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Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——公园介绍
公园介绍属于说明文，是指使用生动的语言对某一地点进行具体逼真的描绘。要写清地点中各种活动项目的功能或特点、地理位置、面积、历史、往来交通方式以及收费情况等。
1．介绍功能或特点
From my point of view，...is an ideal place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看来，……是休闲娱乐的理想场所。
In addition，...can enjoy wonderful performances at the park.
此外，……可以在公园里欣赏精彩的表演。
...is an ideal place for you.It brings you into a magical world where you can enjoy a wonderful experience.
……是你的理想去处。它带你进入一个神奇的世界，在那里你可以享受一次美妙的体验。
2．介绍地理位置
...is located/situated in the west of the city near the high-speed railway station.
……位于城市的西部，靠近高铁站。
...lies in the northern part of...，which is well-known for its beautiful lakes.
……位于……北部。它因美丽的湖泊而闻名。
Located/Situated in...，...is one of the most famous parks in China.
位于……，……是中国最著名的公园之一。
It’s...kilometers from the destination to the railway station.
从目的地到火车站有……公里。
3．介绍面积
It is a world-famous theme park covering/which covers an area of...square meters.
＝It is a world-famous theme park with an area of...square meters.
它是一个世界闻名的主题公园，占地面积为……平方米。
4．介绍历史
...is a famous theme park which has a history of...years.
＝...is a famous theme park with a history of...years.
……是一个著名的主题公园，它有……年的历史。
5．介绍交通方式
...can be reached by subway/taxi/bus.
可以乘地铁/出租车/公共汽车到达……
You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租车去那里会快一点。
6．介绍收费情况
You need to pay...for the entrance ticket and an additional charge of...for...
你需要付……(钱)买门票和额外费用……(钱)用于……
Each activity costs...
每项活动花费……
...charge no additional fees except the entrance ticket.
除了门票外，……不收取额外费用。
The admission fee is...and all the activities in the park are free/free of charge.
门票是……(钱)，公园里所有的活动都是免费的。
请根据下面表格的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍郑州绿博园(The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park)。
地点 紧邻郑开大道
面积 约3 000亩
特色 展园99个，是各类花卉的家园
宗旨 展示在环保方面取得的成就，倡导绿色生活
门票 成人票每人次20元
公交 568路和573路
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．坐落于 be located in/on
2．吸引 appeal to/attract
3．占地面积为…… cover an area of...
4．多达 up to
5．有幸拥有 be blessed with
6．在展览中 on display
7．极好的；极大的；难以置信的 incredible
8．过一种绿色生活 live a green life
9．可爱的；讨人喜欢的 adorable
10．壮丽的；雄伟的；极佳的；非常好的 splendid
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．郑州绿博园位于郑开大道附近，它每年都吸引许多游客。
The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park is located next to Zhengkai Avenue and it attracts numerous visitors each year.
2．它是个很壮观的公园，占地面积约3 000亩。
It is a very splendid park and it covers an area of about 3,000 mu.
3．各种各样的花在多达99个展园里。
Various types of flowers are in up to 99 exhibition parks.
4．无论你喜欢哪种花，无论你喜欢什么花，总有一些不可思议的花会吸引你。
Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.
5．在世博公园里欣赏自己最喜欢的鲜花，可以让游客身心放松。
Appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
6．建设公园的目的是为了展示环境保护的成果，呼吁人们过绿色生活。
The purpose of building the park is to show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life.
7．成人门票是20元。你可以乘568路或573路公交车去那里。
The admission for an adult is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
第三步　句式升级
1．用分词短语作状语改写句1。
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.
2．用非限制性定语从句改写句2。
It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.
3．用完全倒装改写句3。
In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.
4．用强调句型(强调句子主语)改写句5。
It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
The purpose of building the park is to show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life.
