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Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——介绍类说明文
本单元的写作项目是描述一个喜欢的地点，属于介绍类说明文，要求学生比较生动、细致地描写所熟悉地点的景物，并恰当地表达自己的感受。
1．开头部分常用表达
It is located/lies in...with an area of...
它位于……，面积为……
It covers an area of...with a history of...
它的面积为……，有着……的历史。
Located in...and covering an area of...，...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
……位于……，面积……，是中国最著名的景区之一。
The history of...dates back to...
……的历史可追溯到……
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
它自……起就是最受欢迎的旅游景点。
2．主体部分常用表达
There are many places of interest，such as...
这里有很多旅游胜地，如……
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.
你可以欣赏在海内外都享有盛誉的……
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
……正吸引着越来越多的游客。
An interesting feature of...is...
……的一个有趣的特点是……
With its pleasant climate，rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，...is one of China’s major tourist cities.
有着宜人的气候、丰富的自然资源和美丽的景观，……是中国主要的旅游城市之一。
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...沿着……游览将使你得以领略……
3．结尾部分常用表达
...is well worth visiting.
……非常值得一游。
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
……是一个必去的地方，其非凡的景观会令你流连忘返。
假如你是李华，请你给某英文报社的“城市风采”栏目写一篇短文，介绍我们伟大祖国的首都——北京，要点如下：
1．基本概况：人口约2 000万，面积16 000多平方千米，位于华北平原北部；
2．历史与文化：有3 000多年的历史，是我国的政治、文化中心，有很多大学，其中清华大学和北京大学是最著名的；
3．交通与旅游：交通便利；有天安门广场、故宫博物院、长城、国家体育场等很多旅游景点。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．位于 (be) located in
2．有着……的历史 have a history of
3．吸引……的注意 draw the attention of
4．极有吸引力的 fascinating
5．还，和，又 as well as
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．北京人口约2 000万，面积16 000多平方千米。
Beijing has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
2．北京位于华北平原北部。
Beijing is located in the north of the North China Plain.
3．北京是中国的政治、文化中心。
Beijing is the political and cultural center of China.
4．北京主办了2008年奥运会和2022年冬奥会，都是巨大的成功。
Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.
5．北京有许多重点大学，其中北京大学和清华大学是最著名的。
Beijing has many key universities，among which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
6．北京也是一个度假的好去处，且交通便利。
Beijing is also a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there.
7．有许多名胜古迹可供选择，如天安门广场、故宫博物院、长城和国家体育场，北京将给游客们留下深刻的印象。
With many places of interest to choose from，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
第三步　句式升级
1．把句1和句2合并为含有定语从句的句子。
Beijing that/which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
2．把句3和句4合并为含有现在分词短语作状语的句子。
Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Beijing，the capital of China，is a beautiful city.
Beijing which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
Beijing has a long history of over 3,000 years.Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.Beijing has many key universities，among which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
Beijing is also a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there.With many places of interest to choose from，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
Now，Beijing is playing an increasingly important role in the world.
假定你是李华，你的爱尔兰朋友Scarlett暑假将与父母来你所在的城市游玩，发邮件请你推荐游玩的地方。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．你建议的景点；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
Dear Scarlett，
Learning that you’re eager to visit my city with your parents during this summer vacation，I’m more than pleased to offer you some suggestions.
Above all，I’d like to recommend the fascinating Ocean Park to you，which belongs to M & L Company.Besides，with different kinds of sea animals，you can enjoy a lovely dolphin show，where the dolphins will jump out of the water and give you an amazing performance.I hold the strong belief that you will all like it.What’s more，Ocean Park is not far from our snack street，and you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks there.
Please send my regards to your parents.Wish you an enjoyable trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：状语从句
状语从句是英语读后续写中经常使用的从句之一，因此必须学会并熟练运用状语从句，使写作的句型更加丰富，逻辑感更强。
A wave of happiness and excitement swept over him when he learned that his son was admitted.
