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第08讲 建议信
目录
01 考情解码·命题预警 2
02 体系构建·思维可视 3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3
考点一 写作技巧 4
知识点1 命题规律 4
知识点2 写作技能提升 4
考点二 经典必背 4
知识点1 常用词汇 4
知识点2 必背开头段 5
知识点3 必背主题句 6
知识点4 必背结尾句 6
知识点5 满分模版必背 7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向 7
知识点1 真题演练 8
知识点2 命题新考向 35
考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年
建议信 选择题 非选择题 2025年北京卷： 联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动 2025年1月浙江卷： 在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象，提出建议 2024年北京卷： 给外国好友Jim提建议：介绍中国的发展成就 2023年新高考1卷和2卷：课后练习口语分组的建议 2023年6月北京卷： “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议
考情分析 一、往年真题特点 1.话题紧扣生活与社会：常围绕校园生活改进（优化食堂饮食、改善图书馆环境）、社会问题解决（减少交通拥堵、推广垃圾分类）、个人发展困惑（学习方法提升、职业规划选择）等话题展开，要求考生结合实际提出可行建议 。 2.任务要求明确：题目通常设定写信人身份（如学生、市民）和具体问题场景，明确要求考生分析问题并提出合理建议，部分题目还会限定建议数量或方向，确保写作内容不偏离主题。 二、命题思路 通过模拟现实中需要提出解决方案的场景，考查学生运用英语分析问题、表达观点和提出建议的能力。重点检验考生能否结合生活经验，用恰当的语言清晰阐述问题，并从不同角度提出切实可行的建议，体现英语在实际问题解决中的应用价值。 三、命题重点 1.内容的逻辑性与可行性：正文需包含问题描述、原因分析和具体建议，各部分逻辑紧密；建议要结合实际，具有可操作性，如针对 “改善校园卫生”，可提出 “增加垃圾桶数量”“开展卫生评比活动” 等具体措施；合理使用连接词（如 To begin with、Furthermore、In conclusion）增强文章连贯性。 2.语气的恰当性与针对性：根据收信人与写信人的关系及身份差异，调整语言风格和语气。给平辈提建议可较直接、亲切；给上级或机构提建议则需更礼貌、委婉，体现尊重与专业性。
复习目标与备考策略 一、复习目标 1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 2.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 3.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 二、备考策略 1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文，建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句，提升写作效率。 2.真题模拟演练：分析近五年真题，总结命题规律与高频考点；按照考试时间要求进行限时训练，提升写作速度与应变能力；对照范文和评分标准，找出自身不足，针对性改进。 3.拓展视野与思维训练：关注时事热点和生活中的各类问题，思考不同解决方案；阅读英语新闻评论、建议类文章，学习他人分析问题和提出建议的思路与表达方式，拓宽写作视角 。
考点一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。
这类信件通常结构清晰，开篇会简要介绍写信的背景或目的，明确指出要讨论的问题。主体部分则详细阐述建议的内容，包括问题的分析、具体的改进措施或解决方案，以及这些建议的可行性和预期效果。
知识点2 写作技能提升
建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。
一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分：
（1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。
（2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
（3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
考点二 经典必背
知识点1 常用词汇
1.give/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
知识点2 必背开头段
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve your spoken English.
我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。
You asked me for advice in the letter about... and here are my suggestions. I think it would be a good idea if you could...
你在信中问了我一些建议，关于……以下是我的建议。如果你能做到的话，我想这将是个好主意
With regard to the problem you mentioned in your last letter, my suggestions are as follows.
关于你上一封信中提到的问题，我的建议如下。
I'm more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on... I'll make some suggestions here.我非常 高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于……的建议。我在这里提一些建议。
I have learned that you have some trouble in ...and 1 would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我得知你在……方面有些困难，我想给你提如下一些建议。
知识点3 必背主题句
As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
知识点4 必背结尾句
I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals helpful.
我希望你现在会发现这些建议/建议会有所帮助。
Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work !
无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!
知识点5 满分模板必背
（模版1）
In recent days, we have to face the problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Second, ____________（举例进一步说明现状）.
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ____________（解决方法一）. For another ____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ____________（解决方法三）.
Personally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）.
Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）.
（模版2）
Dear ______ (称谓)
It is common to see that ______(陈述现象). Not only ______, but also______ (现象的影响). I’m writing to call on us students to ______(呼吁) .
Firstly, we are supposed to ______(建议一). What’s more, it is suggested that ______(建议二). Eventually, whatever possible it’s good to______(建议三) .
Such measures can definitely make a marked improvement in______(在什么方面提高), we would like all of you to attach importance to______(主题)!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
考点三 体悟真题与新考向
知识点1 真题演练
1. 2025年北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
　　1. 提出的建议; 2. 建议的理由。
　　提示词：倡议 proposal
　　注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I'm glad to receive your email. I'm more than willing to offer you some suggestions on the proposal.
