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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优人教版（2024）Unit 1 Happy Holiday
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是Green School的学生李华，学校将组织本学期的郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个，给校 Ms Mendozer写一封70词左右的信，说明选择该方案的理由，介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：poster 海报
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan ____________ is a better choice.
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．为了配合学校“劳动教育月”的主题活动，学校英文报正在开展以“Doing chores makes me _____”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要点提示：
1. What kind of housework do you often do at home
2. Why do you do it
3. What can you learn from doing it
注意事项：
1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、包含提示所给的全部内容；
2. 词数不少于 70 个；
3. 文中不得透露考生本人的姓名或学校名称；
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3．你学校正积极开展劳动的主题活动，假如你是大明，请给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，聊聊你本学期的家庭劳动计划。
内容要点：
注意：
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件中不得透露个人信息；
4. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
How is it going
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Yours,
Daming
4．“人生在勤，不劳何获”。果戈里说过，“如果儿童不去劳动，他们就既学不会文学，也学不会音乐，也学不会体育，也学不会那些保证道德达到最高峰的礼仪。”
某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题进行征文，请你试着投稿。请先谈一谈你对于孩子做家务的看法。再说一说你在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务以及你的收获。
提示词语：learn to do, help, parents, independent...
提示问题：
1．What do you think of doing housework
2．What housework do you usually do at home
3．What do you learn from doing housework
I think doing housework is
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5．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于60词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
家务不仅是“任务”，更是成长的机会。通过承担家务，我们能提升责任心，学会平衡生活和尊重他人，并为未来的独立打下坚实基础。为了让更多青少年了解家务的益处，请你根据提示及要求，以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题，写一篇英文倡议书。
提示词语：care about, busy, relax, improve, ability, responsible
提示问题：
1. What chores can we do to help parents
2. Why should we learn to help do chores
Dear students.
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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6．某英文报就中学生是否应该做家务进行征文，请根据以下内容提示问题用英文从你做家务的内容、原因及收获等方面来写一篇短文。
内容提示问题：
1. Do you think middle school student should help with housework
2. What housework do you usually do at home
3. Why do you think children should do housework
4. Something more about doing housework.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60—80；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Should We Help with Housework
As a middle school student, I think
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7．在你校“劳动教育月”期间，校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动，请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。
内容要点提示如下：
1在家经常做的家务劳动：
◆ fold clothes ◆ wash the dishes
◆ look after pets ◆ take out the rubbish ◆ …
2.你做家务劳动后的收获：
◆ life skills (技能) ◆ take care of ourselves ◆ understand parents
要求：
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥。
2. 不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
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8．假设你是吴明，在寒假期间，你和你家人一起去了武夷山游玩。请根据下列表格写一篇短文介绍一下此次旅行的情况，字数80左右。开头已给出。
Before the trip the way of transportation (交通) , book the hotel
During the trip go mountain climbing take the bamboo raft (竹排) watch Impression Da Hong Pao Show (印象大红袍) ...
After the trip feelings
During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．家务劳动是我们日常生活中不可或缺的部分。作为家庭的一员，我们每个人都应该主动分担力所能及的家务。假如你校英文报正在开展主题为“劳有所为，动有所乐”的征文比赛，你有意参加，请根据下列问题写一篇英语短文投稿。
1．What chores do you usually do
2．What do you think of doing chores
3．What do you learn from doing chores
要求：
1．短文应包含所有提示，可适当发挥；
2．语言表达准确，语句通顺连贯；
3．词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：skill技能
Housework is important for our family life.
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10．作为新时代的中学生，我们不仅要努力学习知识，还要培养独立、自理的生活能力。在一节英语课上，老师组织全班同学开展有关“做家务”的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，客观地介绍讨论结果并谈谈你的看法。
一些同学认为 其他学生认为 你的看法
1. 应该做家务 1. 没必要做家务
2. 培养学生的独特性 2. 应该把时间花在学业上
3. 了解公平的含义 3. 做家务是父母的职责
4. 每个家庭成员的责任 4. 做家务是浪费时间
要求： 1. 短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名；
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Recently, my class have had a discussion about whether middle school students
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11．One’s destination(目的地) is never a place, but a new way of seeing things. ——Henry Miller.
