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Unit 2 School Life
Writing
Warm up
Share with us!
What is your new school life like
Are you enjoying it
Before you write
1. What do you need to write
2. What is the email about
3. Who will read your email
An email.
My daily life.
Readers and editors of Teen Life Magazine.
How can we write this email
How many parts are there in the email
Skim the email written by Su Wen and label the parts of the email with the words.
Body
Closing
Greeting
[ ɡri t ]
Signature
[ s ɡn t (r)]
邮件格式
Before you write
What should we include in the body of the email
1. Tell who you are and state the writing purpose.
我写这封邮件是为了跟您分享我在新学校的生活。
I am writing to share my life in the new school with you.
2. What you think of your daily life.
Other adjectives to describe your daily life:
interesting, meaningful, happy, routine, tiring, boring …
In time order (before school, at school, after school).
use time markers.
3. Describe your daily life.
4. Thank your reader.
感谢您宝贵的时间。
Thank you for your time.
before school
at school
after school
内容框架
Before you write
How does Su Wen sound in the email
In polite and vivid language!

Hi/Hello
×



I’m / It’s
×


Use Dear ... as greeting, not Hi/Hello.
语言特点
Before you write
Use full forms (I am),
not abbreviations (I’m).
Remember to thank your reader.
Use formal closing (Yours sincerely)
Vivid and clear description.
Work in pairs and discuss what Su Wen thinks of his daily life.
He thinks his life is very busy.
Do you agree Why or why not
He has so many different activities every day.
语篇逻辑
Before you write
Da Ming
I am a Grade 7 student and my school life is very interesting.
I spend all day sitting in the classroom and I have nobody to talk with during breaks.
Xiao Hong
I am a Grade 7 student and my school life is very interesting.
It is fun to learn new things in class and I always have a good time with my friends.
Practice
Read and decide whose daily life sounds interesting and why
Before you write
语篇逻辑
What else do you think of his daily life
Why do you think so
Before you write
Meaningful
Healthy
Compare the following two emails and decide which one you like better and why.
Dear Teen Life Magazine,
My name is Su Wen, and I am writing to tell you about my daily life.
I am a Grade 7 student and my school day is very busy.
I start the school day at 7:20. Classes start at 8:00 a.m. During the breaks between classes, I talk with my classmates and get myself ready for the next lesson.
After school, I play football with my friends. After dinner, I help my parents clean up. Then I do my homework and play the piano for half an hour. I do some reading before I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.
Thank you for reading my email.
Your sincerely,
Su Wen
A
Dear Teen Life Magazine,
My name is Su Wen, and I am writing to tell you about my daily life.
I am a Grade 7 student and my school day is very busy.
I start the school day with a big, healthy breakfast at 7:20. It makes me feel full of energy all day. classes start at 8:00 a.m. I always listen carefully in class. During the breaks between classes, I usually talk with my classmates and get myself ready for the next lesson. Tuesday is my favorite school day because I have a drama lesson in the afternoon. It is fun to learn how to put on a play.
After school, I usually play football with my friends. After dinner, I always help my parents clean up. Then I do my homework and play the piano for half an hour. I usually do some reading before I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.
Thank you for reading my email.
Your sincerely,
Su Wen
B
Before you write
Add details and show feelings (using adjectives and adverbs)
细节、情感
I get up at 6:45 a.m.
I always get up early in the morning because I want to get myself fully ready for my busy school day.
After dinner, I go for a walk with my family.
Although I have a very busy day, I try to spare some time for a walk with my family. It is always important to spend time with family.
细节、情感
Practice
Try put details and feelings into your writing.
Before you write
Write an email about your daily life
Greeting
Body
Closing
Signature
Tell who you are and state your writing purpose
What you think of your daily life.
Describe your daily life.
Thank the reader.
Before school
At school
After school
Dear…
Yours sincerely,
I am … I am writing to …
busy, interesting, meaningful, boring, tiring …
In time order (time markers)
Thank you for …
get up
have breakfast
go to school
…
have classes
break time
favorite subject
…
after school activities
do homework
help out
do exercise
…
In polite and vivid language!
Add details and feelings!
Make it logical!
Summary
Before you write
Level A
1. Plan
Use the outline below to help you plan your writing. Think about what your school life is like.
While you write
1. Plan
Use the outline below to help you plan your writing. Think about what your school life is like.
Level B
While you write
2. Write
Now write your email.
Pay attention to
邮件格式
内容框架
语言特点
语篇逻辑
细节情感
Level A
While you write
Dear Teen Life Magazine,
My name is … I am writing to …
My daily life is …
In the morning, …
During the break, …
After school, …
Thank you for …
Yours sincerely,
…
Level B
2. Write
Now write your email.
Pay attention to
邮件格式
内容框架
语言特点
语篇逻辑
细节情感
While you write
Work in pairs or groups. Give scores to your partner’s or group members’ writing.
评价指标 得分 评分标准
1.邮件格式是否正确（称呼、正文、结语、落款）？ 5= Excellent
4= Good
3= Acceptable
2= Needs improvement
2.邮件正文内容是否完整（来信目的、表明感受、描述日常、感谢读者）？ 3.对于日常生活的描述是否使用了恰当的时间标记词及时态？ 4.邮件是否有足够的细节支撑和情感？细节是否匹配中心句？ 5. 邮件的拼写、语法和标点是否正确，是否合理地使用了本单元所学词汇和表达，语言是否得体？ After you write
基础作业
1. 根据自评或互评意见，修改堂上作文；
2. 在小组内互读作文，选出本组优秀作文；
3. 把作文贴在教室的黑板报上，进行学习交流；
选做*4. 将最终的作品通过邮件形式发送给老师。

拓展作业
写一段话，描述你的周末生活及心情。开头如下：
At the weekend, I often …
Homework

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