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2025--2026年人教版中考英语作文复习分类提高综合练习1：应用文写作【含答案 word版】
一、人与自我（本大题共4小题）
1．书面表达
66. 忙碌的初中生活使我们的课余生活越来越单一，所以学校打算开展“after-class clubs”。社团活动可以让我们广交朋友，锻炼身体，增长见识。假如你是七年级三班的李华，今年12岁。根据你的兴趣爱好，在以下几个社团Art Club, Music Club, Basketball Team, English Club,History Club当中选择一个喜欢的，申请加入。
请根据提示，用英文写一份加入社团申请书。
a)Who are you How old are you b)What do you usually do after school c)Which club would you like to join Why d)What can you get from it
要求：(1)申请书包含表格中所提供的要点；(2)词数：60左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，仅供选择使用，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：make friends, take exercise, open one’s eyes
Dear Sir,
I am
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．学校Teenager英语俱乐部要举办一期关于未来生活畅想的演讲比赛。请根据要点提示，以“My life in the future”为题写一篇演讲稿。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点：
对你的未来生活描述包括：未来的环境（空气、树等情况）；未来你的职业生活；未来你的家庭生活（例如机器人做家务）；未来你的业余生活（身体锻炼、旅游、志愿活动等）。
要求：
1、文章中不得出现真实姓名、学校、班级等信息。
2、不少于80词。
My life in the future
Hello, dear friends! I’m glad to stand here and share my life in the future with you.
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3．假定你是李华，昨日你校举办了学生英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件，向你的朋友John介绍本次活动。
1、比赛时间；
2、比赛地点；
3、比赛情况；
4、比赛结果；
5、你的感受。
注意：
1、词数80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2、根据提示要点写作，并适当发挥；
3、文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名等信息。
参考词汇：英语演讲比赛English speech competition
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday. ______________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．目前中国中小学每周开设一节劳动课。John是一名美国中学生， 他对中国的劳动教育（Labor Education）很感兴趣。假如你是李华，请你给他写一封信，向他介绍中国的劳动教育并谈谈你的看法。
内容：
劳动教育的意义（比如：促进智力发展promote intellectual development）（至少两点）。
具体的劳动实践活动（比如：植树）（至少两个）。
要求：
要涵盖以上内容要点， 可适当增加调节；
80词左右（开头已给出， 不计入总词数）；
文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear John,
I am glad that you show great interest in Labor Education in China. Let me give you a brief introduction about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、人与社会（本大题共22小题）
5．假如你是李辉，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你近期参加的一次学校组织的旅行的经历。请你根据下面的思维导图给Peter写一封回信介绍一下你的学校旅行经历。
注意：1、60字左右。
2、可以在思维导图的基础上适当增加细节。
3、文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4、文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
How is it going I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
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Yours,
Li Hui
6．期中考试之后，你在学习、生活、业余爱好等方面有什么新的打算吗？请给你的朋友Bob写一封电子邮件，讲述一下你的新计划。80词以上。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
How is it going I make some new plans for myself. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保证，所以拥有良好的生活习惯十分重要。为了了解同学们的良好生活习惯，学校要开展以“My Good Living Habits”为题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是Fu Xing, 请你根据以下提示完成你的演讲稿，谈一谈你的良好生活习惯及其重要性。
内容提示：
要求：
1、短文须包括提示里的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2、80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My Good Living Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m Fu Xing. Today, I’m very happy to share my good living habits with all of you.
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I believe it is important to have good living habits because they make me happy.
8．假定你是李华，最近收到美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，想要了解你的研学之旅。请你阅读后回复。词数70左右。
Dear Li Hua, Long time no see! I went on a school trip last weekend. It was a sunny day and I went to a farm with my classmates. I picked apples and had fun there. Did you go anywhere interesting Could you share your school trip with me Where did you go How was the weather on that day What did you do How did you feel And what did you learn Looking forward to your reply. Peter
注意事项：
1、必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、意思清楚，表达通顺、行文连贯，书写规范；
3、请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear from you. I am willing to share my trip with you.
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Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
9．为别人点一盏灯，照亮别人，也照亮了自己。本卷阅读理解A篇谈到招募志愿者海报。上月 (3月15日周六)，英语老师也带领了同学们到儿童医院做志愿活动，并要求大家写一篇日记描述此次志愿活动的过程。假如你是张华，请你根据表格内容提示，完成日记。
要求：1、短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2、短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3、词数80-100，短文格式已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点 参考句型
1）Who did the voluntary work We helped... We also did... I’m glad to...
2）What did you do
3）How did you feel
Saturday, March 15th Sunny
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10．随着人工智能(AI)技术日新月异的发展，一些同学已经在学习中尝试使用AI。假设你是李辉，你校英语校刊将举办以“智慧学习，善用AI”为主题的演讲比赛，以引导同学们正确使用AI工具，做学习的主人。请按照要求写一篇英文演讲稿。
内容包括：
1、提出观点；
2、如何使用AI；
3、表达期待。
注意：
1、词数80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear fellow students,
At present, some students have tried using AI tools in their studies.
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Thank you for listening.
11．假如你是李华，刚刚收到好友Tom的一封电子邮件。请根据Tom邮件中反映的问题，结合表格中的要点提示，给他提出合理的建议（至少三条）。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m writing to tell you that I can’t go to see Ne zha with you. I have a bad cold. I feel sick and I often catch colds. Can you give me some advice on how to keep healthy
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tom
Food eat more vegetables, drink a glass of milk, …
Exercise go for a walk, play sports, ...
