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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（2024）Unit 1 Friendship
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Fred给你发来一封电子邮件，请你阅读后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to be your new penfriend. I want to know more about you. How many people are there in your family What’s your room like I like rabbits best. What are your favourite animals I study at a nice school. Do you like your school What’s your favourite place at school Why Can you tell me
Yours,
Fred
1.邮件应回答所有问题，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名
3.词数80左右。邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred，
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．良好的生活习惯对于青少年的健康成长至关重要。某英语杂志社以“My Healthy Life”为题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
My Healthy Life Eating habits three meals a day; lots of vegetables and fruit; drink milk every day
Sports play basketball on school days; play ping-pong at weekends
... ...
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于50词（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
My Healthy Life
Hello, everyone! I’m going to tell you my life habits.____________________________
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I think these habits are really good for my health.
3．时光匆匆，仿佛还是昨日刚踏入初中校园的我们已完成了第一学期的学业。学期末，阳光中学组织了“最美新生”评选活动。七（1）班的李娟想要参与评选，请你以李娟的身份完成一篇演讲稿。
外貌 又高又苗条，黑色的长发，戴眼镜；
喜好 擅长……
最喜爱的学科 最喜欢生物，因为可以更多地了解大自然；
健康的生活方式 认为保持健康很重要；经常…… (自由发挥1点)
最喜欢的中国节日及原因 …… (自由发挥1 点)
计划 准备用自己的零花钱…… (自由发挥1点)
要求：
1.包含所有要点；
2.注意用第一人称表达；不得出现真实信息；
3.语法正确，书写认真，词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Good afternoon, teachers and friends! Glad to be here to take part in this activity. Let me tell you something about myself.
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Thanks for listening!
4．假如你是李华，一个学期的初中生活马上就要结束了！你遇见了不少新朋友吧？你的英语也进步了不少吧？请你根据以下表格信息，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下自己！
Name Li Hua
Age 12
Birthday June 1st
Favorite sports Basketball and ping pong
Healthy eating habits (健康的饮食习惯) Fruit and vegetables
Favorite day Friday
Feelings of this term Busy but happy
要求：
1. 包含以上全部要点，并适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数为80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’m a student in Class 1, Grade 7.
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5．假如你是李华，现正在某中学七年级就读。本学期 (semester) 即将结束，请你向你的笔友 Peter Brown写一封电子邮件，介绍自己的初中生活。可以从你的新学校，你最喜欢的学科及老师，你最喜欢的运动以及你参加的学校俱乐部等方面来介绍。
要求:
1. 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确；
3. 80词左右。
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6．音乐无界，爱无限，当摇滚遇上二胡，一场意外的音乐盛宴就要开始了，假如你喜欢摇滚乐，而你的爷爷喜欢二胡，那么两种音乐会碰撞出什么独特的魅力呢？请以“There is so much fun in music.”为主题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己和爷爷的爱好。内容包括：
1．我和爷爷各自的爱好，有一天脑海中灵光一闪：“何不将彼此的音乐融合在一起呢；我可以为我们创作一首歌”；
2．我们学校每年秋天都会举办一届艺术节；
3．在艺术节上每个人都随着我们的音乐舞动起来，一起享受我们的爱好，这感觉太棒了！
注意：
1．词数为70左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Grandpa and I have different hobbies. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假如你是李华，学校即将举办“用英语讲好校园故事”的活动，需要选出一名“形象大使”。请以“Wonderful Me”为题，根据以下内容提示，写一篇竞选稿，从个人信息、校园环境和学校生活等方面推介自己。
内容要点如下：
How old are you
What’s your school like
How do you spend your school day
Something more about yourself.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Wonderful Me
Dear teachers and students,
I feel glad to be here today and I want to be the “School Spokesman”.
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8．近日，你班组织了一场关于享受课余时间的分享活动。请你结合表格内容提示，用英语写一篇发言稿进行分享。词数70词左右。
How I Enjoy My Time after Class
My Situation (现状) ◆be busy, many lessons ◆spend time, out of class
My Activities & Reasons (理由) ◆do sports, be good for ◆do some reading, love reading ◆do chores, be a good way to learn things
My Feeling (感想) …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Hi, boys and girls,
I’m so happy to tell you how I enjoy my time after class.
