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Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——议论文
本单元要求写一篇议论文。议论文通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张。作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，作者提出若干理由，试图说服他人。议论文一般分为三段：
1．首段常用句式：
In my opinion，it is wrong to/that...Here are the reasons.
在我看来，……是错误的。原因如下。
I don’t think it is a very good way to...
我认为……不是一个很好的方法。
I’m writing to persuade you to quit/give up...
我写信是劝你放弃……
People take different opinions on...
人们对……有不同的看法。
Recently...has become a heated topic.
最近……已经成为一个热门话题。
Opinions about...vary from person to person.
对……的看法因人而异。
2．中段常用句式：
As the old saying goes，everything has two sides.It has both advantages and disadvantages.
俗话说，凡事都有两面性。它既有优点，又有缺点。
When it comes to...，most people believe that...，but other people regard...as...
当谈及……，大多数人认为……，但是其他人把……视为……
Here are my reasons.First of all，I think it would be better if...
我的理由如下。首先，我认为如果……会更好。
The reasons for...are as follows.First...Second...Last but not least...
……的原因如下。首先…… 第二……最后但同样重要的是……
On the one hand...on the other hand...
一方面……另一方面……
No one can ignore the fact that...
没有人能忽视……的事实。
If I were you，I would...
如果我是你，我会……
I firmly support the view that...
我坚决支持这种观点……
The advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
利大于弊。
3．尾段常用句式：
In short/In conclusion/In closing...
总之……
All things considered...
从各方面看来……
As far as I’m concerned...
就我而言……
From what has been discussed above，we can easily draw the conclusion that...
通过以上讨论，我们可以很容易地得出结论……
Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.
请考虑我的建议，做出最后的决定。
假如你是李华，你班就化学耕作和有机耕作进行了讨论，请写一篇文章阐述你的观点，内容包括：
1．有机农产品更健康，更让人放心；
2．有机农耕不会对环境造成破坏；
3．有机农耕让农民增加收入。
参考词汇：农药残留pesticide residues
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．有机耕作organic farming
2．有做某事的选择have the alternative of doing sth
3．深信be greatly convinced that
4．致力于做某事devote oneself to/be devoted to doing sth
5．认为某人/某物是……assume sb/sth to be...
6．有营养的nutritious
7．对……非常必要 be essential to/for...
8．结果是……；原来是…… It turns out that...
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．我认为有机农业比化学农业好。原因如下。(assume)
I assume organic farming to be better than chemical farming.Here are some reasons.
2．考虑到化学农药对农作物有害，禁止农民在有机农业中喷洒化学农药。(given that)
Given that chemical pesticides are harmful to crops，farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming.
3．这样就不会在农作物上留下农药残留。
This leaves no pesticide residues on crops.
4．农民使用天然的动物粪便。
Farmers use natural waste from animals.
5．它不仅可以避免破坏环境，还可以使作物更有营养。
Not only will it avoid destroying the environment but it will also make crops more nutritious.
6．越来越多的人非常关心自己的身体健康而不愿购买化学食品。
More and more people are too concerned about their physical health to buy chemical foods.
7．当他们在商店购物时，他们可以选择购买有机水果和蔬菜，尽管这些产品的价格更高。
They have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores，despite the fact that the prices of these products are higher.
8．事实证明，农民可以赚更多的钱。
It turns out that farmers can make more money.
9．通过以上讨论，我们可以很容易地得出结论，有机农业对我们的身体健康是至关重要的。
From what has been discussed above，we can easily draw the conclusion that organic farming is essential to our physical health.
10．我深信，未来将有越来越多的农民投身于有机农业。
I am greatly convinced that more and more farmers will be devoted to organic farming in the future.
第三步　句式升级
用现在分词短语作结果状语合并句2和句3。
Given that chemical pesticides are harmful to crops，farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming，leaving no pesticide residues on crops.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
I assume organic farming to be better than chemical farming.Here are some reasons.
Firstly，given that chemical pesticides are harmful to crops，farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming，leaving no pesticide residues on crops.Secondly，farmers use natural waste from animals.Not only will it avoid destroying the environment but it will also make crops more nutritious.Thirdly，more and more people are too concerned about their physical health to buy chemical foods.Thus，they have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores，despite the fact that the prices of these products are higher.Finally，it turns out that farmers can make more money.
