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第09讲 感谢信
目录
01 考情解码·命题预警 2
02 体系构建·思维可视 3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3
考点一 写作技巧 4
知识点1 命题规律 4
知识点2 写作技能提升 4
考点二 经典必背 4
知识点1 常用词汇 4
知识点2 必背开头段 5
知识点3 必背主题句 6
知识点4 必背结尾句 6
知识点5 满分模版必背 7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向 7
知识点1 真题演练 7
知识点2 命题新考向 10
考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年
感谢信 选择题 非选择题 无 无 （2023以前的感谢信） 2021年6月天津卷 英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，表达感谢。 2020年7月北京卷 请外籍指导教师Jim推荐一名外籍指导教师，表达感谢。 2019年6月浙江卷 感谢Alex的帮助
考情分析 一、往年真题特点 1.话题贴近生活实际：常围绕日常生活中的帮助与关怀设置情境，如感谢老师的教导与鼓励、感谢朋友在困难时的陪伴、感谢陌生人的善意之举，或对收到礼物、获得机会表达感激，要求考生结合具体事例体现真挚情感。 2.任务指令明确：题目通常会给定写信人和收信人身份，以及感谢的具体事由，要求考生在信中清晰阐述被帮助的过程、表达感激之情，并说明帮助带来的积极影响，确保写作内容紧扣主题 。 二、命题思路 通过模拟现实中表达感激的场景，考查学生运用英语进行情感交流和有效沟通的能力。重点检验考生能否用恰当的语言描述被帮助的经历，真挚地传递感恩之情，并展现出英语在人际交往中表达情感的实际应用价值。 三、命题重点 1.语言表达的真挚性与准确性：需运用表达感谢的核心句式（如 I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for...），搭配情感丰富的词汇（grateful、appreciative、touched 等）传递真诚态度；同时保证语法和词汇使用准确，避免因语言错误削弱情感表达。 2.内容完整与逻辑清晰：正文需涵盖感谢事由（如 “在我生病时帮我补习功课”）、具体帮助过程、表达感激、说明帮助的意义或对自己的影响等关键要点；运用连接词（如 Firstly...Moreover...Finally）使内容层次分明，清晰呈现感谢的逻辑链条。
复习目标与备考策略 一、复习目标 1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 3.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 4.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 二、备考策略 1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文，建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句，提升写作效率。 2.多样化场景模拟训练：设定不同身份和情境（如感谢外国友人的接待、感谢医护人员的照顾）进行写作练习，提升在复杂场景下灵活运用语言、调整语气的能力，增强考场应变能力。
考点一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
接受别人的帮助、邀请、馈赠、照顾后向对方表示感激。这种题型通常要求考生用英文写一封感谢信，内容可能涉及对某人提供的帮助、发出的邀请、赠送的礼物或给予的照顾表示由衷的感谢。在撰写时，考生需详细描述感谢的具体原因，体现对方的善举对自己的积极影响，并表达对未来可能的回报或继续保持联系的愿望。
知识点2 写作技能提升
第1段，开门见山，表达感谢之情
第2段，应具体阐述对方给予的帮助内容，比如是在学业上的耐心指导，还是在生活上的无私援助。描述这些帮助如何具体地解决了自己的难题，或是如何让自己在困境中看到了希望。同时，考生还需详细叙述自己为何对此深感感激，这些帮助对自己产生了哪些积极的影响，比如提高了学习效率，或是增强了面对困难的勇气。
第3段，需再次向对方表达诚挚的感谢。此时，感谢的语气应更加真挚，可以提及对方的善举让自己深受感动，或是对自己的未来产生了深远的影响。此外，还可以表达希望未来有机会回报对方的善意，或是希望双方能保持联系，继续深化友谊。这样的结尾不仅体现了考生对对方的尊重与感激，也为整封信画上了一个圆满的句号。
考点二 经典必背
知识点1 常用词汇
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！
10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访
14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名胜
知识点2 必背开头段
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for…
我想在这封信中表达我衷心的意见。衷心的)感谢你的帮助。。
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
我怀着深深的感激给你写了这封信来表达。
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
我写这封信是因为我感谢你。
I’d like to express/ convey my great appreciation for your timely help and support.
