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续写作文语料库
--结尾句
续写作文六大主题
遇难脱困
个人成长
校园生活
助人为乐
亲情关爱
人与动物
结尾的方法
主题升华式结尾
留白式结尾
首尾呼应结尾
画面定格式结尾
01.首尾呼应
首尾呼应式结尾：是指续写文章与材料原文开头相呼应采用与原文前后逻辑一致、主题一致的结尾方式，起到深化主题，画龙点睛的效果。
【示例】叙述作者的母亲很健忘，一家自驾旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了一些有趣的事情。
故事开头: I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving，sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.
续写结尾:Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still the most wonderful mom in the world.
【仿写1】(2021·新课标I&I卷) 梗概: 讲述双胞胎为了献给母亲一份美味早餐，自己动手做起饭餐，但是不幸的是他们连连失败的故事。
故事开头:The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.
结尾句:__________________________________________________________________
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Mother kissed them and smiled dazzlingly（adv.耀眼地）“Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!”
【仿写2】
(2020·新课标卷) 梗概: 善良的Meredith想帮助一个贫困家庭。孩子们想出一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。
故事开头:The Meredith family lived in a small community...Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
续写结尾:_________________________________________________________________
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Holding the money, so moved was Bernard that he could hardly utter a word. Even a small act of kindness can make the world better.
积累：make ends meet收支平衡，维持生计
【仿写3】(2018·浙江6月卷)
梗概: 讲述的爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。
故事开头:It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
续写结尾:_________________________________________________________
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Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved（铭记；雕刻） in my mind.
【仿写4】(2020·浙江7月卷)
梗概: 讲述作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊遇到攻击最后得救的故事。
故事开头: One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”--the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
续与结尾:___________________________________________________________________
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On the way home, I checked my camera, amazed to find that the photos were so clear and vivid that they were better than any other photos we'd taken.
02.画面定格
画面定格法: 指的是通过描写具体的环境和人物的动作，构建出一个情感丰富且富有画面感的故事结尾，从而增强故事的视觉效果，加深情感共鸣，提高故事的吸引力。
第一步:确定动作和情感基调。
根据情节发展，确定此刻的人物动作和情感基调，如喜悦、感动、释然等。
第二步:选择合适的环境描写。
选择一个能够增强当前情感基调的环境背景，例如自然元素、天气状况或具体场景。
第三步:整合环境与人物动作。
将环境描写与人物动作有机结合，形成一个完整的画面。通过细致的描写，使读者能够感受到人物的内心世界和情感波动，增强故事的吸引力和共鸣。
【示例】普通结尾句: She was happy to receive the trophy(奖杯；奖品).
画面定格法:
1.确定动作与情感基调: 轻抚奖杯，喜悦;
2.选择合适的环境描写: 温暖的阳光;
3.整合环境与人物动作: 阳光照在奖杯上，她轻轻抚摸奖杯。
画面定格结尾句:
She touched the trophy lightly as it caught the glow of the sun outside the window.（它捕捉到了窗外阳光的光芒）
【仿写1】
Kissed by the rain and glistening（v.闪闪反光）, the wet ground is cold underfoot(adv.在脚下). A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。(雨后清新的画面)
【仿写2】
1.阳光温暖又温柔地笼罩着她，她抬起头，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。
2.清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。
With the sunlight greeting her gently and warmly, she raised up her head, wearing a shining smile on her face.
With the early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
【仿写3】
1.温暖的阳光照进来,他们拥抱在一起,感到被原谅,被爱和被信任。
2.两人互相搀扶着,站起身来,朝家走去,夕阳在地上投下两个长长的、肩并肩的影子。
With the warm sunlight shining in, they hugged together
feeling forgiven, loved, and trusted.
Supporting each other, they both got up and headed home.With the setting sun casting two long shadows on theground, side by side.
【仿写4】
1. 时间似乎停下来见证这动人的一刻。
2.他们的笑声使房间充满了愉快的气氛。
3. 沐浴在灿烂的阳光下，一家人幸福地拥抱在一起。
4. 在回家的路上，琥珀般的阳光洒在他们灿烂的笑容上，展现出非凡的体育精神魅力。
Time seemed to pause/stop/cease to witness the touching moment.
Their laughters filled the room with a happay atmoshpere.
Bathing in the brilliant sunlight, the family hugged in happiness.
