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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优人教版（2024）Unit 3 My school
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Fred给你发来一封电子邮件，请你阅读后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to be your new penfriend. I want to know more about you. How many people are there in your family What’s your room like I like rabbits best. What are your favourite animals I study at a nice school. Do you like your school What’s your favourite place at school Why Can you tell me
Yours,
Fred
1.邮件应回答所有问题，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名
3.词数80左右。邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred，
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．亲爱的同学，七年级上学期的校园生活即将画上句号，回顾这段时光，你的学校给你留下了怎样的印象呢 请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的学校、你最喜欢的校园一角以及你对同学和老师们的看法。
内容提示：
1. What is your school like
2. Which place do you like best Why
3. What do you think of your classmates and teachers
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A school is a place to start our dreams
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3．当地英文报正在开展一项关于学校生活的征文活动，邀请你校学生投稿，请你按照征稿要求以“My school”为题写一篇文章投稿，介绍自己的学校和你的学校生活。
提示：
1. What is your school like
2. How many buildings are there in your school
3. What is your favorite place in your school Why
4. What do you like to do at school
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息和学校名称；
2. 词数60左右。
My school
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4．同学们，时光荏苒，仿佛昨日你们才满怀憧憬地迈入初中大门，而今，一个学期的学习生活已悄然落幕。在这段宝贵的时间里，相信你们对自己的初中学校有了更为深刻的了解与感受。现在，请拿起你的笔，向我们简单介绍一下你的初中学校。
My Middle School What is in your school Which one do you like best Why
Buildings classroom building; a sports field; ... ...
Subjects (学科) Maths; English; ... ...
要求：
1）必须包括所给信息, 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯；
2）文章中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Middle School
Let me talk about my middle school.
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5．假如你是红星中学七年级学生李华，现校刊举办“分享美好时光”的主题活动。请你以“My school life”为题向校刊英文专栏投稿，介绍你的初中生活。
内容包括：
1. 校园环境；
2. 课外活动；
3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 词数为60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇: beautiful（adj.美丽的）, after-school activities（课外活动）, enjoy（v.喜欢）
My school life
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade Seven.
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6．假设你是 Li Ming，你的美国笔友Daniel询问你初中生活的近况，请你用英文给他回复邮件，介绍你的生活，要点如下：
1. 校园美丽，有图书馆、餐厅等；学校活动丰富：……
2. 饮食健康：……；经常运动：……
3. 最爱的中国节日是……，(介绍庆祝方式)。
要求：
1. 所写短文必须包括要点提示内容，并作适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于70，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel,
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my life.
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Best wishes,
Li Ming
7．根据要求完成大作文，并将答案写在答题卡 (纸) 的相应位置。
学校是我们生活学习的主要场所。假如你是Peter，请根据以下提示给你的朋友Flora写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校及学校生活。
内容包括：
1. What’s your school like
2. What’s your favorite place in your school Why
3. How about your school life
4. How do you like your school and your school life
注意：
1. 文中要包含所给的提示信息，可适当增加细节；
2. 词数70～80词，所给的词不计入总词数；
3. 要求字迹工整，语句通顺，条理清晰；
4. 文中不得出现真实的学校，班级和姓名。
Dear Flora,
Thanks for your email. I’d like to tell you something about
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Yours,
Peter
8．假设你是李华，请你用英文写一封电子邮件向你们班交换生Peter介绍你最喜欢你们学校的哪个地方，以及你为什么喜欢这个地方。不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
提示词语：different, playing field, library, study, friends
内容提示：●What is your favourite place at school
●Why do you like it
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅途。来到美丽的新校园，请你结合要点提示 (key tips)，以 “My Wonderful School Life” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的新校园生活及感受。
Key Tips●Beautiful school ●Teachers and students ●Favorite subject/sport ●School activities
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
2. 词数80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
My Wonderful School Life
Hello, everybody! I study at No. 1 Middle School now.
