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Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——建议信
本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来针对存在的某一问题提出自己的合理建议，从而达到解决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。注意建议信的语气一定要委婉。
1．首段常用句式
You wrote in your letter that...I understand quite well that...
你在信中写道……我非常理解……
You have asked for my advice about/on...and I will try to offer you some.
你问我关于……的建议，我将尽力给你提供一些。
Learning/Hearing that you have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth，I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
得知你在做……方面有困难，我特此写信给你一些建议。
I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你询问我关于……的建议的来信，这里是一些建议。
The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。
2．中段常用句式
I think you should...我认为你应该……
Why not...？何不……？
I strongly recommend/suggest/advise that...
我强烈建议……
You’d better...你最好……
It would be a good idea if you could...
如果你能够……会是个好主意。
How/What about...？……怎么样呀？
If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会……
3．尾段常用句式
I sincerely/do hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I sincerely/do hope my suggestions will be of benefit/use to you.
我由衷地/真的希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。/我由衷地/真的希望我的建议对你有益/有用。
If you take the above suggestions，you will find it easy to...
如果你采纳以上建议，你会发现……很容易。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account/consideration.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。
I am sure...我确定……
徐婷，今年十四岁，因为父母常年在外地工作而时常感到孤独。假定你是Susan Luo，请你写信给她提供一些建议并说明原因。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．满意的content
2．建议recommend
3．志愿者volunteer
4．青少年teenager
5．事实上actually
6．集中；特别关注focus on
7．困惑的confused
8．喜爱 be attracted to
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．你对现在的生活不满意。
You are not content with your present life.
2．你的父母在另一座城市工作。
Your parents work in another city.
3．我非常理解你感到困惑和焦虑。
I understand quite well that you feel confused and anxious.
4．像你这样的青少年离开父母生活时感到孤独是很正常的。
It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
5．独自待在家里太久对你的健康有害，而且很容易感到不安和烦恼。
Staying at home alone for too long is harmful to your health and makes it very easy to be upset and annoyed.
6．我建议你去参加一个志愿者组织，这样你不仅可以帮助别人，还可以和别人交流。
I recommend you to join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
7．事实上，有很多需要你帮助的人，很快你就会爱上这个组织。
Actually，there are many people who need your help and soon you will be attracted to the organization.
8．如果你能关注一些有意义的事情来让自己感觉更好，这将是一个好主意。
It would be a good idea if you could focus on some meaningful things so that you can make yourself feel better.
9．如果你采纳上面的建议，我确信你会发现改变现状很容易。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find that it is easy to change your present situation.
第三步　句式升级
1．用句型the reason why...is that...合并句1和句2。
The reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.
2．把句6改为含有宾语从句的复合句。
I recommend that you (should) join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
3．用形式宾语it升级句9。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find it easy to change your present situation.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that the reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.The following are my suggestions.
I understand quite well that you feel confused and anxious.It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.Staying at home alone for too long is harmful to your health and makes it very easy to be upset and annoyed.So I recommend that you should join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.Actually，there are many people who need your help and soon you will be attracted to the organization.Besides，it would be a good idea if you could focus on some meaningful things so that you can make yourself feel better.
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find it easy to change your present situation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes，
Susan Luo
假设你是李华，你的好友Mary前不久去了英国留学。她写信告诉你她不适应英国的高中生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点给她写一封建议信：
1．努力提高英语水平；
2．广交朋友；
3．多参加各种活动。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
Dear Mary，
Hearing that you have trouble in adapting to your new school and meet some challenges，I feel terribly sorry.
I’m willing to give you some advice.Firstly，I recommend that you sign up for advanced English classes，which can help you speak English fluently.Secondly，why not make more friends？They can help you forget your loneliness.Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in after-class activities.
