Unit 4 My family 话题写作(课件)英语冀教版2024七年级上册

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Review Unit 4
My family 写作练习
1.我能够通过小组合作学习,掌握单词、短语、句式的背诵。
2.我能够积累“谈论家人”相关句型,进行作文表达与写作,提高我的英语语言表达能力和理解能力。
Learning aims
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【话题解读】
本单元主题为 “介绍我的家庭”,归属于 “人与社会” 范畴里 “社会服务与人际沟通” 主题群,涉及 “和谐家庭,良好的人际关系” 子主题 。通过听说、阅读理解、语法体验、写作等语言活动,让学生掌握介绍家人、家庭活动以及名字文化含义等内容,助力学生培养尊重、同情、责任感等正面价值观,加深对家庭在生活中重要性的认知。
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写作内容:创作一篇短文,全面介绍自己的家庭,涵盖家庭成员信息、
家庭日常活动、特殊节日或纪念日的庆祝方式等。
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3. 写作要点
(1)家庭成员:详细说明家庭成员的姓名、年龄、职业、性格特点等。比如介绍父亲,“My father, named Li Hua, is 40 years old. He is a doctor and is known for his patience and kindness.”
(2)家庭日常活动:描述家庭成员共同参与的日常活动,如一起做饭、看电视、户外运动等。“On weekends, we often cook a big meal together. Mom is in charge of the main course, while Dad and I help with the side dishes.”
(3)特殊时刻:阐述家庭如何庆祝生日、节日等特殊时刻。“During the Spring Festival, we always decorate our house with red lanterns and couplets. On New Year's Eve, the whole family gets together to have a big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala.”
(4)家庭关系:提及家庭成员间的相处模式、彼此间的关爱与支持。“My parents always encourage me when I face difficulties. My sister and I share secrets and support each other in our studies.”
(5)名字文化:若有特别含义,可介绍自己或家人名字的文化内涵。“My name is Mei, which means beautiful in Chinese. My parents hoped I would grow up to be a kind - hearted and beautiful - minded person.”
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4. 写作思路提示
(1)以人带事:先介绍每个家庭成员,再围绕其讲述与之相关的家庭活动或故事,使人物形象更丰满,家庭场景更生动。比如介绍完奶奶后,讲述每年奶奶生日时全家一起为她庆生的温馨场景。
(2)时间串联:按照时间顺序,从日常到特殊节日,依次描述家庭生活片段,展现家庭生活的连贯性和丰富性。如从平常的周末家庭活动,过渡到重要节日的庆祝。
(3)突出情感:在描述家庭活动和成员关系时,着重体现家庭的温暖、爱与凝聚力,让读者能深切感受到家庭氛围。
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5. 写作步骤详解
(1)开篇引入:以对家庭的总体感受或一句温馨的话语开篇,如 “Home is where the heart is. My family is the most precious thing in my life.” 引出要介绍家庭的主题。
(2)主体描述:按照写作要点,依次介绍家庭成员、日常活动、特殊时刻等内容。在介绍过程中,运用具体事例和细节描写,增强文章感染力。例如介绍家庭活动时,描述大家一起做饭时的互动和笑声。
(3)结尾升华:总结对家庭的热爱,强调家庭对自己成长的重要意义。如 “I love my family deeply. It is not just a place to live but a harbor full of love and warmth that will always be with me.”
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汇运用提示
(1)家庭成员称呼:“father/dad/daddy”“mother/mom/mummy”“grandfather/grandpa”“grandmother/grandma”“sister”“brother”“uncle”“aunt”“cousin” 等。
(2)描述性格与外貌:“kind - hearted”(善良的)、“patient”(有耐心的)、“outgoing”(外向的)、“handsome”(英俊的)、“beautiful”(美丽的)、“tall”(高的)、“short”(矮的) 等。
(3)家庭活动:“cook”(做饭)、“watch TV”(看电视)、“play games”(玩游戏)、“go for a walk”(散步)、“have a picnic”(野餐) 等。
(4)节日相关:“Spring Festival”(春节)、“Mid - Autumn Festival”(中秋节)、“birthday”(生日)、“celebrate”(庆祝)、“decorate”(装饰) 等。
(5)情感表达:“love”(爱)、“care”(关心)、“warmth”(温暖)、“happiness”(幸福)、“precious”(珍贵的) 等。
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句型运用提示
(1)介绍家庭成员:“This is... He/She is...(这是…… 他 / 她是…… )” 例如:“This is my mother. She is a teacher.”