请以“Enjoy travel, enjoy life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。
内容要点：
1.旅行地的介绍：你游玩了哪些景点、有没有印象最深的活劫、品尝了当地的什么美食……
2.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项或意义等；
3.下一站计划去哪里 为什么
注意：
1.词数90左右，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实人名。
Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life
Last summer, I went to
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12．芳菲四月，春和景明。众多学生在清明小长假期间回乡祭祖，踏青赏花。请你帮助李华完成他的假期日志。
An unforgettable holiday
第一天 回乡祭祖，感受家乡变化……（举例说明）
第二天 旅游踏青，参观风景名胜……（举例说明）
第三天 徜徉书海，阅读经典名著……（适当发挥）
参考词汇：祭祖pay respect to ancestors
注意事项：（1）内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥；
（2）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
An unforgettable holiday
The three-day Qingming holiday was unforgettable.
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13．劳动节 (Labor Day) 是一个充满活力且意义非凡的节日，它是对劳动者辛勤付出的认可和尊重。去年的劳动节假期，你和家人度过了一段愉快的时光。请你以“Last Labor Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你的劳动节经历。
内容包括：
What activities did you and your family do during last Labor Day (traveling, doing housework, volunteer activities...)
What did you get from these activities
What’s your understanding of the meaning of Labor Day
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Last Labor Day
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14．校广播站正在以“Teenagers should do chores at home”为题进行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇文章参加征文比赛。
提示：
1.许多学生不愿做家务，他们觉得做家务太无聊；他们的父母也认为做家务是父母们的工作，做家务会占用孩子们学习时间；
2.你常做的家务：叠衣服、打扫自己卧室、洗碗等；
3.谈谈你的个人体会以及呼吁大家积极参与家务劳动。
要求：词数90以上。
Teenagers should do chores at home
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15．请你根据提示及要求，以Let’s help our parents do chores为题，写一篇英文倡议书。
要点提示：
(1)阐述分担家务的理由或益处(至少三点)；
(2)列举我们可以做的家务：整理床铺、打扫房间，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等并再次倡导大家帮父母做家务。
写作要求：
(1)包括所有要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)100词左右。
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.
16．玲玲讨厌做家务，但是她的父母经常让她做家务，她为此感到烦恼。假如你是玲玲的笔友丽莎(Lisa)，告诉她你在家里经常帮父母做家务和做家务的好处。
提示语：agree with, advantages (好处), make … smarter, it’s one’s duty to
要求：
（1）短文中须包括提示的全部信息，条理清楚、行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等；
（3）词数不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Lingling,
I’m writing to you to talk about the chores.
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I hope you can enjoy the chores.
Yours,
Lisa
17．学校正在开展“我劳动，我快乐”的主题征文活动，请你以“我做过的最有意义的家务事”为题， 写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示：
1. 介绍你做过的最有意义的家务事。
2. 谈谈它的意义所在 (至少写3点)。
写作要：
1. 词数70左右；
2. 短文标题、开头和结尾已给出；
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
The most meaningful housework I have done
Doing housework is important for us.
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Let’s do housework now. It can make our life better.
18．假设你是李华，是某国际校学生会主席。为进一步推动劳动教育，学生会打算开展“Let’s Help Our Parents Do Chores”的主题活动，请你以学生会的名义写一篇英文倡议书。
内容包括：
1. 表达你们对学生做家务的看法；
2. 阐述学生为什么要帮助做家务；
3. 列举若干学生可以做的家务。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现与你真实身份相关的信息；
3. 词数80左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Let’s Help Our Parents Do Chores
Dear friends,
Do you help with chores at home
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19．假设你是Li Hua，一名来自 Sunshine Middle School的学生。你看到Sunday Magazine最近正在就“Should teenagers help their parents with housework ”这个话题征集稿件，假如你对该话题感兴趣，请你写一封电子邮件给这个杂志发表自己的看法，并阐述理由。
要点：1.简单介绍自己并表明观点。
2.阐述三条及以上的理由，适当举例。
3.总结你的观点。
要求：1.参考以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，邮件格式完整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名、姓名和地名等）；
4.词数80词及以上。
Dear Sir or madam,
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20．做家务是每个家庭成员应尽的义务，也是我们生活的一部分，但是有些同学则认为做家务是浪费时间，他们的任务就是学习。对此，你怎么看？请根据提示以“Should children do chores ”为题，谈谈你对中学生做家务的看法。
提示：
（1）你是否经常做家务，你是否喜欢做家务，你常做的家务是什么；
（2）你对做家务有什么收获，感受。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，短文词数不少于80个；
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名， 如需要使用，人名请用 Li Hua，校名一律用 Guangming Middle School；
（3）短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分；
（4）抄袭试题中阅读部分的， 抄袭部分不得分。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan A is a better choice. We are always busy with schoolwork. Why don’t we choose to get close to nature
We can visit the city park. It’s a good chance to know more about plants in the park. We can also make some posters and put them up around the park so that more people will get to know about nature. Before leaving the park, we should pick up the litter.
