performed in the Sydney Opera House.He involuntarily trembled for a moment and ran out without looking back.
I was sure that the boy had understood what happened because no one would decorate the living room with the housekeeper's photo.
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A few years later，I was invited to be a judge at a music competition of senior high school students._______.
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After the competition，"Michael" ran to me，holding a violin box._______.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
11．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Patrick never did homework. "Too boring，" he said.He played football and basketball and tennis instead.His teachers told him，"Patrick!Do your homework or you won't learn a thing. " And it's true.Sometimes he did feel like a fool.But what could he do？He hated homework.
Then one day he found his cat playing with a little toy and he grabbed it away.To his surprise it wasn't a toy at all，but a man of the tiniest size.He had a little wool shirt and a high tall hat much like a witch's（女巫）.He shouted， "Save me!Don't give me back to that cat.I'll promise you a wish.I promise you that. "
Patrick couldn't believe how lucky he was!Here was the answer to all of his problems.So he said，"Only if you do all my homework till the end of the term，that's 35 days.If you do a good enough job，I could even get As. "
And true to his word，that little elf（精灵）began to do Patrick's homework.Except there was one small problem.The elf didn't always know what to do and he needed help. "Help me!Help me!" he'd say.And Patrick would have to help﹣in whatever way.
"I don't know this word，" the elf cried while reading Patrick's homework. "Get me a dictionary.No，what's even better，look up the word and sound it out by each letter. " When it came to maths，Patrick was out of luck. "What are times tables？" the elf screamed. "We elves never need that.And addition and subtraction and division and fractions？Here，sit down beside me，you simply must guide me." Elves know nothing of human history.To them it's a mystery（秘密）.So the little elf，already a shouter，just got louder. "Go to the library，I need books.More and more books.And you can help me read them too. "
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As a matter of fact，every day in every way that little elf was a nag（喋喋不休的人）!_________.
Patrick got his As.__________
12．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
"I'm going to miss you so much，Poppy，" said the tall，thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up，hugged his parents，and smiled，trying not to let his emotions（情绪） get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least.The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder，and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it，" he said. "I'll see you back home in a month，okay？" His parents nodded，and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boy's mother turned to the dog， "Okay，Poppy，time to go back home."
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there.All that week，Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner，her favorite toy，or even in her daily walk.Her owners were sad too，but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa，but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？" asked Dad. "We've tried everything."
"I have an idea，but it might be a little crazy，" smiled Mom. "Without anybody left in the house but us，this place could use a bit of fun.Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual，but when she saw the box，she stopped.She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging（摆动） ever so slowly，then faster as she caught the smell.
Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.___________________
Paragraph 2：A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from university.___________________
13．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As a stay﹣at﹣home mom for 26 years，KC just turned 50 and she wanted to seek a job.She was not just looking for something to do.Putting four kids through college had left her severe financial problems and getting a job was a must!
From childhood，all KC wanted to be was a mom. "That's all.I'm just a mom who stays at home with my children and creates a good and comfortable home for my family." She was not sure why that ambition（夙愿） was so strong for her. "My mom worked full﹣time，so I did not see her often.Maybe because I wished she had been at home with me，" KC said.So after the birth of her first child，KC gave up her job and spent the next 26 years taking care of her children.But after such a long time，she wanted to find a job.
She realized the difficulty of the situation.When she sent a resume that had a 26﹣year gap，she knew it was lucky if she could get an interview，let alone an offer.Besides，her education was also one of the obstacles （障碍）.The fact that she didn't go to college was a disadvantage.
So after her own experiences，she advised others，"Get a college degree!You needn't change the thing about being a stay﹣at﹣home mom，but do something — no matter how small — to keep your skills up to date.There are so many choices these days that it will be easy to do while you're a full﹣time mom."
KC would still like to get a degree and then she discussed it with her husband.Her husband thought that she needed to go to a tutorial school.She agreed.KC wanted to keep up with current technology so she took classes to learn to use software.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
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In the class，she was the oldest student.___________
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From her own experiences，she realized the importance of education.__________
14．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When Bryan Anderson noticed an old lady caught on the side of the road，he knew she needed help.So he pulled up in front of her Mercedes and got out with his motor still running.