我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示感谢。
I'm writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care during my stay in Canada, without which I couldn't have enjoyed myself so much.
我写信向您表达我衷心的感谢，感谢您在我逗留加拿大期间给予我的善意帮助和亲切关怀，没有您的帮助，我不可能过得这么愉快。
With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks to you for your kindness when I was traveling in London. 我怀着最深的感激写信给你，感谢你在我伦敦旅行时对我的关怀。
Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to get through the hard time.
非常感谢您为帮助我们度过这个困难时期所做的一切。
知识点3 必背主题句
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit…
非常感谢您的热情款待以及我访问期间对我的敬意。
It was your kind help that …
正是你的善良的帮助
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)
如果不是因为你的（帮助/指导/帮助），我就不会（获奖）
Undoubtedly, it was your encouragement and support that cheered me up when I was faced with difficulties in English learning.
毫无疑问，当我在英语学习中遇到困难时，是您的鼓励和支持使我振作。
Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.
非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。这是我至今为止收到的最好的礼物之一。
During the week, the comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your friendly family members all made me warm, leaving me ever lasting memories.
在这一周中，舒适的房间，美味的饭菜，友好的家人都让我感到温暖，给我留下了永远的回忆。
It was your generous help that enabled me to have a better understanding of your country.
是你们的慷慨帮助使我对你们的国家有了更好的了解。
Had it not been for your assistance and kindness, I couldn't have made such great progress.
如果没有你的帮助和关怀，我不可能取得如此大的进步。
知识点4 必背结尾句
Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
我真正的感激之情已经无法形容了。
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
我非常感激你，我真的不知道该如何足够感谢你的帮助。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我真诚的帮助，我永远不会忘记。
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
没有什么能回报你给我的帮助。
Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories.
没有什么能抹掉我们美好的回忆。
7. Words fail to express my thanks/ gratitude/ appreciation to you.
我无法用言语来表达我对你的谢意。
8.Your help is much appreciated by each one of us.
我们每个人都非常感谢你的帮助。
9. Thanks again for your help and I’m sincerely looking forward to showing you around in order to repay your kindness.
再次感谢你的帮助，我真诚地期待着带你到处看看，以报答你的好意。
知识点5 满分模板必背
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____________________ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the _____________________, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____________________. First of all, you _____________________.What’s more, you _____________________. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
考点三 体悟真题与新考向
知识点1 真题演练
1. 2021年6月全国甲卷
假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由； 2. 征求建议；3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 2021年6月天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Nancy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
3. 2020年7月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.（2019年浙江卷）
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.（2009·山东·高考真题）
假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；
2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；
3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意：1. 词数120-150； 2. 可适当增加细节。
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6. 2008 年高考英语全国卷 I
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍；
2、 祝贺苏琳生日；
3、 感谢工作人员；
4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly,
Li Hua
知识点2 命题新考向
【感谢与中国传统文化结合】
01.（高三模拟题精选）
假设你是李华，要参加学校的英语征文活动，请你给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他（她）为人类的进步所做出的贡献。内容包括：
1．历史人物的名字及其贡献；
2．该人物对你的影响和启发。
注意：1．请以“Dear XXX”作为开头，如“Dear Li Shizhen，”；2．词数80词左右。
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02.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，在美国孔子学院（Confucius Institute）任教三年后即将回国，请用英文给同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信。要点如下：
1. 对任教生活的怀念；2. 对同事们、同学们的感谢；3. 对同事们、同学们的祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies!