I suggest you focus on environmental protection. You can propose a campaign to encourage teenagers around the world to reduce plastic waste. The reason is that plastic pollution has become a serious global problem. It not only harms the environment but also affects the health of animals and humans. By launching this campaign, we can make a difference and raise people's awareness of environmental protection.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to your excellent proposal.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是回复朋友Jim关于提案建议的书信，两篇范文分别围绕“环保活动”和“文化交流项目”展开，符合应用文写作规范，内容充实且逻辑清晰。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
乐意做：be willing to → be eager to
提议：propose → put forward
增强：enhance → strengthen
打破刻板印象：break down stereotypes → dispel prejudices
2. 句式拓展
原句：You can propose a campaign to encourage teenagers around the world to reduce plastic waste.
拓展句：It would be advisable to propose a campaign that encourages teenagers worldwide to reduce plastic waste, as this issue has reached urgent proportions.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The reason is that plastic pollution has become a serious global problem.（使用“the reason is that...”表语从句，清晰阐释建议的核心依据）
[高分句型2] By launching this campaign, we can make a difference and raise people's awareness of environmental protection.（用“by + 动名词”结构说明行动方式，“make a difference”短语增强说服力）
2. 2025年1月浙江卷
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
(1) 陈述看法; (2) 提出建议。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My views on filming short videos on campus Good morning, everyone!Today, I’d like to share my thoughts on filming short videos on campus. Just as every coin has two sides, filming on campus has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it’s a great way to record beautiful moments and express creativity. On the other hand, it may affect learning and even disturb others.Therefore, I suggest we should film at suitable times and places and avoid distracting classmates. Let’s make our campus a harmonious and inspiring environment.Thank you!
【导语】本篇是英语课“一分钟演讲”活动的演讲稿，围绕部分同学在校园内拍摄短视频的现象，阐述看法并提出建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
表达：express→convey
影响：affect→impact
干扰：disturb→interfere
和谐的：harmonious→peaceful
2. 句式拓展
原句：On the one hand, it’s a great way to record beautiful moments and express creativity.
拓展句：On the one hand, it’s a great way that can be used to record beautiful moments and convey creativity.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Just as every coin has two sides, filming on campus has both advantages and disadvantages.（as引导方式状语从句，生动形象地引出对校园拍摄短视频现象的辩证看法）
[高分句型2] Therefore, I suggest we should film at suitable times and places and avoid distracting classmates.（使用虚拟语气“suggest sb. should do”，明确提出合理建议，增强说服力）
3. 2024年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
4. 2023年6月新高考1&2卷
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
5. 2023年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6. 2022年全国乙卷
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
缺乏：lack→shortage
加强：strengthen→enhance
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
7. 2022年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Jim.
How's everything
I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically,how to develop a paragraph,and how to structure an essay
The talk will be about an hour,and you can decide on a date at your convenience.Please let me know which platform you'll be using It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours.,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是红星中学高三学生李华邀请英国好友Jim开展线上英语写作经验交流的电子邮件，内容涵盖建议交流内容及原因、交流时间和相关事项，符合100词左右的应用文写作要求。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
薄弱的：be weak in → be poor at
建议：suggestions → tips
逻辑地：logically → coherently
决定：decide on → confirm
2. 句式拓展
原句：Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation.
拓展句：Since our classmates often struggle with essay structure, they seem to be weak in organisational skills.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay （使用“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语，并列三个写作痛点，清晰呈现交流需求）
[高分句型2] The talk will be about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience.（用and连接两个分句，前半部分说明时长，后半部分体现对对方时间的尊重，语气得体）
[高分句型3] It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.（使用it作形式主语，if引导条件状语从句，委婉提出互动请求，符合邀请信的礼貌原则）
8. 2021年6月全国乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart online learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括：
分析优势及不足；
提出学习建议。
注意：1.词数100词左右；2.题目和首句以为你写好。
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【参考范文】
Be smart online learners
Just like the old saying goes, "each coin has two sides." On the one hand, providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand. On the other hand, what we learn online isn't necessarily what we need, not to mention its constant damage to our eyes.
For me, online learning is, after all, just a tool. It's not the new method itself but the person who use it that really matters. To become a smart online learner, not only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take lessons online. What's more, on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.
Thanks, everyone. Hope we all could be smart online learners.
【导语】这篇发言稿属于应用文，以 “Be smart online learners” 为主题，通过阐述线上学习的优势与不足，提出学习建议，旨在引导听众成为优秀的在线学习者，结构清晰，观点明确。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
工具：tool→instrument
选择：choose→select
2.句式拓展
原句：On the one hand, providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand.
拓展句：On the one hand, since online learning provides an easy access to a multitude of excellent learning sources, it serves as a valuable helping hand for learners.