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注意事项：
（1）邮件可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to know that you have a bad cold.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．假如你是刘宇，你收到了笔友Tom的邮件。Tom酷爱打篮球，但他的父母反对他花大量时间练习篮球，而是觉得他应该专注于学习。请你根据以下提示内容，用英语给Tom回复邮件，说一说你的看法，并提出你的建议。
Opinions:●importance of having a hobby, such as...; ●be able to make your own decisions (决定); ●… Advice:●communicate with your parents; ●balance (平衡) your hobby and schoolwork; ●promise to study harder in your subjects; ●…
要求：1、邮件须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3、文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4、词数：不少于60词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to receive your e-mail. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope things work out and everything will be better!
Yours,
Liu Yu
13．要么读书，要么旅行，身体和灵魂，总有一个在路上。旅行，领略人间美景，品味百味人生，丰盈生命，感悟世间百态，了解风土人情。假如你是李华，你们学校英语社正开展以“A nice trip”为主题的征文活动。请你仔细阅读下面的提示写一篇短文投稿。
（1）Where did you go and who did you go with
（2）What did you do during the trip
（3）…
注意：（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Travelling is a good way for us to enjoy nature and learn about culture. I once had a nice trip. ___________________________________________________________________________
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I learned a lot from this trip. I will never forget it.
14．我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中。假如你是李华，上周五，我校组织了“存心寄华夏诠释中国红”的艺术展览活动 (school art fair)，你的英国朋友Jack对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，向Jack介绍此次活动。
参考词汇：red packets 红包；paper cutting 剪纸
注意：词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不得出现真实的人名、地名等内容。
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. ________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．书面表达。
Kevin 一家第一次在中国过春节，除夕(the New Year's Eve)他们都在忙碌。假设你是Kevin，请根据下面所给提示写一封电子邮件告诉你的美国朋友Jill你和家人正在做什么。
提示：1.奶奶和妈妈在包饺子；
2.爷爷在看电视；
3.爸爸在拍照片，想要寄给美国的朋友；
4.弟弟在给他中国的朋友打电话。
要求：1.包含以上所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确；
3.50词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jill，
It's the New Year's Eve.Love，
Kevin
16．书面表达。
假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节，请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。
注意：1. 80~100词左右。
2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。
3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail.
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What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
17．假设你是Li Tao，以下是你的美国笔友Steve发给你的邮件。请阅读邮件内容，用英语给Steve写一封邮件回复。
Dear Li Tao, It was Dragon Boat Festival a few days ago. How did you and your family celebrate it this year What did you do What did you eat Write to me soon. Yours, Steve
要求：
1、语句通顺，表述连贯，书写工整；
2、回复须回答邮件中的所有问题，可适当发挥；
3、词数：60词左右 (短文开头和结尾部分已给出，且不计入总词数)。
Dear Steve,
I’m very glad to get your email. _______________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Tao
18．根据要求完成作文，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
Please write a diary about your last school trip.
要求：
1、文中不可以出现真实的姓名；
2、60词左右。
Friday, 30 May
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19．假如你是李华，你的同学王明最近遇到了一些困扰，请你根据下面表格中的内容提示，给他提 一些建议。
困扰 1、没有要好的朋友； 2、有孤独感，不愿和父母交流； 3、……
你的建议 1、多参加活动； 2、多与同学交流； 3、把父母当朋友，多沟通，有问题共同解决； 4、……
要求：1、应包含所有提示内容，语言流畅，可适当发挥；
2、词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3、不得出现真实校名、人名等。
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear about your trouble.
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I really hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
20．每个人在生活中都有压力，我们应该正确面对压力，保持积极、健康的心态。假如你叫李明，你的朋友小冬给你发邮件说他最近很不开心。请根据表格中的提示，给小冬回一封不少于80词的电子邮件，并给他提一些建议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
问题 家庭作业多，几乎没有时间休息； 各科难度加大，并将参加生物和地理两门学科毕业会考（take the entrance examination for high school in biology and geography），感觉压力很大，经常感到紧张。
建议 制定合理的学习计划，找到好的学习方法； 学会放松； 多与父母、老师或朋友交流；
Dear Xiaodong,
I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days.
Yours,
Li Ming
21．第二天，Yifei和她的同学们开启了研学之旅新一站——参观临汾博物馆。假如你是Yifei，请根据表格信息，续写研学日记。
要求：
1、包含表格内所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2、不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3、书写工整，卷面整洁，词数不少于80词；
天气 多云并且凉爽
地点 临汾博物馆
活动 1、看见了很多古老的文物
2、拍了很多照片
3、了解了许多历史故事
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感受 有意义并且很开心
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参考词汇：文物cultural relics
Thursday, 12 June
Today was a day to remember.
