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第03讲 活动报道
目录
01 考情解码·命题预警 2
02 体系构建·思维可视 3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3
考点一 写作技巧 4
知识点1 命题规律 4
知识点2 写作技能提升 4
考点二 经典必背 4
知识点1 常用词汇 4
知识点2 必背开头段 5
知识点3 必背主题句 6
知识点4 必背结尾句 6
知识点5 满分模版必背 7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向 7
知识点1 真题演练 7
知识点2 命题新考向 12
考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年
活动报道 选择题 非选择题 无 2024年新高考1卷： 给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享上美术课的经历。 2023年浙江1月卷： 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道。
考情分析： 一、往年真题特点 话题聚焦校园与社会活动：常围绕校园内的文化节、运动会、志愿服务，以及社会中的公益活动、文化交流活动等命题 。题目多要求结合特定身份（如校报记者、活动参与者）进行报道，内容需贴近实际，具有现场感和真实性。 任务要求明确：题目往往明确给出活动主题、关键信息要点（如时间、地点、参与人员、活动环节），以及报道的侧重点（如突出活动亮点、参与者感受），要求考生在规定字数内完整且生动地呈现活动全貌。 二、命题思路 通过模拟新闻报道场景，考查学生运用英语客观描述事件、提炼关键信息，并展现活动意义的能力。重点检验考生能否根据不同活动类型和受众，合理组织语言，突出活动特色，同时兼顾事实陈述与情感表达，体现英语在信息传播和经验分享中的实际应用能力。
复习目标与备考策略 一、复习目标 1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 3.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 4.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 二、备考策略 1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文，建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句，提升写作效率。 2.真题模拟演练：分析近五年真题，总结命题规律与高频考点；按照考试时间要求进行限时训练，提升写作速度与应变能力；对照范文和评分标准，找出自身不足，针对性改进。 3.拓展视野与创新思维训练：阅读英文报纸、校园刊物中的活动报道，学习多样化的写作手法和视角；针对虚拟活动进行创意报道练习，尝试用新颖的结构（如对话式、悬念式）和表达方式提升文章独特性，增强考场应变能力。
考点一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
活动及新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历、举办的活动或发生的事件进行明确的、实事求是的报道。
注意报道的开头部分开门见山，扼要概括报道的核心内容，无须自我介绍或寒暄！而应该是成因、个人见解、影响、重要性、应对措施、建议等。在拓展句中，应具体详细地展开，并有意识地运用逻辑衔接词。
需要注意的是，本质上讲，活动报道，是对公众分享活动信息（如时间、地点、过程等）；对另外一个朋友分享活动信息，也是类似于活动报道的应用文，很多语言表达可以通用。
知识点2 写作技能提升
在撰写活动报道时，遵循上述三段式结构能够使文章条理清晰，重点突出。
第一段作为引言，迅速吸引读者注意力，通过简洁明了的语言概述活动背景、目的及核心内容，为读者构建一个初步的活动框架。
第二段是文章的主体部分，需要细致入微地描绘活动现场，通过生动的语言和具体的细节展现活动的精彩瞬间。可以提及活动的具体流程、参与者的积极互动、现场氛围以及活动产生的反响等，让读者仿佛身临其境。
第三段则是对全文的升华，总结活动的深远意义和对未来的积极影响，或是对活动效果的反思与展望，以此收尾，留给读者深刻的印象。
考点二 经典必背
知识点1 常用词汇
1. 举办活动/竞赛/比赛 hold an activity/competition/match
2. 为了；目的是 in order to; with the purpose of; aim to
3. 更好地了解... have a better understanding of...
4. 提供一个机会给我们去... provide us with an opportunity to...
5. 丰富我们的校园生活 enrich our campus life
6. 拓展我们的视野 broaden our horizons
7. 提高我们关于...的意识 raise our awareness of...
8. 激发我们对...的兴趣 stimulate our interest in...
9. 缓解我们的学习压力 relieve our study pressure
10. 增进同学之间的友谊 enhance the friendship among classmates
11. 积极参加这次活动 actively participate in this activity
12. 收获良多 gain a lot
13. 在会议室 in the meeting room
14. 在实验室 in the lab / laboratory
15. 在报告厅 in the lecture hall
16. 在体育场 in the stadium
17. 在养老院 in the nursing home
18. 在电影院 at the cinema
19. 在学校门口 at the school gate
20. 在操场 on the playground
21. 在农场 on the farm
22. 在二楼 on the second floor
知识点2 必背开头段
Aiming to raise the awareness of the importance of labor, our school held the activity of the School Labor Day last Friday.
