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Period 5　Writing
写作一　应用文写作——演讲稿
本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。演讲稿属于应用文的一种，是为演讲准备的书面材料，通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。
1．开头语常用表达
Ladies and gentlemen/Dear teachers and schoolmates，I’m Li Ming.I’m greatly honored/privileged to speak here on behalf of...
女士们，先生们/亲爱的老师们，同学们，我是李明。非常荣幸在此代表……发表演讲。
Good morning/afternoon/evening，everybody！Thank you for being on time/making the time to come today.大家早上/下午/晚上好！感谢你们今天准时/抽时间前来。
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about...
感谢你们给我这次机会发表关于……的演讲。
2．主体部分常用表达
Today’s topic is...今天的主题是……
Today we are here to talk about...
今天我们在此探讨……
I’m going to talk about something that is quite important to all of us.
我要谈论一些对我们大家都很重要的事情。
We all ought to be aware of the following points.我们都应该意识到以下几点。
3．结尾部分常用表达
I hope I have made myself understood.
我希望我已经清楚地表达了我的意思。
I hope you have found this useful.
我希望你们发现这有帮助。
Actions speak louder than words.Let’s take action immediately.
事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。
I believe the future of...is promising through the efforts of us all.我相信，经过我们的共同努力，……的未来是光明的。
Just as the saying goes，“Individuals together can make quite a difference.” I’m greatly convinced that the world will be a more harmonious one/...will be a great success through the joint efforts of us all.常言道：“团结就是力量。”我相信，经过我们所有人的共同努力，世界将会变得更加和谐/……必将成功。
That’s all.Thank you for your listening/attention.
我的演讲结束。感谢你们的倾听/关注。
音乐在我们的日常生活中扮演着很重要的角色，请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music in Our Life”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
1．音乐可以使我们放松身心，缓解压力；
2．音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心；
3．音乐能够抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境；
4．音乐可以帮我们更好地了解其他文化。
注意：不可逐句翻译，可根据你自己对音乐的理解适当发挥、拓展。
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1．有机会做某事 have an/the opportunity to do sth
2．众所周知 as we all know/as is known to us all
3．在……中起重要的作用 perform an important role in
4．使某人能够做某事 enable sb to do sth
5．爱上fall in love with
6．证明prove
7．各种各样的various
8．治愈cure
9．假定，假设，以为 assume
10．另外 in addition
11．处理；完成；度过 get through
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
1．事实证明，音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
It has been proved that music performs an important role in our life.
2．它能够使我们感到身心放松，因此给我们能量。
It enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically and thus gives us energy.
3．音乐可以激励我们度过我们所处的困难时期。
Music can inspire us to get through tough times we are caught in.
4．音乐不仅能触动我们的灵魂，减轻我们的痛苦和压力，还能治愈我们的孤独。
Not only can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure but it can also cure us of our loneliness.
5．音乐被认为是世界通用的语言。
Music is assumed to be a universal language.
6．音乐对了解另一种文化有很大的好处。
Music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
7．爱上音乐吧，我们将过上更幸福的生活。
Fall in love with music and we will live a happier life.
第三步　句式升级
1．用现在分词短语作状语升级句2。
It enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.
2．用过去分词短语作状语合并句5和句6。
Assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning! I am honored to have the opportunity to give a speech about “The Role of Music in Our Life” here.
It has been proved that music performs an important role in our life.First，it enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.Second，music can inspire us to get through tough times we are caught in.Moreover，not only can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure but it can also cure us of our loneliness.In addition，assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
As far as I’m concerned，music is part of our life.Fall in love with music and we will live a happier life.
Thank you very much for your attention.
假设你是李华，学校邀请你本周三下午在高一年级大会上为同学们发表演讲。演讲的内容是音乐是如何改变你的生活的。请你根据自身的经历写一篇演讲稿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考范文
Good afternoon，everyone，
I am Li Hua.It’s a great honour to be invited here to deliver a speech about how music changed my life.
