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Unit1 Look it up!
Writing
（沪教版2024）八年级
上
Learning objectives
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Lead in
Pre-writing
2
While-writing
Post-writing
4
Summary
Assessment
6
Homework
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3
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7
By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
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use key words to look up information through online encyclopaedia;
know how to write an encyclopaedia entry;
learn writing format and some writing skills.
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Learning objectives
Lead in
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Online Encyclopaedia for Teens
We are calling for articles about famous people around the world. Write an encyclopaedia entry and send it to us.
Lead in
01
What does the encyclopaedia want
Facts
Opinions
Free talk.
Tip: Encyclopaedia entries should contain facts instead of opinions.
Lead in
01
Wang Yao picked a scientist and drew a mind map before she wrote an encyclopaedia entry about a scientist she admires.
Who will YOU choose An inventor
A writer
Pre-writing
02
Look at the mind map and label the parts of the entry.
Look and label.
Yuan Longping
basic information
year of birth and death
….
Main achievements
hybrid rice research
….
Awards and titles
Medal of the Republic ….
Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping (1930-2021) was a Chinese agricultural scientist. He was born in Beijing.
Yuan spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice. These new types of plants can produce much more rice than traditional ones. Yuan’s work has helped feed people in China and many other parts of the world. Farmers in a lot of countries now grow his hybrid rice.
Yuan won many awards for his research. He received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours, in 2019. People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping (1930-2021) was a Chinese agricultural scientist. He was born in Beijing.
Yuan spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice. These new types of plants can produce much more rice than traditional ones. Yuan’s work has helped feed people in China and many other parts of the world. Farmers in a lot of countries now grow his hybrid rice.
Yuan won many awards for his research. He received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours, in 2019. People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
Pre-writing
02
Look and label.
basic information
Main achievements
Awards
and titles
Pre-writing
02
Read and answer the questions.
Q: When was Yuan Longping born and when did he pass away
Q: What was Yuan Longping’s job
Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping (1930-2021) was a Chinese agricultural scientist. He was born in Beijing.
Yuan spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice. These new types of plants can produce much more rice than traditional ones. Yuan’s work has helped feed people in China and many other parts of the world. Farmers in a lot of countries now grow his hybrid rice.
Yuan won many awards for his research. He received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours, in 2019. People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
He was born in 1930 and passed away in 2021.
He was a Chinese agricultural scientist.
Pre-writing
02
Read and answer the questions.
Q: What did Yuan Longping spend his whole life doing
Q: What high honour did Yuan Longping receive in 2019
Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping (1930-2021) was a Chinese agricultural scientist. He was born in Beijing.
Yuan spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice. These new types of plants can produce much more rice than traditional ones. Yuan’s work has helped feed people in China and many other parts of the world. Farmers in a lot of countries now grow his hybrid rice.
Yuan won many awards for his research. He received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours, in 2019. People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
He spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice.
He received the Medal of the Republic.
Pre-writing
02
Read and answer the questions.
Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping (1930-2021) was a Chinese agricultural scientist. He was born in Beijing.
Yuan spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice. These new types of plants can produce much more rice than traditional ones. Yuan’s work has helped feed people in China and many other parts of the world. Farmers in a lot of countries now grow his hybrid rice.
Yuan won many awards for his research. He received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours, in 2019. People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
basic information
Main achievements
Awards
and titles
涵盖生卒年、职业、出生地、成长背景
突出才能
主要成就和影响力
Pre-writing
02
Read and answer the questions.
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…(…-…) was …. … was born in ….
…spent his / her whole life developing …. These … can … than traditional ones. … ’s work has helped … in China and many other parts of the world. … in a lot of countries now ….
… won many awards for … research. … received the Medal of the …, one of … highest honours, in …. People call … ….
basic information
Main achievements
Awards
and titles
涵盖生卒年、职业、出生地、成长背景
突出才能
主要成就和影响力
Pre-writing
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Read and take notes.
Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping (1930-2021) was a Chinese agricultural scientist. He was born in Beijing.
Yuan spent his whole life developing different kinds of hybrid rice. These new types of plants can produce much more rice than traditional ones. Yuan’s work has helped feed people in China and many other parts of the world. Farmers in a lot of countries now grow his hybrid rice.
Yuan won many awards for his research. He received the Medal of the Republic, one of China's highest honours, in 2019. People call him the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
basic information
Main achievements
Awards
and titles
be born in ... 出生在……
spend one’s whole life doing sth. 一生都致力于做某事
develop different kinds of ... 研发不同种类的……
produce much more ... than ... 比……生产更多……
receive honours 获得荣誉
the “Father of Hybrid Rice” “杂交水稻之父”
While-writing
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Find information about this person and write an encyclopaedia entry.
Find and write.
Step 1 Plan Draw your own mind map.
