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Section Ⅳ　Developing ideas—Writing
写潜水经历
本单元的写作任务是写一次潜水经历，属于记叙文。在文章里要写出自己做了什么，自己看见了什么，以及自己的感受。
(一)基本框架
1．开头：交代经历发生的时间、地点；
2．主体：详细描述潜水的过程；
3．结尾：作出评价并表达感受。
(二)常用表达
1．When it comes to the adventure，I experienced one three years ago．
说起潜水，我三年前经历了一次。
2．It reminded me of a similar experience，which was imprinted on my mind．
这让我想起了一个类似的经历，它深深地印在我的脑海中。
3．Although I was trained for half an hour，I was still a little scared．
尽管受过半小时的训练，但我仍有点害怕。
4．I was wearing a diving suit，waiting for my turn with expectation and uneasiness．
我穿着潜水服，满怀期待又不安地等待下水。
5．In this colourful underwater world，groups of fish were playing harmoniously and freely．
在这个多彩的水下世界里，成群的鱼儿在嬉戏玩耍，自由和谐。
请写一篇短文，描述你去年在法恩岛的潜水经历，内容包括：
1．心情的变化；
2．与灰海豹的互动。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ [审题构思]
1．确定体裁：本文是描述一次潜水经历，属于记叙文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般过去时。
4．确定内容：
①整体介绍；
②所见；
③所感。
[遣词造句]
1．去年我去英国的法恩岛进行了一次潜水，这次经历给我留下了深刻的印象。
Last year I went to Farne Island in Britain for a dive，which ____________________________．
2．虽然有教练的指导，当穿上潜水服时我还是有些忐忑。
Though _____________________ the coach，I was still a little upset with the diving suit on．
3．随着一点一点地下沉，我完全被眼前的一幕吸引了。
As I sank little by little，I _____________________________________ in front of me．
4．忽然一只体重大约300公斤的灰海豹带着好奇的神情游了过来。
Suddenly a gray seal weighing about 300 kilograms swam over ___________________．
5．尽管身躯庞大，它很快跟随我到我去的任何地方并且开始与我互动。
Though it was huge，it soon ___________________________ and began to interact with me．
6．灰海豹使我忘记了我的不安和焦躁。
The gray seal __________________________________________．
7．时间过得太快，我很快就要返回到水面了。
___________________ before I had to return to the surface．
[句式升级]
1．用倒装句改写句5
_____________________________________________________________________________________
2．用强调句型改写句6
_____________________________________________________________________
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
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Section Ⅳ
写作精析提升表达能力
典例详析
遣词造句
1．left a deep impression on me　2．under the guidance of　3．was completely attracted by the scene　4．with a curious look　5．followed me wherever I went　6．made me forget my restlessness and anxiety　7．Time passed quickly
句式升级
1．Huge though it was，it soon followed me wherever I went and began to interact with me．
2．It was the gray seal that made me forget my restlessness and anxiety．
连句成篇
【参考范文】
Last year I went to Farne Island in Britain for a dive，which left a deep impression on me．
Though under the guidance of the coach，I was still a little upset with the diving suit on．However，as I sank little by little，I was completely attracted by the scene in front of me．Suddenly a gray seal weighing about 300 kilograms swam over with a curious look．Huge though it was，it soon followed me wherever I went and began to interact with me．It was the gray seal that made me forget my restlessness and anxiety．
Time passed quickly before I had to return to the surface．
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Unit 5 What an adventure!