(2)描述爱好与活动:“...like (s)/love (s) doing...(…… 喜欢做…… )” 比如:“My brother loves playing basketball.”
(3)表达在某时做某事:“We usually/often...on/at...(我们通常 / 经常在……(时间)做…… )” 如:“We often have a family dinner on weekends.”
(4)强调句型:“It is/was...that/who...(正是…… )” 例如:“It is my parents who always support me.”
(5)感叹句:“What a/an + adj. + n. + 主语 + 谓语!(多么…… 的…… 啊! )” 或 “How + adj./adv. + 主语 + 谓语!(多么…… 啊! )” 如:“What a warm family I have! ” 或 “How happy we are when we get together! ”
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范例作文
My Family
Home is where the heart is. My family is the most precious thing in my life. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister, and me.
My father, named Zhang Wei, is 42 years old. He is a hard - working engineer. He is tall and strong, and he has a great sense of responsibility. He always tries his best to support our family. My mother is 40 and she is a kind - hearted nurse. She is gentle and patient. She takes good care of all of us.My sister is a lovely girl. She is 10 years old and in primary school. She is very clever and outgoing. We often play games and share our secrets together.
On weekends, we usually have a family activity. Sometimes we go to the park and have a picnic. We enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery there. Sometimes we cook a big meal at home. Mom is in charge of the main course, and Dad and I help with the side dishes. We chat and laugh while cooking, and it's really a happy time
During the Spring Festival, our family is full of joy. We decorate our house with red lanterns and couplets. On New Year's Eve, we get together to have a big feast. After that, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the New Year to come.
My name is Zhang Ming. “Ming” means bright in Chinese. My parents hoped I could have a bright future. I love my family deeply. It is not just a place to live but a harbor full of love and warmth that will.
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译文:
我的家庭
家是心之所系之处。我的家庭是我生命中最珍贵的东西。我家有四口人:我的父母、我的妹妹和我。
我的父亲叫张伟,42 岁。他是一名勤劳的工程师。他高大强壮,有很强的责任感。他总是竭尽全力支撑我们的家。我的母亲 40 岁,是一位善良的护士。她温柔且有耐心。她把我们照顾得很好。
我的妹妹是个可爱的女孩。她 10 岁,在上小学。她非常聪明且外向。我们经常一起玩游戏,分享彼此的秘密。
在周末,我们通常会进行家庭活动。有时我们去公园野餐。我们享受那里的新鲜空气和美丽风景。有时我们在家做大餐。妈妈负责主菜,我和爸爸帮忙做配菜。我们做饭时一边聊天一边欢笑,那真是一段快乐的时光。
春节期间,我们家充满了喜悦。我们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子。除夕夜,我们聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的大餐。之后,我们看春节联欢晚会,等待新年的到来。
我的名字是张明。“明” 在中文里意味着光明。我的父母希望我能有一个光明的未来。我深深地爱着我的家庭。它不仅仅是一个居住的地方,更是一个充满爱与温暖的港湾,将永远陪伴着我。
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实战演练:
家是温馨的港湾,为我们遮风挡雨;家是快乐生活的源泉,滋润着我们的心灵。育才中学即将举办一场主题为“AHappy Family”的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请根据图文信息写一篇不少于50词的演讲稿,介绍你的一家.写作要求:
1.包含图文信息的全部内容,可适当拓展;:
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名,
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A Happy Family
I'm Li Hua. _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