为了提高人们对劳动重要性的认识，我们学校于上周五举行了学校劳动节的活动
Last Friday, a significant lecture was successfully organized by our school in the school hall.
上星期五，我们学校在学校成功组织了一场重要的讲座
Last Sunday, a 5000-meter cross-country running race was held in our school, which attracted 300 enthusiastic participants.
上周日，我校举行了一场5000米越野赛跑比赛，吸引了300名热情的选手参加
An activity was held in our school successfully on …
我们学校已经成功地举行了一项活动
Last Friday, 100 students from our school visited …
上周五，我校有100名学生前来参观......。
So popular was the activity with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them.
这项活动在学生和教师中非常受欢迎，因此吸引了数百人。
知识点3 必背主题句
During the lecture, the policeman first gave examples by showing some pictures.
在讲座中，警察首先展示了一些图片作为例子。
The day was filled with meaningful activities.
这一天里充满了有意义的活动。
The activity/event/lecture/competition attracted all the students and teachers.
这次活动/活动、讲座/比赛吸引了所有的学生和教师。
It was held to encourage students to learn more about …
举办它是为了鼓励学生们更多地了解……。
The performance deeply impressed the audience present.
这次演出给在场的观众留下了深刻的印象。
While listening to …, the students took notes.
在听的时候……，学生们做了笔记。
知识点4 必背结尾句
This activity turned out to be a great success. Not only did it...but also it...
这次活动是一个巨大的成功，它不仅...而且...
The activity was of great importance, which provided us with a chance to...
这次活动非常重要，为我们提供了一个机会……
Not only did the race enrich our school life but made us realize the significance of persistence.
比赛不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且让我们意识到坚持不懈的重要性。
The lecturer presented the audience with recordings about... .
讲师向听众展示了关于......。
Through the activity, students can learn from each other better.
通过这次活动，学生们可以更好地互相学习。
This visit/event/activity improved their knowledge and broadened their horizons.
这次访问/活动/活动提高了他们的知识，拓宽了他们的视野。
The event was a complete success.这次活动非常成功。
By taking part in the activity, students have learned a lot about …
通过参加这个活动，学生们已经学到了很多关于……的知识。
Personally, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pride in contributing to the well-being of our environment.
就我个人而言，我为为我们的环境做出贡献感到一种成就感和自豪感。
It is this activity that further raises our awareness of/ enriches our knowledge about...
正是这项活动进一步提高了我们的意识/丰富了我们的知识。
知识点5 满分模板必背
Aimed at improving students' _____________________(活动目的), _____________________(活动名称)has been launched ______________________(地点)。
At 8:00 o’clock, we gathered at ___________________(地点) and set out for______________________(目的地). All the way we_____________________(所作事情)， enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. What’s more, ___________________(具体事项或印象或感受). Not only did it get us ______________________(好处一) and give us relaxation from heavy school work,but also ______________________(好处二).