Basic information
The Person
Main achievements
Awards
and titles
Step 2 Write
While-writing
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Find and write.
Write an encyclopaedia entry about the person you admire.
关于你敬佩的人的百科全书条目。
Find a photo of the person you are writing about and add it to the article.写一条找到你正在写的人物的照片，并将其添加到文章中。
Step 3 Check and revise Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
While-writing
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Find and write.
I included important information about this person.
I used facts in stead of opinions in the encyclopaedia entry.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Read and correct.
Post-writing
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Qian Xuesen (1911–2009) was a Chinese space scientist. He was born in Shanghai.
Qian spent his whole life develop China’s space programme. He help create China’s first missiles and satellites. His work has made our country strong in space technology. Engineers now use his ideas to build better rockets.
Qian won many awards for his work. He received the Two - Bombs - One - Satellite Merit Award, one of China most important honours. People call him “the Father of China’s Space Programme”.
developing
helped
China’s most important
Read and correct.
Post-writing
04
Tu Youyou (1930– ) is a Chinese medical scientist. She was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang.
Tu spend her whole life study traditional Chinese medicine. She found artemisinin, a medicine that can treat malaria. Her work have helped save millions of people in Africa and Asia. Many doctors now use her discovery to help patients.
Tu won many award for her research. She received the Nobel Prize in Medicine in 2015, one of world’s highest honours. People call her “the Mother of Malaria - Fighting Medicine”.
spent
studying
many awards
Read and correct.
Post-writing
04
Zhong Nanshan (1936– ) is a Chinese medical doctor. He was born in Nanjing.
Zhong spend his whole life fight diseases. In 2020, he lead the fight against COVID - 19. His work has protect many people in China and around the world. Doctors now learn from his experience to help patients.
Zhong won many awards for his work. He received the Medal of the Republic in 2020, one of China’s highest honour. People call him “the Hero of Fighting Pandemics”.
spent
led
highest honours
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content 内容(6分) 要点齐全,切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy 准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当,丰富
Fluency 流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
Show it.
Post-writing
04
The words we have learned
一、汉译英
死；死亡 __________ 全部的 __________
艺术家 __________ 一首 __________
恐龙 __________ 有才智的 __________
有艺术天赋的 __________ 笔记本 __________
Summary
05
death
whole
artist
piece
dinosaur
intelligent
artistic
notebook
The phrases we have learned
二、英汉翻译。
在…… 方面异常有天赋 ___________________________
出生 ___________________________
展现出极高的智慧 ___________________________
从很小的时候起 ___________________________
与…… 有亲属关系 ___________________________
和…… 一样小 ___________________________
灭绝；消失 ___________________________
Summary
05
be exceptionally talented in…
be born
show great intelligence
from an early age
be related to…
as small as…
die out
The sentences we have learned
三、英汉翻译。
阿尔伯特 爱因斯坦于 1879 年出生于德国。（be born）
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从很小的时候起，他就表现出了极大的智慧和艺术天赋.（from an early age）
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达芬奇他非常聪明，在不同的领域都有非凡的天赋。(be talented in)
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他著名的理论（theory）显示了他惊人的理解才能宇宙。(show…talent)
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Summary
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Albert Einstein was born in Germany in 1879.
From an early age, he showed great intelligence and artistic talent.
Leonardo da Vinci was very intelligent and was talented in different fields.
His famous theory showed his amazing talent for understanding the universe.
The sentences we have learned
爱因斯坦改变了人们理解时间、空间和引力的方式。(change the way…)
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恐龙有不同的大小。有些像鸡一样小，有些像十头大象一样大。(as…as)
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他为中国第一批卫星和导弹做出了巨大贡献。（make great contributions to）
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他毕生致力于中国的航天和国防发展 (defense development)。
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Summary
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Einstein changed the way people understand time, space and gravity.
Dinosaurs came in different sizes. Some were as small as chickens, and some were as large as ten elephants.
He made great contributions to China’s first satellites and missiles.
He devoted his life to China’s aerospace and defense development.
Self-assessment Marks
I can use key words to look up information through online encyclopaedia. 1 2 3 4 5
I can know how to write an encyclopaedia entry. 1 2 3 4 5
I can learn writing format and some writing skills. 1 2 3 4 5
Assessment
06
Basic (基础)
从课本 “达芬奇、恐龙” 条目中，选取2 个 “事实性表述” 和 1 个 “易混淆主观表述” ，制作 “事实 - 观点对比卡”，并将主观表述改写为客观事实。
Improving(提升)
选取 “恐龙灭绝假说” ，从 “百科全书、科普纪录片” 中检索3 条关键证据，用思维导图梳理 “证据 - 结论” 的推导逻辑。
Extend (拓展)
开展 ‘冷门知识英雄’寻访活动”：采访身边在小众领域有持续探索的人物，整理其故事，转化为 “客观、有价值” 的百科条目，可配采访照片 / 手绘图。
Homework
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