The admission for an adult is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
请根据以下要点，写一篇80个词左右的英语短文，介绍香港海洋公园。
1．香港海洋公园位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园；
2．面积超过91.5万平方米，是世界上最珍贵的海洋公园之一；
3．有近50年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一，也是香港最受人们喜爱的公园之一，每年吸引了大量的游客；
4．游客可以体验惊险之旅和欣赏各种表演；
5．香港海洋公园还为其提供的教育项目而自豪。
参考范文
Ocean Park Hong Kong，a famous theme park，is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
It is one of the rarest marine parks in the world，covering an area of more than 915,000 square metres.With a history of nearly 50 years，the ocean park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.It is also one of the most adorable parks in Hong Kong，which appeals to a large number of visitors every year.Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows，such as dolphin shows.The park also takes pride in its educational programs.
Ocean Park Hong Kong will fill your day with wonder，pleasure and excitement and reward you with satisfying memories.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
无灵主语 (二)
公式二：主语(身体部位/声音/笑容)＋有灵动词(＋sb)
意义：……脸上/眼中……流露出……
常见主语：tears/heart/voice/fingers/eye/face...
常见有灵动词：interrupt打断，light up露出喜色，well up涌出，spread across浮现，fill/be full of充满，brighten使开心，stream 流淌等
公式三：主语(表地点/时间的名词)＋有灵动词(＋sb)
意义：……目击/见证……
常见主语：gym/school/the scene/the contest/the argument/dawn/dusk/last Monday/2024...
常见有灵动词：fall降临，see/witness目睹等
增分靓句：
When I learned that I won first place in the writing competition，tears of excitement welled up in my eyes.当我得知我在写作比赛中获得第一名时，激动的泪水涌上了我的眼睛。
So nervous was I that my throat tightened and my knees felt quite weak.
我紧张得喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
My fingers shook with extreme anger and I almost couldn’t control my emotions.
我的手指因极度愤怒而颤抖，我几乎无法控制自己的情绪。
Night fell over the forest and we felt extremely frightened.
夜幕降临在森林里，我们感到非常害怕。
The street witnessed a car accident last night，which claimed two deaths.
昨晚这条街上发生了一起车祸，造成两人死亡。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 amusement n．娱乐(活动)；愉悦→amuse vt.(提供)消遣；(使)娱乐→amusing adj.逗人笑的；有趣的→amused adj.被逗乐的；觉得好笑的
动作描写 buffet vt.连续猛击；打来打去　accompany vt.陪同；陪伴；伴随；(尤指用钢琴)为……伴奏　adopt vt.采用；采取；采纳 vt.& vi.领养　stretch vi.延伸；延续 vi.& vt.伸展；舒展　appeal vi.有吸引力；呼吁；恳求；上诉　pedal vt.& vi.骑自行车；踩踏板　wander vt.& vi.闲逛；漫游 vi.走失；离散；走神　bless vt.祝福　cycle vi.骑自行车　set out出发；启程；(怀着目标)开始工作
句型 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(动作描写) 2.I’m above the Arctic Circle，where in summer the sun never sets.(环境描写) 3.Spreading out before me，branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(环境描写) 4.At the far side of the valley，an ancient Sami cottage is visible.Close by，there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(环境描写) 5.They used the reindeer’s meat for food，their bones for tools，and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辞) 6.Here I am，alone under this broad sky，breathing the fresh air，and enjoying this great adventure.(动作描写)
Ⅲ.续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
父母陪着我，我向一望无际的风景如画的沙滩出发。海浪拍打着海岸。海水在清晨的阳光下闪闪发光。当我们悠闲地沿着海滩闲逛时，脚下的海浪很凉爽。我快乐地堆了一些沙堡。接着，最吸引我的是散落在沙滩上的贝壳。身处如此吸引人的地方，我们感到活着是幸福的。
With my parents 1.accompanying me，I 2.set out for the picturesque beach 3.stretching out as far as we could see.The sea waves were 4.buffeting the shore.The seawater was glittering in the morning sunlight and the sea wave was cool on our feet as we leisurely 5.wandered along the beach.I made some sandcastles 6.with/in amusement.Then 7.what appealed to me most were the seashells scattered on the beach.8.Being in such an appealing place made us feel blessed to be alive.(共34张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Fascinating parks
Unit 3
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——公园介绍
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——公园介绍
公园介绍属于说明文，是指使用生动的语言对某一地点进行具体逼真的描绘。要写清地点中各种活动项目的功能或特点、地理位置、面积、历史、往来交通方式以及收费情况等。
1.介绍功能或特点
From my point of view，...is an ideal place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看来，……是休闲娱乐的理想场所。
In addition，...can enjoy wonderful performances at the park.
