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人教版（2024）七年级上册写作5 介绍学校
一、书面表达
1．（2024七上·临平期中） 假设你是 Jack， 英国学校派团到你校参观。学校规模： 12个班级， 45位教师和500名学生。请你根据下面学校布局图及表格提示， 向英国的研学团队介绍一下你校布局及学校概况。
要求：1. 要写出图示和提示的所有内容；
2.词数:60-80;
3.开头已给出， 不计入词数。
Welcome to our school. Let's look at the map of our school.
【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文；说明文；学校生活
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。向英国的研学团队介绍一下你校布局及学校概况。时态为一般现在时。写作要点已给出，考生应注意正确使用方位介词。第一步，表明写作意图。通过"欢迎对方来到学校，并邀请一起观看学校地图。"引出下文。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"学校布局"以及"学校概况"两个方面介绍学校。第三步，书写结语。表达学校很漂亮以及我对学校的爱，进行情感升华。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。
【点评】 文章应围绕学校规模，班级人数，学生人数等展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 建议使用亮点词汇Welcome to，look at，the map of，in the center等，以及高分句型如：there be句型There is a sports field in the center. There are many trees around the school，祈使句Let's the map of our school，倒装句On the right is an art building and a music hall等
2． 假如下图是你的新学校，请以"My School"为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文介绍一下你的新学校
My School
【答案】My School.
This is my new school. It's small but beautiful.
There are six places in my school. They are the classroom building, the science building, the teachers' building, the library, the sports field and the dining hall.The classroom building is in front of the sports field. The library is between the teachers" building and the science building. Next to the teachers' building is the dining hall.
I think my school is great. I love my school very much.
【知识点】命题作文；说明文；学校生活；校园文化
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题写作，要求全面介绍自己的新学校。通过分析材料内容可知，写作中可以从以下几个方面进行介绍，如学校的建筑有哪些，以及每个建筑相对应的位置，最后表达自己对学校的情感态度等。本文在介绍自己的学校情况，使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单数为主。写作中注意主谓一致，也要注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系等。
【点评】写作时要注意文章的内容一定要紧贴题意，结合提示的语境等，丰富写作内容，使得整篇有理有据。同时也要注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度以及逻辑清晰合理。如先介绍自己学校的基础情况，如There are six places in my school. They are the classroom building, the science building, the teachers' building, the library, the sports field and the dining hall. 然后介绍每个建筑相对应的位置，能用到的介词如：in，on，between...and...，in front of等，最后介绍自己的情感，如I think my school is great. I love my school very much.
3．（2024七上·朝阳期末）假如你是李明，你的外国朋友John上周给你发邮件介绍了他的学校，请你回复此邮件，介绍一下你的学校。
要求：至少5句话，不少于40词（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
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【答案】例文
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Now I want to tell you about my school. Our school is big and looks beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in it. Our teaching building has 22 classrooms, and my classroom is on the ground floor. Our playground is in front of the teaching building. It is very big. We often play there after class. We have a new library. There are lots of books in it. Our school is really nice. We all love it very much.
Yours,
Li Ming
4．（河北省廊坊市2024-2025学年七年级上学期11月期中考试英语试题 ）学校是我们学习的天地，也是我们成长的乐园。我们每天在校园里学习和生活。请你以"My school"为题，并根据下面的表格内容用英语写一篇短文介绍一下自己的学校。
学校 大、漂亮、干净
学 校 的 建 筑 物 及 位置 两座教学楼，一个图书馆，一个运动场，一个体育馆，一个学校大厅，一个音乐厅，一座科学楼，一座艺术大楼，一个食堂…… 图书馆在体育馆的后面，食堂在科学楼的前面，艺术大楼在运动场的旁边……
老师和同学 善良友好、互相帮助
注意：
(1) 短文须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
(3) 词数60个左右。
My school
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【答案】例文
My school
My school is very big, beautiful and clean. There are many buildings in my school, such as two classroom buildings, a library, a sports field, a gym, a school hall, a music hall, a science building, an art building and a dining hall. The library is behind the gym. The dining hall is in front of the science building. The art building is next to the sports field.
My school life is very interesting. At school, I can do many interesting activities. My teachers and classmates are very kind and friendly. We love and help each other. I am very happy here every day.
I like my school very much.