原句：What's more, on condition that we could apply what we learn online to our daily life, online learning would be more meaningful.
拓展句：Furthermore, if we can effectively utilize the knowledge we acquire online in our daily life situations, online learning will undoubtedly become more meaningful and practical.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Just like the old saying goes, "each coin has two sides."（引用谚语开篇，增强文章文化底蕴，自然引出主题，为下文论述做铺垫 ）
[高分句型 2] On the one hand, providing an easy access to plenty of excellent learning sources, online learning is really a helping hand.（现在分词短语 “providing an easy access to...” 作伴随状语，说明线上学习的优势，使句子结构紧凑，表达流畅）
[高分句型 3] It's not the new method itself but the person who use it that really matters.（强调句结构，突出人的主观能动性在在线学习中的关键作用，增强说服力 ）
[高分句型 4] Not only should we carefully choose from countless alternatives we may face, but extra attention needs to be attached when we take lessons online.（not only 位于句首引起部分倒装，强调成为聪明在线学习者应采取的措施，使句式富有变化，吸引听众 ）
9. （2019北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
词汇积累
show you around 带你参观；
take high-speed trains to both cities 坐高铁到这两个城市；
take summer wear plus an umbrella with you 带上夏季服装和雨伞；
Looking forward to your arrival 期待你的到来。
【点睛】
本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。 where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。
10. 【2019·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High school. Hearing that you will be sent to our school to participate in a one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I feel excited to give some advice on the speech about western art, which will be given by you. Here are some of my suggestions.
From my perspective, among all the themes on western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I would like to have a better understanding of music, for a great number of my classmates are fond of music. To enhance our knowledge, I would appreciate it if you add some information about the history and development of western music. In addition, some excellent works of music and the introduction of several distinguished musicians would be a good way to broaden our horizon.
Anyway, I can't wait to meet you from the bottom of my heart!
Thank you for your time!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】此篇邮件属于应用文，是李津就英方教师 Chris 将开展的西方艺术讲座，向其表达自己期望的讲座话题、原因、感兴趣内容及收获期待，符合信息沟通类邮件的写作需求。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
建议：advice→suggestions
观点：perspective→viewpoint
杰出的：distinguished→eminent
2.句式拓展
原句：Hearing that you will be sent to our school to participate in a one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I feel excited to give some advice on the speech about western art, which will be given by you.
拓展句：When I heard that you will be sent to our school to take part in a one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I was filled with excitement and eager to give some advice on the speech about western art that you will deliver.
原句：To enhance our knowledge, I would appreciate it if you add some information about the history and development of western music.
拓展句：In order to enhance our knowledge and have a more in - depth understanding of western music, I would truly appreciate it if you could add some detailed information about the long history and continuous development of western music.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Hearing that you will be sent to our school to participate in a one-week communication activity on behalf of our partner-school, I feel excited to give some advice on the speech about western art, which will be given by you.（现在分词短语作时间状语，同时 “which” 引导非限制性定语从句修饰 “speech”，使句子开头自然流畅，且信息丰富 ）
[高分句型 2] From my perspective, among all the themes on western culture like music, drawing and dancing, I would like to have a better understanding of music, for a great number of my classmates are fond of music.（“from my perspective” 表明观点，“among...like...” 列举范围，“for” 引导原因状语从句，阐述选择理由，使句子逻辑连贯 ）
[高分句型 3] I would appreciate it if you add some information about the history and development of western music.（“I would appreciate it if...” 是经典的委婉表达句式，用于提出请求，符合邮件礼貌交流的语气 ）
11. (2018全国卷I)
假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括：1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪
注意：1.词数不少于80；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
I am delighted to learn that you will visit your Chinese friend in his house soon. According to the questions you raised, I'd like to offer you the following advice.
Firstly, you should confirm the arrival time with him before your visit. It's better to turn up 5 minutes in advance. Besides, I recommend that you should bring a proper gift with you, which can be a prime wine, a selected skin care product or some popular honey produced in New Zealand. I think the family will appreciate any of them as they are quite popular in China. Most importantly, Chinese table manners are very different from yours. What's considered to be polite is taking food just presented in front of you with a spoon or chopsticks. Also, don't worry if they keep filling your bowl with various food, because it always means welcome and friendship in our culture, which you can feel free to enjoy.
I can't wait to see you in China! Hope you have a pleasant trip!
With love,
Li Hua
【导语】这篇范文属于应用文写作中的邮件体裁，是李华回复新西兰朋友 Terry做客中国朋友家相关习俗的邮件，需详细且准确地告知到达时间、合适礼物及餐桌礼仪等内容，以帮助朋友更好地融入社交场合。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→thrilled
建议：offer advice→give suggestions
提前：in advance→ahead of time
2.句式拓展
原句：Firstly, you should confirm the arrival time with him before your visit. It's better to turn up 5 minutes in advance.