What a wonderful time we had! I hope_____________________(期待下次)。
考点三 体悟真题与新考向
知识点1 真题演练
1. 2024年6月新高考1卷
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2. 2024年1月九省联考
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
（1）介绍活动目的；
（2）说明参赛要求。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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3. 2023年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
4. 2023年2月四省联考
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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5.（2023年浙江卷1月）
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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6.（2020年新高考I卷）
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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7. （2020·新课标Ⅱ）
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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8. （2020·天津卷）
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
9. （2016·北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day
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知识点2 命题新考向
【公益活动主题的活动】
01.（高三精选模拟题）
上周，我校举办了一场别开生面的年度慈善晚会，旨在强化学生之间的团结协作精神，同时为当地社区的贫困儿童筹集善款。请以“A Beacon of Unity: Our School’s Annual Charity Gala”为题，撰写一篇报道，内容需涵盖以下几点：
1.活动目的；2.活动流程：3.活动感受：
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
A Beacon of Unity: Our School’s Annual Charity Gala
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02.（2025·内蒙古包头·二模）
你们学校最近组织了一次植树活动，请以“An Interesting Tree-planting Activity”为题写一篇报道，向校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点及参与者；
2. 植树的过程；
3. 你的体验和感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
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03. (2025届河南省豫西北教研联盟(许洛平)高三一模)
假如你是李华，你一个在英国的笔友William得知上月你校组织了校园义卖(Charity Sale)活动，来信向你询问活动详情，请给他写封回信，内容如下:
1、活动详情；2、你感受。
注意:1、写作词数应为80左右； 2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. William,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【传统文化相关的活动】
04. （2025·安徽合肥·三模）
假定你是李华。上周末在你的家乡举办了一场鼓王争霸赛（Drum King Championship），请你给酷爱中国传统文化的英国笔友Pal写一封信，介绍比赛的情况和你的感受。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Pal,
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Yours,
Li Hua
05. (2025届江苏省南通、泰州、镇江等市高三上学期第一次调研测试)
假定你是李华，上周五你参加了社区举办的“迎新年写对联”活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 你的收获。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you a couplets writing activity I joined in last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【环境保护主题相关的活动】
06. (2025·山东日照·一模)
周三你校高三年级学生进行了为期一天的“美丽的大自然”主题研学(learning trip)。假如你是李华，请你给校英语报就本次研学写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 研学的过程；3. 研学的反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【科技生活主题的活动报道】
07. （2025·河南新乡·三模）
假定你是李华，你校近期举办了“科普进校园”活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【视频文字稿呈现活动】
08.（2025·河北秦皇岛·三模）
假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Simon将到你所就读的学校学习交流一个学期，他十分喜欢社团活动，希望你能拍摄一个视频介绍一下你校的社团活动。请你用英文撰写该视频的文字稿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Simon,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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目录
01 考情解码·命题预警 2
02 体系构建·思维可视 3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3
考点一 写作技巧 4
知识点1 命题规律 4
知识点2 写作技能提升 4
考点二 经典必背 4
知识点1 常用词汇 4
知识点2 必背开头段 5
知识点3 必背主题句 6
知识点4 必背结尾句 6
知识点5 满分模版必背 7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向 7
知识点1 真题演练 7
知识点2 命题新考向 20
考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年
活动报道 选择题 非选择题 无 2024年新高考1卷： 给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享上美术课的经历。 2023年浙江1月卷： 为校报写上周校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动的报道。
考情分析： 一、往年真题特点 1.话题聚焦校园与社会活动：常围绕校园内的文化节、运动会、志愿服务，以及社会中的公益活动、文化交流活动等命题 。题目多要求结合特定身份（如校报记者、活动参与者）进行报道，内容需贴近实际，具有现场感和真实性。 2.任务要求明确：题目往往明确给出活动主题、关键信息要点（如时间、地点、参与人员、活动环节），以及报道的侧重点（如突出活动亮点、参与者感受），要求考生在规定字数内完整且生动地呈现活动全貌。 二、命题思路 通过模拟新闻报道场景，考查学生运用英语客观描述事件、提炼关键信息，并展现活动意义的能力。重点检验考生能否根据不同活动类型和受众，合理组织语言，突出活动特色，同时兼顾事实陈述与情感表达，体现英语在信息传播和经验分享中的实际应用能力。
复习目标与备考策略 一、复习目标 1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 2.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 3.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 二、备考策略 1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文，建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句，提升写作效率。 2.真题模拟演练：分析近五年真题，总结命题规律与高频考点；按照考试时间要求进行限时训练，提升写作速度与应变能力；对照范文和评分标准，找出自身不足，针对性改进。 3.拓展视野与创新思维训练：阅读英文报纸、校园刊物中的活动报道，学习多样化的写作手法和视角；针对虚拟活动进行创意报道练习，尝试用新颖的结构（如对话式、悬念式）和表达方式提升文章独特性，增强考场应变能力。
考点一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
活动及新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历、举办的活动或发生的事件进行明确的、实事求是的报道。
注意报道的开头部分开门见山，扼要概括报道的核心内容，无须自我介绍或寒暄！而应该是成因、个人见解、影响、重要性、应对措施、建议等。在拓展句中，应具体详细地展开，并有意识地运用逻辑衔接词。
需要注意的是，本质上讲，活动报道，是对公众分享活动信息（如时间、地点、过程等）；对另外一个朋友分享活动信息，也是类似于活动报道的应用文，很多语言表达可以通用。
知识点2 写作技能提升
在撰写活动报道时，遵循上述三段式结构能够使文章条理清晰，重点突出。
第一段作为引言，迅速吸引读者注意力，通过简洁明了的语言概述活动背景、目的及核心内容，为读者构建一个初步的活动框架。
第二段是文章的主体部分，需要细致入微地描绘活动现场，通过生动的语言和具体的细节展现活动的精彩瞬间。可以提及活动的具体流程、参与者的积极互动、现场氛围以及活动产生的反响等，让读者仿佛身临其境。
第三段则是对全文的升华，总结活动的深远意义和对未来的积极影响，或是对活动效果的反思与展望，以此收尾，留给读者深刻的印象。
考点二 经典必背
知识点1 常用词汇
1. 举办活动/竞赛/比赛 hold an activity/competition/match
2. 为了；目的是 in order to; with the purpose of; aim to
3. 更好地了解... have a better understanding of...