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That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【感谢与回忆结合】
03.（高三模拟题精选）
假如你是李明，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，期间一直住在你的英国好友Peter家，现在已经回国。请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：
1. 表达感激之情；
2. 回忆各种收获；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【感谢与“发言”结合】
04. (2025届湖南省常德市高三下学期一模英语试题)
假设你是李华，你在学校英语俱乐部举办的“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中获得了一等奖，组委会邀请你发表获奖感言。请用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.分享经验；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ladies and gentlemen,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【感谢与邀请结合】
05.（高三模拟题精选）
假设你是李华，上周你因病住院，在住院期间你的主治大夫黄医生对你精心照顾，现在你已经出院回家。请你按照以下提示写封信给黄医生表达感谢。
1. 对黄医生的精心照顾表达感谢；
2. 描述黄医生对你住院期间的帮助；
3. 邀请黄医生参加你的高中毕业典礼晚会。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Doctor Huang,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Faithfully,
Li Hua
06.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，前些日子收到英国笔友Lynn的来信，信中给你提供了应对英语学习困难的建议。现请你给她回信，内容包括：
1)表示感激；2)告知学习进展；3)邀请来访。
注意：1)词数80左右； 2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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07.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，你在伦敦旅游时得到了好友Peter的帮助。现你已回国，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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目录
01 考情解码·命题预警 2
02 体系构建·思维可视 3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 3
考点一 写作技巧 4
知识点1 命题规律 4
知识点2 写作技能提升 4
考点二 经典必背 4
知识点1 常用词汇 4
知识点2 必背开头段 5
知识点3 必背主题句 6
知识点4 必背结尾句 6
知识点5 满分模版必背 7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向 7
知识点1 真题演练 7
知识点2 命题新考向 15
考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年
感谢信 选择题 非选择题 无 无 （2023以前的感谢信） 2021年6月天津卷 英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，表达感谢。 2020年7月北京卷 请外籍指导教师Jim推荐一名外籍指导教师，表达感谢。 2019年6月浙江卷 感谢Alex的帮助
考情分析 一、往年真题特点 1.话题贴近生活实际：常围绕日常生活中的帮助与关怀设置情境，如感谢老师的教导与鼓励、感谢朋友在困难时的陪伴、感谢陌生人的善意之举，或对收到礼物、获得机会表达感激，要求考生结合具体事例体现真挚情感。 2.任务指令明确：题目通常会给定写信人和收信人身份，以及感谢的具体事由，要求考生在信中清晰阐述被帮助的过程、表达感激之情，并说明帮助带来的积极影响，确保写作内容紧扣主题 。 二、命题思路 通过模拟现实中表达感激的场景，考查学生运用英语进行情感交流和有效沟通的能力。重点检验考生能否用恰当的语言描述被帮助的经历，真挚地传递感恩之情，并展现出英语在人际交往中表达情感的实际应用价值。 三、命题重点 1.语言表达的真挚性与准确性：需运用表达感谢的核心句式（如 I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for...），搭配情感丰富的词汇（grateful、appreciative、touched 等）传递真诚态度；同时保证语法和词汇使用准确，避免因语言错误削弱情感表达。 2.内容完整与逻辑清晰：正文需涵盖感谢事由（如 “在我生病时帮我补习功课”）、具体帮助过程、表达感激、说明帮助的意义或对自己的影响等关键要点；运用连接词（如 Firstly...Moreover...Finally）使内容层次分明，清晰呈现感谢的逻辑链条。
复习目标与备考策略 一、复习目标 1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表达。 2.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。 3.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。 二、备考策略 1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文，建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句，提升写作效率。 2.多样化场景模拟训练：设定不同身份和情境（如感谢外国友人的接待、感谢医护人员的照顾）进行写作练习，提升在复杂场景下灵活运用语言、调整语气的能力，增强考场应变能力。
考点一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
接受别人的帮助、邀请、馈赠、照顾后向对方表示感激。这种题型通常要求考生用英文写一封感谢信，内容可能涉及对某人提供的帮助、发出的邀请、赠送的礼物或给予的照顾表示由衷的感谢。在撰写时，考生需详细描述感谢的具体原因，体现对方的善举对自己的积极影响，并表达对未来可能的回报或继续保持联系的愿望。
知识点2 写作技能提升
第1段，开门见山，表达感谢之情
第2段，应具体阐述对方给予的帮助内容，比如是在学业上的耐心指导，还是在生活上的无私援助。描述这些帮助如何具体地解决了自己的难题，或是如何让自己在困境中看到了希望。同时，考生还需详细叙述自己为何对此深感感激，这些帮助对自己产生了哪些积极的影响，比如提高了学习效率，或是增强了面对困难的勇气。
第3段，需再次向对方表达诚挚的感谢。此时，感谢的语气应更加真挚，可以提及对方的善举让自己深受感动，或是对自己的未来产生了深远的影响。此外，还可以表达希望未来有机会回报对方的善意，或是希望双方能保持联系，继续深化友谊。这样的结尾不仅体现了考生对对方的尊重与感激，也为整封信画上了一个圆满的句号。
考点二 经典必背
知识点1 常用词汇
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人
2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
4.in trouble 陷入困境
5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步
6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取
8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！
10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访
14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
15.a place of interest 名胜
知识点2 必背开头段
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for…
我想在这封信中表达我衷心的意见。衷心的)感谢你的帮助。。
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
我怀着深深的感激给你写了这封信来表达。
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
我写这封信是因为我感谢你。
I’d like to express/ convey my great appreciation for your timely help and support.