On their way back home, amber-like sunshine stretched over their radiant(adj.喜悦的，灿烂的) smiles, which show the extraordinary charm of sportsmanship（n.体育精神）.
03.主题升华
升华主题：要求写作者不仅在故事结束时总结经历，而且能将经历或情节中的深层次意义提炼出来，由浅入深从故事引出道理，赋予故事更广泛的影响力和启示。
第一步: 总结故事结局。
总结故事情节和结局，并思考故事中的关键事件和结局带来的直接影响。
第二步: 提炼深层次意义。
从故事结局中提炼出深层次的意义和主旨，这部分通常与主题相关。
第三步: 衔接结局与意义。
将故事结局与提炼出的深层次意义巧妙衔接，形成一个完整的结尾。
普通结尾句: He received a big round of applause（热烈掌声） from the audience.
主题升华法:
1.总结故事结局: 在舞台上赢得掌声;
2.提炼深层意义: 战胜恐惧就能获得胜利;
3.升华衔接结局: 赢得掌声→提升自信→相信自己能战胜所有恐惧。
主题升华后的结尾句:
His courageous speech not only earned him applause but also developed a new found confidence within him, showing him that he could overcome all fears.
续写结尾: (历险脱困类)
普通结尾: She managed to survive the desert and find her way back to safety.
续写思路:
主题升华后:
生存下来→展现坚韧和智慧→相信坚韧和智慧能带来希望
Surviving the desert and finding her way back to safety showed her that resilience and intelligence can bring hope even in desperate situations.
在沙漠中幸存下来并找到回到安全地带的路，这向她表明，即使在绝望的情况下，韧性和智慧也能带来希望语
续写结尾:(人与动物类）
普通结尾:The wounded bird he cared for finally flew back to the forest.
续写思路:
主题升华后:
乌飞回森林→建立联系一相信人与动物的关爱可以跨越物种界限
As the bird he cared for flew back to the forest, he understood that compassion(同情) for animals could create bonds that transcend（超越） species boundaries.
当他培育的鸟飞回森林时，他明白了对动物的同情可以建立超越物种界限的纽带。
续写结尾:(家庭亲情类）
普通结尾: Our family trip to the mountains was full of laughter and bonding（n.人与人之间的关系）.
续写思路:
主题升华后:
愉快的时光→感受到亲情的力量→相信亲情的温暖和力量是无尽的
The laughter and bonding during our family trip to the mountains reminded me that no matter where we are, the unbreakable（adj.牢不可破的） bonds of family provide us with endless warmth and strength.
续写结尾:(个人成长类)
当通结尾:He felt a sense of accomplishment after finishing the marathon.
续写思路:
主题升华后:
完成马拉松→获得成就感→相信坚持和努力可以带来巨大的成就感和潜力
Crossing the marathon finish line filled him with a profound(adj.深刻的，强烈的) sense of accomplishment, showing him that perseverance（n.毅力） and determination could unlock（v.解开，开启） his true potential.
跨过马拉松终点线让他充满了深刻的成就感，向他展示了毅力和决心可以释放他真正的潜力。
续写结尾:(助人为乐类)
普通结尾:After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but happy to have made a difference.
续写思路:
主题升华后:
志愿服务→感到快乐→相信助人为乐带来内心的满足和幸福感
After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but deeply fulfilled（adj.满足的）, knowing that acts of kindness bring profound joy and satisfaction to both the giver and receiver.
经过漫长的一天的志愿者工作，我感到很累，但也深感满足，因为我知道善意的行为会给给予者和接受者带来巨大的快乐和满足。
主题升华常用句式
【举例子】
1.This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that there's always a way out as long as we never give up our hope.
这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理: 只要我们不放弃希望，任何困境都有出路。
2.This unforgettable experience taught her a valuable lesson that a small act of kindness can make a big difference.这段难忘的经历使她学到了一个道理:一个小小的善举也有重大的影响。
句型1: This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that...
【仿写】
1.这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理: 我们遇到困难时一定要有积极的态度。从那天起，我变得更勇敢，更乐观
2.这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课:每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we should have a positive attitude when facing difficulties. From that day on, I grew braver and more optimistic.
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that everyone should learn first aid because every second counts.
【举例子】
（1)From then on, I made up my mind to pass on“love” to others. Just as a saying goes:“Rose given and fragrance in hands.”