Whenever I was asked to answer questions in class，so nervous did I feel that I couldn’t speak fluently.Thus，discouraged and helpless，I had no idea how to deal with the embarrassing situation.It was music that inspired me with confidence.I thought to myself，“Now that I have a talent for music，why not sing it in public bravely？” Therefore I encouraged myself to express myself with music and I often sang songs in my classroom.Last term I took part in a school concert and was awarded a prize for my fantastic performance.Music gave me confidence and a sense of achievement.In addition，music gave me strength，helping me to get through tough times.Gradually，I conquered my shyness.
I hope all of us will make music our friend who can cure us of our weaknesses.
Thank you！
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：倒装句
倒装用于表示一定的句子结构或强调句子成分。倒装句的使用丰富了语言表达，让句式更加多样。因此，读后续写中适当使用倒装句式会使文章的表达更生动有力，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
Not until then did Megan pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.
直到那时Megan才说出了困扰她一整天的事。
Only after I experienced all of this did I realize that with the love of my family，I can overcome any difficulty in life.
只有经历了这一切之后我才意识到，有家人的爱，我可以克服生活中的任何困难。
Not only did Jack donate a large sum of money to the charity，but he also organized several fundraising activities to help those in need.杰克不仅向慈善机构捐赠了一大笔钱，还组织了几次筹款活动来帮助那些有需要的人。
[即时训练] 根据汉语提示补全句子
1．只有当简处于如此无助的境地时，她才意识到她心爱的汤姆对她来说是如此重要。
Only when Jane was in such a helpless situation was she aware that her beloved Tom meant so much to her.
2．直到我成功地搞清楚了令人费解的心理学问题他才对我采取了友好的态度。
Not until I managed to figure out the puzzling phychological questions did he adopt a friendly attitude to me.
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 satisfaction n．满足；满意；欣慰→satisfy vt.使满意；满足→satisfied adj.满意的→satisfying/satisfactory adj.令人满意的　relief n．(焦虑、痛苦的)减轻或消除；(不快过后的)宽慰、轻松或解脱→relieve vt.减轻；解除→relieved adj.放心的；宽慰的　absorbed in sth/sb被……吸引住；专心致志
动作描写 enable vt.使能够；使可能　prove vt.证明；展现　cure vt.治愈；治好(疾病)；解决(问题)　reaction n．反应；回应→react vi.(对……)作出反应　fall in love with爱上　get through (设法)处理；完成；熬过(困难时期)
句型 1.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged.(情感描写) 2.John A．Logan said，“Music is the medicine of the mind.”(引用) 3.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(拟人) 4.When I listened to music，it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.(情感描写＋明喻) 5.Music gave me strength and brought me relief...Moreover，music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.(拟人) 6.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.(隐喻)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
伯纳德和约翰专心于爆玉米花。听着玉米的噼啪声，他们心里乐开了花，想象着许多顾客会爱上他们的爆米花。令他们满意的是，第一次尝试时他们就成功了，他们松了一口气。然后，他们把爆米花放进纸袋里，骑着三轮车，像快乐的小鸟一样前往附近的市场。他们的促销计划证明有效。伯纳德可以用挣来的钱请医生治愈父亲的疾病，他坚信他家可以渡过这个难关。
Bernard and John 1.were absorbed in popping the corn.Hearing the crackling of the corn，they were over the moon，imagining many customers 2. falling in love with their popcorn.3.To their satisfaction，they made it at the first attempt and they 4.sighed with relief.Then they put the popcorn into paper bags，rode a tricycle and headed for a nearby market like happy birds.Their promotion plans 5.proved effective.With the money earned，Bernard could send for a doctor 6.to cure his father of his disease，firmly believing that his family 7.could get through the tough time.(共30张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Music
Unit 5
内容索引
写作一　应用文写作——演讲稿
写作二　读后续写微技能
写作一　应用文写作——演讲稿
本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。演讲稿属于应用文的一种，是为演讲准备的书面材料，通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。
常用表达
1.开头语常用表达
Ladies and gentlemen/Dear teachers and schoolmates，I’m Li Ming.I’m greatly honored/privileged to speak here on behalf of...