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That’s all. Thanks.
9．为落实“双减”政策，你校开展了丰富多彩的课后活动。假设你是李明，参加了校英语俱乐部。俱乐部本周的活动主题是“This is me!”。请你根据以下要点，用英文介绍你的情况。
要点：
1. Introduce yourself: your age and your telephone number.
2. What are your favourite sport and food
3. What’s your favourite subject And why
4. Share your plans for the future and your goals. (分享你未来的计划和目标)
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
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10．同学们，进入初中以来，你们是不是结交了许多好朋友呢？假如下面表格里是你好朋友的个人信息，请以“My Best Friend” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友。
姓名 Ann 年龄 12 生日 October 21st 班级 七(5)班
家庭 爸爸，妈妈和妹妹
运动 爱好网球，加入了体育俱乐部，不喜欢篮球
学科 最喜欢数学
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
My Best Friend
I’m very happy to make some new friends this term.
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11． 假如你是张华，近期，你校举行 “身边的榜样 (The Role Model Around Us)” 评选活动，你想推荐陈丹同学。根据提示，请你给负责人的李老师写一封英语推荐信，内容需包含表格中所有要点。
基本情况 13岁 ，高个子 ，喜欢读书
推荐理由 关爱长辈： 帮忙做家务 （至少自拟一例）
乐于助人：捐钱给有需要的人 （至少自拟一例）
注意:
1、70 词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数;
2、可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺:
3、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Li,
I want to recommend Chen Dan for “The Role Model Around Us”.
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I think Chen Dan is a great role model. I hope he can get the award (奖).
Yours,
Zhang Hua
12．学校英语风采栏目组正在策划一期以“介绍自己”为主题的征文活动，请根据下面的表格提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文介绍自己，并向栏目组投稿。
要求：
（1）必须包含以下所给要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不能出现真实人名和校名；
Name 付兴 Birthday 9月3日
Age 13 Class 七年级五班
Family 四口之家，爸爸，妈妈，妹妹和我
Favourite subject My favorite subject is . Because Future (未来的) job I want to be
Favourite club I want to join (参加) . Because
This Is Me
I hear that the English program is asking the students to talk about themselves. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.
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13．你的学校与英国太阳中学是合作学校，每年两所中学都会进行学生联谊。你想通过信件方式向联谊伙伴Tom进行简单自我介绍；且春节将至，向他介绍春节传统及你的春节计划。
文中必须包含以下内容：
1. Introduce yourself and hobbies.
2. Introduce the traditional customs of the Spring Festival.
3. Tell him your plans to celebrate the Spring Festival.
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 不少于80词。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m really happy to become your friend. I’d like to introduce myself to you.
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I’m expecting your coming. I’m sure you will have a good time in China and we will become best friends.
Love,
Li Lin
14．懂得欣赏自己很重要！你校英语俱乐部将要举办题为“I like myself”的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，结合自己的实际情况，用英语写一篇短文参赛，介绍自己的闪光点。
◇What good personalities (性格) do you have ◇What good life habits or study habits do you have ◇How do these good qualities (品质) help you live happily ◇...
注意：1.表达中必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2.词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
I like myself
Everyone is special. It’s important to love ourselves. Let me tell you what I like about myself.
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15．假如你是李娟，热爱音乐，你新交的英国笔友Lucy与你志趣相投，你们有很多共同语言。请你根据以下提示写一封邮件，向她介绍你在音乐方面的相关情况。
内容提示：
Hobby Music
Ability Guitar, piano, drums…
Favourite musical instrument Piano
Favourite piano music To Alice
Favourite pianist (钢琴家) Langlang
Level (水平) In the school band
Daily practice (日常训练) An hour every day
Wish Be a great pianist
要求：1、短文内容必须包含提示中所有要点，可适当发挥。
2、词数60-80，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
参考词汇：tired 累的，疲劳的
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. I’m glad to know that we have the same hobby.
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What instrument do you often play I hope we can play To Alice together.