The trip will make us relaxed. At the same time, it will certainly help us know more about nature and protect nature.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全开头，确定方案A/B，说明理由；
第二步，介绍活动内容（除了提示中的两项活动，需再增加一项活动）；
第三步，讲述该旅行的好处；
第四步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
① be busy with 忙于……
② get close to 接近，靠近
③ know more about 了解更多关于……
④ pick up 捡起
⑤ at the same time 同时
[高分句型]
① We can also make some posters and put them up around the park so that more people will get to know about nature. (so that引导目的状语从句)
2．例文
Housework makes me independent
Housework is important for our family life. I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.
I help by cleaning my room and doing the dishes. Sometimes, when Mom and Dad are busy, I even help cook our meals!
I learn a lot from doing chores. It teaches me many important life skills such as cooking and repairing things. Now I become more and more independent. Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better.
All in all, chores are not just work for me, they are a way to enjoy time with family. I love being a helper at home!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“家务对我们的家庭生活很重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你经常做的家务是哪些、做家务的原因及感悟等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn...from...从……学到……
②more and more independent越来越独立
[高分句型]
①I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy. (宾语从句）
②Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better. (动名词作主语)
3．例文：
Dear Tom,
How is it going My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. First, I’ll help with daily chores like sweeping floors and washing dishes every day. Second, I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills. Finally, I’ll cook simple meals twice a week to share the burden. Through these activities, I hope to become more responsible and independent. What’s your plan I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Daming
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：需包含所有图片要点（日常家务种类/做家务的频率/将要学的家庭劳动），不得透露个人信息。
［写作步骤］
第一步：明确邮件目的（响应劳动主题活动，分享计划）；
第二步：分点展开（家务→种植→烹饪）+ 补充细节（频率/目的）；
第三步：结尾（询问对方计划，保持互动性）。
［亮点词汇］
① promote labor education 推广劳动教育
② share the burden 分担责任
③ independent 独立
［高分句型］
① I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills.（不定式作目的状语）
② My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. (含有so的并列句)
4．例文
I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. It’s not just about helping parents but also a valuable way to learn and grow.
At home, I usually do several kinds of housework. I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. Also, I like to help with cooking. Sometimes I wash vegetables and learn to make simple dishes. Additionally, I take care of watering the plants.
From doing these housework tasks, I’ve learned a lot. I’ve learned how to be more independent. It also makes me understand my parents’ hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达对于孩子做家务的看法；
第二步，介绍自己在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务，例如扫地、做饭、洗菜、给植物浇水等；
第三步，表达做家务的收获，比如学会独立、理解父母的辛苦等。
[亮点词汇]
①a way to do sth. 做某事的方法
②valuable 宝贵的
③sweep the floor 扫地
④help with cooking 帮忙做饭
⑤additionally 另外
⑥take care of 照顾
⑦water the plants 给植物浇水
[高分句型]
①I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. (动词不定式表目的)
5．例文
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. We can clean rooms, wash dishes, take out the trash and make beds. These small actions show our love. Why should we learn to do chores First, parents are busy every day. Helping them relax makes the family happier. Second, doing chores improves our ability to be responsible. For example, managing time between study and chores teaches us balance. Finally, it prepares us for future independence.
Let’s start today! Even simple chores can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己可以在家做的家务，并解释为什么要学会帮忙做家务；
第三步，号召大家都参与，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take out带出去
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①Helping them relax makes the family happier.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s start today!（祈使句）
6．例文
Should We Help with Housework
As a middle school student, I think we should definitely help with housework. It’s not only a way to share the burden with our parents but also a chance to learn life skills.