拓展句：Firstly, before you visit your Chinese friend, you should confirm the arrival time with him, and it would be better if you could turn up 5 minutes ahead of time, which shows your respect and punctuality.
原句：What's considered to be polite is taking food just presented in front of you with a spoon or chopsticks.
拓展句：What is generally considered polite in Chinese dining culture is to take the food that is directly in front of you using a spoon or chopsticks, as this follows the traditional rules of sharing and etiquette.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] I am delighted to learn that you will visit your Chinese friend in his house soon.（that 引导宾语从句，作为 “learn” 的宾语，简洁明了地引出邮件话题 ）
[高分句型 2] I recommend that you should bring a proper gift with you, which can be a prime wine, a selected skin care product or some popular honey produced in New Zealand.（that 引导宾语从句，使用虚拟语气 “should + 动词原形”，“which” 引导非限制性定语从句，对礼物进行补充说明，丰富句子内容 ）
[高分句型 3] What's considered to be polite is taking food just presented in front of you with a spoon or chopsticks.（what 引导主语从句，“presented in front of you” 是过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰 “food”，句子结构多样且合理 ）
[高分句型 4] Also, don't worry if they keep filling your bowl with various food, because it always means welcome and friendship in our culture, which you can feel free to enjoy.（if 引导条件状语从句，because 引导原因状语从句，“which” 引导非限制性定语从句，多种从句结合，清晰地解释了餐桌礼仪现象及其文化含义 ）
12. 2018年6月高考真题北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50； (2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的邮件体裁，是李华回复英国朋友 Jim 关于来北京上大学咨询的邮件，需包含表示欢迎、推荐大学、建议准备工作等内容，文章紧扣主题，有效完成了信息传达与交流的任务。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
建议：suggest→recommend
提前：in advance→ahead of time
2. 句式拓展
原句：First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
拓展句：First of all, I would like to express my warmest welcome to you, and I am firmly convinced that you will have the most memorable experience during your college years in Beijing, where you can explore a vibrant city full of history and modernity.
原句：Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China.
拓展句：Since I learned about your keen interest in Chinese culture, I strongly recommend that you apply for Peking University, which is renowned as one of the top - tier universities in China and offers an excellent academic environment for cultural studies.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.（and 连接两个并列句，后一句中 “ I am sure + that 从句” 表达确信，自然传递对朋友的欢迎与祝福 ）
[高分句型 2] Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China.（现在分词短语 “Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture” 作原因状语，简洁明了地说明推荐大学的依据，使句子结构紧凑 ）
[高分句型 3] Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture.（where 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 “Chinese Literature major”，进一步阐述专业优势，丰富句子内涵 ）
13 2017年高考真题北京卷
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行" 或者 "泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请您给他回信。内容包括：
1．你建议的线路； 2．你的理由； 3．你的祝愿.
注意：1．词数不少于50； 2．开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是李华回复英国朋友 Jim关于中国旅行线路选择咨询的信件，需明确给出建议线路，阐述充分理由，并送上祝愿，以满足朋友需求，体现书信的交流功能。
【词汇积累】
推荐：recommended→suggested
更喜欢：prefer→favor
观光景点：sightseeing spots→scenic spots
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.（“of + 范围” 结构，简洁地引出对两条旅行线路的总体评价，为后文个人推荐做铺垫 ）
[高分句型 2] Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.（同位语 “the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization” 对 “the Yangtze” 进行补充说明，丰富句子信息，突出长江的重要地位 ）
[高分句型 3] You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.（简单直接地阐述旅行的收获，语言简洁明了，符合书信简洁交流的特点 ）
[高分句型 4] Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.（“with + 名词短语” 的复合结构作伴随状语，生动地描绘出长江沿线的景色特点，使句子更具画面感 ）
14 2015年高考真题四川卷
假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Andaman.
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Hi Sharon，
This is Li Hua．I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin．I am quite interested in it．I think I'm fit for it．As a student，I have been learning Mandarin for many yea rs．In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life． So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin．Learning Mandarin takes time，so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．Besides，you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes．Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．
In your post，you say you can teach English as a reward．It is just what I want．I'm eager to improve my English．So，if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin，you can also help me improve my English．We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese，so that we can improve our oral speaking．Hope for you early reply!
Yours,
Li Xia

【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的电子邮件体裁，是李夏回复美国留学生 Sharon，表达帮助其提高普通话水平的意愿，同时说明自身优势、给出学习建议并提出英语学习需求。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
胜任：be fit for→be qualified for
日常的：daily→routine
进步：progress→advancement
2.句式拓展
原句：I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.
拓展句：Upon reading your post, I came to know that you are eager to enhance your Mandarin proficiency.
