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Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——博客
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇“博客”。博客是以网络作为载体，简易、迅速、便捷地发布自己的心得，及时、有效、轻松地与他人进行交流，集丰富多彩的个性化展示于一体的综合性写作形式，通常称为“网络日志”。
1．常用的开头语
Recently，the problem of...has aroused people’s concern.最近，……问题引起了人们的关注。
It is commonly believed that.../It is a common belief that...人们普遍认为……
Many people insist that...许多人坚持认为……
With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that...随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为……
2．主体部分常用表达
The problem has been mentioned and stressed in our society more frequently than ever before.这个问题比以往任何时候更频繁地在社会上被提及和强调。
Some people，maybe，hold the view that...while I still think...
一些人或许坚持……的观点，而我仍然认为……
However，some argue that...
然而一些人认为……
Just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.正如一句谚语所说，每个硬币都有两面(凡事有利弊)。
3．常用的结束语
As for me/From my point of view/Personally (speaking)，...就我而言，……
Frankly speaking，I am and will be for the opinion that...
坦白说，我现在支持将来也支持……的观点
As I see it，I still support the opinion that...
在我看来，我仍然支持……观点。
Post your comments below!
在下面留下你的评论！
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入网购群体。请你根据以下提示，在你的博客上写一篇关于网上购物的文章。
优点：
1．足不出户，节约时间；
2．价格通常比较便宜；
3．可供选择的范围广，种类多。
缺点：
1．只能看到图片，看不到商品本身；
2．容易买到质量不好的商品。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．拥有……的机会have access to
2．从……中受益benefit from
3．做某事对某人来说是便利的it is convenient for sb to do sth
4．点击click
5．商品goods
6．由于 on account of
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．互联网越流行，越多的人将有机会在网上购物。
The more popular the Internet becomes，the more people will have access to online shopping.
2．我们从网上购物中获益颇多。
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.
3．对我们来说，仅仅通过点击鼠标而不用出门买到我们所感兴趣的东西很方便。
It is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.
4．有如此多样的商品，我们可以自由选择价格比较低的。
There are such various goods that we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.
5．我们收到的东西常常让我们因为只在网上看到图片而感到沮丧和失望。
What we receive often makes us upset and disappointed on account of only seeing pictures on the Internet.
6．有时我们发现我们买的商品质量不好。
Sometimes we find that the goods we have bought are of poor quality.
7．你对于如何有效网上购物的见解是什么呢？
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively
第三步　句式升级
将句6用“find＋宾语＋宾语补足语”升级。
Sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
The more popular the Internet becomes，the more people will have access to online shopping.
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.First，it is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.Second，there are such various goods that we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.However，just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.First，what we receive often makes us upset and disappointed on account of only seeing pictures on the Internet.Second，sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively？Post your comments below!
随着科技的发展和互联网的普及，网络教学得到了越来越多的推广。现请你以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education”为题，结合以下要点写一篇博客：
1．网络教学的利弊以及你的理由；
2．你的看法及建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education
As the Internet becomes increasingly popular，more and more schools and students concentrate on online education.There is no doubt that it has some advantages.Firstly，online education isn’t limited by time and place，so students have access to their study materials whenever and wherever they like.Secondly，online education frees teachers from repeating the same teaching contents since the video can be played over and over again.However，online education also has some disadvantages.With online courses，students have to spend more time using computers，which contributes to the loss of their eyesight.And online education will reduce the communication between students and teachers，which will lead to the lack of learning atmosphere.
Personally，if traditional teaching and online education can be combined，more fruitful education can certainly be realized.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：定语从句
词、句是构成篇章的基本语言单位。各类复合句和特殊句式的恰当使用能体现学生对语言的驾驭能力。其中，定语从句的正确使用能够丰富续写文章的细节描写，增强上下文的逻辑连贯性，提升语言丰富度。
Opening the door，an old man stood there，who was dressed in dirty clothing and wearing dirty rubber boots.打开门，一位老人站在那里，他穿着脏衣服和脏橡胶靴。
His friend，whose patience had worn thin，phoned to complain.他朋友的耐心已经被消磨殆尽，打电话来抱怨。
He sprang to his feet and exclaimed，“I have a great idea！I have a solution that/which we can all help accomplish.” 他站起来，喊道：“我有一个好主意！我有一个我们都可以帮助完成的解决方案。”
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence.
饥饿的熊闻着味道来到我们的营地，营地被高高的铁丝网包围着。
(2024·新课标Ⅰ)Gunter，with whom I had a rather pleasant journey to the bus station，showed great kindness and trust.
甘特，我和他一起经历了一段相当愉快的前往汽车站的旅程，他表现出了极大的善意和信任。
[即时训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1．安迪收到了 17 岁的罗斯发来的一条短信，罗斯承认拿了那个钱包，并解释了他这么做的原因。
Andy got a text from 17-year-old Ross, who admitted having taken the wallet and explained the reason why he had done that.