此外，……可以在公园里欣赏精彩的表演。
...is an ideal place for you.It brings you into a magical world where you can enjoy a wonderful experience.
……是你的理想去处。它带你进入一个神奇的世界，在那里你可以享受一次美妙的体验。
常用表达
2.介绍地理位置
...is located/situated in the west of the city near the high-speed railway station.
……位于城市的西部，靠近高铁站。
...lies in the northern part of...，which is well-known for its beautiful lakes.
……位于……北部。它因美丽的湖泊而闻名。
Located/Situated in...，...is one of the most famous parks in China.
位于……，……是中国最著名的公园之一。
It’s...kilometers from the destination to the railway station.
从目的地到火车站有……公里。
3.介绍面积
It is a world-famous theme park covering/which covers an area of...square meters.
＝It is a world-famous theme park with an area of...square meters.
它是一个世界闻名的主题公园，占地面积为……平方米。
4.介绍历史
...is a famous theme park which has a history of...years.
＝...is a famous theme park with a history of...years.
……是一个著名的主题公园，它有……年的历史。
5.介绍交通方式
...can be reached by subway/taxi/bus.
可以乘地铁/出租车/公共汽车到达……
You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租车去那里会快一点。
6.介绍收费情况
You need to pay...for the entrance ticket and an additional charge of...for...
你需要付……(钱)买门票和额外费用……(钱)用于……
Each activity costs...
每项活动花费……
...charge no additional fees except the entrance ticket.
除了门票外，……不收取额外费用。
The admission fee is...and all the activities in the park are free/free of charge.
门票是……(钱)，公园里所有的活动都是免费的。
请根据下面表格的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍郑州绿博园(The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park)。
典例演练
地点 紧邻郑开大道
面积 约3 000亩
特色 展园99个，是各类花卉的家园
宗旨 展示在环保方面取得的成就，倡导绿色生活
门票 成人票每人次20元
公交 568路和573路
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.坐落于
2.吸引
3.占地面积为……
4.多达
5.有幸拥有
6.在展览中
7.极好的；极大的；难以置信的
8.过一种绿色生活
______________
_______________
________________
_____
______________
__________
__________
______________
be located in/on
appeal to/attract
cover an area of...
up to
be blessed with
on display
incredible
live a green life
9.可爱的；讨人喜欢的
10.壮丽的；雄伟的；极佳的；非常好的
________
________
adorable
splendid
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.郑州绿博园位于郑开大道附近，它每年都吸引许多游客。
The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park is located next to Zhengkai Avenue and ___________________________________.
2.它是个很壮观的公园，占地面积约3 000亩。
It is a very splendid park and ________________________________.
3.各种各样的花在多达99个展园里。
Various types of flowers are __________________________.
it attracts numerous visitors each year
it covers an area of about 3,000 mu
in up to 99 exhibition parks
4.无论你喜欢哪种花，无论你喜欢什么花，总有一些不可思议的花会吸引你。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.在世博公园里欣赏自己最喜欢的鲜花，可以让游客身心放松。
__________________________________________________ makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
Appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park
Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.
6.建设公园的目的是为了展示环境保护的成果，呼吁人们过绿色生活。
The purpose of building the park is to ______________________________
_________________________________________________________.
7.成人门票是20元。你可以乘568路或573路公交车去那里。
_________________________ is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 ___________.
The admission for an adult
show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life
to get there
第三步　句式升级
1.用分词短语作状语改写句1。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用非限制性定语从句改写句2。
_______________________________________________________________
3.用完全倒装改写句3。
_______________________________________________________________
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.
It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.
In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.
4.用强调句型(强调句子主语)改写句5。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
The purpose of building the park is to show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life.