原句：So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
拓展句：Therefore, I possess strong confidence in my ability to assist you in your Mandarin learning journey.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] In addition，I am Chinese，which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life．（which 引导非限制性定语从句，对前面 “我是中国人” 这一事实进行补充说明，自然地阐述了自己能胜任辅导的理由）
[高分句型二] Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning，by which you are sure to make great progress．（by which 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 “Speaking and listening”，强调听说对于语言学习的重要性以及能带来的积极效果，使文章表达更具逻辑性
15. 2014年安徽卷
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了＂HEART-TO-HEART＂专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
（1）表示理解并给予安慰； （2）提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
（1）词数120左右；
（2）信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
（3）信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
Firstly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And finally, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的回信体裁，是编辑 Jamie 回复求助学生 Worried，针对其容易发脾气影响学习生活的困扰，表达理解与安慰，并提出解决问题的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
困扰：bad time→tough situation
发脾气：lose temper→get angry
控制：control→manage
后悔：regret→feel remorse
2.句式拓展
原句：The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.
拓展句：The fact is that every individual is bound to experience phases where everything appears to go awry, thus there’s no need for you to be overly anxious.
原句：Here are three useful tips:
拓展句：Now, I’d like to put forward three practical suggestions as follows:
【点睛】
[高分句型一] The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.（“The truth is” 后接省略 that 的表语从句，直接点明道理，给予安慰；when 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 “periods”，进一步解释情况，使表达更具体）
[高分句型二] This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.（“of letting your anger out” 为介词短语作后置定语，解释 “a good way” 的具体内容；“without hurting others or yourself” 作伴随状语，补充说明释放愤怒的前提条件，使句子逻辑清晰）
[高分句型三] Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.（“as” 引导原因状语从句，解释进行户外活动的原因，使建议有理有据，增强说服力 ）
16 2013·四川卷
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1．说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2．介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3．描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：
1．词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.
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【参考范文】
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed.As a student, we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.
I'm sure “repeat” is a best habit.Do you develop the habit If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers have taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master.How to develop the habit？Set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan; don't stop.
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness. How to overcome the shortage I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework.And then I do it little by little.Maybe I can correct my mistakes in this way.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，文章围绕学习习惯展开论述，强调了良好学习习惯的重要性，介绍了 “重复” 这一习惯的培养方法，并探讨如何克服做作业粗心的问题。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文。时态：文章主要阐述一般性观点和方法，时态为一般现在时。结构：采用总分结构，先提出讨论学习习惯的必要性，再分别论述 “重复” 习惯和克服粗心问题。
要求：1. 表明学习习惯的重要性；2. 阐述具体学习习惯及培养方法；3. 提出解决学习中常见问题的办法。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
discuss learning habits；good learning habits；pay attention to；improve study；develop the habit；set a timetable；stick to；make mistakes；overcome the shortage
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。例如：It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. ；We should repeat what the teachers have taught us again and again.
第四步：连句成篇
表示文章结构顺序：先总述学习习惯的重要性，再分别阐述具体习惯和问题解决方法。2. 表示因果关系：If...we should... ；表示并列关系：and；表示条件关系：as long as
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章内容围绕主题展开，逻辑较为清晰，涵盖了学习习惯相关的重要方面。使用了一些常见的连接词和表达方式，如 “and”“If”“as long as” 等，使文章具有一定连贯性。但文章也存在一些不足，语言表达上存在错误，如 “make your study go to succeed” 应改为 “make your study successful”，“a best habit” 应改为 “the best habit” ；部分论述较为简略，缺乏具体事例支撑 ，如在阐述 “重复” 习惯和克服粗心问题时，可增加更多个人经历或具体场景描述，使文章更具说服力和可读性。
17. 2012 年四川卷
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1.对英语学习的认识； 2.自己目前的英语水平；
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题； 4.对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher. English, to me, is not just a subject but a powerful tool connecting me to the world. With it, I can explore diverse cultures and gain access to abundant global knowledge.
Currently, I have a fair command of basic grammar and a vocabulary large enough for daily reading. However, my oral English is relatively weak, making it a bit of a struggle for me to communicate fluently with others. Also, when faced with complex reading materials, I often find it difficult to fully understand the implied meanings.
To improve my English, I sincerely hope you can organize more group discussions. This way, we can practice speaking in a relaxed environment. Additionally, could you recommend some interesting English books Reading them would surely help expand my vocabulary and deepen my understanding of English.
Thank you!
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是大学新生李华应英语老师 Ms Li 要求，阐述对英语学习的认识、自身英语水平、存在问题，并提出教学建议的信件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
认识：understanding→perception
水平：level→proficiency
存在：exist→remain
建议：suggestion→proposal
2.句式拓展
原句：English, to me, is not just a subject but a powerful tool connecting me to the world.
拓展句：From my perspective, English is not merely an academic subject; instead, it serves as a potent instrument that links me to the global community.
原句：Currently, I have a fair command of basic grammar and a vocabulary large enough for daily reading.