Yours,
Li Juan
16．寒假来临之际，你们学校“优秀的他（她）”上榜人物活动正在火热进行中。你想推荐你的好朋友李辉，请你根据下面表格的提示信息，把他介绍给大家。
Name Age Birthday Personality （性格） Likes
运动 科目 星期
李辉 13 6月23 日 kind, helpful 篮球（令人放松） 历史（有趣，有用） 星期五（星期五下午有历史课）
要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文不少于60词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I have a right person for this activity.
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17．时间过得真快，不知不觉一学期快要结束了，你已成为一名中学生好几个月了，在这几个月的学习中，你的英语水平一定有很大的提高，假如你是Li Hua，根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己，让更多的同学来了解你。
（1）现在12岁，生日5月9日；
（2）喜欢运动，经常放学后和同学打乒乓球；
（3）有好的饮食习惯，每天早晨都喝牛奶，非常喜欢吃蔬菜和水果；
（4）最喜欢学科英语，认为很有趣.
要求：书写整洁、规范、清晰，可以适当发挥；开头已给出，不计字数，词数60左右。
提示词：eating habits饮食习惯；drink milk喝牛奶；every morning每天早晨；favorite subject最喜欢的学科
注意：不要出现真实的姓名和学校.
Hello, boys and girls! My name is Li Hua
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18．同学们已经成为中学生一学期了，相信大家的初中生活一定丰富多彩！假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一封邮件给你在澳大利亚的笔友Tony介绍你的校园生活。
内容提示：
1. 个人简介：年龄、生日、班级；
2. 校园生活：8点上课，下午5点30放学；喜爱的学科；参加的社团；
3. 学校设施：学校很漂亮，有两栋教学楼，大操场……
要求：1. 内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
2. 不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
3. 词数40—60。作文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m a middle student now, Let me tell you something about my middle school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假如你是李华，你最近认识的澳大利亚的笔友Linda想了解你的情况，请根据要点提示，给她写封邮件，告诉她你的主要情况。
要点如下：
1.兴趣：阅读和绘画；
2运动：篮球和游泳；
3.学业：数学和地理；
4.家庭：四口人。
要求：
1.短文必须包含以上所有信息，并补充一定内容，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda,
I’m very happy to tell you all about my life.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
20．假如你是李飞，你很擅长运动，你想竞选你们班的体育委员 (the PE monitor)。请根据下面表格的内容，写一篇竞选稿，为自己“拉票”。
Name Li Fei Age 13 City Beijing Looks tall and strong
Character (性格) friendly and helpful
Ability (能力) be good at…/ do… well.
Your exercise tips ① right shoes and clothes ② some water ③ warm up ④ ……
要求：
1.竞选稿包括所提供的所有内容，并适当发挥。
2.词数：80词左右。竞选稿的开头和结尾段已给出，不计入总词数。
3.内容条理清楚，意义连贯。标点符号正确。
Hello, everyone! I would like to be your PE monitor.
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Choose me and I will be a good PE monitor, thanks!
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Fred,
Thank you for your email! There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. My room is not too big but cozy. It has a blue desk on the left and a bookshelf next to it. I also love rabbits! They are cute and gentle.
Yes, I like my school very much. My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. I often read there after class.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干提示，回答Fred的问题，介绍自己的家庭情况、房间布置、喜欢的动物和学校情况，注意内容齐全，保证语句通顺，无单词和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭信息以及房间的摆设以及喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍自己的学校情况和最喜欢的学校设施；
第三步，表达对成为笔友的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① next to 紧挨着
② look forward to sth./doing sth. 期待某事/做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. (there be句型)
②My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. (because引导原因状语从句)
2．范文：
My Healthy Life
Hello, everyone! I’m going to tell you my life habits. First, I have healthy eating habits. I have three meals a day at the right time. I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit and never eat junk food. I also drink much water and milk every day. Second, I love doing sports. I play basketball with my classmates on school days and play ping-pong with my family at weekends. Playing sports makes me strong. Third, I sleep well. I always go to bed at 9:00 p. m. and never stay up late.