我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示感谢。
I'm writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care during my stay in Canada, without which I couldn't have enjoyed myself so much.
我写信向您表达我衷心的感谢，感谢您在我逗留加拿大期间给予我的善意帮助和亲切关怀，没有您的帮助，我不可能过得这么愉快。
With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks to you for your kindness when I was traveling in London. 我怀着最深的感激写信给你，感谢你在我伦敦旅行时对我的关怀。
Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to get through the hard time.
非常感谢您为帮助我们度过这个困难时期所做的一切。
知识点3 必背主题句
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit…
非常感谢您的热情款待以及我访问期间对我的敬意。
It was your kind help that …
正是你的善良的帮助
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)
如果不是因为你的（帮助/指导/帮助），我就不会（获奖）
Undoubtedly, it was your encouragement and support that cheered me up when I was faced with difficulties in English learning.
毫无疑问，当我在英语学习中遇到困难时，是您的鼓励和支持使我振作。
Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.
非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。这是我至今为止收到的最好的礼物之一。
During the week, the comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your friendly family members all made me warm, leaving me ever lasting memories.
在这一周中，舒适的房间，美味的饭菜，友好的家人都让我感到温暖，给我留下了永远的回忆。
It was your generous help that enabled me to have a better understanding of your country.
是你们的慷慨帮助使我对你们的国家有了更好的了解。
Had it not been for your assistance and kindness, I couldn't have made such great progress.
如果没有你的帮助和关怀，我不可能取得如此大的进步。
知识点4 必背结尾句
Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
我真正的感激之情已经无法形容了。
I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
我非常感激你，我真的不知道该如何足够感谢你的帮助。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我真诚的帮助，我永远不会忘记。
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
没有什么能回报你给我的帮助。
Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories.
没有什么能抹掉我们美好的回忆。
7. Words fail to express my thanks/ gratitude/ appreciation to you.
我无法用言语来表达我对你的谢意。
8.Your help is much appreciated by each one of us.
我们每个人都非常感谢你的帮助。
9. Thanks again for your help and I’m sincerely looking forward to showing you around in order to repay your kindness.
再次感谢你的帮助，我真诚地期待着带你到处看看，以报答你的好意。
知识点5 满分模板必背
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____________________ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the _____________________, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____________________. First of all, you _____________________.What’s more, you _____________________. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)
Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
考点三 体悟真题与新考向
知识点1 真题演练
1. 2021年6月全国甲卷
假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：
1. 阐明写信事由； 2. 征求建议；3. 表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Hope everything goes well with you! In a bit to foreign students' richer insight into Chinese culture, a class meeting themed introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends will be launched in our school. I'm writing to ask for your suggestions on the topic.
Since every process and detail is to be posted on an English website that has numerous foreign visitors, I feel at a loss which aspects of our culture fascinates foreign readers. Currently, we have been considering a wide range of choices ranging from local cuisine and ancient costumes to festival traditions and folk music, but we haven't reached any agreement yet. So, I am urgently in need of your suggestion. If you can furnish me with more information, just feel free to inform me.
Your prompt response will be much appreciated. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，要求以李华的身份给外国朋友Chris写一封信，询问哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容需包含写信事由、征求建议和表达感谢。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
发起：launch→organize
困惑：at a loss→confused
提供：furnish→offer
2. 句式拓展
原句：A class meeting themed introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends will be launched in our school.
拓展句：Our school is going to launch a class meeting whose theme is introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends.