拓展句：At present, I possess a reasonable grasp of fundamental grammar rules and a vocabulary that is adequate for my daily reading tasks.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] English, to me, is not just a subject but a powerful tool connecting me to the world.（“not just...but...” 结构形成递进，突出英语的重要性；“connecting me to the world” 现在分词短语作后置定语，修饰 “tool”，简洁地说明英语的作用，使表达更精炼）
[高分句型二] However, my oral English is relatively weak, making it a bit of a struggle for me to communicate fluently with others.（“making it a bit of a struggle...” 现在分词短语作结果状语，自然地阐述口语薄弱导致的结果；“it” 作形式宾语，真正的宾语是 “to communicate fluently with others”，避免句子头重脚轻，使句子结构更合理）
[高分句型三] Additionally, could you recommend some interesting English books Reading them would surely help expand my vocabulary and deepen my understanding of English.（以委婉的疑问句提出建议，语气更礼貌得体；“Reading them would...” 动名词短语作主语，直接表明阅读英语书籍的好处，逻辑清晰，增强说服力）
知识点2 命题新考向
【传统文化相关的建议信】
01.（高三精选模拟题）
假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：
1．书房采用中国传统风格设计；
2．提供蕴含中国文化的书籍；
3．定期举办读书交流会或中国传统文化讲座等。
注意：1．词数80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Smith,
I’m more than pleased to know that we are planning to open a Chinese study in our school. As an exchange student from China, I’m happy to give my suggestions.
Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere. Secondly, it may be helpful to offer some excellent books that reflect Chinese culture to help readers raise their reading interest and broaden their cultural horizons. In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.
Hope my ideas will be helpful!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生作为在伦敦某中学的交换生，学校即将开设一个中国书房，现要求考生给学校负责人Smith写一封建议信，提出相应的意见。
第一步：词汇积累
非常：more than→extremely/very
开心的：happy → delighted
建议：suggestion→ recommendation
吸引人的：appealing→ attractive
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.
拓展句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, which will provide readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）
【高分句型2】 In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.（运用了动名词作主语）
02.（高三精选模拟题）
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Caroline对中国传统文化很感兴趣, 请你给她写一封信, 内容包括∶
1. 提出学习建议(内容、途径等); 2. 希望加强交流。
注意∶
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Caroline.
Learning that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to offer you some advice on how to have a better understanding of it.
Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, which can be reflected in various fields, such as ancient Chinese poetry, acupuncture, calligraphy, Tai Chi and so on. You can choose one to learn to gain deep insights into traditional Chinese culture. Engage yourself in all kinds of traditional culture activities if possible. If you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I will be glad to help you, as I have been practicing it these days. Also. you can turn to a local Confucius Institute for help.
I believe you are bound to learn it well. Hope to strengthen cultural eschanges with you.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学习中国传统文化的学习内容和学习途径，给英国笔友Caroline给出建议，并表达加强文化交流的愿望。
第一步：词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in → be crazy about
一定会……：be bound to do → not fail to do
相信：believe → be convinced that
各种各样的：all kinds of → a wide range of
第二步：句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to offer you some advice on how to have a better understanding of it.
拓展局：Knowing that you have a strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, I am more than glad to provide some tips on how to learn more about it.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】If you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I will be glad to help you, as I have been practicing it these days.（运用了If引导的田间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, which can be reflected in various fields, such as ancient Chinese poetry, acupuncture, calligraphy, Tai Chi and so on.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，以及表达中华文化的acupuncture, calligraphy等词汇）
【二选一推荐类的建议信】
03. (2025·山东菏泽·一模)
假定你是李华，你校新成立了国画社团(Traditional Chinese Painting Club)和民乐社团(Folk Music Club)，你的新西兰同学Richard对这两个社团很感兴趣，但不知如何选择，写信向你求助，请你给他回信，内容如下：
1. 给出建议并说明理由；
2. 告知申请方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Richard,
Thrilled to learn about your interest in the newly-established clubs in our school, I strongly recommend the Traditional Chinese Painting Club to you.
The club was founded by a group of Chinese painting lovers, with several highly experienced art teachers providing guidance. It offers various activities, ranging from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lectures on how to sharpen your painting skills. It’s an opportunity to dive into the amazing world of ink painting and have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture.
If you want to apply, please fill in the application form on the club’s official website before November 25th. I believe you’ll find it a rewarding and fulfilling experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校新成立了国画社团(Traditional Chinese Painting Club)和民乐社团(Folk Music Club)，要求考生给对这两个社团很感兴趣但不知如何选择的新西兰同学Richard回信，给出建议并说明理由和申请方式。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled → exhilarated
各种各样的：various → a variety of/all kinds of
对……有更深入的理解：have a deeper understanding of → gain a better insight into
令人满足的：fulfilling → satisfying
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It offers various activities, ranging from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lectures on how to sharpen your painting skills.