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22．假如你是李华，你最好的朋友王磊最近很烦恼，他的父母逼着他去学钢琴，但他自己想去学篮球，双方各执己见，难以达成一致而导致关系紧张。请写一封电子邮件给王磊出出主意。内容包括：
(1)劝王磊跟父母好好聊一聊；
(2)列举分析学钢琴和学篮球各自有何利弊；
(3)不回避问题，不过于担忧，积极寻求解决的办法。
要求：
(1)不少于80词；
(2)文中不得出现个人信息；
(3)必须包含以上提示信息，可在此基础上进行发挥。
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23．根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack给你发来电子邮件，询问你最喜爱的一次旅行经历。请你回复他的邮件，内容包括：你去了哪里，什么时候去的，和谁去的以及在那里你（们）做了些什么。
提示词语：places of interest, take photos, eat delicious food, experience different cultures
提示问题：
● Where and when did you go
● Who did you go with
● What did you do there
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Hua
24．在日常学习和生活中,我们经常需要与人合作（ cooperate）。假设你是李华,请你就如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括：
（1）合作的技巧（如耐心倾听,礼貌建议……）；
（2）合作的意义（如相互学习……）。
要求：
（1）80词左右（标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.
25．假如你是校学生会主席李华，将在学校的升旗仪式上以“friendship”为主题进行演讲，请你就此写一篇发言稿。
要求：
(1) 字数：80词左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2) 文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
Good morning, everyone!
Just as an English saying goes, no man is an island. Everyone needs friends.
Thank you for your time.
26．忙碌而充实的初中学习即将结束，假如你是李华，下周将代表全体初中毕业生在毕业典礼上发言。请你回顾自己初中三年的学校生活，结合以下要点写一篇演讲稿，为此次发言做准备。
毕业典礼上的讲话 回顾初中三年的学校生活： ◆学到许多知识； ◆交到许多朋友； ……
感谢老师： ◆老师教会我们知识 ◆帮助我们解决问题 ……
展望未来：今后的打算
要求：
1、内容必须包括所有提示要点，并补充1-2点，适当增加细节；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3、字数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：look back at, remember, knowledge, teach, solve the problem
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will come to an end soon. I’d like to say something.
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Thank you.
Li Hua
三、人与自然（本大题共2小题）
27．动物是人类的朋友。然而，很多动物处于危险之中，濒临灭绝。雪豹就是其中之一。
请根据提示，写一篇短文倡议人们保护雪豹 (snow leopard)。
Habitat the mountains of Central and South Asia
Food sheep, rabbits, other small animals
Reasons hunt for fur (皮毛); cut down trees
Actions help learn about them; set up national parks
要求：1、包含提示内容，可适当增加细节；
2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3、不少于60词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them ________________
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Let’s do something to make a difference!
28．动物是人类的好朋友，学校英语社团正在举行主题为“My favorite animal”的演讲比赛，假设你是李华，请写一篇演讲稿来介绍你最喜欢的动物吧！
内容包含：
(1)介绍你最喜爱的动物，如性格，外貌等。
(2)描述你与它之间的特别的或者幸福的相处经历。
(3)动物是人类的好朋友，呼吁人类保护动物。
注意：
(1)词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal.
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四、请求与提供帮助（本大题共1小题）
29．在公园散步时，你把书包忘在长椅上了。书包里面有语文书、数学书、英语书和一些练习本，还有一个文具盒和一张学生卡，上面有你的姓名、班级、学校等信息。请根据以上信息写一则60词左右的寻物启事。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I lost my schoolbag.
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Thank you!
五、希望和愿望（本大题共1小题）
30． 假如你是李华，即将进入高中学习，请你写一封电子邮件给英国的笔友Linda，谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧，并请她给出建议。
参考词汇：
Expectation(向往) meet new classmates and teachers make decisions by myself choose favorite subjects …
Worry have no time after-school activities fall behind be difficult to study …
注意：
1）信中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；
2）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Linda,
How's it going I'll study in senior high school.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
一、人与自我
【知识点】一般现在时、个人兴趣、个人情况
1．【答案】Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 7. I am 12 years old. I like playing basketball very much. I often play it on the playground with my friends after school. And I often watch the basketball games on TV.
I would like to join the Basketball Team because I want to take exercise and I want to make new friends, too. Also I can learn something about teamwork.
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
这是一篇参加社团的申请书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【知识点】一般将来时、书面表达、居住环境、工作与职业
2．【答案】A possible version：
My life in the future
Hello, dear friends! I’m glad to stand here and share my life in the future with you.
In the future, our world will be very beautiful. The air will be clean like fresh rain. Many green trees will grow everywhere. I will become a doctor and help sick people feel better. At home, a friendly robot will do housework. It will cook dinner and clean rooms. My family will play games together in the garden. After work, I will ride my blue bike every evening. On holidays, I will visit the moon with my parents! I will also help old people in the park as a volunteer.
I believe my future life will be happy and exciting!
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【脉络导引】 第一步，表明演讲稿的意图，分享关于未来生活的畅想（已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从“未来环境、职业生活、家庭生活、业余生活”等方面介绍未来生活的样子；
第三步，书写结语，表达对未来生活的感受。
【提分词汇】 ①help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
②do housework 做家务
③after work 下班后
【提分句式】 ①I believe my future life will be happy and exciting! (省略that的宾语从句)
【知识点】一般过去时、书面表达、考试/竞赛
3．【答案】参考范文：
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday.
It took place on the school playground at 3 p.m. 20 students took an active part in this wonderful event. All the students gathered to be the listeners. The speeches covered many subjects and most of the “competitors” performed well.
One of my classmates shared his thoughts about protecting our earth. He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. No wonder he won the first prize.