2．我永远不会忘记那个让我心动的女孩，她的笑容如同阳光般温暖。
I will never forget the girl who made my heart beat faster，whose smile was as warm as the sunshine.
3．然而，在餐桌上迎接我的是一包微波炉加热食品，它让我想起了母亲做的饭菜。
However，what greeted me at the table was a microwave package，which reminded me of my mother’s cooking.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 stuck adj.卡住；陷(入)；困(于)　tough adj.艰难的；严厉的　upset adj.心烦的；苦恼的；沮丧的 vt.使烦恼；使生气；搅乱　rude adj.粗鲁的；无礼的　embarrassing adj.让人难堪(尴尬；害羞)的→embarrassed adj.感到难堪(尴尬)的→embarrassment n．尴尬
人物描写 chat vi.聊天；闲聊　stream vi.流动　make fun of取笑；戏弄　go through经历；度过；通读
句型 1.At age 50，she found herself out of work and stuck at home with only her computer to keep her company.(拟人) 2.She no longer feels lonely，and her company has become quite successful.(情感描写) 3.She was so inspired by the people she met online that she decided to start an IT club to teach older people how to use computers and the Internet.(情感描写) 4.When you go through tough times，you meet others who are facing similar challenges.Thinking about other people’s situations inspired me to offer help.(主旨升华) 5.However，the more polite you are，the less likely it is you will be attacked.(对比)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
早晨在校车上，我在和朋友们兴高采烈地聊天。在一个站点，Fat Ryan匆忙上了车，意外地被一个人的脚绊倒了，趴在了地上。害怕被取笑，Ryan挣扎着站起来，他的脸尴尬得通红。他陷于如此尴尬的境地，他僵在那里。他如此沮丧和尴尬，泪水止不住地顺着脸往下流。他在经历一个多么艰难的时刻啊！
On the school bus in the morning，I 1.was chatting with my friends cheerfully.At one stop，Fat Ryan got on hurriedly，tripped over someone’s foot accidentally and fell flat onto the floor.2.Afraid of being made fun of，Ryan struggled to his feet，his face burning 3.with embarrassment.He 4.was stuck in such an embarrassing situation，and he froze there.So 5.upset and embarrassed was he that tears streamed down his face uncontrollably.6.What a tough moment he was going through!(共28张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
The Internet
Unit 3
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——博客
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——博客
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇“博客”。博客是以网络作为载体，简易、迅速、便捷地发布自己的心得，及时、有效、轻松地与他人进行交流，集丰富多彩的个性化展示于一体的综合性写作形式，通常称为“网络日志”。
常用表达
1.常用的开头语
Recently，the problem of...has aroused people’s concern.最近，……问题引起了人们的关注。
It is commonly believed that.../It is a common belief that...人们普遍认为……
Many people insist that...许多人坚持认为……
With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that...随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为……
2.主体部分常用表达
The problem has been mentioned and stressed in our society more frequently than ever before.这个问题比以往任何时候更频繁地在社会上被提及和强调。
Some people，maybe，hold the view that...while I still think...
一些人或许坚持……的观点，而我仍然认为……
However，some argue that...
然而一些人认为……
Just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.正如一句谚语所说，每个硬币都有两面(凡事有利弊)。
3.常用的结束语
As for me/From my point of view/Personally (speaking)，...就我而言，……
Frankly speaking，I am and will be for the opinion that...
坦白说，我现在支持将来也支持……的观点
As I see it，I still support the opinion that...
在我看来，我仍然支持……观点。
Post your comments below!
在下面留下你的评论！
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入网购群体。请你根据以下提示，在你的博客上写一篇关于网上购物的文章。
优点：
1.足不出户，节约时间；
2.价格通常比较便宜；
3.可供选择的范围广，种类多。
缺点：
1.只能看到图片，看不到商品本身；
2.容易买到质量不好的商品。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.拥有……的机会
2.从……中受益
3.做某事对某人来说是便利的
4.点击
5.商品
6.由于
______________
_____________
____________________________
______
_______
_______________
have access to
benefit from
it is convenient for sb to do sth
click
goods
on account of
1.互联网越流行，越多的人将有机会在网上购物。
，the more people will have access to online shopping.
2.我们从网上购物中获益颇多。
____________________________________________________________
3.对我们来说，仅仅通过点击鼠标而不用出门买到我们所感兴趣的东西很方便。
just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.
The more popular the Internet becomes
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
It is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in
4.有如此多样的商品，我们可以自由选择价格比较低的。
we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.
5.我们收到的东西常常让我们因为只在网上看到图片而感到沮丧和失望。
What we receive often makes us upset and disappointed_______________
_________________________________.
6.有时我们发现我们买的商品质量不好。
_______________________________________________________________
7.你对于如何有效网上购物的见解是什么呢？
___________________________________________________
There are such various goods that
on account of
only seeing pictures on the Internet
Sometimes we find that the goods we have bought are of poor quality.