拓展句：It offers various activities, which range from the visit to Chinese painting galleries to the lectures on how to sharpen your painting skills.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】If you want to apply, please fill in the application form on the club’s official website before November 25th.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe you’ll find it a rewarding and fulfilling experience.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句)
【关于公共服务的建议信】
04. （高三精选模拟题）
假设你是某国际学校的李华，在上个月的体育节中，由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间，同学们的热情欢呼以及赛场噪音，严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息，请你向学生会写一份信。
1. 写信目的； 2. 说明情况；3. 提出建议。
要求 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
I’m Li Hua.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Student Union,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to address a concern about the recent sports day at our school.
While enjoyable, it caused disruptions to our lunch break. Certain events were scheduled during the midday break, resulting in enthusiastic cheering and noise from the sports field. This greatly affected our ability to rest and recharge. I understand the importance of promoting an active school environment, but it’s vital to ensure students have a chance to rest.
I suggest rescheduling these events to afternoons or weekends so that all students can enjoy without compromising their lunch break. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在上个月的体育节中，由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间，同学们的热情欢呼以及赛场噪音，严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息。要求考第08讲 建议信
目录
01 考情解码·命题预警 2
02 体系构建·思维可视 3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3
考点一 写作技巧 4
知识点1 命题规律 4
知识点2 写作技能提升 4
考点二 经典必背 4
知识点1 常用词汇 4
知识点2 必背开头段 5
知识点3 必背主题句 6
知识点4 必背结尾句 6
知识点5 满分模版必背 7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向 7
知识点1 真题演练 8
知识点2 命题新考向 17
考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年
建议信 选择题 非选择题 2025年北京卷： 联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动 2025年1月浙江卷： 在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象，提出建议 2024年北京卷： 给外国好友Jim提建议：介绍中国的发展成就 2023年新高考1卷和2卷：课后练习口语分组的建议 2023年6月北京卷： “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议
考情分析 一、往年真题特点 1.话题紧扣生活与社会：常围绕校园生活改进（优化食堂饮食、改善图书馆环境）、社会问题解决（减少交通拥堵、推广垃圾分类）、个人发展困惑（学习方法提升、职业规划选择）等话题展开，要求考生结合实际提出可行建议 。 2.任务要求明确：题目通常设定写信人身份（如学生、市民）和具体问题场景，明确要求考生分析问题并提出合理建议，部分题目还会限定建议数量或方向，确保写作内容不偏离主题。 二、命题思路 通过模拟现实中需要提出解决方案的场景，考查学生运用英语分析问题、表达观点和提出建议的能力。重点检验考生能否结合生活经验，用恰当的语言清晰阐述问题，并从不同角度提出切实可行的建议，体现英语在实际问题解决中的应用价值。 三、命题重点 1.内容的逻辑性与可行性：正文需包含问题描述、原因分析和具体建议，各部分逻辑紧密；建议要结合实际，具有可操作性，如针对 “改善校园卫生”，可提出 “增加垃圾桶数量”“开展卫生评比活动” 等具体措施；合理使用连接词（如 To begin with、Furthermore、In conclusion）增强文章连贯性。 2.语气的恰当性与针对性：根据收信人与写信人的关系及身份差异，调整语言风格和语气。给平辈提建议可较直接、亲切；给上级或机构提建议则需更礼貌、委婉，体现尊重与专业性。
复习目标与备考策略 一、复习目标 1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 3.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 4.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 二、备考策略 1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文，建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句，提升写作效率。 2.真题模拟演练：分析近五年真题，总结命题规律与高频考点；按照考试时间要求进行限时训练，提升写作速度与应变能力；对照范文和评分标准，找出自身不足，针对性改进。 3.拓展视野与思维训练：关注时事热点和生活中的各类问题，思考不同解决方案；阅读英语新闻评论、建议类文章，学习他人分析问题和提出建议的思路与表达方式，拓宽写作视角 。
考点一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。
这类信件通常结构清晰，开篇会简要介绍写信的背景或目的，明确指出要讨论的问题。主体部分则详细阐述建议的内容，包括问题的分析、具体的改进措施或解决方案，以及这些建议的可行性和预期效果。
知识点2 写作技能提升
建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。
一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分：
（1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。
（2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
（3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。
考点二 经典必背
知识点1 常用词汇
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
知识点2 必背开头段
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve your spoken English.
我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。
You asked me for advice in the letter about... and here are my suggestions. I think it would be a good idea if you could...
你在信中问了我一些建议，关于……以下是我的建议。如果你能做到的话，我想这将是个好主意
With regard to the problem you mentioned in your last letter, my suggestions are as follows.
关于你上一封信中提到的问题，我的建议如下。
I'm more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on... I'll make some suggestions here.我非常 高兴收到你的来信，询问我关于……的建议。我在这里提一些建议。
I have learned that you have some trouble in ...and 1 would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.