5．（2024七上·婺城月考）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter想了解你的新学校。请你根据学校的布局图，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校。
要求：1.词数不少于80词。
2. 包含图片中所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
This year, I come to a new school. My new school is big and beautiful. There are many buildings in it. There is a science building next to the gate. Behind the science building, there is a library, a playground and a sports hall. The playground is between the library and the sports hall. The dining hall is behind the library. There is a teaching building on the right of the dining hall.
This is my school and I love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2025六上·招远期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter给你发来电子邮件询问你们学校的情况。请你根据以下提示内容，给他回复一封邮件，并发表一下你在学校学习生活的感受。
提示信息：
学校 Xiang yang Middle School
建筑布局 1. 运动场在办公楼旁边 2. 教学楼在运动场后面 3. 餐厅在运动场对面
科目 语文数学英语、历史、地理、生物、信息技术、体育、音乐
社团 艺术俱乐部、科学俱乐部、戏剧俱乐部、音乐俱乐部、象棋俱乐部、乒乓球俱乐部
要求：
1.不少于60词；
2.包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
3.邮件的开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How's it going In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school. Now let me tell you something about my school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How's it going In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school. Now let me tell you something about my school.
I study in Xiangyang Middle School. It is a great school. There is a large sports field next to the office building. The classroom building is behind the sports field. And the dining hall is across from the sports field. We study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, maths, English, biology, geography, history, IT, PE and music. There are also lots of clubs in our school such as art club, science club, drama club, music club, chess club and ping-pong club. I really enjoy my school life here. I have learnt a lot and made many friends. The teachers are nice, too.
I love my school.
Yours,
Li Hua
7． 假如你是李强，请根据下面的提示，介绍一下你的新学校、学校生活以及老师与同学。
提示：1. 许多班级；
2. 教室干净而明亮；
3. 学校没有图书馆，但是有一个阅览室和一个美术教室。操场在教学楼的前面，我们经常下课后在那里玩；
4. 你最喜欢的科目是英语；
5. 老师对你很好；
6. 你很喜欢你的新学校。
【答案】One possible version:
My name is Li Qiang. There are many classes in my new school. Our classrooms are clean and bright. There is no library, but there is a reading room and an art classroom. Playground is in front of the teaching building. We often play on it after class. My favourite subject is English. My teachers are good to me. I like my new school.
【知识点】提纲作文；表示目前存在的状态、性质或经常发生的动作或习惯；记叙文；学校生活
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍新学校、学校生活和老师同学。时态是一般现在时。首先表明身份是李强，接着按提示依次介绍新学校情况，先总体说有多个班级，再描述教室干净明亮；然后介绍学校设施，提及没有图书馆但有阅览室和美术教室，以及操场位置和课后活动；之后说明最喜欢的科目是英语；再讲述老师对自己很好；最后总结表达很喜欢新学校，整体围绕提示信息有条理地组织内容即可。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】 这篇范文获得高分的要点在于内容完整，紧扣题目提示，全面介绍了新学校、学校生活、老师与同学相关情况。语言简洁明了，用简单句清晰传达信息，符合初中生英语水平。好词好句有"Our classrooms are clean and bright."用主系表结构生动描绘教室状态；"Playground is in front of the teaching building. We often play on it after class."自然地介绍了操场位置和课后活动，且"play on it"表述简洁形象；"My teachers are good to me."直白地体现出师生关系的融洽，整体行文流畅自然。 作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：there be；in front of；after class；be good to等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如there be结构There is no library, but there is a reading room and an art classroom.；介绍学校生活We often play on it after class. My favourite subject is English.；介绍老师和同学My teachers are good to me.；总结I like my new school. 等。连词but、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
8．（2024七上·凉州期中）假如你是Daming，请根据以下提示写一篇作文。
1. 大家好，我是Daming。我12岁了。我在七年级三班。
2. 今天是我在初中的第一天。
3. 这是我的新学校，学校有3栋楼。
4. 学校不大，但是很漂亮。
5. 介绍一下自己在学校的喜欢做的一件事情。
要求：1. 词数：60词左右；
2. 提示要点必须全部包括，全文连贯；
3. 注意书写认真、卷面整洁。
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. My name is Daming. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 3, Grade 7. Today is my first day in junior high. This is my new school. It has three buildings. It is not big, but it is beautiful. After school, I like playing football in the playground. I love my school.