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[总体分析]
① 体裁:本文是一篇演讲稿,属于记叙文范畴,作者以第一人称介绍自己的家庭,属于 “人与社会” 主题范畴中的 “家庭、朋友与周围的人” 主题群 ,旨在展现家庭的幸福与温暖。
② 时态:主要运用一般现在时来陈述家庭成员的职业、爱好等常态信息 ,如 “My father is a doctor. He loves eating beef noodles...” 。整体时态运用准确,契合介绍家庭日常情况的语境。
③ 提示:围绕图文信息介绍家庭成员,包括职业、喜爱的食物和活动,以及自身和弟弟的年龄、特点与喜好,要点全面,内容紧密围绕 “幸福家庭” 主题展开。
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[亮点词汇]
① warm - hearted:“热心的;温馨的” ,用来形容家庭,生动传达出家庭温暖的氛围,比普通的 “warm” 更具情感色彩。
② be into:“对…… 感兴趣;热衷于” ,是口语化且地道的表达,如 “He's really into beef noodles” ,比 “like” 更能体现喜爱的程度。
③ cherish:“珍视;珍惜” ,准确表达出作者对家庭的深厚情感,用词精准且高级。
[高分句型]
① 定语从句:“It's the place where I grow, learn, and feel happy.” 用 “where” 引导定语从句,修饰先行词 “the place” ,清晰地表明家庭是自己成长、学习和感受快乐的地方,使句子表意丰富且语法结构更高级。
② 并列句:“My father is a doctor. He's really into beef noodles and often plays football after work to keep fit.” 通过并列句结构,简洁明了地介绍父亲的职业和生活爱好,句子逻辑连贯,层次清晰。
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[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题:“Dear friends, I'm Li Hua. I'm lucky to be part of a warm - hearted family.” 开篇点明身份,并直接引出 “自己身处一个温馨家庭” 这一主题,为后文介绍家庭成员做铺垫。
第二步,阐述具体内容:
父亲介绍:“My father is a doctor. He's really into beef noodles and often plays football after work to keep fit. His hard - working and responsible spirit inspires me.” 先说明父亲职业,接着介绍其饮食爱好和运动习惯,最后阐述父亲的精神对自己的激励,从多个角度展现父亲形象。
母亲介绍:“My mother is a teacher. Mapo tofu is her all - time favorite. She loves going hiking on weekends, enjoying the beauty of nature. Her patience and kindness touch everyone around her.” 依次介绍母亲职业、喜爱食物、周末活动,以及母亲性格特点带来的影响,使母亲形象立体丰满。
自身与弟弟介绍:“I'm 13 years old. I'm crazy about reading as it takes me to different worlds. And here's Oscar, my 2 - year - old brother. He's incredibly cute and his love for meat is so funny.” 介绍自己年龄和爱好,并说明爱好带来的体验,再介绍弟弟年龄、可爱特点和饮食喜好,生动有趣。
第三步,总结升华:“In our family, love is everywhere. It's the place where I grow, learn, and feel happy. I cherish my family forever.” 总结家庭充满爱,强调家庭对自己成长和情感的重要意义,表达对家庭的珍视,升华主题,收束全文。
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例文
Dear friends,
I'm Li Hua. I'm lucky to be part of a warm - hearted family.My father is a doctor. He's really into beef noodles and often plays football after work to keep fit. His hard - working and responsible spirit inspires me.My mother is a teacher. Mapo tofu is her all - time favorite. She loves going hiking on weekends, enjoying the beauty of nature. Her patience and kindness touch everyone around her.I'm 13 years old. I'm crazy about reading as it takes me to different worlds. And here's Oscar, my 2 - year - old brother. He's incredibly cute and his love for meat is so funny.
In our family, love is everywhere. It's the place where I grow, learn, and feel happy. I cherish my family forever.
Thank you!
复习U4,整理单词短语,和同桌一起复习单元短语句型。
基础性作业:
实践性作业:
经过一单元的学习,完成一份“My family”为主题的手抄报,
向同学们展示。
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