I really hope that these suggestions are of great help to you.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.续写技法指导——读后续写应遵循的原则与续写步骤
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 content adj.满意的；满足的　confuse vt.使糊涂；使迷惑→confusing adj.难以理解的；不清楚的→confused adj.糊涂的；迷惑的　responsible adj.负责的；有责任的　addicted adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的
动作描写 debate vt.& vi.辩论；争论　challenge vt.怀疑；向……挑战　recommend vt.建议；推荐；介绍　advance vi.前进；发展 vt.发展；促进　quit vt.& vi.停止；戒掉；离开(工作职位、学校等)　schedule vt.安排；预定
句型 1.Obviously，I was unhappy，but I won’t quit.(情感描写) 2．Every Wednesday，we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community.(动作描写) 3．I’m a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course...(情感描写) 4．I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.(情感描写) 5．Good habits formed at youth make all the difference.(结尾升华句) 6．Studying hard isn’t always fun，but I’ll be well prepared for university or whatever else comes in the future.(结尾升华句)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在早晨，按照所安排的，双胞胎早早起床，蹑手蹑脚地走进厨房，从袋子里舀出一些面粉。刚一开始做面包，他们就感到迷惑。就在那时，他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道：“不要放弃。你们可以战胜这个挑战。”这对双胞胎最后把面包做得很好，一阵幸福掠过他们的心头。接着，他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈。双眼闪烁着激动的光芒，妈妈是如此满足，她把孩子们揽入怀中。
In the morning,1.as scheduled，the twins got up early，tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.Once they set about making bread,2.they felt confused.Just at that time，their father slid into the kitchen，patted the twins’ shoulders and comforted them in a soft voice，“3.Don’t quit.You can 4.overcome the challenge.” The twins made the bread quite well at last and a flash of happiness swept through their hearts.Then they carried breakfast,5.advanced upstairs and woke up their mother.With her eyes glittering with excitement,6.the mother was so content that she gathered her children into her arms.(共29张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Teenage life
Unit 1
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——建议信
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——建议信
本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来针对存在的某一问题提出自己的合理建议，从而达到解决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。注意建议信的语气一定要委婉。
常用表达
1.首段常用句式
You wrote in your letter that...I understand quite well that...
你在信中写道……我非常理解……
You have asked for my advice about/on...and I will try to offer you some.
你问我关于……的建议，我将尽力给你提供一些。
Learning/Hearing that you have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth，I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
得知你在做……方面有困难，我特此写信给你一些建议。
I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你询问我关于……的建议的来信，这里是一些建议。
The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
我的建议如下。
2.中段常用句式
I think you should...我认为你应该……
Why not...？何不……？
I strongly recommend/suggest/advise that...
我强烈建议……
You’d better...你最好……
It would be a good idea if you could...
如果你能够……会是个好主意。
How/What about...？……怎么样呀？
If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会……
3.尾段常用句式
I sincerely/do hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I sincerely/do hope my suggestions will be of benefit/use to you.
我由衷地/真的希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。/我由衷地/真的希望我的建议对你有益/有用。
If you take the above suggestions，you will find it easy to...
如果你采纳以上建议，你会发现……很容易。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account/ consideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。
I am sure...我确定……
徐婷，今年十四岁，因为父母常年在外地工作而时常感到孤独。假定你是Susan Luo，请你写信给她提供一些建议并说明原因。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇(单元写作词汇运用)
1.满意的
2.建议
3.志愿者
4.青少年
5.事实上
6.集中；特别关注
7.困惑的
8.喜爱
________
____________
__________
_________
_________
_________
__________
_______________
content
recommend
volunteer
teenager
actually
focus on
confused
be attracted to
1.你对现在的生活不满意。
_______________________________________________________________
2.你的父母在另一座城市工作。
_______________________________________________________________
3.我非常理解你感到困惑和焦虑。
I understand quite well that .
4.像你这样的青少年离开父母生活时感到孤独是很正常的。
when they live away from their parents.
You are not content with your present life.
Your parents work in another city.
you feel confused and anxious
It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely
连词成句(教材句式仿写)
5.独自待在家里太久对你的健康有害，而且很容易感到不安和烦恼。
is harmful to your health and ______
be upset and annoyed.