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively
将句6用“find＋宾语＋宾语补足语”升级。
_______________________________________________________________
Sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
第三步　句式升级
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
The more popular the Internet becomes，the more people will have access to online shopping.
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.First，it is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.Second，there are such various goods that we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.However，just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.First，what we receive often makes us upset and disappointed on account of only seeing pictures on the Internet.Second，sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively？Post your comments below!
随着科技的发展和互联网的普及，网络教学得到了越来越多的推广。现请你以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education”为题，结合以下要点写一篇博客：
1.网络教学的利弊以及你的理由；
2.你的看法及建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
达标检测
参考范文
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education
As the Internet becomes increasingly popular，more and more schools and students concentrate on online education.There is no doubt that it has some advantages.Firstly，online education isn’t limited by time and place，so students have access to their study materials whenever and wherever they like.Secondly，online education frees teachers from repeating the same teaching contents since the video can be played over and over again.
返 回
However，online education also has some disadvantages.With online courses，students have to spend more time using computers，which contributes to the loss of their eyesight.And online education will reduce the communication between students and teachers，which will lead to the lack of learning atmosphere.
Personally，if traditional teaching and online education can be combined，more fruitful education can certainly be realized.
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：定语从句
词、句是构成篇章的基本语言单位。各类复合句和特殊句式的恰当使用能体现学生对语言的驾驭能力。其中，定语从句的正确使用能够丰富续写文章的细节描写，增强上下文的逻辑连贯性，提升语言丰富度。
Opening the door，an old man stood there，who was dressed in dirty clothing and wearing dirty rubber boots.打开门，一位老人站在那里，他穿着脏衣服和脏橡胶靴。
His friend，whose patience had worn thin，phoned to complain.他朋友的耐心已经被消磨殆尽，打电话来抱怨。
He sprang to his feet and exclaimed，“I have a great idea！I have a solution that/which we can all help accomplish.” 他站起来，喊道：“我有一个好主意！我有一个我们都可以帮助完成的解决方案。”
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence.
饥饿的熊闻着味道来到我们的营地，营地被高高的铁丝网包围着。
(2024·新课标Ⅰ)Gunter，with whom I had a rather pleasant journey to the bus station，showed great kindness and trust.
甘特，我和他一起经历了一段相当愉快的前往汽车站的旅程，他表现出了极大的善意和信任。
[即时训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1.安迪收到了 17 岁的罗斯发来的一条短信，罗斯承认拿了那个钱包，并解释了他这么做的原因。
Andy got a text from 17-year-old Ross, ___________________________
_____________and explained the reason _____________________.
2.我永远不会忘记那个让我心动的女孩，她的笑容如同阳光般温暖。
I will never forget the girl who made my heart beat faster，____________
__________________________.
who admitted having taken
the wallet
whose smile
was as warm as the sunshine
why he had done that
3.然而，在餐桌上迎接我的是一包微波炉加热食品，它让我想起了母亲做的饭菜。
However，what greeted me at the table was a microwave package，_______________________________________.
which reminded me of my mother’s cooking
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 stuck adj.卡住；陷(入)；困(于)　tough adj.艰难的；严厉的　upset adj.心烦的；苦恼的；沮丧的 vt.使烦恼；使生气；搅乱　rude adj.粗鲁的；无礼的　embarrassing adj.让人难堪(尴尬；害羞)的→embarrassed adj.感到难堪(尴尬)的→embarrassment n.尴尬
人物描写 chat vi.聊天；闲聊　stream vi.流动　make fun of取笑；戏弄　go through经历；度过；通读
句型 1.At age 50，she found herself out of work and stuck at home with only her computer to keep her company.(拟人)
2.She no longer feels lonely，and her company has become quite successful.(情感描写)
3.She was so inspired by the people she met online that she decided to start an IT club to teach older people how to use computers and the Internet.(情感描写)
4.When you go through tough times，you meet others who are facing similar challenges.Thinking about other people’s situations inspired me to offer help.
(主旨升华)
5.However，the more polite you are，the less likely it is you will be attacked.
(对比)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
早晨在校车上，我在和朋友们兴高采烈地聊天。在一个站点，Fat Ryan匆忙上了车，意外地被一个人的脚绊倒了，趴在了地上。
On the school bus in the morning，I 1._________________________ cheerfully.At one stop，Fat Ryan got on hurriedly，tripped over someone’s foot accidentally and fell flat onto the floor.
was chatting with my friends
害怕被取笑，Ryan挣扎着站起来，他的脸尴尬得通红。他陷于如此尴尬的境地，他僵在那里。他如此沮丧和尴尬，泪水止不住地顺着脸往下流。他在经历一个多么艰难的时刻啊！
返 回
2. ，Ryan struggled to his feet，his face burning 3. .He 4._______________________________
__________，and he froze there.So 5.____________________________ that tears streamed down his face uncontrollably.6.___________________
____________________!
Afraid of being made fun of
with embarrassment
was stuck in such an embarrassing
situation
upset and embarrassed was he
What a tough moment
he was going through
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