Even with a big smile on his face，she was worried.He didn't look safe；he looked poor and hungry.After reading her mind，he introduced himself as Bryan Anderson and began to help her.
Learning that she had a flat tire，without a second thought，Bryan set out to work and took hours to get it right，dirty and tired.She couldn't thank him enough for coming to her aid.
With everything done，the lady asked how much she owed him.Any amount would have been all right with her.She had already imagined all the awful things that could happen.Bryan never thought about being paid.This was helping someone in need.He had lived his whole life that way，and it never occurred to him to act any other way.
Byan told her that if she really wanted to pay him，the next time she saw someone who needed help，she could give that person help the way he gave her，and he added，"And think of me to let the chain of love continue."
Hearing that she owed him nothing，with tears rolling down her cheeks，the old lady drove off with a deep "Thank you."
A few miles down the road，the lady saw a small cafe.She went in to grab a bite to eat，and take the chill off before she made the last leg of her trip home.In the dirty﹣looking restaurant，the whole scene was unfamiliar to her；a waitress came over and brought a clean towel to wipe her wet hair.She had a sweet smile，one that even being on her feet for the whole day couldn't erase.The lady noticed the waitress was nearly eight months pregnant，but she never let the strain and aches change her attitude.Then she remembered Bryan.
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After the lady finished her meal，she paid with a ＄100 bill._____
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That night when she got home from work，she was thinking about the money and what the lady had written.
15．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文．续写的词数应为150左右．
I have seen amazing things．
My first visit was to a space station considered the most modern in space．Described as an enormous round plate，it spins slowly in space to imitate the pull of the earth's gravity．Inside was an exhibition of the most up﹣to﹣date inventions of the 31st century．A guide showed us around along a moveable path．
Guide：Good morning to all our visitors from 2008．First we're going to examine one of the latest forms of communication among our space citizens!Messages can now be sent using a "thoughtpad"．You place the metal band over your head，clear your mind，press the sending button，think your message and the next instant it's sent．It's stored on the "thoughtpad" of the receiver．It's quick，efficient and environmentally friendly．The only limitation is if the user does not think his or her message clearly，an unclear message may be sent．But we cannot blame the tools for the faults of the user，can we？
During the explanation I looked at the pair of small objects called "thoughtpad" on a table．They just looked like metal ribbon．So ordinary but so powerful!While I was observing them，the path moved us on．
Guide：And now ladies and gentlemen，we are in the "environment area"．People used to collect waste in dustbins．Then the rubbish was sent to be buried or burned，am I right？（We nodded．）Well，now there's a system where the waste is disposed of using the principles of ecology．A giant machine，always greedy for more，swallows all the waste available．The rubbish is turned into several grades of useful material，such as "fertilizer" for the fields and "soil" for deserts．Nothing is wasted，and everything，even plastic bags is recycled．A great idea，isn't it？
I stared at the moving of the waste machine，absorbed by its efficiency．But again we moved on．
Part 1
Our third stop shows the changes that have happened to work practices．Manufacturing no longer takes place on earth but on space stations like this one．________
Part 2
My mind began to wander．What job would I do？My motivation increased as I thought of the wonderful world of the future．________
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参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是高中生李华，你校下个月将举办主题为"When the buying stops，the killing can，too"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加此次活动，内容要点如下：
（1）野生动物生存现状；
（2）野生动物保护呼吁。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning!I'm honored to stand here to deliver my speech，whose theme is "When the buying stops，the killing can，too".
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That's all.Thank you!
【考点】提纲作文；环境保护．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good morning!I'm honored to stand here to deliver my speech，whose theme is "When the buying stops，the killing can，too".
As we all know，our planet is our beautiful home，where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously.However，more and more wildlife is faced with extinction，whose habitats are becoming smaller as new roads and railways were built.Even worse，to make profit，hunters are killing wildlife.Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers' need，causing their population to drop increasingly.
It's high time that we should change our way of life and stop hunting wildlife.If everyone boycotts buying any products made from wildlife，the killing can stop，too.Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we stop being a threat to our planet.
That's all.Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：As we all know，our planet is our beautiful home，where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously.
翻译：众所周知，我们的星球是我们美丽的家园，野生动物和人类本应在这里和谐相处。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we stop being a threat to our planet.