This competition helps us improve spoken English and learn more knowledge at the same time. We all look forward to joining it next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应注意要点齐全，并可适当补充细节描述。
【脉络导引】第一步，表明写作意图。说明写信的目的是与John分享昨天的英语演讲比赛。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍这次演讲比赛的信息。
第三步，书写结语。表达这次比赛对提升英语口语和学习知识的帮助，以及大家对下次比赛的期待。
【提分词汇】①competition比赛
②performed表演，表现
③realised意识到
【提分句式】①He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. (so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、学校、日常活动
4．【答案】例文
Dear John,
I am glad that you show great interest in Labor Education in China. Let me give you a brief introduction about it. Labor Education is important and meaningful. We can learn some life skills and form good habits, which will help us a lot in the future. Also, it can promote the intellectual development of the students.
Do you know how to run the course in our school Let me tell you. The school offers classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow vegetables. What’s more, the school has set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. Everyone can join the clubs they like. Our school also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
All in all, I love these useful activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，给John写一封信，向他介绍中国的劳动教育并谈谈你的看法；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。对中国的劳动教育表现出极大的兴趣表示高兴，并表示给他介绍中国的劳动教育。（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从劳动教育的意义和具体的劳动实践活动等方面来叙述。
第三步，书写总结。表达你的观点（总而言之，我喜欢这些有用的活动。），结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
show great interest in对……表现出极大的兴趣
learn some life skills and form good habits学习一些生活技能并养成良好习惯
What’s more此外
make our school life more colorful and meaningful让我们的学校生活更加丰富多彩和有意义
[高分句型]
We can learn some life skills and form good habits, which will help us a lot in the future.（非限制性定语从句）
he school offers classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow vegetables.（动词不定式作宾语）
Everyone can join the clubs they like.（限制定语从句）
Our school also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes.（宾语从句）
二、人与社会
【知识点】一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、哲理感悟、旅行
5．【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How is it going I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
Last Saturday, we went on a school trip to the zoo by bus. We started at 8 am and arrived at about 8:30. There are many animals in the zoo like pandas, monkeys, giraffes and so on. We felt very excited to see them. The pandas looked so lovely, and the monkeys were very lively. We took many photos. In the afternoon, we also watched a bear show. It was wonderful.
This trip is really a great experience for me. Animals make our world colourful and we should protect them. Do you think so
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示向笔友介绍近期参加的一次学校组织的旅行的经历，包括时间、地点、具体活动以及自己的收获和感想。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
【脉络导引】第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍参观动物园的时间、地点和具体活动；
第三步，最后谈自己的收获和感想。
【提分词汇】①go on a trip to 到……去旅行
②and so on 等等
③take photos 拍照
【提分句式】①There are many animals in the zoo like pandas, monkeys, giraffes and so on.（用there be句型表示某地有某物）
②We felt very excited to see them.（动词不定式作原因状语）
【知识点】一般将来时、一般现在时、书面表达、方法/建议、计划与安排
6．【答案】Dear Bob,
How is it going these days I make some new plans for myself.
My first resolution has to do with self -improvement. I want to join an English club to improve my English. I want to get good grades next time. The second is about personal health. I am going to eat less junk food and do more exercise. Finally, I would like to learn to take photos in my free time. I will tell my family about my plans so that they can help me.
Do you have any new plans
Yours,
Da Ming
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：书信作文，向朋友分享期中考试后的新计划，属于生活交流类；
②时态：以一般现在时、一般将来时为主，陈述计划及意图；
③提示：围绕学习、生活、业余爱好三方面新计划展开，内容完整，符合邮件分享交流的逻辑。
【脉络导引】第一步，开篇问候，表明有新计划分享；
第二步，依次阐述计划：学习方面、生活方面、业余爱好方面，并提及会告知家人寻求帮助；
第三步，询问对方是否有新计划，结束邮件。
【提分词汇】①self-improvement自我提升
②get grades取得成绩
③so that以便于
【提分句式】①I want to join an English club to improve my English.（to do不定式作目的状语）
②I am going to eat less junk food and do more exercise.（be going to结构表将来）
③I will tell my family about my plans so that they can help me.（so that引导目的状语从句）
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、健身/锻炼、卫生与健康、饮食
7．【答案】例文
My Good Living Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m Fu Xing. Today, I’m very happy to share my good living habits with all of you.
As for me, I have balanced eating habits. I usually have milk, eggs and bread for breakfast. Sometimes, I also have some fruit. For lunch, I often eat meat, vegetables and rice. For dinner, I love eating some fish and noodles.
I have other healthy living habits as well. I never stay up late and usually sleep for 9 hours every night. I think a good sleep helps me start a new day. I get up early in the morning. After that, I do exercise for 20 minutes. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends or go climbing with my family.
I believe it is important to have good living habits because they make me happy.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生介绍了自己的健康生活习惯及其影响，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。
【脉络导引】第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了三个健康生活习惯 (饮食、运动、作息) 以及这些习惯带来的积极影响；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
【提分词汇】①balanced eating habits均衡的饮食习惯
②healthy living habits健康的生活习惯
③stay up late熬夜
④get up early早起
⑤go climbing爬山
【提分句式】I believe it is important to have good living habits because they make me happy. (宾语从句+原因状语从句)
【知识点】一般过去时、书面表达、学校活动、景点/建筑
8．【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear from you. I am willing to share my trip with you. Our class went on a school trip to an art museum. It was tiring but great fun!
In the morning, it was sunny and warm, we saw many colorful paintings. They looked real. The guide told us interesting stories about the artists. I was very interested. After lunch, we tried painting ourselves! It seemed easy, but it took time. Finally, I created my own works. Although I got paint all over my clothes and hands, I felt happy. Also, we took a lot of photos during the trip.