我得知你在……方面有些困难，我想给你提如下一些建议。
知识点3 必背主题句
As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be protected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
知识点4 必背结尾句
I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals helpful.
我希望你现在会发现这些建议/建议会有所帮助。
Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work !
无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!
知识点5 满分模板必背
（模版1）
In recent days, we have to face the problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ____________（说明A的现状）. Second, ____________（举例进一步说明现状）.
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ____________（解决方法一）. For another ____________（解决方法二）. Finally, ____________（解决方法三）.
Personally, I believe that____________（我的解决方法）.
Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________（带来的好处）.
（模版2）
Dear ______ (称谓)
It is common to see that ______(陈述现象). Not only ______, but also______ (现象的影响). I’m writing to call on us students to ______(呼吁) .
Firstly, we are supposed to ______(建议一). What’s more, it is suggested that ______(建议二). Eventually, whatever possible it’s good to______(建议三) .
Such measures can definitely make a marked improvement in______(在什么方面提高), we would like all of you to attach importance to______(主题)!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
考点三 体悟真题与新考向
知识点1 真题演练
1. 2025年北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
　　1. 提出的建议; 2. 建议的理由。
　　提示词：倡议 proposal
　　注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 2025年1月浙江卷
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
(1) 陈述看法; (2) 提出建议。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus.
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3. 2024年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4. 2023年6月新高考1&2卷
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 2023年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
6. 2022年全国乙卷
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
7. 2022年6月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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8. 2021年6月全国乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以 Be smart online learner 写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括：
分析优势及不足；
提出学习建议。
注意：1.词数100词左右；2.题目和首句以为你写好。
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9. （2019北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours,
Li Hua
10. 【2019·天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
11. (2018全国卷I)
假如你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗, 请你回复邮件, 内容包括：1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪
注意：1.词数不少于80；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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12. 2018年6月高考真题北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50； (2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13. 2017年高考真题北京卷
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行" 或者 "泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请您给他回信。内容包括：
1．你建议的线路； 2．你的理由； 3．你的祝愿.
注意：1．词数不少于50； 2．开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14 2015年高考真题四川卷
假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Andaman.
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15. 2014年安徽卷
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了＂HEART-TO-HEART＂专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
（1）表示理解并给予安慰； （2）提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
（1）词数120左右；
（2）信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
（3）信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
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16. 2013·四川卷
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1．说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2．介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3．描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：
1．词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.
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17. 2012 年四川卷
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1.对英语学习的认识； 2.自己目前的英语水平；
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题； 4.对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：1.词数100左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Li Hua
知识点2 命题新考向
【传统文化相关的建议信】
01.（高三精选模拟题）
假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：
1．书房采用中国传统风格设计；
2．提供蕴含中国文化的书籍；
3．定期举办读书交流会或中国传统文化讲座等。
注意：1．词数80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
02.（高三精选模拟题）
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Caroline对中国传统文化很感兴趣, 请你给她写一封信, 内容包括∶
1. 提出学习建议(内容、途径等); 2. 希望加强交流。
注意∶
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【二选一推荐类的建议信】
03. (2025·山东菏泽·一模)
假定你是李华，你校新成立了国画社团(Traditional Chinese Painting Club)和民乐社团(Folk Music Club)，你的新西兰同学Richard对这两个社团很感兴趣，但不知如何选择，写信向你求助，请你给他回信，内容如下：
1. 给出建议并说明理由；
2. 告知申请方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【关于公共服务的建议信】
04. （高三精选模拟题）
假设你是某国际学校的李华，在上个月的体育节中，由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间，同学们的热情欢呼以及赛场噪音，严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息，请你向学生会写一份信。
1. 写信目的； 2. 说明情况；3. 提出建议。
要求 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
I’m Li Hua.
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Yours,
Li Hua
05. （高三精选模拟题）
你所居住的小区，虽地处闹市，但因建成较早，当年规划的300个停车位早已不能满足500户居民的停车需求。小区业委会(owners’ committee)现正就如何缓解小区停车难这一问题征求居民们意见。在小区公众号留言，谈谈你的看法。留言中包括：
1.你的建议; 2.你的理由。
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【关于科技发展的建议信】
06. （高三精选模拟题）
假定你是李华，最近收到好友Ben来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 对使用人工智能完成作业的看法； 2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【建议与倡议结合】
07. （高三精选模拟题）
假如你是一名英语课代表，为了帮助同学们提高学习英语的效率，你用英语给全班同学写了一封倡议信，倡导“坚持每天高效晨读”，内容如下：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 你对晨读的看法和建议；
3. 希望大家积极响应。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My dear fellow students,
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【建议与演讲结合】
08 （高三精选模拟题）
假定你是李华，从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，你觉得活动很好，但存在不足之处。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你对活动的评价；
2．说明问题并提出改进建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

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