翻译：只有当我们学会与自然和谐相处时，我们才能停止对地球的威胁。
分析：本句使用了only+when引导的时间状语从句位于句首的部分倒装。
【解答】Good morning!I'm honored to stand here to deliver my speech，whose theme is "When the buying stops，the killing can，too".
As we all know，our planet is our beautiful home，where wildlife and humans should have lived together harmoniously.【高分句型一】However，more and more wildlife is faced with extinction，whose habitats are becoming smaller as new roads and railways were built.Even worse，to make profit，hunters are killing wildlife.Many animals are being butchered to meet buyers' need，causing their population to drop increasingly.（野生动物生存现状）
It's high time that we should change our way of life and stop hunting wildlife.If everyone boycotts buying any products made from wildlife，the killing can stop，too.Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we stop being a threat to our planet.【高分句型二】（野生动物保护呼吁）
That's all.Thank you!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman，author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids，says， "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise，parents think they're building their children's confidence，when，in fact，it may be just the opposite.Too much praise can backfire and，when given in a way that's insincere，make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still，don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and，as a result，may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise？Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome，you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. "We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal，" says Donahue，author of Parenting Without Fear：Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out there every day and playing hard，you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard，cook dinner，or finish a book report.But whatever it is，praise should be given on a case﹣by﹣case basis and be proportionate（相称的） to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
【考点】概要写作．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. （要点一） Yet，both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging. （要点二） When giving praise，parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. （要点三） Similarly，they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they're involved in. （要点四）
【分析】本文为说明文。文章介绍父母在育儿的时候要注意方式方法，例如如何表扬孩子。
高分句型一：When giving praise，parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result.
译文：当给予表扬时，父母应该真诚，专注于过程而不是结果。
分析：这句话使用了when引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Similarly，they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they're involved in.
译文：同样，他们也应该赞扬孩子在工作中付出的努力。
分析：这句话使用了how much引导的宾语从句，they're involved in是定语从句修饰the work。
【解答】Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. （父母表扬孩子会走极端） Yet，both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging. （表扬太少和太多都不好） When giving praise，parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. 【高分句型一】（表扬的时候要真诚，要专注过程） Similarly，they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they're involved in. 【高分句型二】（表扬孩子做出的努力）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要是把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I still remember it，like it was yesterday when my parents told me the news.It was the week before Christmas on Thursday morning when my parents said， "Stacy，start packing your things so we can go to Florida for the holidays."
"Okay，" I responded.We do this every year for Christmas and New Year.It's kind of a family tradition we have.We go every year because we like to visit some family members living in Florida.There has never been a year when we've missed a trip to Florida for the holidays.I was so excited to go on this trip because Christmas is my favorite holiday，but to top it off I was going to get to celebrate it with my family.
The next morning，my mother entered my room."Stacy，wake up！We need to go to the airport so that we can get our plane tickets to Florida before they sell out."
I jumped out of bed and got ready as fast as I could.When we were on our way to the airport，I couldn't stop talking and smiling because I was too excited about getting our tickets.
"Aren't you just excited to go to Florida？" I asked.
"Yes，I am.We can finally catch up with the family and drink hot cocoa，" responded my mother.
The airport was so crowded.Some people were leaving to other countries and others were just visiting for the holiday.There was such a huge line in the airport because so many different people were buying plane tickets.
When it was our turn，my mother said，"Three tickets to Florida on Christmas Eve please."
The lady working there responded，"Well，you guys are lucky.You got the last three tickets to Florida."
My mother and I both smiled in relief and paid for our tickets and went back home to finish packing.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出。
Paragraph 1：
When we arrived home，we found father was______
Paragraph 2：
After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money.____
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph1：
When we arrived home，we found father was lying on the floor，bleeding.Though we felt very surprised，we sent him to hospital at once.With the help of doctors，my father came back to life on Christmas Eve，which made our family pleased. My parents loved each other very much，so my mother kept my father company day and night，completely forgetting the trip to Florida.After my father woke up，he said sorry to us and told us everything that happened to him.