One thing I learned today: Art isn’t just about beautiful pictures. It’s a good way to share thoughts and feelings. All in all, it was really a day to remember.
Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
【脉络导引】第一步，先介绍学校旅行去了哪里以及天气怎么样；
第二步，具体介绍学校旅行中的活动及感受；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己的收获。
【提分词汇】①art museum 艺术博物馆
②all over 到处都是
③during the trip 在旅行期间
④a good way to 做某事的好方法
⑤all in all 总而言之
【提分句式】Although I got paint all over my clothes and hands, I felt happy. (although引导的让步状语从句)
【知识点】一般过去时、书面表达、志愿服务
9．【答案】例文
Saturday, March 15th Sunny
Today, our English teacher led us to do voluntary work at the children’s hospital. We helped cheer up the sick kids. We told them funny stories and played games with them. Some of us sang songs for them, and others read books to them. We also made some beautiful cards to give them hope.
I’m glad to see the smiles on their faces. It made me feel so warm inside. Through this activity, I realized how much a small act of kindness can mean to others. I hope we can do more things like this to bring joy to those in need.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇英文日记；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的信息提示，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【脉络导引】第一步，表明日记时间、天气及参与志愿活动的主要人物；
第二步，具体阐述在儿童医院做了哪些志愿活动；
第三步，表达感受，书写结语。
【提分词汇】①lead sb to do 引领某人做某事
②cheer up 为……加油
③in need 有需要
【提分句式】①Through this activity, I realized how much a small act of kindness can mean to others. (how much引导的宾语从句)
②I hope we can do more things like this to bring joy to those in need. (that省略的宾语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、信息技术
10．【答案】例文：
Dear fellow students,
At present, some students have tried using AI tools in their studies. In my opinion, AI can be a helpful partner in our learning if used properly.
We should use AI to solve difficult problems, like explaining grammar rules or analyzing math errors. It can also provide extra practice materials to help us review. But we must remember not to rely on it completely. We should think independently first before turning to AI for help.
I hope all of us can learn to use AI wisely. Let’s make it a tool to improve our study efficiency and become masters of our own learning.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：考生需按照逻辑顺序组织内容，确保要点齐全，可适当补充个人见解。
【脉络导引】第一步，表明写作意图。开篇引出对AI在学习中应用的看法。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述AI的积极作用并提出使用AI的注意事项。
第三步，书写结语。表达希望同学们能明智使用AI，提升学习效率，成为自己学习的主人。
【提分词汇】①properly适当地
②independently独立地
③wisely明智地
④efficiency效率
【提分句式】①In my opinion, AI can be a helpful partner in our learning if used properly. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②We should think independently first before turning to AI for help. (before引导的时间状语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、卫生与健康、方法/建议
11．【答案】范文：
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you have a bad cold. To stay healthy, I’d like to give you some advice. First, you should eat more vegetables and drink a glass of milk every day. They are good for your body. In addition, it’s a good idea to go for a walk or play sports after class. Doing exercise often can make you stronger. What’s more, try to sleep early and get enough rest. A good rest helps you feel better.
I hope you get better soon and stay healthy!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于健康建议类写作；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，结合情态动词表达建议；
③提示：审题要明确健康建议的三方面：饮食、运动和生活习惯，注意语气要委婉有礼。
【脉络导引】 第一步：开头回应Tom的情况，表达关心；
第二步：分别从饮食、锻炼、生活习惯等方面给出三条具体建议；
第三步：表达祝愿与鼓励，结尾呼应。
【提分词汇】 ① have a cold 感冒
② stay healthy 保持健康
③ in addition 另外
④ go for a walk 散步
⑤ do exercise 锻炼身体
【提分句式】 ① It’s also a good idea to go for a walk or play sports after class.（It作形式主语结构）
② What’s more, try to sleep early and have enough rest.（祈使句）
③ I hope you get better soon and stay healthy.（宾语从句）
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、方法/建议、爱好
12．【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to receive your e-mail. I understand your love for basketball, and I think having a hobby is very important because it helps us relax and stay healthy. You should also be able to make your own decisions about how to spend your free time.
Here’s my advice: First, communicate with your parents and explain why basketball means so much to you. Second, try to balance your hobby and schoolwork. Maybe you can set a schedule to practice basketball after finishing homework. Finally, promise to study harder in your subjects to show your parents you can manage both.
Hope things work out and everything will be better!
Yours,
Liu Yu
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
【脉络导引】第一步，回应邮件并表达理解（兴趣爱好重要性）；
第二步，提出观点（自主权）；
第三步，分条建议（沟通、平衡、承诺）；
第四步，结尾祝福。
【提分词汇】①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②set a schedule制定时间表
③promise to do sth.承诺做某事
【提分句式】①…I think having a hobby is very important because it helps us relax and stay healthy.（宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
②…communicate with your parents and explain why basketball means so much to you.（祈使句；why引导的宾语从句）
【知识点】一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、哲理感悟、旅行
13．【答案】例文：
Travelling is a good way for us to enjoy nature and learn about culture. I once had a nice trip. Last year, I went on a trip to the Silk Road with my family. We went there by train and played happily on the train. The first day, we visited the walled city—Xi’an. We saw the Terracotta Warriors. Amazing! The second day, we went to Lanzhou. We enjoyed the delicious food and watched the mother river, the Yellow River. I felt proud. We also visited other places of interest. It was a lot of fun.