当他得知他的儿子被录取时，一阵幸福和兴奋涌上他的心头。
Only when I received the award did I fully understand the value of my teacher’s encouragement with my writing.只有当我获奖时，我才完全理解了老师在我的写作方面给予我的鼓励的意义。
Hardly had he stepped onto the stage when the audience burst into thunderous applause.
他一踏上舞台，观众就爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。
Exhausted as he was from the long journey，he forced himself to stay awake and calm.尽管长途跋涉让他疲惫不堪，他还是强迫自己保持清醒和冷静。
Such great challenges did he face that his determination was truly put to the test.他面临着如此巨大的挑战，以至于他的决心受到了真正的考验。
[即时训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1．他一看到机会，就抓住绳子，爬上了悬崖。
Hardly had he seen the opportunity when he grabbed the rope and climbed up the cliff.
2．这个故事如此感人，以至于房间里的每个人都感动得流下了眼泪。
So touching was the story that everyone in the room was moved to tears.
3．我认为你会很快适应它们的，尽管天气与食物都与你以往的不同。
Different as the weather and the food are from yours，I think that you will quickly adjust to them.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 eager adj.热切的；渴望的→eagerly adv.热切地；渴望地　puzzle n．谜；智力游戏；疑问 vt.迷惑；使困惑→puzzling adj.令人困惑的→puzzled adj.困惑的　fascinating adj.极有吸引力的；迷人的→fascinate v．深深吸引；迷住→fascinated adj.着迷的
环境描写 landscape n．(陆上，尤指乡村的)风景　scent n．气味；气息　dot n．点；小(圆)点 vt.加点；遍布　ocean n．大海；海洋　belong vi.应在(某处)；适应　surround vt.围绕；包围→surrounding adj.周围的；附近的→surroundings n．环境　location n．地方；地点；位置→located adj.坐落在；位于
动作描写 conquer vt.占领；征服；控制　battle vi.& vt.搏斗；奋斗　charge vt.收费；控告；充电 vi.猛冲　approach vt.接近；接洽；着手处理 vi.(在时间上)靠近　roll vi.& vt.(使)翻滚；(使)滚动 n．翻滚　roar vi.& n．吼叫；咆哮　greet vt.问候；迎接　defence n．防御；保卫→defend vt.防御；保卫　crowd vt.挤满；使……拥挤　break away (from sb/sth)脱离；背叛；逃脱
句型 1.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all，offering something for each of the senses.(环境描写) 2.The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes，with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.(环境描写) 3.And down by the sea，the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.(环境描写) 4.On a quiet morning in the mountains，feel the sun on your skin，and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.(动作描写＋拟人修辞) 5.With all this beauty，it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music，dancing and dining.(情感描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
随着我们靠近被群山围绕的宿营地，我们难以抑制心中的兴奋。一到达宿营地，妈妈就立即打开车门，冲了出去，热切地催促我们搭帐篷。绿树连绵起伏，各色野花点缀其中，周围迷人的风景堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。我们沐浴着阳光，呼吸着鲜花甜美的芬芳。鸟儿在欢快地歌唱，好像在热情地迎接我们。我的家人惬意地聊着天，过去美好的记忆涌上我们心头。
As we 1.approached the camping site surrounded by mountains，we had difficulty containing our excitement.On reaching it，my mom opened the door of the car immediately,2.charged outside and eagerly urged us to put up the tent.3.The surrounding fascinating landscape was a true feast for our eyes,4.with rolling green trees dotted with various wild flowers.We were bathed in the sun and 5.breathed in the sweet scent of fresh flowers.Birds were singing happily as if 6.(they were) greeting us warmly.My family chatted comfortably,7.with sweet memories of the past crowding in on us.(共32张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
History and
traditions
Unit 4
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——介绍类说明文
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——介绍类说明文
本单元的写作项目是描述一个喜欢的地点，属于介绍类说明文，要求学生比较生动、细致地描写所熟悉地点的景物，并恰当地表达自己的感受。
常用表达
1.开头部分常用表达
It is located/lies in...with an area of...