The admission for an adult is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
请根据以下要点，写一篇80个词左右的英语短文，介绍香港海洋公园。
1.香港海洋公园位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园；
2.面积超过91.5万平方米，是世界上最珍贵的海洋公园之一；
3.有近50年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一，也是香港最受人们喜爱的公园之一，每年吸引了大量的游客；
4.游客可以体验惊险之旅和欣赏各种表演；
5.香港海洋公园还为其提供的教育项目而自豪。
达标检测
参考范文
Ocean Park Hong Kong，a famous theme park，is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
It is one of the rarest marine parks in the world，covering an area of more than 915,000 square metres.With a history of nearly 50 years，the ocean park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.It is also one of the most adorable parks in Hong Kong，which appeals to a large number of visitors every year.Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows，such as dolphin shows.The park also takes pride in its educational programs.
Ocean Park Hong Kong will fill your day with wonder，pleasure and excitement and reward you with satisfying memories.
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写作二　读后续写微技能
无灵主语 (二)
公式二：主语(身体部位/声音/笑容)＋有灵动词(＋sb)
意义：……脸上/眼中……流露出……
常见主语：tears/heart/voice/fingers/eye/face...
常见有灵动词：interrupt打断，light up露出喜色，well up涌出，spread across浮现，fill/be full of充满，brighten使开心，stream 流淌等
公式三：主语(表地点/时间的名词)＋有灵动词(＋sb)
意义：……目击/见证……
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
常见主语：gym/school/the scene/the contest/the argument/dawn/dusk/
last Monday/2024...
常见有灵动词：fall降临，see/witness目睹等
增分靓句：
When I learned that I won first place in the writing competition，tears of excitement welled up in my eyes.当我得知我在写作比赛中获得第一名时，激动的泪水涌上了我的眼睛。
So nervous was I that my throat tightened and my knees felt quite weak.
我紧张得喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
My fingers shook with extreme anger and I almost couldn’t control my emotions.
我的手指因极度愤怒而颤抖，我几乎无法控制自己的情绪。
Night fell over the forest and we felt extremely frightened.
夜幕降临在森林里，我们感到非常害怕。
The street witnessed a car accident last night，which claimed two deaths.
昨晚这条街上发生了一起车祸，造成两人死亡。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 amusement n.娱乐(活动)；愉悦→amuse vt.(提供)消遣；(使)娱乐→amusing adj.逗人笑的；有趣的→amused adj.被逗乐的；觉得好笑的
动作描写 buffet vt.连续猛击；打来打去　accompany vt.陪同；陪伴；伴随；(尤指用钢琴)为……伴奏　adopt vt.采用；采取；采纳 vt.& vi.领养　stretch vi.延伸；延续 vi.& vt.伸展；舒展　appeal vi.有吸引力；呼吁；恳求；上诉　pedal vt.& vi.骑自行车；踩踏板　wander vt.& vi.闲逛；漫游 vi.走失；离散；走神　bless vt.祝福　cycle vi.骑自行车　set out出发；启程；(怀着目标)开始工作
句型 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.
(动作描写)
2.I’m above the Arctic Circle，where in summer the sun never sets.
(环境描写)
3.Spreading out before me，branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(环境描写)
4.At the far side of the valley，an ancient Sami cottage is visible.
Close by，there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(环境描写)
句型 5.They used the reindeer’s meat for food，their bones for tools，and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辞)
6.Here I am，alone under this broad sky，breathing the fresh air，and enjoying this great adventure.(动作描写)
Ⅲ.续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
父母陪着我，我向一望无际的风景如画的沙滩出发。海浪拍打着海岸。
With my parents 1.__________________，I 2.___________ the picturesque beach 3._________________________________.The sea waves were 4.___________________.
accompanying me
set out for
stretching out as far as we could see
buffeting the shore
海水在清晨的阳光下闪闪发光。当我们悠闲地沿着海滩闲逛时，脚下的海浪很凉爽。我快乐地堆了一些沙堡。接着，最吸引我的是散落在沙滩上的贝壳。身处如此吸引人的地方，我们感到活着是幸福的。
The seawater was glittering in the morning sunlight and the sea wave was cool on our feet as we leisurely 5._______________________.I made some sandcastles 6.___________________.Then 7.________________________ were the seashells scattered on the beach.8.__________________________
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wandered along the beach
with/in amusement
what appealed to me most
Being in such an appealing
place made us feel blessed to be alive
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