原句：We haven't reached any agreement yet.
拓展句：So far, we haven't come to any agreement on which aspect to focus on.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In a bit to foreign students' richer insight into Chinese culture, a class meeting themed introducing Chinese traditional culture to foreign friends will be launched in our school.（theme的过去分词作后置定语，修饰class meeting）
[高分句型2] Since every process and detail is to be posted on an English website that has numerous foreign visitors, I feel at a loss which aspects of our culture fascinates foreign readers.（since引导原因状语从句，that引导定语从句修饰website，which引导宾语从句）
2. 2021年6月天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运用了now that引导的原因状语从句)
3. 2020年7月北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
How are you doing I hope everything is OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practicing. Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析；
第一步：写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，根据提纲内容可知使用一般现在时。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：start doing sth（开始做某事），be away（离开），need a drama teacher（需要戏剧老师），be experienced in（在……有经验）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
高级句式：
1. 原因状语从句的使用，如Since you are away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.等；
2. 状语从句的省略，如Remember to wear a mask when necessary.等。
高级词汇：
1. recommend 推荐；
2. currently 当前。
4.（2019年浙江卷）
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】
本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。
高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；
高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。
5.（2009·山东·高考真题）
假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：
1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；
2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；
3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意：1. 词数120-150； 2. 可适当增加细节。
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【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.
I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me. What about him recently I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox
I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship. You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances, which is extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.
With my best regards!
Yours ,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同学Tom写一封信，询问老师Mr. Smith的联系方式。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
此外：Additionally→What’s more
渴望：desire to→be eager to
一定：be bound to→be sure to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available.
拓展句：I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability, but his email address is not available.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
6. 2008 年高考英语全国卷 I
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍；
2、 祝贺苏琳生日；
3、 感谢工作人员；
4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China! I am Li Hua, a high school student from China. My passion for pandas dates back to my childhood when I first caught sight of these lovely creatures on television. Ever since then, I have been deeply fascinated by them. Over the past three years, I have frequently visited your zoo’s website, closely following the lives of "Su Lin" and her mother "Bai Yun". It has been a great pleasure to witness "Su Lin" growing up day by day.
As "Su Lin" is approaching her third birthday, I am writing to extend my warmest congratulations. It’s truly remarkable to see how she has developed from a tiny, vulnerable cub into a strong and lively panda. I believe the zoo will surely hold a wonderful celebration for this special occasion.
I also would like to express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thanks to your dedicated care and efforts, "Su Lin" and "Bai Yun" enjoy a comfortable life in the zoo. Without your hard work, "Su Lin" wouldn't have grown up so healthily and happily.
Would it be possible for me to request a photo of "Su Lin" on her third birthday I will treasure it as a precious memory and share it with my fellow panda - loving friends. Your kind assistance would be greatly appreciated.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是李华写给美国圣迭哥动物园工作人员的信，按自我介绍、祝贺苏琳生日、感谢工作人员、索取生日照的要点展开，格式规范，语言得体。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
喜爱：passion→love；fascinated→interested
关注：following→tracking；witness→observe
祝贺：extend congratulations→send wishes
感谢：express gratitude→show appreciation
2. 句式拓展
原句：My passion for pandas dates back to my childhood when I first caught sight of these lovely creatures on television.
拓展句：I started loving pandas from my childhood. It was when I saw these cute animals on TV for the first time that my love for them began.
原句：Thanks to your dedicated care and efforts, "Su Lin" and "Bai Yun" enjoy a comfortable life in the zoo.
拓展句：Because you take care of them with great dedication and make efforts, "Su Lin" and "Bai Yun" can live a comfortable life in the zoo.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] My passion for pandas dates back to my childhood when I first caught sight of these lovely creatures on television.（when引导定语从句，修饰先行词childhood，自然地将喜爱大熊猫的缘由融入自我介绍中，丰富句子内容 ）
[高分句型二] Without your hard work, "Su Lin" wouldn't have grown up so healthily and happily.（使用虚拟语气，通过假设没有工作人员的努力，突出他们工作的重要性，增强情感表达 ）
[高分句型三] Would it be possible for me to request a photo of "Su Lin" on her third birthday （用委婉的疑问句提出请求，语气礼貌得体，符合书信的交际功能 ）
知识点2 命题新考向
【感谢与中国传统文化结合】
01.（高三模拟题精选）
假设你是李华，要参加学校的英语征文活动，请你给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他（她）为人类的进步所做出的贡献。内容包括：
1．历史人物的名字及其贡献；
2．该人物对你的影响和启发。
注意：1．请以“Dear XXX”作为开头，如“Dear Li Shizhen，”；2．词数80词左右。
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Li Shizhen,
I am Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion.