Section Ⅳ　Developing ideas－Writing
写作精析 提升表达能力
文体指导
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典例详析
本单元的写作任务是写一次潜水经历，属于记叙文。在文章里要写出自己做了什么，自己看见了什么，以及自己的感受。
(一)基本框架
1．开头：交代经历发生的时间、地点；
2．主体：详细描述潜水的过程；
3．结尾：作出评价并表达感受。
写潜水经历
(二)常用表达
1．When it comes to the adventure，I experienced one three years ago．
说起潜水，我三年前经历了一次。
2．It reminded me of a similar experience，which was imprinted on my mind．
这让我想起了一个类似的经历，它深深地印在我的脑海中。
3．Although I was trained for half an hour，I was still a little scared．
尽管受过半小时的训练，但我仍有点害怕。
4．I was wearing a diving suit，waiting for my turn with expectation and uneasiness．
我穿着潜水服，满怀期待又不安地等待下水。
5．In this colourful underwater world，groups of fish were playing harmoniously and freely．
在这个多彩的水下世界里，成群的鱼儿在嬉戏玩耍，自由和谐。
请写一篇短文，描述你去年在法恩岛的潜水经历，内容包括：
1．心情的变化；
2．与灰海豹的互动。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[审题构思]
1．确定体裁：本文是描述一次潜水经历，属于记叙文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般过去时。
4．确定内容：
①整体介绍；
②所见；
③所感。
[遣词造句]
1．去年我去英国的法恩岛进行了一次潜水，这次经历给我留下了深刻的印象。
Last year I went to Farne Island in Britain for a dive，which ____________________________．
2．虽然有教练的指导，当穿上潜水服时我还是有些忐忑。
Though ____________________ the coach，I was still a little upset with the diving suit on．
left a deep
impression on me
under the guidance of
3．随着一点一点地下沉，我完全被眼前的一幕吸引了。
As I sank little by little，I _______________________________ in front of me．
4．忽然一只体重大约300公斤的灰海豹带着好奇的神情游了过来。
Suddenly a gray seal weighing about 300 kilograms swam over ___________________．
was completely attracted by the scene
with a curious look
5．尽管身躯庞大，它很快跟随我到我去的任何地方并且开始与我互动。
Though it was huge，it soon _________________________ and began to interact with me．
6．灰海豹使我忘记了我的不安和焦躁。
The gray seal _____________________________________．
7．时间过得太快，我很快就要返回到水面了。
___________________ before I had to return to the surface．
followed me wherever I went
made me forget my restlessness and anxiety
Time passed quickly
[句式升级]
1．用倒装句改写句5
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
2．用强调句型改写句6
___________________________________________________________
Huge though it was，it soon followed me wherever I went and began to interact with me．
It was the gray seal that made me forget my restlessness and anxiety．
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Last year I went to Farne Island in Britain for a dive，which left a deep impression on me．
Though under the guidance of the coach，I was still a little upset with the diving suit on．However，as I sank little by little，I was completely attracted by the scene in front of me．Suddenly a gray seal weighing about 300 kilograms swam over with a curious look．Huge though it was，it soon followed me wherever I went and began to interact with me．It was the gray seal that made me forget my restlessness and anxiety．
Time passed quickly before I had to return to the surface．
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Ⅰ．阅读理解
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Do you ever dream about climbing Mount Qomolangma, which is 8，848.86 meters high If so, you're not alone．Every year, thousands of people try to climb the world's highest mountains or walk across deserts．Let's take a look at some of the 21st century's greatest adventurers．
Ed Stafford
Ed Stafford from the UK is the first person to walk along the Amazon River from the mountains of Peru to the mouth of the river in Brazil．There are many dangerous animals in the rainforest, but he was only bitten by ants and mosquitoes．On his trip，Ed had to find fruit and nuts or catch fish each morning．He used a radio to ask the people of the rainforest for food and help．Many people came to meet him and guide him through the rainforest．While he walked, Ed wrote a blog to tell the world about climate change and destruction(破坏) of the rainforest．
Gerlinde Kaltenbrunner
Gerlinde Kaltenbrunner from Austria is one of the world's greatest climbers and has climbed all the world's mountains over 8，000 metres．It's very difficult to climb in the cold weather and storms, but Gerlinde loves it．Now she spends her time climbing and helping a charity for poor children in Nepal．
Meagan Mcgrath
Some adventurers are always looking for a new challenge．Meagan Mcgrath from Canada has climbed mountains, ridden a bike across Canada and run races in the desert to raise money for the disabled．