4. 提供一个机会给我们去... provide us with an opportunity to...
5. 丰富我们的校园生活 enrich our campus life
6. 拓展我们的视野 broaden our horizons
7. 提高我们关于...的意识 raise our awareness of...
8. 激发我们对...的兴趣 stimulate our interest in...
9. 缓解我们的学习压力 relieve our study pressure
10. 增进同学之间的友谊 enhance the friendship among classmates
11. 积极参加这次活动 actively participate in this activity
12. 收获良多 gain a lot
13. 在会议室 in the meeting room
14. 在实验室 in the lab / laboratory
15. 在报告厅/ 体育场 in the lecture hall/stadium
16. 在养老院 in the nursing home
17. 在电影院 at the cinema
18. 在学校门口 at the school gate
19. 在操场/农场 on the playground/the farm
20. 在二楼 on the second floor
知识点2 必背开头段
Aiming to raise the awareness of the importance of labor, our school held the activity of the School Labor Day last Friday.
为了提高人们对劳动重要性的认识，我们学校于上周五举行了学校劳动节的活动
Last Friday, a significant lecture was successfully organized by our school in the school hall.
上星期五，我们学校在学校成功组织了一场重要的讲座
Last Sunday, a 5000-meter cross-country running race was held in our school, which attracted 300 enthusiastic participants.
上周日，我校举行了一场5000米越野赛跑比赛，吸引了300名热情的选手参加
An activity was held in our school successfully on …
我们学校已经成功地举行了一项活动
Last Friday, 100 students from our school visited …
上周五，我校有100名学生前来参观......。
So popular was the activity with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them.
这项活动在学生和教师中非常受欢迎，因此吸引了数百人。
知识点3 必背主题句
During the lecture, the policeman first gave examples by showing some pictures.
在讲座中，警察首先展示了一些图片作为例子。
The day was filled with meaningful activities.
这一天里充满了有意义的活动。
The activity/event/lecture/competition attracted all the students and teachers.
这次活动/活动、讲座/比赛吸引了所有的学生和教师。
It was held to encourage students to learn more about …
举办它是为了鼓励学生们更多地了解……。
The performance deeply impressed the audience present.
这次演出给在场的观众留下了深刻的印象。
While listening to …, the students took notes.
在听的时候……，学生们做了笔记。
知识点4 必背结尾句
This activity turned out to be a great success. Not only did it...but also it...
这次活动是一个巨大的成功，它不仅...而且...
The activity was of great importance, which provided us with a chance to...
这次活动非常重要，为我们提供了一个机会……
Not only did the race enrich our school life but made us realize the significance of persistence.
比赛不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且让我们意识到坚持不懈的重要性。
The lecturer presented the audience with recordings about... .
讲师向听众展示了关于......。
Through the activity, students can learn from each other better.
通过这次活动，学生们可以更好地互相学习。
This visit/event/activity improved their knowledge and broadened their horizons.
这次访问/活动/活动提高了他们的知识，拓宽了他们的视野。
The event was a complete success.这次活动非常成功。
By taking part in the activity, students have learned a lot about …
通过参加这个活动，学生们已经学到了很多关于……的知识。
Personally, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pride in contributing to the well-being of our environment.
就我个人而言，我为为我们的环境做出贡献感到一种成就感和自豪感。
It is this activity that further raises our awareness of/ enriches our knowledge about...
