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Topic：A travel experience
He who travels far knows more.
远行者见识广。
Writing
【学习目标】
能初步了解写作过程——“审与列、扩与连、查与抄”
初中生活即将结束，很多同学想在考试后去旅游。请你以 “An unforgettable trip ”为题，用英语写一篇短文与同学们分享一次旅行经历，帮助同学们更好地选择旅游地。
内容包括：1. 你对旅游地的总体印象；
2. 旅游中的活动；
3. 你的感受与评价；
4. …… （可写你对他人的建议）
要求：1. 短文必须涵盖以上内容，可适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
3. 词数100词左右。
审
Writing
topic（话题）：
person（人称）：
tense(时态)：
key points(要点):
An unforgettable trip
first person
simple past tense (一般过去时)
genaral impression
activities
feelings and advice
列
Make an
Outline（提纲）
key points
Your outline can be like this.
General impression（总体印象）:
1. place ______, time ______, people ________, ...
2. impression: _____________
Activities（活动）:
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________ 4. …
Feelings and advice（感受与建议）:
_____________________________________________
An outline can help you cover all the points(涵盖所有要点).
采分点1: 内容充实，覆盖要点（7分）
Hainan
2024
family
fantastic
visit Tianyahaijiao
watch the sunrise
collect shells on the beach
unforgettable, pay a visit to…
An unforgettable trip
Beginning
Body
Ending
Let’s go for it!
General impression（总体印象）:
1. place ______, time ______, people ________, ...
2. impression: _____________
Make your outline an article!
Hainan
2024
family
fantastic
Let’s go for it!
Hainan is a magic land of flowers, coconut trees and the sea world. I went there with my family in 2013. It was so fantastic that I will never forget it.
扩
采分点2: 用词贴切，语法正确，句型多样（7分）
连
采分点3: 结构紧凑，意思连贯（4分）
Beginning
An unforgettable trip
I enjoyed watching the sunrise on the seaside.
I had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches.
I also visited Tianyahaijiao.
I had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches, which made me happy and relaxed.
I had a lot of unforgettable memories there.
For example,
Besides,
What’s more,
It was the most beautiful sight that I have ever seen.
No visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao.
An unforgettable trip
Activities（活动）:
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
4. …
watch the sunrise
collect shells on the beach
Body
扩与连
visit Tianyahaijiao
I had a lot of unforgettable memories there. For example,we enjoyed watching the sunrise on the seaside. It was the most beautiful sight that I have ever seen. Besides, we had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches, which made me relaxed and happy. What’s more, we also visited Tianyahaijiao. It is thought that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao.
An unforgettable trip
Activities（活动）:
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
4. …
watch the sunrise
collect shells on the beach
Body
扩与连
visit Tianyahaijiao
topic sentence（主题句）
1+1策略:feelings, details, others…
Different sentence patterns句型多样
采分点2: 用词贴切，语法正确，句型多样（7分）
采分点3: 结构紧凑，意思连贯（4分）
linking words
feelings
What a/an trip I had!
What do you think of my trip？
unforgettable
wonderful
fantastic
interesting
…
If you hope to travel somewhere famous, why not pay a visit to Hainan
Ending
What an unforgettable trip I had! If you hope to travel somewhere famous, why not pay a visit to Hainan
Finish your composition.
Homework
审
列
扩
连
查
抄

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