1 / 1人教版（2024）七年级上册写作5 介绍学校
一、书面表达
1．（2024七上·临平期中） 假设你是 Jack， 英国学校派团到你校参观。学校规模： 12个班级， 45位教师和500名学生。请你根据下面学校布局图及表格提示， 向英国的研学团队介绍一下你校布局及学校概况。
要求：1. 要写出图示和提示的所有内容；
2.词数:60-80;
3.开头已给出， 不计入词数。
Welcome to our school. Let's look at the map of our school.
2． 假如下图是你的新学校，请以"My School"为题写一篇70词左右的英语短文介绍一下你的新学校
My School
3．（2024七上·朝阳期末）假如你是李明，你的外国朋友John上周给你发邮件介绍了他的学校，请你回复此邮件，介绍一下你的学校。
要求：至少5句话，不少于40词（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（河北省廊坊市2024-2025学年七年级上学期11月期中考试英语试题 ）学校是我们学习的天地，也是我们成长的乐园。我们每天在校园里学习和生活。请你以"My school"为题，并根据下面的表格内容用英语写一篇短文介绍一下自己的学校。
学校 大、漂亮、干净
学 校 的 建 筑 物 及 位置 两座教学楼，一个图书馆，一个运动场，一个体育馆，一个学校大厅，一个音乐厅，一座科学楼，一座艺术大楼，一个食堂…… 图书馆在体育馆的后面，食堂在科学楼的前面，艺术大楼在运动场的旁边……
老师和同学 善良友好、互相帮助
注意：
(1) 短文须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
(3) 词数60个左右。
My school
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2024七上·婺城月考）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter想了解你的新学校。请你根据学校的布局图，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校。
要求：1.词数不少于80词。
2. 包含图片中所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2025六上·招远期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter给你发来电子邮件询问你们学校的情况。请你根据以下提示内容，给他回复一封邮件，并发表一下你在学校学习生活的感受。
提示信息：
学校 Xiang yang Middle School
建筑布局 1. 运动场在办公楼旁边 2. 教学楼在运动场后面 3. 餐厅在运动场对面
科目 语文数学英语、历史、地理、生物、信息技术、体育、音乐
社团 艺术俱乐部、科学俱乐部、戏剧俱乐部、音乐俱乐部、象棋俱乐部、乒乓球俱乐部
要求：
1.不少于60词；
2.包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
3.邮件的开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How's it going In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school. Now let me tell you something about my school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7． 假如你是李强，请根据下面的提示，介绍一下你的新学校、学校生活以及老师与同学。
提示：1. 许多班级；
2. 教室干净而明亮；
3. 学校没有图书馆，但是有一个阅览室和一个美术教室。操场在教学楼的前面，我们经常下课后在那里玩；
4. 你最喜欢的科目是英语；
5. 老师对你很好；
6. 你很喜欢你的新学校。
8．（2024七上·凉州期中）假如你是Daming，请根据以下提示写一篇作文。
1. 大家好，我是Daming。我12岁了。我在七年级三班。
2. 今天是我在初中的第一天。
3. 这是我的新学校，学校有3栋楼。
4. 学校不大，但是很漂亮。
5. 介绍一下自己在学校的喜欢做的一件事情。
要求：1. 词数：60词左右；
2. 提示要点必须全部包括，全文连贯；
3. 注意书写认真、卷面整洁。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案解析部分
1．【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文；说明文；学校生活
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。向英国的研学团队介绍一下你校布局及学校概况。时态为一般现在时。写作要点已给出，考生应注意正确使用方位介词。第一步，表明写作意图。通过"欢迎对方来到学校，并邀请一起观看学校地图。"引出下文。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从"学校布局"以及"学校概况"两个方面介绍学校。第三步，书写结语。表达学校很漂亮以及我对学校的爱，进行情感升华。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。
【点评】 文章应围绕学校规模，班级人数，学生人数等展开，确保所有内容均围绕这一中心进行阐述。 文章结构应清晰，各部分内容之间过渡自然，逻辑连贯。 使用准确的词汇和语法结构来表达，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇，确保文章易于理解。同时，注意时态和语态的正确使用。 建议使用亮点词汇Welcome to，look at，the map of，in the center等，以及高分句型如：there be句型There is a sports field in the center. There are many trees around the school，祈使句Let's the map of our school，倒装句On the right is an art building and a music hall等
2．【答案】My School.
This is my new school. It's small but beautiful.
There are six places in my school. They are the classroom building, the science building, the teachers' building, the library, the sports field and the dining hall.The classroom building is in front of the sports field. The library is between the teachers" building and the science building. Next to the teachers' building is the dining hall.