I usually do chores like sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and folding clothes. Sometimes I cook simple meals on weekends, such as making noodles or fried eggs. These tasks make me feel independent.
Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. Cooking also helps me understand the effort behind each meal, making me more thankful. Moreover, doing housework together can strengthen family bonds. Last week, my mom and I baked cookies while chatting—it was fun and meaningful.
All in all, housework is more than just labor; it’s a lesson in growing up. Every chore we do brings us closer to being responsible and caring individuals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接回应题目问题，为全文奠定基调；
第二步，列举自己常做的家务，体现“怎么做”；
第三步，从责任、感恩、家庭关系三方面论证做家务的意义；
第四步，总结全文，升华做家务的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②all in all 总之
[高分句型]
①Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. (when引导的时间状语从句)
7．例文：
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
I often help with housework at home. I usually fold clothes and take out the rubbish. I also enjoy looking after pets. I feed them and play with them. I often wash the dishes after dinner. When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.
I learn a lot from doing these chores. I learn some important life skills and I am able to take better care of myself. I also understand my parents more. They work hard every day and still manage to keep the house clean and comfortable. I am proud to help them with housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己经常做的家务内容；
第三步，介绍从做家务中取得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①help with sth帮忙做某事
②learn a lot from从……中学到很多
③manage to do sth设法做成某事
④be proud do sth做某事很骄傲
[高分句型]
When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.（when引导时间状语从句）
8．例文
During the winter holiday, I went on a 3-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents.
It lies in the north of Fujian Province, China. We took the train for this trip because the high-speed train is very convenient and fast now. Father booked the hotel before the trip.
On the first day, we went mountain climbing. When we reached the top of the mountain, we can see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful. The next day, we took the bamboo raft at Jiuqu Creek. It was very exciting and fun. In the evening, we also watched the live show of Impression Da Hong Pao. It takes Mount Wuyi tea culture as its theme. On the third day we enjoyed the local delicious food. And we tasted Dahongpao as well.
The three-day visit quickly came to an end. Although I felt a little tired, I had a great time and learned a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍去武夷山旅游的背景；
第二步，中间分别详细描述三天的行程；
第三步，结尾总结这次旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient方便的
②exciting令人兴奋的
③delicious美味的
[高分句型]
①When we reached the top of the mountain, we could see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）
9．One Possible Version:
Housework is important for our family life. I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.
I help by cleaning my room and doing the dishes. Sometimes, when Mom and Dad are busy, I even help cook our meals! I learn a lot from doing chores. It teaches me many important life skills such as cooking and repairing things. Now I become more and more independent. Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better.
All in all, chores are not just work for me; they are a way to enjoy time with family. I love being a helper at home!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，介绍做家务的重要性；
第二步：展开阐述介绍你通常做哪些家务、你觉得做家务怎么样、你从做家务中学到了什么；
第三步：书写结语，呼应开头。
[亮点词汇]
①do their part in尽自己的一份力
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Sometimes, when Mom and Dad are busy, I even help cook our meals!（when引导时间状语从句）
10．例文
Recently, my class have had a discussion about whether middle school students should do housework. Some students think we should do housework. Firstly, it helps develop independence. Secondly, it teaches us about fairness. Thirdly, it’s every family member’s duty. However, others believe it’s unnecessary. They say we should spend our time on our studies, because doing housework is the responsibility of our parents, not our students. For students, spending time on housework is a waste.
In my opinion, doing housework is important. It teaches responsibility and life skills. We can balance study and housework. Helping with chores makes family life happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍班级开展了一次关于“做家务”的讨论；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍支持做家务和反对做家务的同学的观点及原因；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① develop independence培养独立性
② spend time on sth在某事上花费时间
③ in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
① Some students think we should do housework.（省略that的宾语从句）
② They say we should spend our time on our studies, because doing housework is the responsibility of our parents, not our students.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③ Helping with chores makes family life happier.（动名词作主语）
11．例文
Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life
Last year, I went to Qingdao with my family. We went there to see the sunrise in the early morning. The sky was colorful and the sea was shining brightly. When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. We had seafood which was delicious. All of us had a wonderful time.