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10．假设你是阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）七年级一班学生李华的好朋友，下周学校将迎接来自英国的留学生并举行联谊活动，请根据下面的要点提示写一篇英语短文来介绍李华及他的学校生活。
要点提示：
1. Something about him（school, class, grade, subject...）；
2. Something about his school（buildings, teachers, classmates, activities）；
3. His feeling。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 不能出现真实姓名；
3. 70—80词。
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11．假如你是阳光中学七年级的学生李明，下周你将负责接待来自英国的交换生 Mike，请认真阅读他给你的电子邮件并用英语回复。
Dear Li Ming.
How is everything going I will go to your school as an exchange student next week. I want to know something about you and your school. What is your school like What does your school have What do you often do after school Do you have a healthy lifestyle and why Can you tell me something about your diet What is your dream Look forward to your email.
All the best,
Mike
注意：
1.所写内容必须包括表中所有信息，并作适当发挥；
2.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Ming
12．假如你是Alice，你的好朋友Lucy想了解你新学校三联学校（Sanlian School）的情况。请你根据下面的信息，给Lucy发一封电子邮件，告诉她有关你学校的情况。
学校情况 有一个图书馆，两个教学楼，一个体育馆，一个餐厅 (享受中国美食)；
教室前面有一个操场 (playground)；教室后面有一个学生中心；
大约有九十名教师，对我们很好 (be friendly to对……友好)；
周一到周五上学，每天七节课……
我的喜好 最喜欢的学科是音乐和历史……
我的感受 ……
要求：
1. 必须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右，文章开头、结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m a student of Sanlian School now. My school is very big and beautiful. Let me introduce it to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Alice
13．假如你是李辉，请根据下面提示写一封信，向你的美国朋友 Wendy介绍你自己和你的学校。
提示：1.介绍你自己：13岁，来自广安，喜欢蓝色，最喜欢的运动是打篮球……
2. 介绍学校：学校有一个操场，一个食堂和有很多教室。最喜欢的是操场，可以在操场跑步或踢足球。学校不大但很美。
要求： 1. 包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for your letter. Now let me tell you something about myself and my school.
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All in all, I love my school. What about yours
Yours,
Li Hui
14．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Simon听说你到了新的学校，他想了解你的新学校和你的新朋友，请你根据下面的表格信息写一封电子邮件回复Simon。
学校情况 学校名称 No. 1 Middle School
学校建筑 a library, 40 classrooms and 2 computer rooms
我的教室 33 desks, 33 chairs and a computer
新朋友 姓名 Wang Wei
外貌 13岁，戴眼镜，短发
爱好 热爱音乐，是校乐队的成员
要求：
1. 电子邮件应包含以上表格信息，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，电子邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Simon,
I’m happy that you want to know about my school and my new friend. Now let me tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Simon听说你到了新的学校，他想了解你的新学校和你的新朋友，请你根据下面的表格信息写一封电子邮件回复Simon。
学校情况 学校名称 No. 1 Middle School
学校建筑 a library, 40 classrooms and 2 computer rooms
我的教室 33 desks, 33 chairs and a computer
新朋友 姓名 Wang Wei
外貌 13岁，戴眼镜，短发
爱好 热爱音乐，是校乐队的成员
要求：
1.电子邮件应包含以上表格信息，可适当发挥；
2.70词左右；电子邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Simon,
I’m happy that you want to know about my school and my new friend. Now let me tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．假如你是李辉，请根据下面提示写一封信，向你的英国朋友Wendy介绍你的新学校。(请根据提示写成60-80字的短文，必须包含所给的信息，可以适当发挥。开头已给，不计入字数。)
提示：
1. How many buildings are there in your school
2. Which building is your favourite Why
3. What do you do after school
4. What do you think of (认为) your new school life
Dear Wendy,
How is everything going Now I am a new student in junior high. This is our new school.
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Yours,
Li Hui
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Fred,
Thank you for your email! There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. My room is not too big but cozy. It has a blue desk on the left and a bookshelf next to it. I also love rabbits! They are cute and gentle.
Yes, I like my school very much. My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. I often read there after class.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干提示，回答Fred的问题，介绍自己的家庭情况、房间布置、喜欢的动物和学校情况，注意内容齐全，保证语句通顺，无单词和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭信息以及房间的摆设以及喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍自己的学校情况和最喜欢的学校设施；
第三步，表达对成为笔友的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① next to 紧挨着
② look forward to sth./doing sth. 期待某事/做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. (there be句型)
②My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. (because引导原因状语从句)
2．范文：
A school is a place to start our dreams.