You are a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty. You are also one of the most important figures in China’s medical community. Your famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost you years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. What impresses me most is your perseverance shown in your career. Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
I can never express my thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.
Thank you again, and best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华，要参加学校的英语征文活动，请你给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他（她）为人类的进步所做出的贡献。
第一步：词汇积累
表达：express→convey
重要的：important→vital
鼓舞：encouraged→inspired
被看做：be regarded as→be considered as
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
拓展句：I’m determined to work harder for my dream because you encouraged me.
第三步：高分句型
[高分句型1] Your famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost you years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What impresses me most is your perseverance shown in your career. (运用了what引导主语从句)
02.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，在美国孔子学院（Confucius Institute）任教三年后即将回国，请用英文给同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信。要点如下：
1. 对任教生活的怀念；2. 对同事们、同学们的感谢；3. 对同事们、同学们的祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies! Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, full of laughter and tears.
To make Confucius Institute more powerful and fruitful, our great teachers and dear students contributed the time, energy, love and the whole heart. It’s time to recall those beautiful days which we spent together. You are the very person that gives me a hand when necessary. Here, I’m extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers and students, have done for me. It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向美国孔子学院的同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信，写下对任教生活的怀念，以及对同事们、同学们的感谢与祝福。
第一步：词汇积累
充满：be full of→be filled with
给予某人帮助：give sb. a hand→lend sb. a hand
非常：extremely→exceedingly
感激的：grateful→thankful
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变拓展句
原句：The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, full of laughter and tears.
拓展句：The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, which is full of laughter and tears.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】 It’s time to recall those beautiful days which we spent together.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】You are the very person that gives me a hand when necessary.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【感谢与回忆结合】
03.（高三模拟题精选）
假如你是李明，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，期间一直住在你的英国好友Peter家，现在已经回国。请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：
1. 表达感激之情；
2. 回忆各种收获；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李明的身份，给英国好友 Peter 写一封感谢信，感谢在英国参加中学生文化交流活动期间 Peter 的帮助与照顾，同时回忆交流活动中的收获，并向 Peter 发出回访邀请。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
经历：experience→go through
独特的：unique→distinctive
报答：repay→return
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country.
拓展句：Since I benefited a lot from your kind help and care during my stay in your country, I am writing to convey my gratitude.
强调句拓展
原句：Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England.
拓展句：It was you who guided me and enabled me to have a chance to visit some places of interest in England.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.（使用 “介词 + which” 引导的非限制性定语从句，生动地体现出 Peter 的帮助对自己的重要性，同时运用虚拟语气，增强情感表达 ）
【高分句型 2】Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery.（过去分词短语 “Guided by you” 作状语，简洁地表明自己的经历是在 Peter 的带领下完成，使句子结构丰富且逻辑清晰 ）
【高分句型 3】I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness.（“more than + 形容词” 结构，强调自己非常乐意报答 Peter 的帮助；“if” 引导条件状语从句，自然地引出下文的邀请，使行文连贯 ）
【感谢与“发言”结合】
04. (2025届湖南省常德市高三下学期一模英语试题)
假设你是李华，你在学校英语俱乐部举办的“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中获得了一等奖，组委会邀请你发表获奖感言。请用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.分享经验；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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Thank you!
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s a great honor to receive this award. First, I’d like to express my gratitude to the organizing committee for this valuable opportunity, and to my teachers, classmates, and family for their support.
Sharing Chinese stories in English taught me two things: passion and practice. I read traditional tales to understand their spirit, then practiced retelling them naturally. Recording my voice and asking for feedback also helped improve my fluency.
Finally I hope this event will inspire more students to explore the beauty of Chinese culture through language learning. Let’s keep spreading our stories to the world!
