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(共19张PPT)
Unit 1 Wish you were here
Extended reading
Writing imitation by using adjectives
Engagement
Sahara Desert
Africa
Morocco（摩洛哥）
An adventure in Africa
—A travel journal
An adventure in Africa
(P11)
Exploration--text type
A travel
journal
Exploration--elements（要素） of a journal
When
Where
Who
What
How
__________
________
__________
__________
Read the first travel journal and find out his travel route （路线）.
When
Where
Who
Marrakesh
（马拉喀什）
Merzouga
（梅尔祖卡）
the Sahara
their
desert camp
Exploration-- the first travel journal
the writer used adjectives to describe natural scenes he saw.
When
Where
Who
What
Exploration-- the first travel journal
How
Game 1: Find out all the adjectives that the writer used.
（Group 1: line 1-5; Group 2: line 6-10;
Group 3: line 11-15; Group 4: line 16-22.）
Line 1-5:the _______ mountain; _____ bends;
_______ sand dunes; ______ goats;
a _______ look; the ________roadside sign;
narrow
sharp
unending
noisy
long
yellow
Exploration-- the first travel journal
Line 6-10:the _______________ environment;
this _______ landscape; ______ stones;
____________ sand dunes;
“fragile natural”
unique
small
enormous
Exploration-- the first travel journal
Exploration-- the first travel journal
Line 11-15:
the sun was beating down hard and _________;
a _______ shade;
The desert appeared completely _________; which was ________ and _____________;
the ____________ sky.
bright
deep
empty
calming
threatening
cloudless
Exploration-- the first travel journal
Line 16-22:
Stars were already shining brightly in the _________
sky and it was getting _____ ...
____________ animals ...
the ___________ campfire.
I was __________________ .....
darkening
cold
warm
lucky
starving
Explanation-- the function of adj.
Deep thinking: What do you think of the function of using adjectives to describe natural scenes
e.g. the mountain -- the narrow mountain
the sky -- the cloudless sky
1. adj. can present alive and clearer pictures;
2. adj. can leave readers a deepened impression on sth.
3. adj. can ensure you a joyful writing journey, such as our continuation writing（读后续写）.
Explanation-- the function of adj.
Elaboration-- practice of using adj.
Game 2 (work in groups):
1. We stopped barefoot（赤脚） on the ____________________ beach.
2. There are many __________ flowers in the corner of the park.
3. The ___________ wind was comforting all his tiredness.
4. Kathy lost herself in the ____________ views.
soft sandy\golden\romantic\...
blooming\colorful\enchanting（迷人的）
gentle\warm\breezy（轻拂的）\...
breathtaking\picturesque（如画的）\spectacular（壮观的）
Elaboration-- application of adj.
Group work: please describe Yuelu Mountain’s natural view by using adjectives.
Tips: you can talk about the path（径；道）, trees, leaves, air, wildflowers, mountain spring（山泉）, sunlight, the view on the top...
Writing guidance:
When you start climbing, ...... After arriving at Aiwan Pavilion, ...
Halfway up, ...... Near the summit（山顶）, ...
Evaluation-- application of adj.
Group work: please describe Yuelu Mountain’s natural view by using adj.
The writing:
Accuracy（用词准确性）:
Coherence（连贯性）:
Handwriting（书写）:
Sample:
Climbing Yuelu Mountain in Changsha is an enchanting experience. As you climb along the winding path, towering trees stood by both sides. The air is refreshing, filled with the pleasant fragrance of wildflowers.
Halfway up, you'll encounter clear mountain springs. The golden sunlight shone on the stones, creating a magical and dreamy atmosphere.
Near the summit, the view is simply spectacular and breathtaking. Yuelu Mountain's journey is truly a feast for the senses, leaving you with memories that are both vivid and unforgettable.
Summary
Adjectives, the spices of language, add vividness and precision to writing, making it more engaging and effective.
（形容词是语言的调味品，为写作增添了生动性和精确性，使其更具吸引力和有效性。）
Homework
Polish\Improve your writing.

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