I think these habits are really good for my health.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时态为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，点明分享健康生活习惯；
第二步：具体阐述健康习惯，包括饮食（规律三餐、健康食材）、运动（篮球、乒乓球锻炼）、睡眠（早睡不熬夜）等方面；
第三步：书写结语，强调习惯对健康的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habits饮食习惯
②lots of许多、大量
③at weekends在周末
④stay up late熬夜
⑤be good for对……有益处
[高分句型]
①Playing sports makes me strong.（动名词短语作主语）
②I think these habits are really good for my health.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Good afternoon, teachers and friends! Glad to be here to take part in this activity. Let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Li Juan. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I’m very tall and slim with long black hair and I wear glasses.
I am good at singing and drawing. My favourite subject is Biology because I want to know more about the nature. I believe it is important to keep healthy, so I eat fruits and vegetables regularly. Meanwhile, I usually walk to school everyday. I like the Spring Festival best because our family can get together to have a big party.
I plan to use my pocket money to buy basketballs for children in poor areas. Of course, I also want to join the Helping Hands Club to help more people next year.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的要求，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的姓名，外貌等基本信息。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。介绍喜好及最喜爱的学科和原因。
第三步：介绍自己健康的生活方式及最喜欢的中国节日及原因。最后介绍自己的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②regularly有规律地
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①I believe it is important to keep healthy, so I eat fruits and vegetables regularly. (宾语从句）
②I’m very tall and slim with long black hair and I wear glasses. (and表并列)
4．例文
Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’m a student in Class, Grade7. I am 12 years old. My birthday is on June 1st. I really enjoy playing basketball and ping pong. They make me feel happy. I also have healthy eating habits. I like eating fruit and vegetables. They are good for my body.
My favorite day is Friday because I can have my favourite subjects—English and math. This term, I also meet a lot of new friends and teachers. They are all nice to me. I like my busy but happy school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己的基本信息，如：姓名、年级、年龄以及生日；
第二步、介绍自己最喜欢的运动及原因和自己健康的饮食习惯；
第三步、介绍最喜欢的一天及原因以及对这学期的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb. do sth.让某人做某事
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
③be good for有益于
④a lot of很多
[高分句型]
My favorite day is Friday because I can have my favourite subjects—English and math.(because引导原因状语从句)
5．例文
Dear Peter Brown,
I’m Li Hua and I’m currently in the seventh grade at a new middle school. This semester is almost over, and I wanted to share a bit about my life here.
My new school is big and beautiful, with lots of green trees and wide playgrounds. My favorite subject is Science because it’s so interesting and I learn a lot about the world around us. My Science teacher, Mr. Wang, is really nice and explains things very clearly. I also love playing basketball. It’s fun and keeps me healthy. After school, I join the Basketball Club and practice with my friends.
I’ve made many new friends here. How about you What’s your school life like
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：从新学校，最喜欢的学科及老师，最喜欢的运动以及参加的学校俱乐部等方面来介绍自己的初中生活，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达很高兴介绍我的学校生活；
第二步，从新学校，最喜欢的学科及老师，最喜欢的运动以及参加的学校俱乐部等方面来介绍自己的初中生活；
第三步，表达自己对学校生活的感受，并询问对方的学校生活。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②love playing basketball喜欢打篮球
③practice with和……一起练习
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is Science because it’s so interesting and I learn a lot about the world around us. (because引导的原因状语从句)
6．例文
Grandpa and I have different hobbies. I enjoy listening to rock music, which has loud guitars and fast beats. Grandpa, on the other hand, loves to play the erhu, a traditional Chinese instrument that makes beautiful, soft sounds.
One day, I had a great idea. “Why don’t we mix our music together ” I said. “I can write a song for us.” Grandpa thought it was a wonderful plan.
Our school has an art festival every autumn. We decided to play our special song there. We practiced hard, trying to make the rock and erhu sounds fit together well.