From what has been discussed above，we can easily draw the conclusion that organic farming is essential to our physical health.I am greatly convinced that more and more farmers will be devoted to organic farming in the future.
某英文社交论坛正在讨论“Should tourism be developed in the country？”，请你写一篇英文短文，表明自己的观点并发表在该论坛上。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Should tourism be developed in the country
参考范文
Should tourism be developed in the country
As far as I am concerned，I am entirely in favor of developing tourism in the country.
Firstly，developing tourism is a good way to increase villagers’ income.Visitors from different places will be attracted by local unique cultural features，certainly boosting the economy.Secondly，more villagers will be employed without leaving their hometown.Along with the development of tourism，much business will be generated，which will provide many new jobs for the local people.Lastly，it’s also a chance to improve communication among people from various places.
Though tourism might affect the natural environment in the country，the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
外貌描写
在读后续写过程中，在围绕原文主旨、保持原文语言特点的基础上，续写部分可利用恰当的词语描述人物的外貌，以此来丰富续写内容，从而进一步提升续写语篇的可读性。进行外貌描写时，可以描写一个人的总体形象，也可以抓住人物重要或突出的外貌特征进行描述，如具体描写人物的头发或胡须、前额、眉毛、眼睛、下巴、嘴唇等。
Her hair was so soft that it felt like silk as it brushed against my cheek.她的头发如此柔软，拂过我的脸颊时感觉就像丝绸一样。
Her hair flowed gracefully down her back，shining in the sunlight.
她的头发优雅地垂在背后，在阳光下闪闪发光。
It was on his broad forehead that the wisdom of ages seemed to be carved.
他的宽阔前额上似乎镌刻着岁月的智慧。
Her eyebrows seemed to dance along with her every expression.
她的眉毛似乎随着她的每一个表情而舞动。
Eyes are windows to the soul，hers filled with compassion and kindness.
眼睛是心灵的窗户，她的眼睛充满了同情和善良。
His lips trembled slightly as he tried to speak，but no words came out.
他试图说话时嘴唇微微颤抖，但一个字也说不出来。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 convince vt.使相信；使确信；说服→convincing adj.有说服力的；使人信服的→convinced adj.确信的；坚信的　intense adj.热切的；十分强烈的；激烈的　deep down在内心深处；本质上；实际上
动作描写 devote vt.把……献(给)；把……专用于；专心于　tackle vt.解决(难题)；应付(局面)；处理　boost vt.使增长；使兴旺　yield vt.出产(作物)；产生(收益、效益等) vi.屈服；让步　overcome vt.克服；解决；战胜　alleviate vt.减轻；缓解
句型 1.Indeed，his slim but strong body was just like that of millions of Chinese farmers，to whom he had devoted his life.(外貌描写) 2.Yuan was convinced that the answer could be found in the creation of hybrid rice.(情感描写) 3.Long ago，he envisioned rice plants as tall as sorghum，with each ear of rice as big as a broom，and each grain of rice as huge as a peanut.(比喻修辞) 4.Even in his later years，Yuan Longping was still young at heart and full of vision...(人物描写)
Ⅲ.续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
看见我朋友悲痛欲绝，我内心深处是如此焦虑，以至于感觉就像热锅上的蚂蚁。我必须竭尽全力振奋他的精神，并说服他不要向暂时的失败屈服。我向他提供了一些有效的措施，以缓解他的悲伤并解决他的问题。最终，他相信只有致力于学习他才能通过考试。当我意识到他不再心烦意乱时，我的心里感觉像蜜一样甜。
Seeing my friend 1.overcome with intense sadness，I 2.was so anxious deep down that I felt like an ant on a hot pan.I must do whatever I could to 3.boost his spirits and convince him not to yield to the temporary failure.I offered him some effective measures to 4.alleviate his sadness and tackle his problems.Finally，he 5.was convinced that only if he devoted himself to/was devoted to his study could he pass the exam.When I sensed that he wasn’t upset any longer，my heart was as sweet as honey.(共33张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Working the land
Unit 5
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——议论文
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——议论文
本单元要求写一篇议论文。议论文通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张。作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，作者提出若干理由，试图说服他人。议论文一般分为三段：
1.首段常用句式：
In my opinion，it is wrong to/that...Here are the reasons.
在我看来，……是错误的。原因如下。
I don’t think it is a very good way to...