正是这项活动进一步提高了我们的意识/丰富了我们的知识。
知识点5 满分模板必背
Aimed at improving students' _____________________(活动目的), _____________________(活动名称)has been launched ______________________(地点)。
At 8:00 o’clock, we gathered at ___________________(地点) and set out for______________________(目的地). All the way we_____________________(所作事情)， enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. What’s more, ___________________(具体事项或印象或感受). Not only did it get us ______________________(好处一) and give us relaxation from heavy school work,but also ______________________(好处二).
What a wonderful time we had! I hope_____________________(期待下次)。
考点三 体悟真题与新考向
知识点1 真题演练
1. 2024年6月新高考1卷
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
2. 2024年1月九省联考
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
（1）介绍活动目的；
（2）说明参赛要求。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We're delighted to invite you to the "United in Action, Save Food" essay contest, hosted by our school's English newspaper. The goal is to spotlight the crucial issue of food wastage and inspire a collective commitment to sustainability.
Participants are encouraged to submit essays that not only highlight the significance of food conservation but also propose actionable solutions. Your entry should be original, thought-provoking, and capped at 300 words. Please ensure that your essay is submitted to our editorial department by the end of this month.
Embrace this opportunity to express your ideas and be a part of a collective movement towards a more sustainable future. Your voice matters, let it be heard!
【导语】本篇是学校英文报关于“携手行动，节约粮食”作文比赛的活动通知，需清晰阐明活动目的与参赛要求，符合80词左右的应用文写作规范。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
举办：host → organize
强调：spotlight → emphasize
提交：submit → hand in
可行的：actionable → practical
2. 句式拓展
原句：The goal is to spotlight the crucial issue of food wastage and inspire a collective commitment to sustainability.
拓展句：The competition aims to spotlight the crucial issue of food wastage, as we hope to inspire every student to take collective action for sustainability.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] We're delighted to invite you to the "United in Action, Save Food" essay contest, hosted by our school's English newspaper.（用过去分词短语“hosted by...”作后置定语，简洁说明活动主办方，信息完整）
[高分句型2] Participants are encouraged to submit essays that not only highlight the significance of food conservation but also propose actionable solutions.（使用that引导的定语从句，结合“not only...but also...”结构，明确参赛文章的内容要求，逻辑清晰）
[高分句型3] Embrace this opportunity to express your ideas and be a part of a collective movement towards a more sustainable future.（用祈使句增强号召力，“a part of a collective movement”呼应主题中的“携手行动”，用词精准）
3. 2023年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4. 2023年2月四省联考
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【参考范文】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
5.（2023年浙江卷1月）
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【参考范文】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
6.（2020年新高考I卷）
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【参考范文】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】
第一步：审题
时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
7. （2020·新课标Ⅱ）
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【参考范文】
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.
解析
（1）写作思路
本文是一篇提纲式的书面表达，要求介绍自己和同学上周末参加的一次采摘活动。在介绍农场情况时，可以谈论该农场的位置、农场的采摘品种、是否属于生态农场等内容；在描述采摘过程时，可以描述采摘的物品、和同学之间的合作、农民的指导等内容，时态应当以一般过去时为主；在表达个人感受时，可以从人与自然的角度或者劳动能力的培养方面入手，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在写作时，可以适当增加过渡词或句子，使文章更加的连贯流畅。
（2）重点词汇/句型
a. The ecological farm grows a wide variety of fruit and vegetables.（a wide variety of 各种各样的）
b. The guide showed us around the farm and explained to us how to pluck the fruit and vegetables.（show sb. around 带某人参观）
c. The fruit and vegetables were good for us because they were planted with organic fertilizers.（be good for 对……有好处）
d. The clean air and the fresh fruit made me feel so relaxed that I wanted to pay a second visit.（so…that… 如此……以至于……）
8. （2020·天津卷）
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
9. （2016·北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day
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【参考范文】
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文类型的短文，以 “Actions for a Greener Earth” 为主题，讲述作者班级响应环保号召，通过回收利用旧物并赠予他人的行动，践行绿色地球理念，结构清晰，叙事生动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
号召：call upon→appeal to
想出：come up with→figure out
赠送：give away→hand out
2. 句式拓展
原句：A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
拓展句：A week before Earth Day, when environmental awareness was increasingly emphasized, posters were put up around our school, which called upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.（现在分词短语 “calling upon...” 作伴随状语，说明海报张贴的目的，使句子结构紧凑）
[高分句型 2] We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.（“so...that...” 引导结果状语从句，突出班级行动成果显著，增强表达效果）
[高分句型 3] We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases.（“bring sth. to sp.” 和 “turn...into...” 两个常用短语的连用，简洁清晰地描述行动过程 ）
知识点2 命题新考向
【公益活动主题的活动】
01.（高三精选模拟题）
上周，我校举办了一场别开生面的年度慈善晚会，旨在强化学生之间的团结协作精神，同时为当地社区的贫困儿童筹集善款。请以“A Beacon of Unity: Our School’s Annual Charity Gala”为题，撰写一篇报道，内容需涵盖以下几点：
1.活动目的；2.活动流程：3.活动感受：
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
A Beacon of Unity: Our School’s Annual Charity Gala
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【参考范文】
A Beacon of Unity: Our School’s Annual Charity Gala
Last week, our school hosted a unique charity gala, uniting students to aid local impoverished children. The event aimed to strengthen bonds and raise funds.