When the festival came, we played our song. People started dancing and smiling. They loved it! It felt so good to see everyone enjoying our music. There is so much fun in music, bringing people together in new and exciting ways.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了自己与爷爷因音乐爱好不同而引发的创意融合故事；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，叙述过去事件时可能会用到“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点包括介绍自己和爷爷的爱好、提出音乐融合的想法、学校艺术节及艺术节上的音乐体验。考生需围绕这些要点展开，适当添加细节，展现音乐融合的独特魅力和带来的快乐。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题。通过“Grandpa and I have different hobbies.”直接引出主题，即自己和爷爷有着不同的音乐爱好；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先介绍自己和爷爷的爱好；接着描述音乐融合的想法；然后提及学校艺术节；
第三步，书写结语。通过描述艺术节上的反响来总结全文，强调音乐带来的乐趣。
[亮点词汇]
①on the other hand另一方面
②mix...together把……混合在一起
③fit together很好地配合
④bring...together使……聚集
[高分句型]
①We decided to play our special song there.（动词不定式作宾语）
②We practiced hard, trying to make the rock and erhu sounds fit together well.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
7．例文
Wonderful Me
Dear teachers and students,
I feel glad to be here today and I want to be the “School Spokesman”. I am Li Hua, a seventh grader. I am now 13 years old and my birthday is on December 24th.
My school is big and beautiful. There are two classroom buildings and a teachers’ building. The teachers are nice. The classes are fun and the students are friendly. Usually, I get up at 6:40 a.m. The classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. At 9:30 p.m., it’s time for me to go to bed.
I really enjoy my new school life. I hope everyone can make good use of time and have a good day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇竞选稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整并重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，介绍自己的学校信息及如何度过学校的一天；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②go to bed去睡觉
③make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①I am now 13 years old and my birthday is on December 24th. (and连接的并列句)
②I hope everyone can make good use of time and have a good day. (宾语从句)
8．例文：
Hi, boys and girls,
I’m so happy to tell you how I enjoy my time after class.
Like most junior high students, I’m busy with many lessons. But I still spend time doing many things out of class. After school I usually do sports because doing sports is good for our health. In the evening, I often do some reading as I love reading. Very often I help my parents do chores at weekends, for it’s a good way for me to learn things. In short, I enjoy my life after class. It’s really colorful.
That’s all. Thanks.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步：介绍自己的现状、自己从事的活动及理由；
第三步：介绍自己的感想并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy with 忙于
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③be good for 有益于
④at weekends 在周末
⑤in short 总之
[高分句型]
After school I usually do sports because doing sports is good for our health. (because引导原因状语从句)
9．例文
Hi! My name is Li Ming. I’m 12. I’m a middle school student.
I like soccer best. After class, I like playing it with my classmates. I don’t want to be fat, so I like eating fruit and vegetables. History is my favourite subject, because it is really interesting. In 2024, I have a lot of plans and goals that I want to achieve. One of my main goals is to improve my physical health. I plan to start going to a gym at least three times a week. I believe that taking care of my body is essential for overall well-being.
This is me. I want to be your friend. My phone number is 755-6833. You can call me at it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的个人情况；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年龄、爱好、未来计划和目标”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②at least至少
③take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①I don’t want to be fat, so I like eating fruit and vegetables. (so引导结果状语从句)
②I believe that taking care of my body is essential for overall well-being. (that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文
My Best Friend
I’m very happy to make some new friends this term. Ann is my best friend. She is 12 years old, and her birthday is on October 21st. She is in Class Five, Grade Seven. There are four people in her family: her father, mother, and younger sister. Ann loves playing tennis and has joined the sports club, but she doesn’t like basketball. Her favorite subject is math. I like Ann because she is always kind and helpful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍最好的朋友是Ann；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，具体介绍Ann的个人基本信息及家庭成员；
第三步，进一步描写Ann的运动爱好及喜欢的学科，并附简短评价。
[亮点词汇]
①there be有
②love doing喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in her family: her father, mother, and younger sister. (there be句型)
②I like Ann because she is always kind and helpful. (because引导原因状语从句)
11．例文:
Dear Mr. Li,
I want to recommend Chen Dan for “The Role Model Around Us”.