女士们，先生们/亲爱的老师们，同学们，我是李明。非常荣幸在此代表……发表演讲。
Good morning/afternoon/evening，everybody！Thank you for being on time/making the time to come today.大家早上/下午/晚上好！感谢你们今天准时/抽时间前来。
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about...
感谢你们给我这次机会发表关于……的演讲。
2.主体部分常用表达
Today’s topic is...今天的主题是……
Today we are here to talk about...
今天我们在此探讨……
I’m going to talk about something that is quite important to all of us.
我要谈论一些对我们大家都很重要的事情。
We all ought to be aware of the following points.
我们都应该意识到以下几点。
3.结尾部分常用表达
I hope I have made myself understood.
我希望我已经清楚地表达了我的意思。
I hope you have found this useful.
我希望你们发现这有帮助。
Actions speak louder than words.Let’s take action immediately.
事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。
I believe the future of...is promising through the efforts of us all.我相信，经过我们的共同努力，……的未来是光明的。
Just as the saying goes，“Individuals together can make quite a difference.” I’m greatly convinced that the world will be a more harmonious one/...will be a great success through the joint efforts of us all.常言道：“团结就是力量。”我相信，经过我们所有人的共同努力，世界将会变得更加和谐/……必将成功。
That’s all.Thank you for your listening/attention.
我的演讲结束。感谢你们的倾听/关注。
音乐在我们的日常生活中扮演着很重要的角色，请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music in Our Life”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
1.音乐可以使我们放松身心，缓解压力；
2.音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心；
3.音乐能够抚慰我们的心灵，帮助我们走出困境；
4.音乐可以帮我们更好地了解其他文化。
注意：不可逐句翻译，可根据你自己对音乐的理解适当发挥、拓展。
典例演练
第一步　审题谋篇
第二步　遣词造句
核心词汇　(单元写作词汇运用)
1.有机会做某事
2.众所周知
3.在……中起重要的作用
4.使某人能够做某事
5.爱上
6.证明
7.各种各样的
______________________________
_______________________________
__________________________
_________________
______________
______
_______
have an/the opportunity to do sth
as we all know/as is known to us all
perform an important role in
enable sb to do sth
fall in love with
prove
various
8.治愈
9.假定，假设，以为
10.另外
11.处理；完成；度过
_____
________
___________
____________
assume
cure
in addition
get through
1.事实证明，音乐在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
music performs an important role in our life.
2.它能够使我们感到身心放松，因此给我们能量。
It and thus gives us energy.
3.音乐可以激励我们度过我们所处的困难时期。
Music can inspire us to we are caught in.
It has been proved that
enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically
连词成句　(教材句式仿写)
get through tough times
4.音乐不仅能触动我们的灵魂，减轻我们的痛苦和压力，还能治愈我们的孤独。
Not only _______________________________________________________
.
5.音乐被认为是世界通用的语言。
Music .
6.音乐对了解另一种文化有很大的好处。
Music can be of great benefit to .
7.爱上音乐吧，我们将过上更幸福的生活。
and we will live a happier life.
can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure
but it can also cure us of our loneliness
is assumed to be a universal language
learning about another culture
Fall in love with music
1.用现在分词短语作状语升级句2。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用过去分词短语作状语合并句5和句6。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.
第三步　句式升级
Assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
第四步　组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning! I am honored to have the opportunity to give a speech about “The Role of Music in Our Life” here.
It has been proved that music performs an important role in our life.First，it enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.Second，music can inspire us to get through tough times we are caught in.Moreover，not only can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure but it can also cure us of our loneliness.In addition，assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
As far as I’m concerned，music is part of our life.Fall in love with music and we will live a happier life.
Thank you very much for your attention.
假设你是李华，学校邀请你本周三下午在高一年级大会上为同学们发表演讲。演讲的内容是音乐是如何改变你的生活的。请你根据自身的经历写一篇演讲稿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
达标检测
参考范文
Good afternoon，everyone，
I am Li Hua.It’s a great honour to be invited here to deliver a speech about how music changed my life.