I learned a lot from this trip. I will never forget it.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作的内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，注意不要遗漏任何信息要点，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
【脉络导引】第一步，开篇点题，借用俗语来引出主题；
第二步，具体讲述自己的旅游经历，包括旅游地点、在那里所做的事情以及感受；
第三步，总结并表达自己对旅游的看法。
【提分词汇】①go on a trip to 去……旅行
②by train乘火车
③places of interest名胜古迹
【提分句式】We went there by train and played happily on the train. （and连接并列成分）
【知识点】一般过去时、中华文化、书面表达
14．【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Now I want to tell you something about our school art fair themed “Love Chinese Culture, Understand Chinese Red”. It was held on last Friday, from 2:00 to 5:00 pm in our school art museum.
First, we admired some nice art works like paper cuttings and red packets, and felt the charm of traditional culture. Then, we learned the long history of these art forms, which helped us understand more. Also, we took part in lantern making activity and made red lanterns by ourselves. Besides, we learned to write “Fu” with brushes on red paper and felt the beauty of Chinese characters.
Through this fair, I felt proud of our rich traditional culture and wanted to learn more. It was really a meaningful experience!
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一封书信作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示：根据提示写作，不要遗漏信息，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
【脉络导引】第一步，承接给出的开头，介绍学校举办的艺术展及其时间、地点；
第二步，具体介绍艺术展的活动；
第三步，介绍我的感受。
【提分词汇】①feel the charm of 感受……的魅力
②the beauty of Chinese characters 汉字的美
③rich traditional culture 丰富的传统文化
④feel proud of 为……感到骄傲
【提分句式】Then, we learned the long history of these art forms, which helped us understand more. (定语从句)
【知识点】家庭、朋友与周围的人、现在进行时、节假日活动、节日
15．【答案】Dear Jill，
It's the New Year's Eve.Everyone in my family is busy.My grandmother and my mother are making dumplings.My grandfather is watching television.My father is taking photos.He wants to send them to his friends in America.My brother is calling his Chinese friends.We are so happy now.Happy New Year！
Love，
Kevin
【分析】
本文为一篇电子邮件，主要向美国朋友讲述你和你的家人们在春节里做些什么？
【详解】
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。注意时态和人称的变化。
【点睛】
He wants to send them to his friends in America．他想把它们寄给他美国的朋友．
want to do sth想做某事．
〖高分句型二〗
My brother is calling his Chinese friends. 弟弟在给他中国的朋友打电话。
现在进行时be+doing，表示动作正在进行；call sb给某人打电话
【知识点】一般现在时、文化、节日
16．【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular.
The rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.
Overall,the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to，the Dragon Boat Festival，according to，the Chinese calender，dragon boat races，in the southern places，be made of，and so on，different kinds of，in the river，looking forward to等。而The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes./ He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.等定语从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
【知识点】一般过去时、中华传统节日、书面表达
17．【答案】例文
Dear Steve,
I’m very glad to get your email. This Dragon Boat Festival was great. My family and I celebrated it together. We watched exciting dragon boat races in the morning. In the afternoon, my mom taught me to make zongzi, which are sticky rice dumplings with delicious fillings. We ate a lot of zongzi, eggs and other traditional food for dinner. It was a happy day.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Tao
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一封邮件回复；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：需介绍端午节庆祝方式、所做事情及所吃食物等，可适当补充细节。
【脉络导引】 第一步，表达收到邮件的喜悦，并总体评价今年的端午节；
第二步，详细描述和家人一起庆祝端午节的活动以及晚餐吃的食物；
第三步，总结这是愉快的一天，呼应开头的积极感受。
【提分词汇】 ①celebrated庆祝
②dragon boat races龙舟比赛
③traditional food传统食物
【提分句式】 ①In the afternoon, my mom taught me to make zongzi, which are sticky rice dumplings with delicious fillings. (which引导定语从句)
【知识点】一般过去时、书面表达、学校活动、景点/建筑
18．【答案】Friday, 30 May
Today, we were glad to go on a school trip to the science museum. It was fantastic! We saw many interesting things. First, we explored the space hall and saw a model of the space station. Then we went to the robot hall. There were all kinds of robots. Some could play chess and others could dance. I was amazed. We also did a fun experiment. It was a great day!
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【脉络导引】第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍这次学校旅行的情况。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
【提分词汇】①go on a trip去旅行
②be fantastic太棒了
③all kinds of各种各样的
④play chess下棋
【提分句式】①Today, we were glad to go on a school trip to the science museum. (be glad to do sth结构)
②Some could play chess and others could dance. (并列句)
【知识点】一般现在时、个人情况、书面表达、情感与情绪、方法/建议
19．【答案】例文：
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear about your trouble.
You said you don’t have close friends. Why not join more activities It’s easier to make friends when you share hobbies with others. Also, try talking more with classmates—smiles and small talks can build good relationships.
Feeling lonely and not wanting to talk to parents is common, but they care about you. Treat them as friends, share your feelings, and you’ll find they’re willing to help solve problems together. Maybe you can also take up a hobby like reading or sports to enrich your life.