Chen Dan is 13 years old. He looks very tall. He has many hobbies. Among all of them, reading is his favourite. Chen Dan has many good qualities. First, he cares about the elders. For example, he often does housework for his parents. He also shows great respect and love for his grandparents. Second, he is a helpful boy. He saves a lot of money to help people in need. Also, he is always ready to help his classmates with their problems after school. Everybody around likes him very much.
I think Chen Dan is a great role model. I hope he can get the award (奖).
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“能力、爱好、性格等”几个方面重点介绍你同学陈丹的具体情况,
第三步，书写结语，表达“我认为陈丹真的是身边好榜样”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①care about 关心
②a lot of 许多
③in need 在困境中:
④be ready to do sth. 准备好做某事
[高分句型]
I hope he can get the award. (宾语从句)
12．例文
This Is Me
I hear that the English program is asking the students to talk about themselves. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Fu Xing. I’m 13 years old. My birthday is on September 3rd. I’m in Class 5, Grade 7. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. I love my family.
I have many subjects at school. My favourite subject is English because I think it’s really fun and I’m good at it. I want to be an English teacher in the future. At school, I want to join the book club. Books can open my mind and make me think.
This is me. I learn a lot and feel happy every day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格提示进行写作，注意不要遗漏，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的基本信息，包括姓名、年龄、生日、班级、家庭成员等；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目、俱乐部、期望的工作及原因；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②want to do sth.想要做某事
③make sb. do sth.让某人做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family. (there be句型)
②I think it’s really fiun and I’m good at it. (省略that的宾语从句)
13．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m really happy to become your friend. I’d like to introduce myself to you.
I’m 13 years old. I like sports, such as basketball. I’m friendly and always ready to help others. I like making friends. I know you are interested in the Spring Festival, I’d like to tell you something about it.
Spring Festival is the most important festival for us. We usually have many activities to celebrate it. For example, we usually eat dumplings and set off fireworks. We also have a big family dinner because it’s a time for family reunion.
The Spring Festival is coming. Here are my plans. I will learn lion dance with my grandfather. I will help my father put up Spring Festival couplets in the morning. And I will watch the Spring Festival Gala with my family in the evening.
I’m expecting your coming. I’m sure you will have a good time in China and we will become best friends.
Love,
Li Lin
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，进行简单自我介绍，包括：年龄以及爱好等；
第三步，介绍春节的传统习俗以及自己庆祝春节的计划并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be ready to do sth.准备做某事
③set off fireworks放烟花
④put up张贴
⑤have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
We also have a big family dinner because it’s a time for family reunion. (because引导原因状语从句)
14．例文
I like myself
Everyone is special. It’s important to love ourselves. Let me tell you what I like about myself.
Firstly, I like my life habits. I never stay up, so I always have enough energy for my study. Besides, I can manage my pocket money well by making a budget every month. And on weekends, I often go to our city library to do some reading because reading makes a full man.
Secondly, it’s my personality that makes me live happily. I am outgoing and I can make friends easily. What’s more, I am always ready to help others. Helping others is helping myself. Maybe someday I need help from someone.
However, no one is perfect. I also have some weaknesses, but I love myself.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要应用第一人称来写。写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出介绍自己的闪光点这个话题；
第二步，分点介绍自己性格中的闪光点，以及这些闪光点如何让自己好好生活；
第三步，总结抒情。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up熬夜
②make a budget做预算
③do some reading 去阅读
[高分句型]
①And on weekends, I often go to our city library to do some reading because reading makes a full man.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Secondly, it’s my personality that makes me live happily.（主语从句）
15．例文
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your email. I’m glad to know that we have the same hobby.
My favourite subject at school is music, and I can play many musical instruments. For example, I can play the guitar really well. Also, I can play the drums. But my favourite musical instrument is the piano and my favorite piano music is To Alice. I’m good at playing the piano, too. So I’m a member of our school band. I play the piano for one hour every day. Do you know my favourite pianist It’s Langlang. I wish to be a great pianist like him.
What instrument do you often play I hope we can play To Alice together.