我认为……不是一个很好的方法。
I’m writing to persuade you to quit/give up...
我写信是劝你放弃……
常用表达
People take different opinions on...
人们对……有不同的看法。
Recently...has become a heated topic.
最近……已经成为一个热门话题。
Opinions about...vary from person to person.
对……的看法因人而异。
2.中段常用句式：
As the old saying goes，everything has two sides.It has both advantages and disadvantages.
俗话说，凡事都有两面性。它既有优点，又有缺点。
When it comes to...，most people believe that...，but other people regard...as...
当谈及……，大多数人认为……，但是其他人把……视为……
Here are my reasons.First of all，I think it would be better if...
我的理由如下。首先，我认为如果……会更好。
The reasons for...are as follows.First...Second...Last but not least...
……的原因如下。首先…… 第二……最后但同样重要的是……
On the one hand...on the other hand...
一方面……另一方面……
No one can ignore the fact that...
没有人能忽视……的事实。
If I were you，I would...
如果我是你，我会……
I firmly support the view that...
我坚决支持这种观点……
The advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
利大于弊。
3.尾段常用句式：
In short/In conclusion/In closing...
总之……
All things considered...
从各方面看来……
As far as I’m concerned...
就我而言……
From what has been discussed above，we can easily draw the conclusion that...
通过以上讨论，我们可以很容易地得出结论……
Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.
请考虑我的建议，做出最后的决定。
假如你是李华，你班就化学耕作和有机耕作进行了讨论，请写一篇文章阐述你的观点，内容包括：
1.有机农产品更健康，更让人放心；
2.有机农耕不会对环境造成破坏；
3.有机农耕让农民增加收入。
参考词汇：农药残留pesticide residues
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.有机耕作
2.有做某事的选择
3.深信
4.致力于做某事
5.认为某人/某物是……
6.有营养的
7.对……非常必要
8.结果是……；原来是……
_______________
____________________________
______________________
___________________________________
___________________
_________
_________________
________________
organic farming
have the alternative of doing sth
be greatly convinced that
devote oneself to/be devoted to doing sth
assume sb/sth to be...
nutritious
be essential to/for...
It turns out that...
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1.我认为有机农业比化学农业好。原因如下。(assume)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.考虑到化学农药对农作物有害，禁止农民在有机农业中喷洒化学农药。(given that)
__________________________________________________，farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming.
3.这样就不会在农作物上留下农药残留。
_______________________________________________________________
Given that chemical pesticides are harmful to crops
I assume organic farming to be better than chemical farming.Here are some reasons.
This leaves no pesticide residues on crops.
4.农民使用天然的动物粪便。
_______________________________________________________________
5.它不仅可以避免破坏环境，还可以使作物更有营养。
Not only _____________________________________ but it will also make crops _______________.
6.越来越多的人非常关心自己的身体健康而不愿购买化学食品。
More and more people are ________________________________________
__________________.
will it avoid destroying the environment
more nutritious
too concerned about their physical health to
buy chemical foods
Farmers use natural waste from animals.
7.当他们在商店购物时，他们可以选择购买有机水果和蔬菜，尽管这些产品的价格更高。
They ____________________________________________________ when they are shopping in stores，despite the fact ________________________
___________________.
8.事实证明，农民可以赚更多的钱。
_______________________________________________________________
have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables
that the prices of these
products are higher
It turns out that farmers can make more money.
9.通过以上讨论，我们可以很容易地得出结论，有机农业对我们的身体健康是至关重要的。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.我深信，未来将有越来越多的农民投身于有机农业。
______________________________________________________________________________ in the future.
From what has been discussed above，we can easily draw the conclusion that organic farming is essential to our physical health.
I am greatly convinced that more and more farmers will be devoted to organic farming
第三步　句式升级
用现在分词短语作结果状语合并句2和句3。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Given that chemical pesticides are harmful to crops，farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming，leaving no pesticide residues on crops.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
I assume organic farming to be better than chemical farming.Here are some reasons.
Firstly，given that chemical pesticides are harmful to crops，farmers are forbidden to spray them in organic farming，leaving no pesticide residues on crops.Secondly，farmers use natural waste from animals.Not only will it avoid destroying the environment but it will also make crops more nutritious.Thirdly，more and more people are too concerned about their physical health to buy chemical foods.Thus，they have the alternative of buying organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores，despite the fact that the prices of these products are higher.Finally，it turns out that farmers can make more money.