My school is large and beautiful. It has many classrooms, a library, a playground, and a garden. The place I like best is the library. It is quiet, and there are many interesting books to read. I enjoy spending time there, especially when I need some peace.
As for my classmates and teachers, I think they are friendly and helpful. My classmates are always ready to help me, and my teachers are kind and patient. They make me feel comfortable and encourage me to do my best.
I’m happy to be a part of this school!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息“内容提示”的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍学校的整体环境和设施；
第二步，说明自己喜欢的校园一角，并给出理由；
第三步，描述同学和老师的特点，表达对他们的积极看法。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing喜欢做某事
②as for至于
③be a part of成为……的一部分
[高分句型]
①My classmates are always ready to help me, and my teachers are kind and patient. (并列句)
②I think they are friendly and helpful. (宾语从句)
3．例文
My school is as beautiful as a park. There are six buildings in our school. The playground is my favorite place because I can do exercise and play games with my friends there. I really enjoy playing soccer with my classmates on the soccer field. I also like running on the playground and it makes me strong. I love my school because I can learn and make friends there.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作对象——介绍自己的学校；
第二步，具体介绍自己的学校建筑和活动。
[亮点词汇]
①as beautiful as和……一样美丽；
②do exercise做锻炼；
③make friends交朋友。
[高分句型]
①There are six buildings in our school. (there be句型)
②The playground is my favorite place because I can do exercise and play games with my friends there. (原因状语从句)
4．例文：
My Middle School
Let me talk about my middle school. My school is wonderful. There are many buildings like the classroom building and the sports field. We have different subjects such as Maths and English. I like the sports field best because I love doing sports. The classroom building is also great, which provides a good environment for our study.
I love my middle school.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了作者的中学生活；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：介绍学校的建筑、你喜欢的学科，表达对学校的热爱。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明要谈论自己的中学；
第二步，介绍学校的建筑，你喜欢的学科，说明自己最喜欢运动场的原因等；
第三步，结尾表达对中学的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful 极好的；精彩的
②such as 例如
③provide 提供
[高分句型]
①I like the sports field best because I love doing sports. (because引导原因状语从句)
②The classroom building is also great, which provides a good environment for our study. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
5．例文
My school life
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade Seven. My school is big and beautiful. There are some buildings and a playground. My classroom is on the first floor and it’s clean and bright. After school, I usually run or play football in the playground. Football is my favourite sport and I join the football club. I like new friends there and it’s happy to train with them. I love my school and I enjoy my school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时” ；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。介绍自己的基本信息，引出下文。(开头已给出)
第二步，具体阐述。根据内容提示，介绍校园环境、课外活动等。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对学校和初中生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① after school 放学后
② play football 踢足球
③ train 训练
[高分句型]
① There are some buildings and a playground. (there be句型)
② Football is my favourite sport and I join the football club. (and并列结构)
6．例文
Dear Daniel.
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you about my life.
My school is beautiful. There is a bright library, a big dining hall and 4 classroom buildings. We have many interesting activities at school. For example, we have a sports meeting in autumn.
I have a healthy diet. I like beef and vegetables. I seldom eat sweet snacks, because they are bad for my teeth. I often do sports. I play volleyball once a week.
My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. We usually have a big dinner with relatives and friends. It’s great fun!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍美丽校园及学校活动；
第二步，介绍健康饮食和运动；
第三步，介绍最爱的中国节日及庆祝方式。
[亮点词汇]
①many interesting activities许多有趣的活动
②a healthy diet一个健康的饮食
③relatives and friends亲朋好友
[高分句型]
I seldom eat sweet snacks, because they are bad for my teeth. (原因状语从句)
7．例文
Dear Flora,
Thanks for your email. I’d like to tell you something about my school and my school life. I hope you’re having a great day! I’d like to share my school with you. It’s a large and beautiful school. My favorite place is the school library because I can read interesting books there.