Yours,
Li Juan
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步、介绍自己的爱好、能力、最喜欢的乐器和钢琴曲、水平、日常训练、最喜欢的钢琴家以及愿望等；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play musical instruments演奏乐器
②play the guitar弹吉他
③play the drums打鼓
④be good at擅长
⑤play the piano弹钢琴
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to know that we have the same hobby.(that引导宾语从句)
16．例文
Hello, everyone. I have a right person for this activity. His name is Li Hui. He is thirteen years old. His birthday is June 23rd. He is kind and helpful, and everyone likes him. As for sports, he likes basketball because he thinks it’s very relaxing. His favorite subject is history. He thinks it is interesting and useful. And he loves Friday because he has a history class on Friday afternoon. What a great boy! I think he is the best choice for this activity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍李辉的基本信息和性格；
第二步，介绍李辉在运动、科目和星期上的喜好；
第三步，总体评价李辉，再次强调他是最佳人选。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于，关于
②best choice最佳选择
[高分句型]
①As for sports, he likes basketball because he thinks it’s very relaxing.（because引导的原因状语从句；宾语从句）
②What a great boy!（感叹句）
17．例文
Hello, boys and girls! My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old and my birthday is on May 9th. I enjoy sports and often play table tennis with my classmates after school. I have good eating habits. I drink milk every morning and I really enjoy eating vegetables and fruits. My favorite subject is English. I think it’s very interesting.
Let’s be good freinds!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简介自己的主要信息。
第二步，具体介绍喜欢的运动，饮食情况及喜欢的科目。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play table tennis打乒乓球
②eating habits饮食习惯
③enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①I drink milk every morning and I really enjoy eating vegetables and fruits.（and连接的并列句）
②I think it’s very interesting.（宾语从句）
18．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m a middle student now, Let me tell you something about my middle school life.
I am 13 years old and my birthday is on June 5th. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. Classes start at 8 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m. every day. We learn many interesting subjects and my favorite is science. There are many different clubs at school and I joined the basketball club. Our school is beautiful with a garden, two teaching buildings, and a big playground.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，进行自我介绍；
第二步、介绍自己的校园生活；
第三步、介绍自己的学校设施。
[亮点词汇]
①a middle student一名中学生
②join the basketball club加入篮球俱乐部
③teaching building教学楼
[高分句型]
There are many different clubs at school and I joined the basketball club(there be句型；并列句)
19．例文
Dear Linda,
I’m very happy to tell you all about my life.
I like reading and drawing very much. They are really interesting and great to me. When I have time, I go to the library or the park to draw. I also like basketball and swimming very much. They can make me healthy. I usually play basketball after school and swim on weekends. At school, I like maths and geography best. I think they are very useful, because I want to be a scientist in the future. In my family, there are four people, my parents, my brother and me. We often help each other at home. We usually live a happy life.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己的主要情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go to the library去图书馆
②on weekends在周末
③in the future在将来
④help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
①When I have time, I go to the library or the park to draw. （When引导的时间状语从句）
②I think they are very useful, because I want to be a scientist in the future.（宾语从句及because引导的原因状语从句）
20．例文
Hello, everyone! I would like to be your PE monitor.
My name is Li Fei. I’m 13 years old and I come from Beijing. I’m tall and strong. I’m friendly and always ready to help others. If I become the PE monitor, I will do my best to help all of you.
I’m really good at sports. I do well in running, playing basketball and football. I believe I can set a good example for you.
Here are some tips for doing exercise. First, wear suitable shoes and clothes. They can make you feel comfortable and prevent you from getting hurt easily. Second, don’t forget to bring some water. It’s important to drink water when you exercise. Third, always do some warm-up exercises before doing sports. This can protect your body. These habits will help you stay healthy and active.
Choose me and I will be a good PE monitor, thanks!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示和开头结尾部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己并表达想要竞选体育委员的愿望；
第二步，说明自己的运动特长，并分享运动建议；
第三步，表达会做好体育委员的信心。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth.愿意做某事
②do one’s best尽某人最大努力
③do well in擅长……
④set a good example for sb.为某人树立一个好榜样
⑤prevent ... from...阻止……发生
[高分句型]
①If I become the PE monitor, I will do my best to help all of you. (if引导条件状语从句)
②I believe I can set a good example for you. (宾语从句)
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