Activities kicked off with vibrant performances, followed by auctions and raffles, engaging everyone in a spirit of generosity. The gala became a symbol of unity, where cooperation shone brightly.
Reflecting on the night, it was clear that the gala achieved more than its goals. It was a powerful lesson in empathy and togetherness, leaving a lasting impression on all who participated.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周，你校举办了一场别开生面的年度慈善晚会，旨在强化学生之间的团结协作精神，同时为当地社区的贫困儿童筹集善款这一情况，要求考生以“A Beacon of Unity: Our School’s Annual Charity Gala”为题，撰写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
旨在做某事：aim to do→ be designed to do
加强：strengthen → enhance
明显的：clear→ obvious
充满活力的：vibrant→ dynamic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It was a powerful lesson in empathy and togetherness, leaving a lasting impression on all who participated.
拓展句：It was a powerful lesson in empathy and togetherness, which left a lasting impression on all who participated.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week, our school hosted a unique charity gala, uniting students to aid local impoverished children.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
【高分句型2】The gala became a symbol of unity, where cooperation shone brightly.（运用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句。）
02.（2025·内蒙古包头·二模）
你们学校最近组织了一次植树活动，请以“An Interesting Tree-planting Activity”为题写一篇报道，向校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点及参与者；
2. 植树的过程；
3. 你的体验和感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
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【参考范文】
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
Last Sunday our school organized an interesting tree-planting activity on campus. Almost all students joined it positively.
At the beginning, our teachers explained how to plant trees and then gave us a demonstration. Afterwards, we got involved and cooperated with pleasure. Some dug holes, some planted trees while others watered them. We worked hard, talking and laughing happily all the time, during which our teachers took many photos for us.
We truly enjoyed the activity. Not only did it help us cooperate better and beautify our campus, but also it raised our awareness of protecting the environment.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，是一篇活动报道。要求考生以 “An Interesting Tree-planting Activity” 为题，向校英语报投稿，介绍学校组织的植树活动，包含活动的时间、地点、参与者，植树过程，以及个人的体验和感受。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
示范：demonstration→show/example
参与：got involved→took part/joined in
提高：raised→enhanced/promoted
句式拓展
原句：Last Sunday our school organized an interesting tree - planting activity on campus.
拓展句：Last Sunday, when the weather was fine, our school organized an interesting tree - planting activity on campus.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Last Sunday our school organized an interesting tree - planting activity on campus.（以时间状语 “Last Sunday” 开头，直接点明活动时间，简洁明了地引出主题，使读者迅速了解报道核心内容 ）
【高分句型 2】Some dug holes, some planted trees while others watered them.（运用 “while” 连接并列分句，生动地展现出同学们分工合作的场景，体现出活动中的协作性，使句子富有画面感 ）
【高分句型 3】We worked hard, talking and laughing happily all the time, during which our teachers took many photos for us.（使用现在分词短语 “talking and laughing happily all the time” 作伴随状语，描绘出活动氛围；“during which” 引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明活动期间老师拍照的情况，使句子结构丰富且逻辑连贯 ）
【高分句型 4】Not only did it help us cooperate better and beautify our campus, but also it raised our awareness of protecting the environment.（运用 “Not only...but also...” 的部分倒装结构，强调植树活动带来的多方面积极意义，增强句子的表达效果，突出活动的重要价值 ）
03. (2025届河南省豫西北教研联盟(许洛平)高三一模)
假如你是李华，你一个在英国的笔友William得知上月你校组织了校园义卖(Charity Sale)活动，来信向你询问活动详情，请给他写封回信，内容如下:
1、活动详情；2、你感受。
注意:1、写作词数应为80左右； 2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. William,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. William,
Very glad to know that you are interested in the Charity Sale held in our school last month, I’m willing to give you a brief introduction to the activity.