I have six or seven classes every day. I have music classes on Wednesday and I enjoy playing the guitar. During the break time, I can have a good rest and I can also play soccer with my classmates. I really love my school. And I enjoy my school life because it’s exciting and fun.
Yours,
Peter
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是介绍自己的学校以及学校生活；
第二步，具体介绍自己的学校以及学校生活；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
②play the guitar弹吉他
③have a good rest好好休息
[高分句型]
①My favorite place is the school library because I can read interesting books there. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②During the break time, I can have a good rest and I can also play soccer with my classmates. (含有and的并列句)
8．范文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
I’m writing to share my favourite place at school with you. It is the library. The library is a quiet and peaceful place. Different kinds of books are on the shelves, which bring me into a wonderful world. Whenever I face difficulties in study, I can always find useful information to help me out. Also, I often meet friends there. We share our thoughts about the books we’ve read. I’m looking forward to hearing from you about your favourite place.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文要点已给出，主要介绍最喜欢的学校的哪个地方，以及为什么喜欢这个地方。注意叙述的自然流畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，问候语；
第二步，详细介绍自己最喜欢学校的图书馆，以及喜欢图书馆的原因；
第三步，结束语，表达自己的意愿。
［亮点词汇］
①kinds of种类
②help me out帮助我
［高分句型］
Different kinds of books are on the shelves, which bring me into a wonderful world.（定语从句）
9．例文：
My Wonderful School Life
Hello, everybody! I study at No. 1 Middle School now. My school life is wonderful. My school looks beautiful. There are three classroom buildings and every classroom is clean and big. My class is on the top floor. There’s a smart whiteboard next to the blackboard. My classmates are helpful and they often help me solve problems. We often play together after school. My teachers are kind and friendly, and they are all nice to me. I am very happy at school. I love my school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏题目中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明我在学校的生活很快乐；
第二步，详细介绍自己的校园生活；
第三步，书写结语，表达对校园生活的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
①look beautiful看起来很漂亮
②on the top floor在顶楼
③next to紧挨着
[高分句型]
①There are three classroom buildings and every classroom is clean and big. (and连接并列句)
10．例文
Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. I study at Sunshine Middle School. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I study maths, music, history, English, Chinese, biology and IT. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me. Music is my favourite subject. I like singing because singing can make me happy. We can learn a lot of new songs in class. I want to be a singer in the future.
There are two classroom buildings, a library and a dining hall in our school. The teachers are all good with us. My classmates are friendly, and I have many friends here. We often play volleyball in the gym.
I love my school and always have fun here.
I hope you can have a good time in our school.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏表格中信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息以及喜欢的学习科目和喜欢做的事情；
第二步，从学校建筑、老师、同学以及活动几个方面介绍学校的基本情况；
第三步，介绍自己的感受，希望大家能在学校过得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①in the future今后，将来
②be good with善于和……相处
③have fun= have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I like singing because singing can make me happy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②There are two classroom buildings, a library and a dining hall in our school.（there be句型）
11．例文
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school. Let me introduce my school to you in detail. There are about three thousand students in my school. There are six buildings: a classroom building, an office building, a science building, a library, a dining hall and a sports hall. We often read our favourite books in the library. We can play basketball, badminton and table tennis in the sports hall. After school, we often join different clubs. I have a lot of subjects at school. I believe in a healthy lifestyle, so I eat lots of fruit and vegetables, get enough sleep, and avoid junk food. My dream is to become a teacher and help others learn.
I’m looking forward to showing you around and sharing more about our school and culture.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应结合Mike的电子邮件梳理出写作要点，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向Mike的即将到来表示欢迎；
第二步，介绍学校信息、课后活动、健康的生活方式、日常饮食以及梦想；
第三步，对Mike的到来表示期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in detail 详细来说
②a healthy lifestyle 一个健康的生活方式
③help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
④look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①Let me introduce my school to you in detail. (祈使句)
②There are about three thousand students in my school. (There be句型)
12．例文
Dear Lucy,
I’m a student of Sanlian School now. My school is very big and beautiful. Let me introduce it to you.