I really hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：材料表格所给内容需完整表达，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【脉络导引】第一步，针对王明没有朋友给出建议；
第二步，围绕王明感到孤独，不愿和父母交流的情况提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
【提分词汇】①talk with sb.与某人谈话
②care about关心
③be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
【提分句式】①It’s easier to make friends when you share hobbies with others. （时间状语从句）
②I really hope my advice will help you.（宾语从句）
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、情感与情绪、方法/建议
20．【答案】例文：
Dear Xiaodong,
I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days. You say you have too much homework every day and have little time to rest. Every subject becomes more difficult and you will take the entrance examination for high school in biology and geography, so you feel stressed and nervous. Now let me give you some advice.
First, you should make a proper plan for your study and try to find your own ways of studying. Second, make the best use of your time and try to find time to relax, such as listening to light music, going for a walk and doing sports. Third, why not communicate more with your parents, teachers or friends when you feel nervous Maybe they can help you with your studies and make you feel better.
Hope things work out.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作背景和目的，介绍朋友生活中遇到的问题，并提出会给予建议；
第二步，详细介绍给予的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feel stressed and nervous 感到压力大、紧张
②make a proper plan for study 制定合理的学习计划
③make the best use of one’s time 充分利用某人的时间
④communicate with 与……沟通
[高分句型]
①Second, make the best use of your time and try to find time to relax, such as listening to light music, going for a walk and doing sports. (祈使句)
②Third, why not communicate more with your parents, teachers or friends when you feel nervous (why not句型表示提议；when引导时间状语从句)
【知识点】一般过去时、书面表达、学校活动、景点/建筑
21．【答案】例文:
Thursday, 12 June
Today was a day to remember! It was cloudy and cool. My classmates and I went to Linfen Museum for our trip. The museum was big and quiet. When we got there, we saw many old things. The guide said they were “cultural relics”. Some were cups, and some were tools. They looked very interesting! The guide told us stories about them. We listened carefully and learned a lot about the history of our city. After that, we walked around the museum and talked about what we saw. It was fun to be with my friends, we also took lots of photos.
What a meaningful and happy trip!
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇日记。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。
【脉络导引】第一步，开篇点题。开篇交代天气情况和核心事件。
第二步，具体描述参观过程。依次讲述到达博物馆后的见闻、导游的讲解、自身的收获，以及和朋友的互动，让经历更生动具体。
第三步，总结感受。抒发对此次参观的愉悦之情，升华情感。
【提分词汇】①cultural relics文物
②learned a lot学到很多
③fun有趣的
【提分句式】①When we got there, we saw many old things. (When引导的时间状语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、健身/锻炼、爱好、音乐与舞蹈
22．【答案】例文
Dear Wang Lei,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems recently. I will give you some advice.
You should have a talk with your parents so that they can understand you better. Your parents may think playing the piano can prepare yourself for your future. But if your parents force you to learn it, you may feel unhappy. Playing football can make you feel relaxed, but it may take you a long time and it may get in the way of your study. What’s more, you shouldn’t avoid the problem, but you shouldn’t be too worried. You should look for some solutions.
Hope you can solve your problem soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容给王磊一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据他的问题详细介绍给王磊的一些建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a talk with和某人聊一聊
②get in the way of阻碍
③look for寻找
[高分句型]
①You should have a talk with your parents so that they can understand you better. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②But if your parents force you to learn it, you may feel unhappy. (if引导的条件状语从句)
【知识点】一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、旅行
23．【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to get your email. I’d like to share my favourite trip with you.
Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. Sanya is a beautiful coastal city in southern China. We visited several places of interest, like the famous Yalong Bay. The clear blue sea and soft white sand there were amazing. We spent hours swimming in the sea and building sandcastles on the beach. Also, we went to Nanshan Temple and were deeply impressed by the huge statue of the Goddess of Mercy.
Besides, we took a lot of photos of the beautiful scenery there. And the local food was a highlight! We ate fresh and delicious seafood at a local market. I’ve never had such delicious seafood before.
This trip to Sanya was truly unforgettable, and I hope I can visit it again someday. How about sharing one of your interesting trips with me
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时态”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意写清楚旅途的具体经历，注意写信正确格式，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
【脉络导引】第一步，指出分享旅行经历的写信目的；
第二步，具体介绍旅途的经历；
第三步，表达对本次旅途的喜爱和对杰克旅途分享的期待。
【提分词汇】① amazing 令人惊叹的
② impressed 印象深刻的
③ scenery 风景
④ unforgettable 难以忘记的
【提分句式】① Also, we went to Nanshan Temple and were deeply impressed by the huge statue of the Goddess of Mercy. （and连接并列结构)
② I’ve never had such delicious seafood before. （现在完成时态）
【知识点】一般现在时、人际交往、方法与哲理
24．【答案】例文：
Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. Those who can cooperate with others well are called great partners, so the question remains: how can we be a great partner
There are certain techniques we can learn to help to be better. First of all, we should always listen to others patiently and carefully. Only by listening can we understand our team members and be more effective. In the meantime, we should always be polite when we give advice. That’s how we show respect and it’s the only way we can make progress.