From what has been discussed above，we can easily draw the conclusion that organic farming is essential to our physical health.I am greatly convinced that more and more farmers will be devoted to organic farming in the future.
某英文社交论坛正在讨论“Should tourism be developed in the country？”，请你写一篇英文短文，表明自己的观点并发表在该论坛上。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Should tourism be developed in the country
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
达标检测
参考范文
Should tourism be developed in the country
As far as I am concerned，I am entirely in favor of developing tourism in the country.
Firstly，developing tourism is a good way to increase villagers’ income.Visitors from different places will be attracted by local unique cultural features，certainly boosting the economy.Secondly，more villagers will be employed without leaving their hometown.Along with the development of tourism，much business will be generated，
which will provide many new jobs for the local people.Lastly，it’s also a chance to improve communication among people from various places.
Though tourism might affect the natural environment in the country，the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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写作二　读后续写微技能
外貌描写
在读后续写过程中，在围绕原文主旨、保持原文语言特点的基础上，续写部分可利用恰当的词语描述人物的外貌，以此来丰富续写内容，从而进一步提升续写语篇的可读性。进行外貌描写时，可以描写一个人的总体形象，也可以抓住人物重要或突出的外貌特征进行描述，如具体描写人物的头发或胡须、前额、眉毛、眼睛、下巴、嘴唇等。
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
Her hair was so soft that it felt like silk as it brushed against my cheek.她的头发如此柔软，拂过我的脸颊时感觉就像丝绸一样。
Her hair flowed gracefully down her back，shining in the sunlight.
她的头发优雅地垂在背后，在阳光下闪闪发光。
It was on his broad forehead that the wisdom of ages seemed to be carved.
他的宽阔前额上似乎镌刻着岁月的智慧。
Her eyebrows seemed to dance along with her every expression.
她的眉毛似乎随着她的每一个表情而舞动。
Eyes are windows to the soul，hers filled with compassion and kindness.
眼睛是心灵的窗户，她的眼睛充满了同情和善良。
His lips trembled slightly as he tried to speak，but no words came out.
他试图说话时嘴唇微微颤抖，但一个字也说不出来。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 convince vt.使相信；使确信；说服→convincing adj.有说服力的；使人信服的→convinced adj.确信的；坚信的　intense adj.热切的；十分强烈的；激烈的　deep down在内心深处；本质上；实际上
动作描写 devote vt.把……献(给)；把……专用于；专心于　tackle vt.解决(难题)；应付(局面)；处理　boost vt.使增长；使兴旺　yield vt.出产(作物)；产生(收益、效益等) vi.屈服；让步　overcome vt.克服；解决；战胜　alleviate vt.减轻；缓解
句型 1.Indeed，his slim but strong body was just like that of millions of Chinese farmers，to whom he had devoted his life.(外貌描写)
2.Yuan was convinced that the answer could be found in the creation of hybrid rice.(情感描写)
3.Long ago，he envisioned rice plants as tall as sorghum，with each ear of rice as big as a broom，and each grain of rice as huge as a peanut.(比喻修辞)
4.Even in his later years，Yuan Longping was still young at heart and full of vision...(人物描写)
Ⅲ.续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
看见我朋友悲痛欲绝，我内心深处是如此焦虑，以至于感觉就像热锅上的蚂蚁。我必须竭尽全力振奋他的精神，并说服他不要向暂时的失败屈服。
Seeing my friend 1.____________________________，I 2.______________
_______________ I felt like an ant on a hot pan.I must do whatever I could to 3._________________________________________________________________.
overcome with intense sadness
was so anxious
deep down that
boost his spirits and convince him not to yield to the temporary failure
我向他提供了一些有效的措施，以缓解他的悲伤并解决他的问题。最终，他相信只有致力于学习他才能通过考试。当我意识到他不再心烦意乱时，我的心里感觉像蜜一样甜。
I offered him some effective measures to 4.__________________________
__________________.Finally，he 5.________________________________
________________________________ could he pass the exam.When I sensed that he wasn’t upset any longer，my heart was as sweet as honey.
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alleviate his sadness and
tackle his problems
was convinced that only if he devoted
himself to/was devoted to his study
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