6.我建议你去参加一个志愿者组织，这样你不仅可以帮助别人，还可以和别人交流。
I recommend you to so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
7.事实上，有很多需要你帮助的人，很快你就会爱上这个组织。
，there are many people who need your help and soon you will .
Staying at home alone for too long
makes
it very easy to
join a volunteer organization
Actually
be attracted to the organization
8.如果你能关注一些有意义的事情来让自己感觉更好，这将是一个好主意。
It would be a good idea if you could ________________________________
you can make yourself feel better.
9.如果你采纳上面的建议，我确信你会发现改变现状很容易。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find that _____
.
focus on some meaningful things so
that
easy to change your present situation
it is
1.用句型the reason why...is that...合并句1和句2。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
2.把句6改为含有宾语从句的复合句。
I recommend so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
3.用形式宾语it升级句9。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that ____________________
.
The reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.
第三步　句式升级
that you (should) join a volunteer organization
you will find it easy to change your present situation
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that the reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.The following are my suggestions.
I understand quite well that you feel confused and anxious.It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.Staying at home alone for too long is harmful to your health and makes it very easy to be upset and annoyed.So I recommend that you should join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.Actually，there are many people who need your help and soon you will be attracted to the organization.Besides，it would be a good idea if you could focus on some meaningful things so that you can make yourself feel better.
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find it easy to change your present situation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes，
Susan Luo
假设你是李华，你的好友Mary前不久去了英国留学。她写信告诉你她不适应英国的高中生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点给她写一封建议信：
1.努力提高英语水平；
2.广交朋友；
3.多参加各种活动。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
达标检测
参考范文
Dear Mary，
Hearing that you have trouble in adapting to your new school and meet some challenges，I feel terribly sorry.
I’m willing to give you some advice.Firstly，I recommend that you sign up for advanced English classes，which can help you speak English fluently.Secondly，why not make more friends？They can help you forget your loneliness.Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in after-class activities.
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I really hope that these suggestions are of great help to you.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.续写技法指导——读后续写应遵循的原则与续写步骤
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 content adj.满意的；满足的　confuse vt.使糊涂；使迷惑→confusing adj.难以理解的；不清楚的→confused adj.糊涂的；迷惑的　responsible adj.负责的；有责任的　addicted adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的
动作描写 debate vt.& vi.辩论；争论　challenge vt.怀疑；向……挑战　recommend vt.建议；推荐；介绍　advance vi.前进；发展 vt.发展；促进　quit vt.& vi.停止；戒掉；离开(工作职位、学校等)　schedule vt.安排；预定
句型 1.Obviously，I was unhappy，but I won’t quit.(情感描写)
2.Every Wednesday，we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community.(动作描写)
3.I’m a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course...(情感描写)
4.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.(情感描写)
5.Good habits formed at youth make all the difference.(结尾升华句)
6.Studying hard isn’t always fun，but I’ll be well prepared for university or whatever else comes in the future.(结尾升华句)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
在早晨，按照所安排的，双胞胎早早起床，蹑手蹑脚地走进厨房，从袋子里舀出一些面粉。刚一开始做面包，他们就感到迷惑。就在那时，他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道：
In the morning,1. ，the twins got up early，tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.Once they set about making bread,2. .Just at that time，their father slid into the kitchen， patted the twins’ shoulders and comforted them in a soft voice，
as scheduled
they felt confused
“不要放弃。你们可以战胜这个挑战。”这对双胞胎最后把面包做得很好，一阵幸福掠过他们的心头。接着，他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈。双眼闪烁着激动的光芒，妈妈是如此满足，她把孩子们揽入怀中。
“3. .You can 4. .” The twins made the bread quite well at last and a flash of happiness swept through their hearts. Then they carried breakfast,5. . With her eyes glittering with excitement,6.____________________________
she gathered her children into her arms.
Don’t quit
overcome the challenge
advanced upstairs and woke up their mother
the mother was so content that
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