The Charity Sale started at 2:30 p.m. on November 29, when some teachers and all students in Senior Three got together on the playground. Small booths were set up as arranged to advertise their goods, including food, books and even some greeting cards, some of which were made by themselves. Teachers and students walked around, searching for what they were interested in. It went well and finished at 4:30 p.m.. In the end, all the money earned would go to the students in need. I think it significant and worthwhile to experience this activity, for we can build up our sense of responsibility and join our hands to help others.
Look forward to interesting stories in your school!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国的笔友William写封回信，介绍学校组织的校园义卖(Charity Sale)活动的详情。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
第二步：列提纲(重点词组)
be interested in；be willing to do sth.；get together；on the playground；set up；walk around；search for；in the end；in need；build up；sense of responsibility；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Very glad to know that you are interested in the Charity Sale held in our school last month, I’m willing to give you a brief introduction to the activity.
2. The Charity Sale started at 2:30 p.m. on November 29, when some teachers and all students in Senior Three got together on the playground.
3. Small booths were set up as arranged to advertise their goods, including food, books and even some greeting cards, some of which were made by themselves.
4. Teachers and students walked around searching for what they were interested in.
5. It went well and finished at 4:30 p.m..
6. All the money earned would go to the students in need.
7. I think it significant and worthwhile to experience this activity, for we can build up our sense of responsibility and join our hands to help others.
8. Look forward to interesting stories in your school!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序： In the end
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Very glad to know that you are interested in the Charity Sale held in our school last month, I’m willing to give you a brief introduction to the activity.(that引导宾语从句，held为过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]Small booths were set up as arranged to advertise their goods, including food, books and even some greeting cards, some of which were made by themselves.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]I think it significant and worthwhile to experience this activity, for we can build up our sense of responsibility and join our hands to help others.(it为形式宾语，动词不定式为真正的宾语)
【传统文化相关的活动】
04. （2025·安徽合肥·三模）
假定你是李华。上周末在你的家乡举办了一场鼓王争霸赛（Drum King Championship），请你给酷爱中国传统文化的英国笔友Pal写一封信，介绍比赛的情况和你的感受。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Pal,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Pal,
I hope this letter finds you well. Last weekend, my hometown held the Drum King Championship. It was truly amazing! The competition featured traditional Chinese drums, and drummers from different regions came to show their skills. The atmosphere was electric, with powerful beats and colorful costumes.
I was deeply impressed by the drummers’ rhythm and passion. The audience cheered loudly, and everyone was excited. I felt proud of our traditional culture. It was a great experience, and I wish you could have been there to enjoy it with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Pal写一封信，介绍鼓王争霸赛的情况和你的感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
比赛：competition→contest
热情：passion→enthusiasm
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
2.句式拓展
原句：Last weekend, my hometown held the Drum King Championship. It was truly amazing!
拓展句：Last weekend, my hometown held the Drum King Championship, which was truly amazing.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I hope this letter finds you well. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2] It was a great experience, and I wish you could have been there to enjoy it with me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
05. (2025届江苏省南通、泰州、镇江等市高三上学期第一次调研测试)
假定你是李华，上周五你参加了社区举办的“迎新年写对联”活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 你的收获。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you a couplets writing activity I joined in last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you a couplets writing activity I joined in last Friday. The event took place in our community center, where people gathered to learn about writing traditional Chinese couplets for the New Year. We started with a brief introduction on the history and significance of couplets. Then, a skilled calligrapher demonstrated the technique, and we each got to try our hand at writing our own couplets.
I learned a lot about Chinese culture and the importance of New Year traditions. It was a fun way to connect with my neighbors and express my creativity. I hope you can experience something similar someday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周五参加的社区举办的“迎新年写对联”活动这一情况，给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示：demonstrate → show
有趣的：fun → interesting
重要性：importance→ significance
开始：start → begin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then, a skilled calligrapher demonstrated the technique, and we each got to try our hand at writing our own couplets.