从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”
（2)From that day on,every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.(2021年1月八省联考)
从那天起，每当我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是伸出手去帮助他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善良传递于去。
句型2: From then on,+ 表行动、决心的句子
【仿写1】(2023·浙江1月卷)从那以后，我总是远离野生动物。只有这样，我们才能与自然和谐相处。
【仿写2】从那时起，我不仅能很好地写作，而且我知道了真相--恐惧永远不会造就未来，但希会。(2022I卷)
From then on,Ialways keep away from wild animals,Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.
From then on, not only did I have a good command of writing, but I also knew the truth--fear never builds the future, but hope does.
【举例子】
（1) It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.(2020.7高考山东卷）
正是爱让世界转动，Bernard在心里深深地感受到了。
仿写1: 是Johnson老师的鼓励给予了我勇气和自信。
仿写2: 正是这次特别的经历使我明白了家人才是世界上最重要的。
句式3: 强调句:It is+被强调部分+that+其他部分
It was Mr Johnson's encouragement that gave me courage and confidence.
It was the unique experience that made me realizefamily matters the most.
【仿写3】(2024浙江1月卷)正是由于这次经历，伊娃才真正理解了老子的话:干里之行始于足下。
【仿写4】(2025八省联考卷)正是通过这次冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内心温柔。
It was thanks to the experience that Eva really comprehended（v.理解） what Laozi said: A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
It was through this adventure that I got acquainted with（熟悉，了解） these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
【仿写5】(2025八省联考卷)是我的老师体贴地鼓励我，敦促我发挥自己讲故事的潜力。
【仿写6】(2024·新课标I&I卷)正是这段难忘的经历教会了我，朋友就像一把伞，无论晴天还是雨天，他们都会一直在你身边。
It was my teacher who was considerate enough to encourage me, urging me to take advantage of my potential in telling stories.
It was this unforgettable experience that taught me that friends are like an umbrella and whether it's sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you.
【举例子】
（1)Only when we open our heart can we bathe in the brilliant（adj.聪颖的，明亮的） sunshine and enioy the warmth of love.
只有当我们打开心扉，我们才能沐浴在阳光中享受爱的温暖
（2)Only when everyone gives a little love can our world become better and better.
只有每个人都奉献一点爱，我们的世界才会变得更美好。
（3)Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。
句型4: only...(倒装句)
【仿写】
1.直到通过这次经历我才意识到，只有勇敢和决心才能克服一切闲难。
2.直到那时他才意识到一次小小的善举对另一个人来说意义重大，甚至能照亮别人的生活。
Only through this experience did I realize that it was bravery and determination that can conquer all the difficulties.
Only then did he realize a small act of kindness could mean so much to another person and could even brighten someone's life.
【仿写】
1.直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱/善意/友谊的重要性。
4.直到那时我才意识到真诚和诚实在友谊中的价值。
Only then did he realize the importance of forgiveness and love/kindness/friendship.
Only then did l realize the value of sincerity and honesty in friendship.
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight/dilemma（n.困境，窘境） as long as we stay calm/never give up hope/ unite together.
最后，我们做某事。
多么难忘的经历啊!
事实证明，只要我们保持冷静/不放弃希/团结一致就总有办法摆脱闲境。
句型5: 综合型组合公式（结果+难忘的经历+体悟）
Had it not been for this event, they wouldn't have realized that they should cooperate and cultivate(培育，开垦) team spirit to achieve their goals.
如果不是因为这次活动，他们就不会意识到他们应该通过合作和培养团队精神来实现自己的目标。
句型6: Had it not been for...,+主句
【仿写】
如果没有奶奶的鼓励和杰克逊先生的宽容，我就不会成长为一个自信、谦虚、知错就改的人。
Had it not been for Grandma's encouragement and Mr Jackson's forgiveness, I wouldn't have grown into a confident and humble（adj.谦虚的） person who learns from mistakes.
【举例子】我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。
It occurred to me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future.
句式7: It dawned on sb/lt occurred to sb/lt turned out that...
【仿写】
1. (2023·新课标I&II卷)我突然意识到，虽然这很艰难，但没有什么比成就感更有价值的了。
2. 这证明是一次有益的经历，从中不仅收获快乐，而且认识到努力的价值。
It suddenly dawned on me that tough as it was, there was nothing more valuable than the sense of accomplishment（n.成就，成绩）.