它位于……，面积为……
It covers an area of...with a history of...
它的面积为……，有着……的历史。
Located in...and covering an area of...，...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
……位于……，面积……，是中国最著名的景区之一。
The history of...dates back to...
……的历史可追溯到……
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
它自……起就是最受欢迎的旅游景点。
2.主体部分常用表达
There are many places of interest，such as...
这里有很多旅游胜地，如……
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.
你可以欣赏在海内外都享有盛誉的……
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
……正吸引着越来越多的游客。
An interesting feature of...is...
……的一个有趣的特点是……
With its pleasant climate，rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，...is one of China’s major tourist cities.
有着宜人的气候、丰富的自然资源和美丽的景观，……是中国主要的旅游城市之一。
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...沿着……游览将使你得以领略……
3.结尾部分常用表达
...is well worth visiting.
……非常值得一游。
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
……是一个必去的地方，其非凡的景观会令你流连忘返。
假如你是李华，请你给某英文报社的“城市风采”栏目写一篇短文，介绍我们伟大祖国的首都——北京，要点如下：
1.基本概况：人口约2 000万，面积16 000多平方千米，位于华北平原北部；
2.历史与文化：有3 000多年的历史，是我国的政治、文化中心，有很多大学，其中清华大学和北京大学是最著名的；
3.交通与旅游：交通便利；有天安门广场、故宫博物院、长城、国家体育场等很多旅游景点。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.位于
2.有着……的历史
3.吸引……的注意
4.极有吸引力的
5.还，和，又
______________
_________________
_____________________
__________
_________
(be) located in
have a history of
draw the attention of
fascinating
as well as
1.北京人口约2 000万，面积16 000多平方千米。
Beijing about 20 million and more than 16,000 square kilometers.
2.北京位于华北平原北部。
Beijing the north of the North China Plain.
3.北京是中国的政治、文化中心。
Beijing is of China.
has a population of
covers an area of
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
is located in
the political and cultural center
4.北京主办了2008年奥运会和2022年冬奥会，都是巨大的成功。
Beijing ________________________________________________________
___________，which turned out to be great successes.
5.北京有许多重点大学，其中北京大学和清华大学是最著名的。
Beijing has many key universities， Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
6.北京也是一个度假的好去处，且交通便利。
Beijing is also and it’s convenient to travel there.
hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic
Games
among which
a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday
7.有许多名胜古迹可供选择，如天安门广场、故宫博物院、长城和国家体育场，北京将给游客们留下深刻的印象。
，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
With many places of interest to choose from
1.把句1和句2合并为含有定语从句的句子。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.把句3和句4合并为含有现在分词短语作状语的句子。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Beijing that/which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
第三步　句式升级
Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Beijing，the capital of China，is a beautiful city.
Beijing which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
Beijing has a long history of over 3,000 years.Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.Beijing has many key universities，among which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
Beijing is also a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there.With many places of interest to choose from，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
Now，Beijing is playing an increasingly important role in the world.
假定你是李华，你的爱尔兰朋友Scarlett暑假将与父母来你所在的城市游玩，发邮件请你推荐游玩的地方。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你建议的景点；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
达标检测
参考范文
Dear Scarlett，
Learning that you’re eager to visit my city with your parents during this summer vacation，I’m more than pleased to offer you some suggestions.
Above all，I’d like to recommend the fascinating Ocean Park to you，which belongs to M & L Company.Besides，with different kinds of sea animals，you can enjoy a lovely dolphin show，where the dolphins will jump out of the water and give you an amazing performance.I hold the strong belief that you will all like it.What’s more，Ocean Park is not far from our snack street，and you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks there.
返 回
Please send my regards to your parents.Wish you an enjoyable trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：状语从句
状语从句是英语读后续写中经常使用的从句之一，因此必须学会并熟练运用状语从句，使写作的句型更加丰富，逻辑感更强。
A wave of happiness and excitement swept over him when he learned that his son was admitted.