As we all know, the outside world is wonderful. If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. I want to see the Ocean Park there. I’m eager to know how the dolphins perform. Also, I’d like to visit the Hong Kong Disneyland. I want to see Snow White.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍游玩景点、印象深刻的活动和美食；
第二步，表达自己的旅行感受；
第三步，介绍接下来的游玩计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to do 渴望做某事
②would like to do 想要做某事
[高分句型]
①When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. (when引导时间状语从句)
②If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. (if引导条件状语从句)
12．例文
An unforgettable holiday
The three-day Qingming holiday was unforgettable.
On the first day, I went back to my hometown to pay respect to my ancestors. I noticed many changes there—new roads were built and the environment became cleaner. Then we visited my grandparents’ old house which was well preserved. The next day, my family visited a famous mountain nearby. We climbed to the top and enjoyed the beautiful cherry blossoms. There was also an ancient temple where we learned about local history. Finally, I spent a whole day reading Journey to the West. The Monkey King’s adventures fascinated me. I realized teamwork is important when facing difficulties.
This holiday gave me both family warmth and knowledge growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日志；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文；
第二步，根据提示材料，分别写出三天的行程和感受；
第三步，总结上文，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①go back to回到……
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③both...and...既……又……
[高分句型]
①There was also an ancient temple where we learned about local history. （where引导定语从句）
②I realized teamwork is important when facing difficulties. （省略that宾语从句）
13．例文
Last Labor Day Last Labor Day, my family and I had a memorable time. Instead of traveling to crowded tourist spots, we decided to do something special at home. We spent the whole day doing housework together. My parents and I divided the tasks. While I was cleaning the windows, which were quite dirty, my mother was mopping the floor, and my father was fixing some broken furniture. It was tiring but full of joy.
Through these activities, I realized the hard work my parents had been doing every day. I’m very grateful to my parents for taking care of me in daily life. In the future, I’ll do my best to help them.
Labor Day, to me, is not just a holiday. It’s a time to show respect for all laborers. Whether it’s the labor in daily housework or the efforts in various jobs, every bit of labor contributes to a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：介绍自己去年和家人一起度过的劳动节假期，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述自己和父母一起在去年的劳动节假期一起做家务，注意用词准确，行文流畅；
第二步，分享自己和父母一起做家务的收获和感受，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，阐述自己对于劳动节的理解，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of 代替
②be full of 充满
③contribute to 有助于……，对……有贡献
[高分句型]
①While I was cleaning the windows, which were quite dirty, my mother was mopping the floor, and my father was fixing some broken furniture.（时间状语从句和定语从句）
②I realized the hard work my parents had been doing every day.（定语从句）
14．例文
Teenagers should do chores at home
Nowadays, many teenagers dislike doing chores. They think chores are boring, and their parents also believe housework is parents’ job. Some even say chores take up study time. However, I have a different opinion.
I often help with chores at home. For example, I fold clothes after doing laundry, clean my bedroom every weekend, and wash dishes after meals. These small tasks make our home tidy and teach me life skills.
Through doing chores, I’ve learned responsibility and independence. Chores help me understand my parents’ hard work. They also make me feel proud to contribute. Let’s start doing chores today! Not only can we help our parents, but we can also develop important skills for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明有关做家务的话题，引出下文自己的观点；
第二步，具体阐述自己常做的家务以及个人体会；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家积极参与家务劳动。
[亮点词汇]
①take up占据
②help with帮助做
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①They think chores are boring, and their parents also believe housework is parents’ job.（宾语从句）
②Not only can we help our parents, but we can also develop important skills for the future.（倒装句）
15．例文
Let’s help our parents do choresDear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. Firstly, doing chores can make our home cleaner and more comfortable. Secondly, it helps us learn life skills like responsibility and time management. Thirdly, sharing chores reduces parents’ stress and shows our love for them.
We can do many simple things, such as making the bed, cleaning rooms, washing clothes, doing the dishes, and taking out the trash. Even small actions can make a big difference!
Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述分担家务的理由或益处；
第二步，列举我们可以做的家务；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①comfortable舒适的
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③such as比如
④make a big difference产生大影响
[高分句型]
①Firstly, doing chores can make our home cleaner and more comfortable. (动名词作主语)
②We can do many simple things, such as making the bed, cleaning rooms, washing clothes, doing the dishes, and taking out the trash. (and连接并列结构)
16．例文：
Dear Lingling,
I’m writing to you to talk about the chores. You think doing chores is boring. But I don’t agree with you. There are many advantages of doing chores. When you do chores, you can use your hands and head. This can make you smarter. And our parents are busy working all day. If we help our parents with housework, they can have more time to relax. Besides, it is necessary for us to learn some basic life skills, such as cooking and doing the dishes. And it’s one’s duty to share some chores at home. Doing chores is meaningful. Let’s do more chores in our spare time.