Whenever I was asked to answer questions in class，so nervous did I feel that I couldn’t speak fluently.Thus，discouraged and helpless，I had no idea how to deal with the embarrassing situation.It was music that inspired me with confidence.I thought to myself，“Now that I have a talent for music，why not sing it in public bravely？”
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Therefore I encouraged myself to express myself with music and I often sang songs in my classroom.Last term I took part in a school concert and was awarded a prize for my fantastic performance.Music gave me confidence and a sense of achievement.In addition，music gave me strength，helping me to get through tough times.Gradually，I conquered my shyness.
I hope all of us will make music our friend who can cure us of our weaknesses.
Thank you！
写作二　读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.增分语料积累
读后续写高级句式升级：倒装句
倒装用于表示一定的句子结构或强调句子成分。倒装句的使用丰富了语言表达，让句式更加多样。因此，读后续写中适当使用倒装句式会使文章的表达更生动有力，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
Not until then did Megan pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.
直到那时Megan才说出了困扰她一整天的事。
Only after I experienced all of this did I realize that with the love of my family，I can overcome any difficulty in life.
只有经历了这一切之后我才意识到，有家人的爱，我可以克服生活中的任何困难。
Not only did Jack donate a large sum of money to the charity，but he also organized several fundraising activities to help those in need.杰克不仅向慈善机构捐赠了一大笔钱，还组织了几次筹款活动来帮助那些有需要的人。
[即时训练] 根据汉语提示补全句子
1.只有当简处于如此无助的境地时，她才意识到她心爱的汤姆对她来说是如此重要。
she aware that her beloved Tom meant so much to her.
2.直到我成功地搞清楚了令人费解的心理学问题他才对我采取了友好的态度。
the puzzling phychological questions
a friendly attitude to me.
Only when Jane was in such a helpless situation was
Not until I managed to figure out
did he adopt
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 satisfaction n.满足；满意；欣慰→satisfy vt.使满意；满足→satisfied adj.满意的→satisfying/satisfactory adj.令人满意的　relief n.(焦虑、痛苦的)减轻或消除；(不快过后的)宽慰、轻松或解脱→relieve vt.减轻；解除→relieved adj.放心的；宽慰的　absorbed in sth/sb被……吸引住；专心致志
动作描写 enable vt.使能够；使可能　prove vt.证明；展现　cure vt.治愈；治好(疾病)；解决(问题)　reaction n.反应；回应→react vi.(对……)作出反应　fall in love with爱上　get through (设法)处理；完成；熬过(困难时期)
句型 1.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged.(情感描写)
2.John A.Logan said，“Music is the medicine of the mind.”(引用)
3.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(拟人)
4.When I listened to music，it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.(情感描写＋明喻)
5.Music gave me strength and brought me relief...Moreover，music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.(拟人)
6.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.(隐喻)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
伯纳德和约翰专心于爆玉米花。听着玉米的噼啪声，他们心里乐开了花，想象着许多顾客会爱上他们的爆米花。令他们满意的是，第一次尝试时他们就成功了，他们松了一口气。
Bernard and John 1. .Hearing the crackling of the corn，they were over the moon，imagining many customers 2. .3. ，they made it at the first attempt and they 4. .
were absorbed in popping the corn
falling in love with their popcorn
To their satisfaction
sighed with relief
然后，他们把爆米花放进纸袋里，骑着三轮车，像快乐的小鸟一样前往附近的市场。他们的促销计划证明有效。伯纳德可以用挣来的钱请医生治愈父亲的疾病，他坚信他家可以渡过这个难关。
Then they put the popcorn into paper bags，rode a tricycle and headed for a nearby market like happy birds.Their promotion plans 5._________
.With the money earned，Bernard could send for a doctor 6. ，firmly believing that his family 7.____________________ the tough time.
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proved
effective
to cure his father of his disease
could get through
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