Paragraph2：
After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money.My father caught him and bravely fought with him，but unfortunately the man hurt my father.Hearing the news，we were proud of him.On Christmas Eve，we held a party in hospital for my father.Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful.I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital.
【分析】本文讲述了Stacy一家打算圣诞节到佛罗里达度假，因为那里有很多亲人。于是她和妈妈一起去购买机票，他们很幸运，还剩下三张去佛罗里达的机票。
高分句型一：With the help of doctors，my father came back to life on Christmas Eve，which made our family pleased.
翻译：在医生的帮助下，我父亲平安夜复活了，这使我们全家都很高兴。
分析：which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Hearing the news，we were proud of him.
翻译：听到这个消息，我们为他感到骄傲。
分析：现在分词Hearing作状语。
【解答】Paragraph1：
When we arrived home，we found father was lying on the floor，bleeding.Though we felt very surprised，we sent him to hospital at once.With the help of doctors，my father came back to life on Christmas Eve，which made our family pleased.【高分句型一】 My parents loved each other very much，so my mother kept my father company day and night，completely forgetting the trip to Florida.After my father woke up，he said sorry to us and told us everything that happened to him.（父亲醒后告诉我们发生的一切）
Paragraph2：
After we left for the airport to buy tickets，a man climbed into our house to steal money.My father caught him and bravely fought with him，but unfortunately the man hurt my father.Hearing the news，we were proud of him.【高分句型二】On Christmas Eve，we held a party in hospital for my father.Everyone got together around the Christmas tree and sang Christmas songs to him.That Christmas Eve was quite unusual and meaningful.I will never forget the time I spent with my father on Christmas Eve in hospital.（全家度过了一个难忘的圣诞节）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．Jatin and his younger sister，Neha，lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job，and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months，the landlord was breathing down their necks（盯着他们）.
One day，Jatin took Neha's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed，but he lost them on the way home.It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed，so he begged his sister to keep it secret.Neha agreed and the two decided to share Jatin's running shoes.Neha's school hours were in the morning，so she would wear them first.After school，she would rush back and give them to Jatin.He could then run to his school，which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could，Jatin often arrived late and was warned by the school.
A long﹣distance race was going to be held for the boys in the city.When Jatin learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes，he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived.Jatin had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Neha and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength，and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners，determined to finish third.Suddenly，as the finish line drew near，another runner collided（碰撞）with Jatin from behind and Jatin crashed to the ground.
Paragraph 1：
Jatin looked up and he saw the other boys rushing ahead._____
Paragraph 2：
Filled with pleasure，Jatin walked home in no time.________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Jatin looked up and he saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this crucial point，Jatin clenched his teeth，jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.Finally，he was the fourth one to dash across the finish line.Jatin couldn't help sobbing at the thought of letting his sister down.But much to his surprise，the runner who collided with him was disqualified for breaking the rule and Jatin won the third prize.Jatin felt overjoyed and relieved during the award ceremony，holding the shoes close to his chest.
Paragraph 2：
Filled with pleasure，Jatin walked home in no time.He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news.On his arrival，Jatin found Neha was walking about outside nervously and anxiously. "Neha，see what I have got for you." Jatin said excitedly，taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Neha saw the shoes，her face lit up.So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Jatin. "Thank you!Jatin." Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。描述贾丁一家生活贫苦，由于他不小心把妹妹内哈的跑鞋弄丢了，所以决心在一次长跑比赛为妹妹赢得新鞋。但是，当终点线接近时，另一名选手从后面与贾廷相撞，贾廷摔在地上。
高分句型一
Refusing to give up at this crucial point，Jatin clenched his teeth，jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.
分析：句子里，现在分词Refusing to give up at this crucial point作原因状语。
翻译：在这个关键时刻，贾丁拒绝放弃，咬紧牙关，跳起来，以最快的速度奔跑。
高分句型二
The instant Neha saw the shoes，her face lit up.
分析：句子里，名词The instant引导时间状语从句Neha saw the shoes.