拓展句：Then, a calligrapher who is skilled in calligraphy demonstrated the technique, and we each got to try our hand at writing our own couplets.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The event took place in our community center, where people gathered to learn about writing traditional Chinese couplets for the New Year.(运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope you can experience something similar someday!(hope后运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【环境保护主题相关的活动】
06. (2025·山东日照·一模)
周三你校高三年级学生进行了为期一天的“美丽的大自然”主题研学(learning trip)。假如你是李华，请你给校英语报就本次研学写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 研学的过程；3. 研学的反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Last Wednesday, all the students in Grade Three participated in a one-day learning trip with the theme “Beautiful Nature”.
We set out for the East Mountain and arrived there at 8 am. When we climbed to the top, we were amazed to see the beautiful scenery of the whole city. After that we went to a nearby greenhouse to learn to plant some flowers and feed some animals.
This activity offered us a good chance to have a better understanding of nature. Now we are more aware of the importance of protecting the environment. We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature but also develop our love for the nature.
【导语】本文是一篇活动报道，要求考生根据上周三进行的“美丽的大自然”主题研学活动撰写一篇报道给校英语报。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
出发：set out→ set off
感到惊讶的：amazed→ astonished
看见：see→ catch sight of
爱护：love→ cherish
2.句式拓展
原句：Last Wednesday, all the students in Grade Three participated in a one-day learning trip with the theme “Beautiful Nature”.
拓展句：Last Wednesday, all the students in Grade Three participated in a one-day learning trip whose theme is “Beautiful Nature”.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When we climbed to the top, we were amazed to see the beautiful scenery of the whole city. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】This activity offered us a good chance to have a better understanding of nature.(运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
【科技生活主题的活动报道】
07. （2025·河南新乡·三模）
假定你是李华，你校近期举办了“科普进校园”活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Our school recently hosted an activity called “Promoting Tech on Campus”, bringing cutting-edge technology to campus. Researchers demonstrated AI robotics, conducted chemistry magic shows, and led VR space exploration sessions. The highlight was a drone programming workshop where students coded flight patterns.
This immersive experience transformed abstract textbook concepts into visible wonders. Seeing my classmates’ eyes light up while operating 3D printers, I realized science isn’t just formulas — it’s creative problem-solving. The activity didn’t just display technology but it planted seeds of curiosity. As one visiting scientist remarked, “Today’s hands-on experiments inspire tomorrow’s innovators.” Such an activity will surely inspire us to innovate more in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍“科普进校园”活动并阐述自己的感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
最近：recently → lately
可见的：visible → perceptible
激发：inspire → stimulate
创新：innovate → create
2.句式拓展
原句：Our school recently hosted an activity called “Promoting Tech on Campus”, bringing cutting-edge technology to campus.
拓展句：Our school recently hosted an activity, which is called “Promoting Tech on Campus”, bringing cutting-edge technology to campus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The highlight was a drone programming workshop where students coded flight patterns.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Seeing my classmates’ eyes light up while operating 3D printers, I realized science isn’t just formulas — it’s creative problem-solving.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略、省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【视频文字稿呈现活动】
08.（2025·河北秦皇岛·三模）
假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Simon将到你所就读的学校学习交流一个学期，他十分喜欢社团活动，希望你能拍摄一个视频介绍一下你校的社团活动。请你用英文撰写该视频的文字稿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Simon,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Simon,
I’m excited to introduce the club activities in our school through this video. Every semester, the clubs organize a series of interesting competitions and performances, which not only enhance our skills but also bring a lot of fun.
There are various clubs here, like the music club where you can enjoy singing and playing instruments, and the sports club offering basketball, football and more. Moreover, the science technology club provides a platform for us to explore the mysteries of science and make some cool inventions. The art club allows you to show your creativity.
I’m sure you’ll find your favorite. Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，为加拿大笔友Simon拍摄介绍学校社团活动的视频撰写英文文字稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
令人兴奋的：excited → thrilled
提高，增强：enhance → improve
各种各样的：various → diverse
此外：moreover → besides/in addition
2. 句式拓展
原句：Moreover, the science technology club provides a platform for us to explore the mysteries of science and make some cool inventions.
拓展句：Moreover, the science technology club, which allows us to explore the mysteries of science, also provides a platform to make some cool inventions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Every semester, the clubs organize a series of interesting competitions and performances, which not only enhance our skills but also bring a lot of fun. (运用了关系代词which引导非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m sure you’ll find your favorite. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
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