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Unit 2
Home Sweet Home
人教版2024版八年级上册
Section B (3a—3c) 写作课
Learning Objectives
能够基于写作需求，在阅读 3a 范文、完成 3b 排序后，在教师引导下开展写作准备，梳理 “请求朋友帮忙装饰房间” 类邮件的结构，结合 3c 提示的待办事项，列出自己邮件中对应 “意图 — 现状 — 请求” 的内容要点。
01
能够将本单元所学与请求、装饰相关的词汇（如 decorate, help, bring, choose 等）、表达请求的句型（如 Can you... Could you... 等）迁移应用到自己请求朋友帮忙装饰房间的邮件写作中。。
02
通过自评和互评，改进写作初稿，优化语篇结构、明确请求内容、打磨语言表达，提升请求类邮件的写作质量。
03
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
闻起来 (动词) __________ 2. 快乐 (名词) ___________
3.公寓(名词) __________ 4. 街区(名词) __________
5. 寻找(短语) __________ 6. 可能 (副词) __________
7. 打包（短语）__________ 8. 挂起（短语）________
9. 我们很激动你来我们的社区。
___________________________
10. 随意去询问。___________________
11. 你能倒垃圾吗？
________________________________________
smell
joy
apartment
block
look for
perhaps
pack up
hang up
We’re excited to have you in our community.
feel free to ask
Could you please take out the rubbish
回顾复习（Section B 2a—2c）
Free talk
What decorative items are there in your room
Posters
Photo frames
Plants
/ dek re t v/ adj.装饰性的；作装饰用的
String lights
decorate / dek re t/ v. 装饰；装潢
poster/ p st (r)/ n. 海报
Let’s guess.
Help Decorate the Room!
Zhang Peng’s room
Before
After
How does Zhang Peng want to do to decorate the room
Read the email and find out what Zhang Peng asks his friend to do.
3a
ask about the color of the wall
choose the paint
paint the room with his brother
bring brushes they used
choose photos
1
2
3
4
5
Put the things in order to see how Zhang Peng organizes his ideas in writing.
3b
________ ask John to bring the brushes
________ ask John to help decorate the room
________ ask John to help choose some photos to hang
on the walls
________ describe how the room looks now
________ tell John about the plan for the walls
________ ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop
1
2
3
4
5
6
Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room. Below is a list of things you may need help with.
3c
buy some flowers make a poster go shopping
bring a pair of scissors buy glue bring a brush
make paper cuttings bring a painting ...
Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room. Below is a list of things you may need help with.
3c
写作指导
文本体裁
话题分析
要求写一个篇求助邮件，内容主要为求助朋友帮助装饰自己的房间。
本文要仿写阅读的邮件文章，因此是一封邮件，内容涉及不同日期及行为，侧重记叙文。
人称时态
以第一人称为主；以一般现在时和将来时为主。
(1) What can we write in the beginning part
I had so much fun decorating your room with you last month!
Decorating your room last month was a great time!
It was really nice to help you decorate your room last month!
...
Show feeling
Beginning-1
(1) What can we write in the beginning part
I really want to decorate my room too. Can you please help us come up with some ideas or tell us what to buy We’d be so grateful!
My brother and I share a room and want to make it nicer. Do you think you could help us decorate it We need someone with good ideas!
Purpose
Beginning-2
(2) What can we write in the body part
ask John to help decorate the room
tell John about the plan for the walls
describe how the room looks now
ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop
ask John to bring the brushes
ask John to help choose some photos to hang on the walls
Action
Body
(3) What can we write in the ending part
Thank you so much for your help! I hope to hear from you soon.
We’d really appreciate your help! Please let us know if you have any ideas.
Thanks a lot! I can’t wait to hear what you think.
Could you please tell us your suggestions Thank you very much!
Expectation
Ending
the structure of the email
Dear_______,
I want to decorate _____________________. Right now, it’s _______________________.We want ______________. We can _____________.Could you please_________________________.
Best Wishes,
_______
称呼
表明目的
房间现状
装饰计划
结尾敬语
署名
The structure of the passage
Let’s think.
How can we ask for help and make some requests
Let’s think.
How can we express logically
time order
Summary
礼貌问候
主体段落
落款
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 4
Request help
Describe problem
Plan actions
Add details
寒暄 + 引出目的 + 礼貌请求
现状+问题+意见征求
提议时间地点+分工
细节补充+期待回应
Remember when we + 过去做的事？ I want/need to do sth. Can/Could you …
The ______ in my room looks ______. I want to _________ and _________. What do you think about it
Let’s meet at + 地点 on + 星期 to do sth. First, we need to ______, then ______.
After painting, could you help ______ I’m not sure how to ______. Let me know if you can come.
Let’s think.
Use the sentences to help decorate your room.
buy some flowers make a poster go shopping
bring a pair of scissors buy glue bring a brush
make paper cuttings bring a painting ...
I want to _________________________.
We can _________________________.
Can you _________________________.
Could you help _________________________
bring a brush
buy some flowers
go shopping
make paper cuttings
Let’s check.
评分标准 分数 得分 总分
能从至少4个方面写E-mail（求助、装修设想、计划、特别需求） 2
能很好使用E-mail的格式。 1 能正确使用can或could疑问句。 2 能使用时间顺序使文章更有逻辑。 1 能正确拼写单词。 1 能正确使用标点。 1 书写规范且工整。 1 Let’s edit.
Dear Eric,
My room looks very simple now. I want to make it more colorful and fun. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are white. I want to paint the walls light blue and put up something on the wall. What do you think of the color
Let's go shopping this Saturday morning and choose the paint together. Then, we can paint the walls together. Can you bring a brush
After painting, could you help choose two posters to put on the walls I'm excited to make my room beautiful with your help!
Best,
Tom
作文迁移
时间 周六 周日
活动 扫地； 打扫起居室； 倒垃圾 搬家具（furniture）；
去购物；
晚上一起吃饭
假如你是李明，本周末你要搬进新家，你想请你的朋友Peter来帮忙。请你根据表格中的提示内容给他写一封电子邮件。
要求：
1. 语句通顺、流畅；
2. 不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Peter,
I am going to move to my new house this weekend.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Peter,
I am going to move to my new house this weekend. If you are free, could you please come over to my new house and help me out with a few things
On Saturday, we will clean the new house. I’d like you to help me sweep the floor, clean the living room and take out the rubbish. On Sunday, we will carry the furniture to the new house. I would be thankful if you could help me with it. After that, we can go shopping. In the evening, we can have dinner together.
Could you come to help me I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
按要求写出正确的单词、词组或句子。
装饰 (动词) __________ 2. 覆盖 (动词) ___________
3.剪刀(名词) __________ 4. 海报(名词) __________
5. 胶水(名词) __________ 6. 剪纸 (名词) __________
7. 油彩店（短语）__________ 8. 带刷子（短语）________
9. 你觉得颜色怎么样？
___________________________
10. 我喜欢我们在你房间使用的刷子。___________________
11. 你能帮助选择一些照片挂在墙上吗？
________________________________________
decorate
cover
scissors
poster
glue
paper-cuts
paint shop
bring a brush
What about the colour
I love the brushes we used for your room.
Could you help choose some photos to hang on the walls
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