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建议信
Letter of advice
建议信谋篇布局/写作大纲
第一段
写信背景+写作的目的
1
第二段
提出合适建议+理由
2
第三段
（重提主题+表达期待）
希望建议有帮助，表达祝愿
3
首段功能句
Part.01
8. I have received your letter saying you find it difficult to learn English. The following are my personal suggestions, which I figure out are of great benefit.
1.Having known that you are faced with difficulties in new school life，I am writing to share with you my personal suggestions and considerations on this matter.
2. I'm very glad to hear that you want to study abroad and give you some suggestions on how to adapt yourself to the life quickly.
3. I have received your letter saying you find it difficult to learn English. The following are my personal suggestions, which I figure out are of great benefit.
4. You have asked me for my advice on learning English and I'll try to make some useful suggestions.
5.I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to get into shape by dieting，so I'm writing to share some advice with you.
6.Sorry to learn that you have trouble in adapting to new life in high school , I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
中间段功能句
Part.02
【主体】过渡逻辑词Natural transitions
首先：To begin with, Above all, First and foremost
其次/另外/而且：Besides, What’s more, In addition, Furthermore
最后：Last but not least, By the way
过渡句： My suggestions are as follows.
【主体】正文表示 “建议” 的句型
Part 2: Body Arrangements
句型1：It is + wise + of + sb. + to do sth…….
It would be wise of you to stay at home and avoid going
outdoors unless necessary.
句型2：It is + adj. + that + 主语从句(虚拟语气)
It is necessary/ important/essential/vital/crucial/urgent
that you (should) join a volunteer club.
句型3：My suggestion/advice/recommendation/proposal
is that + 表语从句(虚拟语气)
My advice is that you (should) exercise regularly.
句型4：It is strongly advised/suggested/recommended
that + 主语从句(虚拟语气)
It is strongly suggested that you (should) arrive on time.
句型5：If 条件状语从句(虚拟语气)
Were I you, I would respect the local cultures as well as
the customs.
句型6：only加状语从句位于句首，主句要部分倒装
Only when you study hard will you have a deep
understanding of English.
句型7：It is high time that ...sb did/should do
It is high time that we should set aside/set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.
/vital/
6.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should……
7.It should be a good idea for you to practice your spoken English for half an hour every morning.
【主体】正文拓展的表示原因的句型
句型1：Since/As/Because + 原因状语从句，+ 主句.
Since/As/Because the new product is very really practical, I recommend you to use it.
句型2：主句 + in that +原因状语从句.
It would be wise of you to… in that it is the best way to …
句型3：主句 + so that + 结果状语从句
It is strongly suggested that you (should) arrive on time so
that you could leave a good impression on others.
句型4：主句， + because of/through which + 定语从句
It is necessary that you (should) join a volunteer club，
because of/through which not only could you help others
but also make friends with them.
尾段功能句
Part.03
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.
I hope my suggestons will be beneficial/helpful/practical to you and you can overcome your stress soon.
I hope my advice will turn out beneficial. May you become more confident and less stressed in the near future.
Hopefully, my above-mentioned suggestions can be beneficial to you, and I stick to the belief that all the difficulties can be settled properly.
Hopefully, you will find these proposals practical/useful/helpful.
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
5.I sincerely hope you could take my suggestions into serious consideration and find them of great benefit.
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please contact me without any hesitation.
7.I feel that it would be benefcial if you stick to it.If you have any more problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.
你的加拿大好友Lily现在在学中文，却发现中文很难，想向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点给他写封建议信。
要点 ： 1.对他喜欢中国文化表达喜悦；
2.给出至少三个学中文的建议。
注意： 1. 文章必须包括以上所有内容，并适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右。
限时训练（15mins）
Dear Lily,
How is it going Having known that you are currently learning Chinese, I have much great pleasure in offering some suggestions.
My suggestions are as follows. First and foremost, it is necessary that you should create an immersive environment, which means that you can set the language of mobile phones, computers, and other devices to Chinese, read Chinese books or websites, and try writing diaries. What’s more, were I you, I would find a Chinese native speaker as my language partner in that he or she can help with my correct pronunciation and usage of Chinese. By the way, learning any language requires time and patience. Therefore, believe in yourself and maintain a positive learning attitude.
If you need any help, please feel free to contact me. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of great help/benefit to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Thanks for your listening.

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