Thank you!
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你在学校英语俱乐部举办的“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中获得了一等奖，组委会邀请你发表获奖感言，要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
接受：receive→take up
表达：express→convey
感谢：gratitude→appreciation
激励：inspire→motivate
2. 句式拓展
原句：It’s a great honor to receive this award.
拓展句：It’s a great honor that I have received this award.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Recording my voice and asking for feedback also helped improve my fluency. (动名词作主语)
[高分句型2]Finally, I hope this event will inspire more students to explore the beauty of Chinese culture through language learning. (省略that的宾语从句)
【感谢与邀请结合】
05.（高三模拟题精选）
假设你是李华，上周你因病住院，在住院期间你的主治大夫黄医生对你精心照顾，现在你已经出院回家。请你按照以下提示写封信给黄医生表达感谢。
1. 对黄医生的精心照顾表达感谢；
2. 描述黄医生对你住院期间的帮助；
3. 邀请黄医生参加你的高中毕业典礼晚会。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Doctor Huang,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Faithfully,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Doctor Huang,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your careful treatment and attendance when I was in hospital last week.
On that night I was sent to your hospital. Not only did you immediately diagnose my disease, but also arranged a timely operation. What’s more, it was you who took good care of me and talked to me to release my pain. Now I’m going to graduate from high school and I sincerely invite you to attend my graduation party.
I’m looking forward to seeing you again
Yours Faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封感谢信给黄医生以表达感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
治疗：treatment→therapy
迅速地：immediately→promptly
此外：what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now I’m going to graduate from high school and I sincerely invite you to attend my graduation party.
同义句：Now I’m going to graduate from high school, for which I sincerely invite you to attend my graduation party.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did you immediately diagnose my disease, but also arranged a timely operation.(运用了Not only置于句首引起的部分倒装)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it was you who took good care of me and talked to me to release my pain.(运用了强调句式)
06.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，前些日子收到英国笔友Lynn的来信，信中给你提供了应对英语学习困难的建议。现请你给她回信，内容包括：
1)表示感激；2)告知学习进展；3)邀请来访。
注意：1)词数80左右； 2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Lynn,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your constructive advice on how to get over the difficulties in English learning.
The suggestions serve me really well and my English is improving steadily. Now, it is no longer a challenge for me to express myself in English fluently and accurately. Besides, I could follow the teachers in class more attentively and note down the key points more easily. It is your encouragement and instructions that have guided me in the right direction.
Abundant thanks! Anticipating your visit to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“前些日子英国笔友Lynn写信给你提供应对英语学习困难的建议”一事，给她回信表示感激，并告知学习进展和邀请她来访。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
感激：gratitude/thanks→thankfulness/appreciation
此外：besides→what’s more
记下：note down→write down
2.句式拓展
简单句变倒装句
原句：Besides, I could follow the teachers in class more attentively and note down the key points more easily.
拓展句：Besides, not only could I follow the teachers in class more attentively, but also I could note down the key points more easily.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your constructive advice on how to get over the difficulties in English learning. (运用了“特殊疑问词+to do”作宾语)
【高分句型2】It is your encouragement and instructions that have guided me in the right direction. (运用了强调句型结构)
07.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，你在伦敦旅游时得到了好友Peter的帮助。现你已回国，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢他的帮助；
2. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all your help during my stay in London. Your kindness and support made my trip truly memorable and enjoyable. From guiding me through the bustling streets of London to recommending the best local eateries, your assistance was invaluable.
I am now back in China and would love to return the favor. I would be delighted if you could visit China. There is so much to see and experience in this beautiful country, and I would be honored to be your guide.
Please let me know whether you are interested and when you might be available. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给好友Peter写封邮件，感谢他在伦敦旅游时提供的帮助，并邀请他来中国旅游。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
表达：express→convey
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
宝贵的：invaluable→precious/ treasurable
参观：visit→pay a visit to/ make a visit to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all your help during my stay in London.
拓展句：I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for all the help that you provided during my stay in London.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I would be delighted if you could visit China. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] Please let me know whether you are interested and when you might be available. (运用了whether和when分别引导宾语从句)
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