翻译：内哈一看到那双鞋，脸就亮了。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Jatin looked up and he saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this crucial point，Jatin clenched his teeth，jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. 【高分句型一】Finally，he was the fourth one to dash across the finish line.Jatin couldn't help sobbing at the thought of letting his sister down.But much to his surprise，the runner who collided with him was disqualified for breaking the rule and Jatin won the third prize.Jatin felt overjoyed and relieved during the award ceremony，holding the shoes close to his chest.（结果贾丁是第四个冲过终点线的人，在他因为失望忍不住抽泣时，与他相撞的赛跑选手因违规被取消参赛资格，贾丁获得鞋子，他感到喜出望外）
Paragraph 2：
Filled with pleasure，Jatin walked home in no time.He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news.On his arrival，Jatin found Neha was walking about outside nervously and anxiously. "Neha，see what I have got for you." Jatin said excitedly，taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Neha saw the shoes，her face lit up. 【高分句型二】So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Jatin. "Thank you!Jatin." Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.（描述贾丁回家后兄妹激动的心情）
【点评】写作完成后，需要通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求。最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误。
5．A class pet can be an invaluable experience for elementary school children．The pet can teach responsibility，build a connection to the classroom，serve as a motivator，and be something for the children to love．If the teacher is willing to take on the added responsibility of caring for an animal in addition to all of the children in the classroom，a class pet can be a wonderful addition to a class．
Many factors need to be taken into consideration when choosing a class pet．It cannot be too big，as classrooms generally have limited space．Cost should also be considered since the teacher will likely have to pay for the pet，its food and its habitat．It must also be somewhat hardy （耐寒的）．Each particular type of animal has its advantages and disadvantages，and a teacher must weigh these and make a decision about which one is right for his or her class．
Birds are physically more delicate （娇养） than many other animals．They will not survive in drafts （气流） and need a somewhat regulated temperature in their environment．Many birds are quite social and do best with other birds or when being handled routinely by people who can be appropriate with them．Young children are not likely to have the skill to handle a bird without harming it，making it a poor choice for a class pet．
Some reptiles are beautiful to look at but are delicate，afraid of cold，light sensitivity or poisonous and shouldn't be handled by children．Others are more hardy but require expensive habitats．Most snakes eat rats and mice，which may be a frightening thing for small children to witness．
A hardy fish，such as a betta，is a good low﹣cost option for a class pet．They are obviously not huggable or able to be caught by children．Besides，they are inexpensive，have relatively long life spans，and can be kept in a simple fish bowl．
【考点】概要写作．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1．A class pet is a wonderful addition to the class，which can develop children's responsibility，build a connection and act as a motivator．
班级宠物对于班级来说是个很好的附加物，它可以培养孩子的责任感，建立相互间的联系以及作为学习的推动剂．
该句中which引导一个非限制性定语从句．
2．A hardy fish can be an ideal class pet，for it's cheap，long﹣lived and easy to raise．
哈代鱼可以作为一个理想的班级宠物，因为它很便宜、长寿，并且好养活．
该句中for为连词，用来引导一个原因状语从句．
【解答】A class pet is a wonderful addition to the class，which can develop children's responsibility，build a connection and act as a motivator． （高分句型一）（要点1班级宠物的好处）But many factors need considering when choosing a class pet，including its size，cost，advantages and disadvantages． （要点2选择班级宠物的要点）Birds and reptiles are a poor choice because they are delicate and easy to be harmed by children． （要点3不宜当选的宠物）A hardy fish can be an ideal class pet，for it's cheap，long﹣lived and easy to raise． （高分句型二）（要点4哈代鱼为一个 不错的选择）
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程．积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效．
6．I was a taxi driver，a father of a 16﹣year﹣old boy at that time.My son was good at school，and he would graduate from senior high school and go to university，but he was hesitating to choose his future job and he always changed his mind.I did give him advice but he didn't follow it.And one Monday morning，I stopped at New York Hospital when I found a well﹣dressed man coming over.He was waving to me.I waited patiently until he jumped into the taxi."La Guardia Airport，please." He said.
As always，I wondered about my passenger.So I asked，"What do you do？" "I am working at the hospital." For some unknown reason，I decided to ask for his help.
"Could I ask a favour？" He didn't answer at first.But I continued，"I have a son，16.He's doing well in the school.He will graduate from senior high school.He wants a job this summer.Is there any possibility that you might get him a summer job？" After a minute，he said，"The medical students have a research project.Maybe he could fit in.Have him send me his school records." He searched his pocket and handed me a card.
