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专题16书面表达（100字左右）
1.（2025高考北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 提出的建议；
2. 建议的理由。
提示词：倡议 proposal
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1.（2024年全国甲卷）英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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1.（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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2.（2023年天津卷）
你作为交换生去英国学校，学校要办一个名为Chinese workshop的促进中英文化交流的活动，活动内容包括中国美食手工艺品和书法，并且活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西。
请描述这项活动的意义，并申请参加此次活动，阐述参加内容及想法。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2023年全国甲卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到对中国古代名人感兴趣，学校举办以英语用讲中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:
1.人物事迹;
2.意义;
3. 启示。注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4.（2023年全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述在暑假所学到的一项新技能的经历及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作思路:
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21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)专题16书面表达（100字左右）
1.（2025高考北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 提出的建议；
2. 建议的理由。
提示词：倡议 proposal
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea is to promote cultural exchange. We live in a world where different cultures coexist. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对外国好友Jim关于联合国全球青少年倡议征集活动的询问进行回复，给出倡议内容的建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
建议：suggest→advise
关注：focus on → concentrate on
提高：raise→enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers.
拓展句：Hearing that you want to take part in the UN’s initiative for global teenagers, I feel glad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We live in a world where different cultures coexist.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Let me know if you need more ideas.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
1.（2024年全国甲卷）英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】 Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：offer→provide
极大地：dramatically→tremendously
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
1.（2023年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Jim,
I was thrilled to receive your email about the club activity themed “Green Beijing”. I’m more than delighted to provide you with some suggestions for the event.
Personally, I would recommend organizing an environmentally friendly exhibition. This can be held either at our school or within the community. It would be a great opportunity to raise awareness about environmental issues and engage more people in the cause.
As for the content of the activity,you could consider setting up booths to promote environmental knowledge and encourage sustainable practices. Besides，organizing a community cleanup event would be a hands-on way to make a positive impact.
I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.Wish you all the best for a successful“Green Beijing”club activity
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“绿色北京”为主题，写一封建议信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
开心：was happy → was thrilled
关于：about → themed
提供：give → provide
事业：job → cause
在我看来：in my opinion → personally
【点睛】
在我看来：personally
至于活动的内容：As for the content of the activity
此外：besides
【高分句式】
It would be a great opportunity to raise awareness about environmental issues and engage more people in the cause.
（本句运用并列句和高级词汇及短语raise awareness, engage, in the cause等。)
2.（2023年天津卷）
你作为交换生去英国学校，学校要办一个名为Chinese workshop的促进中英文化交流的活动，活动内容包括中国美食手工艺品和书法，并且活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西。
请描述这项活动的意义，并申请参加此次活动，阐述参加内容及想法。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the Chinese workshop activity that is being organized by the school as part of promoting cultural exchange between China and the UK. I am currently an exchange student at your school and I believe this activity would be a great opportunity for me to contribute and learn.
I would like to participate in the workshop by showcasing Chinese cuisine.handicrafts.and calligraphy. Additionally,I would love to teach other students how to make traditional Chinese items. This activity holds great significance as it not only fosters cultural understanding but also allows me to share my own culture and learn from others. I am exceedingly excited about this opportunity and I believe it will greatly enrich my experience as an exchange student.
I would appreciate it if you could take me into consideration.Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“促进中英文化交流的活动”为主题，写一封申请信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
现在：now → currently
重要：importance → significance
非常：very → exceedingly
【点睛】
想要：would like to
不仅...而且...：not only...but also
此外：additionally
【高分句式1】This activity holds great significance as it not only fosters cultural understanding but also allows me to share my own culture and learn from others. (句中使用连词as引导的原因状语从句，且从句中运用关联词not only...but also...。)
【高分句式2】I would appreciate it if you could take me into consideration.(本句使用虚拟语气，it 作为形式宾语，if 引导真正的宾语从句。)
3.（2023年全国甲卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到对中国古代名人感兴趣，学校举办以英语用讲中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:
1.人物事迹;
2.意义;
3. 启示。注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear Chris,
I feel more than delighted to know you are interested in the famous historical figures in ancient china. I'd like to share my favourite poet named Du Fu in Tang Dynasty with you.
Du Fu, a famous poet of the Tang Dynasty, is crowned as “Poet-Sage” by later generations. Many of his poems has remained today, having a great impact on our Chinese culture and society. What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages. They convey his strong love for nature, friends and the people. As is known to all, Du Fu is regarded as one of the greatest romantic poets of the Tang Dynasty.
Sincerely, I hope my brief introduction can be of help to you and provide some insight into this important historical figure.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校举办以用英文讲中国故事为主题的征文活动，要求考生以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
人物：person → figure
影响：influence → have a great impact on
博大精深的：important → profound
传达：express → convey
【高分句型1】 What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages. （本句是复合句，主语从句是一大亮点，且随后运用which引导的非限制性定语从句，均为加分金句。）
【高分句型2】As is known to all, Du Fu is regarded as one of the greatest romantic poets of the Tang Dynasty.（本句是复合句，句首是as引导的定语从句，主句运用高级短语be regarded as。）
【高分句型3】Sincerely, I hope my brief introduction can be of help to you and provide some insight into this important historical figure. （本句宾语从句中运用be of+抽象名词较为吸睛，且从句中运用并列句，均是加分点。）
4.（2023年全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述在暑假所学到的一项新技能的经历及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作思路:
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Aiming to enrich the life of my summer holidays, I decided to learn photography,and it turned out to be an amazing journey.
In the first place, I researched different cameras and techniques. Meanwhile, I enrolled in an online course to learn the basics of composition and lighting.It was challenging at first, but with practice gradually improved. During the learning process, I encountered challenges like understanding manual settings and capturing the perfect shot.However, I didn’t give up and sought guidance from experienced photographers Their advice and encouragement helped me overcome the challenges
Learning photography has been an enriching experience.It has allowed me to see the world from a different perspective appreciating the beauty in everyday life. I have also gained a sense of accomplishment when I captured stunning images that convey emotions and narratives.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以向学校英文报投稿的方式用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
是：was → turned out to be
开始：to begin with → in the first place
困难：difficulties → challenges
寻找：look for → seek
2.【高分句型1】Aiming to enrich the life of my summer holidays, I decided to learn photography,and it turned out to be an amazing journey.（句首运用现在分词短语，起到画龙点睛的作用，句中谓语运用turn out to be 和amazing都是亮点。）
【高分句型2】During the learning process, I encountered challenges like understanding manual settings and capturing the perfect shot.（本句运用介词短语开头，使人眼前一亮，谓语运用高级词汇encounter更是别具一格。）
【高分句型3】 I have also gained a sense of accomplishment when I captured stunning images that convey emotions and narratives.（本句是复合句，主句运用高级短语a sense of, 从句动词capture都是加分词汇）
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