当他得知他的儿子被录取时，一阵幸福和兴奋涌上他的心头。
Only when I received the award did I fully understand the value of my teacher’s encouragement with my writing.
只有当我获奖时，我才完全理解了老师在我的写作方面给予我的鼓励的意义。
Hardly had he stepped onto the stage when the audience burst into thunderous applause.
他一踏上舞台，观众就爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。
Exhausted as he was from the long journey，he forced himself to stay awake and calm.
尽管长途跋涉让他疲惫不堪，他还是强迫自己保持清醒和冷静。
Such great challenges did he face that his determination was truly put to the test.
他面临着如此巨大的挑战，以至于他的决心受到了真正的考验。
[即时训练]　根据汉语提示补全句子
1.他一看到机会，就抓住绳子，爬上了悬崖。
when he grabbed the rope and climbed up the cliff.
2.这个故事如此感人，以至于房间里的每个人都感动得流下了眼泪。
that everyone in the room was moved to tears.
3.我认为你会很快适应它们的，尽管天气与食物都与你以往的不同。
，I think that you will quickly adjust to them.
Hardly had he seen the opportunity
So touching was the story
Different as the weather and the food are from yours
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感 描写 eager adj.热切的；渴望的→eagerly adv.热切地；渴望地　puzzle n.谜；智力游戏；疑问 vt.迷惑；使困惑→puzzling adj.令人困惑的→puzzled adj.困惑的　fascinating adj.极有吸引力的；迷人的→fascinate v.深深吸引；迷住→fascinated adj.着迷的
环境 描写 landscape n.(陆上，尤指乡村的)风景　scent n.气味；气息　dot n.点；小(圆)点 vt.加点；遍布　ocean n.大海；海洋　belong vi.应在(某处)；适应　surround vt.围绕；包围→surrounding adj.周围的；附近的→surroundings n.环境　location n.地方；地点；位置→located adj.坐落在；位于
词汇 动作 描写 conquer vt.占领；征服；控制　battle vi.& vt.搏斗；奋斗　charge vt.收费；控告；充电 vi.猛冲　approach vt.接近；接洽；着手处理 vi.(在时间上)靠近　roll vi.& vt.(使)翻滚；(使)滚动 n.翻滚　roar vi.& n.吼叫；咆哮　greet vt.问候；迎接　defence n.防御；保卫→defend vt.防御；保卫　crowd vt.挤满；使……拥挤　break away (from sb/sth)脱离；背叛；
逃脱
句型 1.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all，offering something for each of the senses.(环境描写)
2.The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes，with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.(环境描写)
3.And down by the sea，the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.(环境描写)
4.On a quiet morning in the mountains，feel the sun on your skin，and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.(动作描写＋拟人修辞)
5.With all this beauty，it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music，dancing and dining.(情感描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
随着我们靠近被群山围绕的宿营地，我们难以抑制心中的兴奋。一到达宿营地，妈妈就立即打开车门，冲了出去，热切地催促我们搭帐篷。
As we 1. ，we had difficulty containing our excitement.On reaching it，my mom opened the door of the car immediately,2.__________________________________
_______________.
approached the camping site surrounded by mountains
charged outside and eagerly urged us to
put up the tent
绿树连绵起伏，各色野花点缀其中，周围迷人的风景堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。我们沐浴着阳光，呼吸着鲜花甜美的芬芳。鸟儿在欢快地歌唱，好像在热情地迎接我们。我的家人惬意地聊着天，过去美好的记忆涌上我们心头。
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3. was a true feast for our eyes,4. .We were bathed in the sun and 5. .Birds were singing happily as if 6. warmly.My family chatted comfortably,7. .
The surrounding fascinating landscape
with rolling green trees dotted with various wild flowers
breathed in the sweet scent of fresh flowers
(they were) greeting us
with sweet memories of the past crowding in on us
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