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高三下试卷作文
编号：02
Topic: 科技创新活动介绍信
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 David 对学校社团活动很感兴趣。请你给他写一封信，介绍此次学校科技创意俱乐部举办的活动，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 感受和收获。
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活动过程叙述 “时间轴法”
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阶段 常用表达 示例内容
分组阶段 be divided into groups; team up with We were split into 5 groups of 4, each assigned a tech theme.
创作阶段 brainstorm; solve problems collaboratively For days, we debated designs and tested prototypes together.
展示阶段 present; demonstrate; win applause Each group showcased their project with slides and live demos.
颁奖阶段 announce the results; award prizes The top group won a 3D printer for their class.
Dear Alex,
Our school’s Tech Innovation Club held a cool activity. I’m writing to share it with you.
First, we were divided into several groups to create a tech project within a week. We argued, solved problems together, and celebrated every great idea. When it was time to share, each group introduced their creations with shining eyes and confident smiles. Everyone cheered as the judges announced the top three groups, who won prizes and gold medals.
This activity left a deep impression on me. Only then did I realize that creativity grows through challenges. If you want to know more details, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
亲爱的Alex ：
我们学校的科技创新俱乐部举办了一场很酷的活动。我写这封信是为了和你分享这个活动。
首先，我们被分成几个小组，在一周内创建一个技术项目。我们争论，一起解决问题，并庆祝每一个伟大的想法。当分享时间到来时，每个小组都带着闪亮的眼睛和自信的微笑介绍自己的创意。当评委宣布前三名小组时，所有人都欢呼雀跃，他们赢得了奖项和金牌。
这个活动给我留下了深刻的印象。直到那时我才意识到，创造力是通过挑战而成长的。如果你想了解更多细节，请随时与我联系。
祝好，
李华
语言亮点积累（科技活动主题）
高频动词短语
collaborate on tech projects（合作开发科技项目）
troubleshoot problems（解决问题）
pitch creative ideas（展示创意）
foster innovation（培养创新）
高级句型
倒装句：Only through teamwork did we overcome the technical challenges.
强调句：It was the process of debating and iterating that taught me the value of persistence.
非谓语结构：Holding our prototype in hand, we felt a sense of pride like never before.
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实战训练（高考真题改编）
你校机器人社团举办 “AI 创意大赛”，要求两人一组设计智能装置。你和搭档发明了 “智能分类垃圾桶”，通过传感器识别垃圾类型并自动开盖。决赛中你们的作品获 “最佳创新奖”，你从中体会到 “合作与创新的力量”。
要求：
按书信格式写给笔友 Tom；
包含比赛流程（分组、设计、展示）和个人收获；
使用至少 1 个强调句（如 “It was...that...”）。
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读后续写续写任务
开头句：
"When I saw the 'PASSED' message, Adria’s words suddenly made sense——every drop of sweat had been worth it."
要求：
描写颁奖现场的场景（运用听觉 + 视觉描写）；
加入一个象征坚持的道具（如磨损的运动鞋 / 记录训练的笔记本）；
以 “传承导师精神” 结尾。
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读后续写翻译练习
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成为健身教练 翻译练习
尽管成为健身教练的旅程充满了挑战和泪水，但她的话语成为了我进步progress的指引之光guiding light 。
每天早晨，我强迫自己起床，在空荡荡empty的街道上慢跑jog ，呼出的气息breath在寒冷的空气中形成白雾clouds 。
晚上，我努力翻阅堆积如山的书籍和浩瀚的知识海洋。
六个月后，我惊讶地发现自己已经忘记了压力，变得更加强壮和自信。
最终，带着一丝焦虑和兴奋，我报名参加了教练考试trainer exam 。
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情节衔接 “3 关键”
情感延续：
前文：训练艰辛 → 后文：通过考试后的感恩（如拥抱导师 Adria）
道具呼应：
前文：导师的话语 → 后文：用导师的鼓励激励自己的学员
主题深化：
个人成长 → 传递正能量（如 “Now, I pour my patience into my trainees...”）
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描写层次 “感官 + 比喻”
层次 示例内容 效果
基础描写 I jogged every morning. 平淡叙述
感官升级 My breath formed clouds in the cold air. 视觉具象化，增强画面感
比喻修辞 Mountains of books and an ocean of knowledge. 夸张比喻，突出学习量之大
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成为健身教练 Paragraph 1
Her words echoed in my mind. Though the journey to becoming a fitness trainer was full of challenges and tears, her words became the guiding light for my progress. Each morning, I forced myself out of bed to jog through empty streets, my breath forming clouds in the cold air. At night, I struggled through mountains of books and an ocean of knowledge. Six months later, I was surprised to find that I had forgotten about stress, growing stronger and more confident. Finally, with a bit of anxiety and excitement, I signed up for the trainer exam.
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成为健身教练 Paragraph 2
When a huge “YOU PASSED” popped up on the screen, I couldn’t wait to find Adria. Tears welled as I hugged her, whispering, “ I made it! ”Then, I handed a bunch of flowers to expressed my sincere gratitude. It was her encouragement that gave me courage and confidence. Without her help, I couldn’t have gotten through the tough time in my life. I could hardly believe that I fell in love of sports and even became a trainer. Now, I pour my patience and encouragement into my trainees, just as Adria did for me. I tell them: "Where there is a will, there is a way."
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