I hope you can enjoy the chores.
Yours,
Lisa
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏提示信息，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表面写作意图，向玲玲表明你的看法；
第二步，具体阐述做家务的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
②all day整天
③such as例如
④meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①If we help our parents with housework, they can have more time to relax. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Besides, it is necessary for us to learn some basic life skills, such as cooking and doing the dishes. (it作形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语)
17．例文
The most meaningful housework I have done
Doing housework is important for us. The most meaningful housework I have done is helping my dad plant flowers in our backyard. Last spring, we dug up the soil, planted seeds, and watered them every day. It was hard work, but seeing the tiny seeds grow into beautiful blooms was amazing.
This task meant a lot to me. Firstly, it taught me patience and the joy of waiting for something good to happen. Secondly, it showed me the power of nature and how every little effort can make a big difference. Lastly, it brought my dad and me closer as we worked together, sharing stories and laughter.
Let’s do housework now. It can make our life better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己做过的最有意义的家务事”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头，介绍自己做过的最有意义的家务事；
第二步，根据题干中的要点提示，详细介绍这件事的经过，意义等信息；
第三步，号召大家行动起来做家务，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①dig up挖出
②make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①It was hard work, but seeing the tiny seeds grow into beautiful blooms was amazing. （but表转折）
②Lastly, it brought my dad and me closer as we worked together, sharing stories and laughter.（as引导的原因状语从句）
18．参考例文:
Let’s Help Our Parents Do Chores
Dear friends,
Do you help with chores at home We think it’s necessary for us to learn how to do chores and help our parents with housework.
These days, many of us depend on our parents too much. It’s not a good thing. Doing chores can help develop our independence and teach us how to take care of ourselves. Also, everyone should play a part in keeping our house clean and tidy.
Let’s take actions now, from little things like sweeping the floor, taking out the rubbish, and so on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明观点；
第二步，阐述原因；
第三步，发出动员。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依赖
②develop one’s independence培养自立
③play a part起作用
[高分句型]
①We think it’s necessary for us to learn how to do chores and help our parents with housework.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Doing chores can help develop our independence and teach us how to take care of ourselves.（疑问词+不定式作宾语）
19．例文
Dear Sir or madam,
I think children should help their parents with housework at home. First of all, parents work very hard outside, if they have to do all the housework at home, they will be very tired. Second, it is fair for children to do housework, because they live with their parents and should share the housework. Third, doing housework helps develop children’s independence and teaches them how to take care of themselves.
In a word, doing housework is good for children’s future. So I think children should do housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应紧扣主题展开写作，重点介绍你的看法及理由，可适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明自己对“孩子应该做家务”的态度；
第二步，具体阐述你的看法和理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①if they have to do all the housework at home, they will be very tired. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Third, doing housework helps develop children’s independence and teaches them how to take care of themselves. (动名词作主语)
20．【解答】例文
Should children do chores
Many students hate doing chores, but I like to do. I usually sweep the floor, clean the table, wash clothes, and even cook. I almost do chores every day.
I think children should do chores. First, by doing chores, we can improve our abilities to practice and create. We can also be independent and responsible. We will feel strong and be able to help others so that we become confident. What’s more, we can connect what we experience when doing chores with what we learn from books.
Let’s start to do chores now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Should children do chores ”为题，结合提示内容谈谈对中学生做家务的看法，注意正确用词，避免出现语法和拼写方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明自己喜欢做家务，并介绍自己经常做的家务有什么；
第二步，表明自己对做家务的观点以及收获；
第三步，呼吁大家开始做家务。
[亮点词汇]
① hate doing sth讨厌做某事
② sweep the floor拖地
③ be able to能够
④ start to do开始做某事
[高分句型]
①I think children should do chores. (宾语从句)
②We will feel strong and be able to help others so that we become confident. (目的状语从句)
③What’s more, we can connect what we experience when doing chores with what we learn from books. (时间状语从句+宾语从句)
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