There is a library, two teaching buildings, a gym, and a canteen where we enjoy delicious Chinese food. In front of the classrooms, there is a big playground. And behind them, there is a student center. We have about ninety teachers who are very friendly to us. We go to school from Monday to Friday and have seven classes every day.
My favorite subjects are music and history. They are both interesting and fun.
I feel very happy at my new school. I make many new friends and learn a lot.
Yours,
Alice
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于描述学校现状和个人感受；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括学校的基本情况、教室布局、师资力量、课程安排、个人喜好及感受等。考生需确保覆盖所有要点，并适当添加细节，使描述生动具体。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及自己现在是三联学校的学生，并描述学校大而美丽，引出对学校的详细介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述学校设施；描述教室周边环境；介绍课程安排；表达个人喜好；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达对学校的喜爱之情，或者欢迎Lucy来参观自己的学校。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy delicious Chinese food享受美味的中国食物
②in front of在……前面
③behind在……后面
④learn a lot学到很多
[高分句型]
①There is a library, two teaching buildings, a gym, and a canteen where we enjoy delicious Chinese food.（where引导的定语从句，修饰先行词a canteen）
②We have about ninety teachers who are very friendly to us.（who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词teachers）
13．例文
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for your letter. Now let me tell you something about myself and my school.
I’m thirteen years old and I’m from Guangan. My favourite colour is blue and my favourite sports are playing basketball and swimming. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What’s your favourite sport
I am a new student in junior high. Let me introduce something about my new school. There is a playground, a dining hall and many classrooms in my school. My favourite place is the playground, because I can run or play football in it. My school isn’t big, but it’s very beautiful.
All in all, I love my school. What about you
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。感谢对方来信，并表示要给对方介绍自己和学校。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己和学校，注意要包含表格中所给出的所有信息。
第三步，书写结语。表达对学校的热爱，并询问对方的学校的信息。
【亮点词汇】
①play basketball打篮球
②after school放学后
③all in all总而言之
【高分句型】
There is a playground, a dining hall and many classrooms in my school. （there be句型）
14．例文
Dear Simon,
I’m happy that you want to know about my school and my new friend. Now let me tell you something about it.
I’m in No. 1 Middle School. Our school has a library, 40 classrooms and 2 computer rooms. In my classroom, you can see 33 desks, 33 chairs and a computer. The computer is on the teacher’s desk.
I have a good friend at school. His name is Wang Wei and he is 13. He has short black hair with glasses. He loves music and he is in the school band now. He is kind and handsome. We always play basketball together after school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的学校和新朋友，可适当增添细节，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍自己学校的情况；
第三步，介绍自己的新朋友的一些信息。
[亮点词汇]
①with glasses戴眼镜
②play basketball打篮球
③after school放学后
[高分句型]
He loves music and he is in the school band now. (and连接的并列句)
15．例文
Dear Simon,
I’m happy that you want to know about my school and my new friend. Now let me tell you something about it.
I’m in No. 1 Middle School. Our school has a library, 40 classrooms and 2 computer rooms. In my classroom, there are 33 desks, 33 chairs and a computer.
I have a good friend at school. His name is Wang Wei and he is 13. He has short black hair with glasses. He loves music and he is in the school band. He is kind. We always play basketball together after school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学校的情况和好朋友的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①good friend好朋友
②play basketball打篮球
③after school放学后
[高分句型]
①In my classroom, there are 33 desks, 33 chairs and a computer.（there be句型）
16．例文
Dear Wendy,
How is everything going Now I am a new student. This is our new school. It has four main buildings: a classroom building, a library, a gym, and a dining hall. My favourite building is the library because it has many interesting books and it is a quiet place to study. After school, I usually play basketball with my friends and go to the library to read books. I think my new school life is exciting and enjoyable. I love my new school very much.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的学校；
第二步，介绍学校的建筑，并描述自己喜欢的建筑以及原因；
第三步，介绍课后的活动；
第四步，表达对新学校生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①a classroom building教学楼
②a dining hall餐厅
③after school放学后
④play basketball打篮球
[高分句型]
①My favourite building is the library because it has many interesting books and it is a quiet place to study.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I think my new school life is exciting and enjoyable.（省略that的宾语从句）
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