By cooperating with other people, we can improve our communication skills. By cooperating with other people, we can learn about new perspectives towards things. By cooperating with other people, we can make progress in both the project and self-improvement.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：该书面表达主要围绕如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。本文已经给出了写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出，写作中，应承接短文的开头，注意描述的全面性，将提示的内容全部利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
2.例文点评：本文采用四段式，第一段开篇引出如何成为优秀的合作者；第二段是合作的技巧；第三段是合作的意义；第四段以感谢结尾。整篇例文要点齐全，内容完整，条例清晰。多种句式交替使用，使文章增色不少。
3.高分亮点：
短语：as we all know；be of great importance；cooperate with；first of all；listen to sb.；in the meantime；make progress；learn about；both…and…；thank sb. for sth.。
句型：as引导的非限制性定语从句；who引导的限制性定语从句；how特殊疑问句；that（可省略）引导的限制性定语从句；only位于句首的倒装句；when引导的时间状语从句；By cooperating with other people…排比句。
【知识点】一般现在时、人际交往、家庭、朋友与周围的人
25．【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
Just as an English saying goes, no man is an island. Everyone needs friends. I have a lot of friends. But my best friend is Amy. We are in the same class. She is as tall as me. Her hair is longer than mine. She is outgoing and funny but I am quiet. When I am sad, she often makes me laugh. We have the same interest. We both like reading books. She likes novels and I like stories. We often talk about our books with each other. Her English is good but I am poor. When I have problems, she always helps me. She tells me some good leaning methods. Without her help, my English won’t improve so much. I treasure our friendship very much. I think it is the most precious thing in my life. I must take good care of the boat of our friendship.
Thank you for your time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“friendship”为主题写一篇发言稿。学生可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的好朋友的基本信息、性格、外貌等；
第二步，具体讲述你们之间发生的事情；
第三步，谈谈自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb do sth让某人做某事
②talk about谈论
③take good care of爱护
[高分句型]
①When I am sad, she often makes me laugh.（时间状语从句）
②When I have problems, she always helps me.（时间状语从句）
③I think it is the most precious thing in my life.（宾语从句）
【知识点】一般将来时、一般现在时、个人经历、书面表达、哲理感悟、情感与情绪、现在完成时
26．【答案】例文
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will come to an end soon. I’d like to say something.
Looking back at the last three years’ middle school life, I’m proud to say that I’ve gained a lot—not only have I gained a lot of knowledge, but also I’ve made many friends and learned how to get along with others. What’s more, I’ve learned to make my own decisions.
Here, I’d like to express my thanks to those teachers who have been kind and friendly to us. It’s they who have taught us to share. It’s they who have always been there to listen to us and give us a hand.
Tomorrow we’ll leave here for the new school. We promise to go on working hard and try our best to make greater progress in the new school.
Finally, I wish all of you the best of luck.
Thank you.
Li Hua
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
【脉络导引】第一步，开篇点题，引出本文主题；
第二步，回顾初中三年的学校生活；
第三步，向老师表示感谢；
第四步，展望未来并表达祝愿。
【提分词汇】①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②get along with与……和睦相处
③make my own decisions自己做决定
【提分句式】①Here, I’d like to express my thanks to those teachers who have been kind and friendly to us.（who引导定语从句）
②It’s they who have taught us to share.（强调句型）
三、人与自然
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、濒危动物
27．【答案】参考范文
Boys and girls,
Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them Snow leopards live in the mountains of Central and South Asia and feed on sheep, rabbits, and other small animals. Unfortunately, they are in danger. People hunt them for their fur, cut down forests, and leave them with no place to live. We should do something to protect them. First, we can help people learn more about snow leopards. Second, we can set up more nature parks.
Let’s do something to make a difference!
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【脉络导引】 第一步，开头引出雪豹这一主题；
第二步，中间阐述雪豹的生活习性、面临的危险；
第三步，结尾提出保护雪豹的具体措施。
【提分词汇】 ①unfortunately不幸地
②hunt捕猎
③ensure确保
④set up建立
【提分句式】 Let’s do something to make a difference! (祈使句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、动物
28．【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is my dog, Coco. She has big eyes and soft fur. She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me. Also, Coco brings me lots of happiness. When I feel sad, she sits beside me quietly. Every weekend, we play together in the park. I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.
Animals are our best friends. They make our lives colorful. So let’s protect them and give them warm homes. Thank you!
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
【脉络导引】第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍自己最喜欢的动物；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍它的性格，外貌，以及与它之间的相处经历；
第三步，呼吁人类保护动物。
【提分词汇】①lots of很多
②in the park在公园
【提分句式】①She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me.（时间状语从句）
②I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.（and连接并列句）
四、请求与提供帮助
【知识点】一般现在时、所属、社会、请求与提供帮助
29．【答案】例文：
I lost my schoolbag. Do you see a schoolbag on the bench in the park Maybe it's mine. I'm sorry to leave it there. There is a Chinese book, a maths book, an English book and some exercise books in it. There's also a pencil box and a student card. There is more information about my name, my class and my school on the student card. Please call me at 8214 6547. It's very nice of you to do so.
Thank you!
【详解】
1、题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照所给要点写一篇寻物启事，重点介绍书包中的物品以及学生卡上的个人信息。
2、写作指导：本文以一般现在时，第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意人称代词和物主代词的正确使用；可使用there be句型介绍书包中的内容。
五、希望和愿望
【知识点】一般将来时、一般现在时、希望和愿望、意愿和打算、计划与安排
30．【答案】例文：
Dear Linda,
How's it going I'll study in senior high school. I'm so happy because I will meet new classmates and teachers. I'll also be allowed to make more decisions by myself and choose my favorite subjects. Besides, I expect there is a library where I can read.
However, I also have some worries. First, I'm afraid I'll have no time for after-school activities. Second, perhaps I'll fall behind others in some subjects. It's always difficult to study maths well. At last, I'm afraid the food in the new school won't agree with me. What can I do with these problems
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题属于书信作文，题目的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据参考词汇写给笔友Linda写一

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