It turned out to be a rewarding experience, from which he not only harvested（v.收割，收获） joy, but also learned the value of efforts.
添加谚语/俗语结尾
【举例子】
1. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Through this unforgettable experience, （主人公名字） learned that as long as one holds firm to their determination, no difficulty is insurmountable（adj.不能克服的）.
正如谚语所说：“有志者事竟成。” 通过这次难忘的经历，（主人公名字）学到了只要坚定决心，没有困难是无法克服的。
2. “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” This incident deepened the friendship between （主人公名字 1） and （主人公名字 2）, proving that true friends support each other through thick and thin（困难和障碍）.
“患难见真情。” 这次事件加深了（主人公名字 1）和（主人公名字 2）之间的友谊，证明了真正的朋友会在艰难时刻相互扶持。
3. “Two heads are better than one.” Their joint efforts in this task not only led to a successful outcome（n.结果） but also made them realize the power of cooperation（n.合作）.
“三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。” 他们在这项任务中的共同努力不仅带来了成功的结果，还让他们认识到了合作的力量。
4. “The rose’s in her hand,the flavor in mine.” By helping others selflessly, （主人公名字） received the joy of giving and understood the true meaning of this saying.
“赠人玫瑰，手有余香。” 通过无私地帮助他人，（主人公名字）收获了给予的快乐，也理解了这句话的真正含义。
谚语：
1. It is never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
2. No cross, no crown. 不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。
3. Doing is better than saying. 行胜于言。
4. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
5. A good beginning makes a good ending. 良好的开端就是成功的一半。
6. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难之交才是真朋友
7. Nothing is impossible to the man who will try.
世上无难事,只怕有心人。
谚语：
8.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子要变傻。
9. There is no secret of success but hard work. 成功无秘诀,只是努力干。
10. Don't leave today's work for tomorrow. 当日事，当日毕。
11. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
12. Time means life, time means speed, time means strength.
时间就是生命，时间就是速度，时间就是力量。
13. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
14. A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。
15. Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
16. Virtue is fairer far than beauty. 美德远远胜过美貌。
17. No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。
18. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的不一定都是金子。
19. Do not impose on others what you yourself do not desire . 己所不欲，勿施于人。
20. A man cannot spin and reel at the same time. 一心不能二用。
04.留白式结尾
留白式结尾： 是高考英语读后续写中极具文学性的手法，它不直白交代结局，而是通过场景、动作或暗示性语言留下想象空间，让读者自行回味。这种结尾能避免故事落入俗套，同时体现对情节的把控力。以下是具体举例和句型结构梳理：
核心特点
1. 不直接点明结果：如不写 “他们从此幸福地生活在一起”，而是用 “夕阳下两人并肩走远的背影” 暗示关系的和解。
2. 依赖意象或动作：通过自然景象（风、星光、落叶）、细微动作（微笑、挥手、转身）传递未尽之意。
3. 保持 “未完成感”：结局是 “故事的暂停” 而非 “终点”，让读者能延伸想象后续发展。
【举例子】以动作留白体现关系变化
场景：主角曾因误会与父亲疏远，经历某件事后理解了父亲的苦心。
结尾：He handed me the old photo album, his fingers brushing mine. I opened it, and there we were—me at seven, grinning on his shoulders. When I looked up, his eyes were misty, but he didn’t look away. I patted the empty spot next to me on the sofa.
他把旧相册递给我，手指不经意碰到我的手。我翻开相册，里面是七岁的我，趴在他肩头傻笑。抬头时，他眼眶湿润，却没有移开目光。我拍了拍沙发上我旁边的空位。
【举例子】以象征物暗示主题延续
场景：主角通过帮助他人领悟 “善意的传递”。
结尾：She pressed the small key into my palm, her fingers warm. “Pass it on,” she said. I nodded, watching her walk down the street. The key felt light, but somehow, I knew its weight would grow—with every hand it touched.
她把那把小钥匙按在我掌心，手指暖暖的。“把它传下去，” 她说。我点头，看着她走远。钥匙很轻，但我知道，它的重量会随着每一次传递而增加。
【举例子】对话留白（半截话或默契无言）
“[未说完的话],” [人物] said. [对方的反应，无明确回应].
例子：“I’m sorry I—” he started. I shook my head, handing him the coffee. Steam curled between us.
“对不起我 ——” 他刚开口。我摇头，把咖啡递给他。热气在两人之间缭绕。
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