That evening，when I got home，I pulled the card from my pocket."Robbie，" I said proudly，"this could be a summer job for you.Send him your school records." Robbie took the card and read it out loud，"Fred Plum，New York Hospital." "Is this a joke？" he said in doubt.After I shouted and threatened to cut off his pocket﹣money，Robbie promised to send off his grades the next morning.
Paragraph 1：
Two weeks later，when I arrived home，the whole family waited for me excitedly.______
Paragraph 2：
Robbie got the job and did well at the hospital.______
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Two weeks later，when I arrived home，the whole family waited for me excitedly.Extremely proud，my son handed me a letter from Plum，telling him he was accepted by the project.As it turns out，he had sent his school records to the hospital the next day after I gave him the card.And he got a phone from Plum's secretary for an interview.He was concerned about the result，as a result of which，he didn't tell the family what happened.
Paragraph 2：
Robbie got the job and did well at the hospital.In fact，Robbie did so well that Plum phoned me，singing high praise for him.When the summer job ended，he made up his mind to be a doctor.With a clear aim in his mind，Robbie worked even harder.Eventually，he was admitted to New York Medical College.Much to my amazement，a stranger should change my son's future.
【分析】高分句型一
Extremely proud，my son handed me a letter from Plum，telling him he was accepted by the project.
分析：句子里，Extremely proud是形容词作状语；现在分词telling him he was accepted by the project作伴随状语。
翻译：我儿子骄傲地递给我一封 Plum的信，信上告诉他他被这个项目录取了。
高分句型二
With a clear aim in his mind，Robbie worked even harder.
分析：句子里，With的复合结构 a clear aim in his mind作原因状语。
翻译：罗比脑子里有个明确的目标，他工作都做得更努力了。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Two weeks later，when I arrived home，the whole family waited for me excitedly.Extremely proud，my son handed me a letter from Plum，telling him he was accepted by the project.【高分句型一】As it turns out，he had sent his school records to the hospital the next day after I gave him the card.And he got a phone from Plum's secretary for an interview.He was concerned about the result，as a result of which，he didn't tell the family what happened.（作者的儿子被录取了）
Paragraph 2：
Robbie got the job and did well at the hospital.In fact，Robbie did so well that Plum phoned me，singing high praise for him.When the summer job ended，he made up his mind to be a doctor.With a clear aim in his mind，Robbie worked even harder.【高分句型二】Eventually，he was admitted to New York Medical College.Much to my amazement，a stranger should change my son's future.（作者的儿子做的很好，最终被纽约医学院录取）
【点评】读后续写的解题思路
1．通读全文，读懂原文
通读全文首先要解决好五个 W 和一个 H 的问题，即理清人物 who、地点 where、时间 when、事件 what、原因 why 及怎样发展 how．在通读全文时，考生应将影响语义理解的词句进行仔细揣摩，结合上下文推测出它的准确含义。
2．构思情节，谋篇布局
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说，不是写神话，因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好两方面的信息：①十个标有下划线的关键词语；②续写部分所给的两段落的首句。
3．理清逻辑，优化语言
这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑，写作不必追求高大上的词汇，相反，朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语，不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格，必须采用适当的描写侧重点（比如侧重动作描写或是侧重心理描写），续写要抓住续这一核心，按照情节的发展进行延续，写作手法上必须以叙为主，描写上以动作描写为重心，情节的发展合乎逻辑地推进。
7．A few years ago，I had taken a part﹣time holiday﹣season job in a video store at the local shopping mall.From inside the store，I'd begun to see the people rushing by outside.Then an elderly woman caught my eye.Although slow and unsure of steps，she moved with deliberation （从容），and there was no hesitation in her gestures.The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter.The daughter was clearly impatient，rolling her eyes，huffing and sighing，checking her watch every few seconds.
The older woman then separated from the younger one and began to tick through the DVDs on the nearest shelf，obviously expecting someone else to help.After the slightest hesitation，I walked over and asked if I could help her find something.The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title scrawled （乱涂乱画的） on a piece of paper.It was a bit unclear to make out.Clearly a person looking for it knew a little about movies，about quality.Rather than rushing off to locate the DVD for the woman，I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it.