I think my school is great. I love my school very much.
【知识点】命题作文；说明文；学校生活；校园文化
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题写作，要求全面介绍自己的新学校。通过分析材料内容可知，写作中可以从以下几个方面进行介绍，如学校的建筑有哪些，以及每个建筑相对应的位置，最后表达自己对学校的情感态度等。本文在介绍自己的学校情况，使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单数为主。写作中注意主谓一致，也要注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系等。
【点评】写作时要注意文章的内容一定要紧贴题意，结合提示的语境等，丰富写作内容，使得整篇有理有据。同时也要注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度以及逻辑清晰合理。如先介绍自己学校的基础情况，如There are six places in my school. They are the classroom building, the science building, the teachers' building, the library, the sports field and the dining hall. 然后介绍每个建筑相对应的位置，能用到的介词如：in，on，between...and...，in front of等，最后介绍自己的情感，如I think my school is great. I love my school very much.
3．【答案】例文
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. Now I want to tell you about my school. Our school is big and looks beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in it. Our teaching building has 22 classrooms, and my classroom is on the ground floor. Our playground is in front of the teaching building. It is very big. We often play there after class. We have a new library. There are lots of books in it. Our school is really nice. We all love it very much.
Yours,
Li Ming
4．【答案】例文
My school
My school is very big, beautiful and clean. There are many buildings in my school, such as two classroom buildings, a library, a sports field, a gym, a school hall, a music hall, a science building, an art building and a dining hall. The library is behind the gym. The dining hall is in front of the science building. The art building is next to the sports field.
My school life is very interesting. At school, I can do many interesting activities. My teachers and classmates are very kind and friendly. We love and help each other. I am very happy here every day.
I like my school very much.
5．【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
This year, I come to a new school. My new school is big and beautiful. There are many buildings in it. There is a science building next to the gate. Behind the science building, there is a library, a playground and a sports hall. The playground is between the library and the sports hall. The dining hall is behind the library. There is a teaching building on the right of the dining hall.
This is my school and I love it.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How's it going In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school. Now let me tell you something about my school.
I study in Xiangyang Middle School. It is a great school. There is a large sports field next to the office building. The classroom building is behind the sports field. And the dining hall is across from the sports field. We study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, maths, English, biology, geography, history, IT, PE and music. There are also lots of clubs in our school such as art club, science club, drama club, music club, chess club and ping-pong club. I really enjoy my school life here. I have learnt a lot and made many friends. The teachers are nice, too.
I love my school.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．【答案】One possible version:
My name is Li Qiang. There are many classes in my new school. Our classrooms are clean and bright. There is no library, but there is a reading room and an art classroom. Playground is in front of the teaching building. We often play on it after class. My favourite subject is English. My teachers are good to me. I like my new school.
【知识点】提纲作文；表示目前存在的状态、性质或经常发生的动作或习惯；记叙文；学校生活
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，主要介绍新学校、学校生活和老师同学。时态是一般现在时。首先表明身份是李强，接着按提示依次介绍新学校情况，先总体说有多个班级，再描述教室干净明亮；然后介绍学校设施，提及没有图书馆但有阅览室和美术教室，以及操场位置和课后活动；之后说明最喜欢的科目是英语；再讲述老师对自己很好；最后总结表达很喜欢新学校，整体围绕提示信息有条理地组织内容即可。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】 这篇范文获得高分的要点在于内容完整，紧扣题目提示，全面介绍了新学校、学校生活、老师与同学相关情况。语言简洁明了，用简单句清晰传达信息，符合初中生英语水平。好词好句有"Our classrooms are clean and bright."用主系表结构生动描绘教室状态；"Playground is in front of the teaching building. We often play on it after class."自然地介绍了操场位置和课后活动，且"play on it"表述简洁形象；"My teachers are good to me."直白地体现出师生关系的融洽，整体行文流畅自然。 作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：there be；in front of；after class；be good to等。好词好句的运用为文章增色不少，如there be结构There is no library, but there is a reading room and an art classroom.；介绍学校生活We often play on it after class. My favourite subject is English.；介绍老师和同学My teachers are good to me.；总结I like my new school. 等。连词but、and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
8．【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. My name is Daming. I am 12 years old. I am in Class 3, Grade 7. Today is my first day in junior high. This is my new school. It has three buildings. It is not big, but it is beautiful. After school, I like playing football in the playground. I love my school.
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