Looking back，I think I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment.Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother，who'd passed away the previous Christmas.As we walked along the back of the store，I introduced her to the different sections：old television shows，action movies，cartoons，science fiction.The woman seemed glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation.
We found the movie，and I complimented her on her choice.She smiled and told me it was one she'd enjoyed when she was her daughter's age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had.Maybe，she said with a hint of wistfulness（一丝渴望），her daughter could enjoy it with her own young children.Then，when the older woman's turn in line came，she paid in cash，counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness she'd displayed earlier.
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As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag，I walked over to the younger woman._______
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The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.__________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag，I walked over to the younger woman."Is that your mom？" I asked，halfway expecting her to tell me it was none of my business.But she rolled her eyes and said，"Yeah." I smiled to show her I wasn't criticizing."Cherish her，" I said.And then I answered her curious expression by saying，"When she's gone，it's the little moments like this that will come back to you." It was true.I still missed my mother and remembered the moments when I was so impatient as to make her life miserable.
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The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.Together they made their way toward the exit of the video store.They stood there for a moment，side by side，waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.And slowly，almost reluctantly，she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd.
【分析】高分句型一
I still missed my mother and remembered the moments when I was so impatient as to make her life miserable.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the moments ，关系词when引导定语从句 I was so impatient as to make her life miserable.
翻译：我仍然想念我的母亲，想起了我当时急不可耐，让她生活悲惨的那些时刻。
高分句型二
They stood there for a moment，side by side，waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.
分析：句子里，现在分词waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it作伴随状语。
翻译：他们站在那里，并肩站了一会儿，等待着奔腾的假日人流，等待着他们的位置。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag，I walked over to the younger woman."Is that your mom？" I asked，halfway expecting her to tell me it was none of my business.But she rolled her eyes and said，"Yeah." I smiled to show her I wasn't criticizing."Cherish her，" I said.And then I answered her curious expression by saying，"When she's gone，it's the little moments like this that will come back to you." It was true.I still missed my mother and remembered the moments when I was so impatient as to make her life miserable.【高分句型一】（作者因为自己的经历告诫这个女孩儿）
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The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.Together they made their way toward the exit of the video store.They stood there for a moment，side by side，waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.【高分句型二】Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.And slowly，almost reluctantly，she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd.（这个年轻的女孩转变了对母亲的态度）
【点评】读后续写的解题思路
1．通读全文，读懂原文
通读全文首先要解决好五个 W 和一个 H 的问题，即理清人物 who、地点 where、时间 when、事件 what、原因 why 及怎样发展 how．在通读全文时，考生应将影响语义理解的词句进行仔细揣摩，结合上下文推测出它的准确含义。
2．构思情节，谋篇布局
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说，不是写神话，因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好两方面的信息：①十个标有下划线的关键词语；②续写部分所给的两段落的首句。
3．理清逻辑，优化语言
这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑，写作不必追求高大上的词汇，相反，朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语，不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格，必须采用适当的描写侧重点（比如侧重动作描写或是侧重心理描写），续写要抓住续这一核心，按照情节的发展进行延续，写作手法上必须以叙为主，描写上以动作描写为重心，情节的发展合乎逻辑地推进。
8．The big Town Hall clock was striking midnight when Frank began to cross the bridge.The dark night air was cold and a little wet，and the street lamp gave little light.Frank was anxious to get home and his footsteps rang loudly on the silent night.
When he reached the middle of the bridge，he thought he could hear someone coming near behind him.He looked back but could see no one.However，the sound continued and Frank began to walk more quickly.Then he slowed down again，thinking there was nothing to fear in a town as quiet as this.
Just then，he heard short，quick steps closely behind him.By the time he reached the other side of the bridge，he could almost feel someone at his heels.He turned round and there stood a man in a large coat.A hat was pulled down over his eyes and very little of his face could be seen.
Frank said something about the weather in an effort to be friendly.The man did not answer but asked roughly where Oakfield House was.Frank pointed to a big house in the distance and the stranger continued his way.
Then Frank wondered why the stranger had wanted to find Oakfield House at such an hour.He knew that the people who lived there were very rich.Almost without realizing what he was doing，he began following the stranger quickly.
The man was soon outside the house and Frank saw him look up at the windows.A light was still on and the man waited until it went out.When about half an hour had passed，Frank saw him climb noiselessly over the wall and heard him drop on the ground at the other side.
注意：
1.续写的次数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
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Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do.
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Frank couldn't just stand in the dark and wait.
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【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do.Everyone knew that Oakfield House was filed with artworks worth millions of dollars.It was clear to Frank that the family inside was in danger.Would the man have a weapon？Would I be strong enough to overpower him before he could harm the people inside？Frank's heart was racing with fear.He reached for his cell phone to call the policeman，only to find it out of power.If only he had charged his phone before leaving the office，but it was too late to think of that now.
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Frank couldn't just stand in the dark and wail.He had to do something，even if it meant risking his own life.At his feet he silently found several good sized stones，and he threw them with as much power as he could right at the windows of the house.The clatter woke up the people inside the house and a light came on upstairs.The man froze，not knowing quite what had just happened.Lights came on everywhere in the house and within a minute the night was filled with the sounds of police sirens screaming toward the Oakfield House.
【分析】本文为记叙文，通过阅读所给文章可知，午夜时分Frank走在路上，总感觉有人跟着自己，他放慢脚步，发现一个身穿大衣，帽檐遮脸的人。Frank与其交谈，试图表现出镇定的样子，而那人并不理睬，只顾着问Oakfield House怎么走。Frank好奇陌生人为什么这么晚要去Oakfield House，并且住在那里的人非常富有。想到这些，Frank决定悄悄跟随陌生人看他到底要做什么。在Oakfield House外，Frank看到陌生人等灯全熄灭后翻墙进入了Oakfield House里面。
高分句型一：He reached for his cell phone to call the policeman，only to find it out of power.
译文：他伸手去拿手机给警察打电话，结果发现手机没电了。
分析：这句话使用不定式only to find it out of power作结果状语。
高分句型二：The man froze，not knowing quite what had just happened.
译文：那人愣住了，不知道刚才发生了什么事。
分析：这句话使用现在分词短语not knowing quite what had just happened作状语，what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do.Everyone knew that Oakfield House was filed with artworks worth millions of dollars.It was clear to Frank that the family inside was in danger.Would the man have a weapon？Would I be strong enough to overpower him before he could harm the people inside？Frank's heart was racing with fear.He reached for his cell phone to call the policeman，only to find it out of power.【高分句型一】If only he had charged his phone before leaving the office，but it was too late to think of that now.（Frank猜出这个男子是盗贼。那接下来Frank会想什么和做什么）
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Frank couldn't just stand in the dark and wail.He had to do something，even if it meant risking his own life.At his feet he silently found several good sized stones，and he threw them with as much power as he could right at the windows of the house.The clatter woke up the people inside the house and a light came on upstairs.The man froze，not knowing quite what had just happened.【高分句型二】Lights came on everywhere in the house and within a minute the night was filled with the sounds of police sirens screaming toward the Oakfield House.（Frank接下来采取了什么措施，最后盗贼被擒）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A friend of mine，named Jack，received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present.On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office，a street urchin（顽童）was walking around the shining car. "Is this your car，sir？" he asked.Jack answered， "Yes，my brother gave it to me for Christmas." The boy was surprised. "You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing？Sir，I wish…" He hesitated（犹豫），Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted，but what the boy said surprised him greatly. "I wish，" the boy went on， "that I could be a brother like that." Jack looked at the boy in surprise，and then he said again， "Would you like to take a ride in my car？" "Oh yes，I'd love to，" the boy answered.
After a short ride，the boy turned and with his eyes shining，said， "Sir，would you mind driving in front of my house？"
Jack smiled a little.He thought he knew what the boy wanted.He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car.But Jack was wrong again. "Will you stop where those two steps are？" the boy asked.
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He got out and ran up to the steps._____
Paragraph 2
Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car._____
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1
He got out and ran up to the steps.Then in a short while Jack heard him coming back，but he was not coming fast.He was carrying his little crippled（残疾的） brother.He sat down on the step and pointed to the car. "There he is，Buddy，just like I told you upstairs.Hi

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