Erik Weihenmayer
Erik Weihenmayer from the United States has climbed mountains and ridden a bike through deserts．Amazingly, Erik is blind and he wants other blind people to have active lives too．He has taken groups of young blind people climbing in Nepal．
1．What happened on Ed Stafford's journey
A．He received great help from the locals．
B．He was attacked by dangerous animals．
C．He studied fruit and nuts in the rainforest．
D．He stopped people from destroying rainforests．
2．What can we learn about Gerlinde
A．She has climbed Mount Qomolangma．
B．She lives by climbing mountains．
C．She has climbed all the high mountains．
D．She devotes her time to serving a charity．
3．Who has to face more challenges while adventuring
A．Ed Stafford．
B．Meagan Mcgrath．
C．Erik Weihenmayer．
D．Gerlinde Kaltenbrunner．
4．What do the four adventurers have in common
A．They are strong and brave men．
B．They have great interest in climbing．
C．They do something that benefits society．
D．They are professional mountain climbers．
B
It could be said that the age of adventure peaked with Sir Ernest Shackleton the moment his ship, the Endurance, became hopelessly locked in ice on its way to Antarctica in January 1915．For ten months the 28 men aboard Shackleton's ship waited and prayed for ice to break．When it finally did, the Endurance sank, leaving the crew homeless and adrift on a sea of ice in one of the world's most dangerous environments．
In January 2000 a luxury ocean liner found itself similarly trapped in the cold waters off Antarctica．Argentine authorities sent off an icebreaker straight away from the nearest naval base, and in 24 hours, all 176 passengers and crew were free．The tour company's spokesperson spun the potential disaster as a value-added reward in extreme travel．“The people on board are looking at this as sort of a great adventure，” she said．
Ever since Jon Krakauer's book Into Thin Air made Ernest a household name, the subculture of adventure has blown up like a Himalayan avalanche(雪崩) into public consciousness．Magazines promise “extreme” content, television offers adventure programs, and the growing collective fascination with adventure has produced a flow of published accounts about the world's greatest adventurous journey．Nowadays more and more people are interested in adventure and this mass appeal makes good business sense．Today the only thing blocking a would-be adventurer's passage to Antarctica is the cost—which typically runs well over $ 10，000．
Despite very different implications, adventure was just as popular in Shackleton's time．He had little trouble filling the Endurance—5，000 men were said to have responded to his recruitment(招募) notice: “Men wanted for risky journey．Small wages．Bitter cold．Long months of complete darkness．Constant danger．Safe return doubtful．”
After five months drifting on ice, the crew were forced to take to their lifeboats to Elephant Island．Reaching the wasteland, Shackleton went on with one lifeboat and five of his best men 1，300 kilometers across the bone-chilly Scotia Sea to South Georgia Island．Shivering with cold, dressed rags, Shackleton marched into a whaling station and set about organizing a rescue expedition to Elephant Island．Almost two years after becoming shipwrecked on ice, Shackleton picked up his crew．“Not a life lost, and we have been through hell，” he remarked earnestly．
5．We can learn from the first sentence of this passage that ．
A．the age of adventure began with the ship Endurance trapped in ice
B．Shackleton's adventure marked the highest point of pure exploration
C．the age of adventure ended with the ship Endurance trapped in ice
D．Shackleton's adventure predicted that the golden age of exploration was approaching
6．The word “spun” in the second paragraph can be replaced by “ ”．
A．summed up　　　 B．judged
C．boasted about D．referred to
7．Since Jon Krakauer's book was published, ．
A．the media have got interested in the topic of adventure
B．the costs of extreme travel have gone up
C．Everest has got its name known to Europe
D．people have got fascinated by Himalayan avalanches
8．The adventure in Shackleton's time has different implications from today's in that ．
A．Shackleton's adventure lasted longer than any other adventure nowadays
B．no one was missing during Shackleton's adventure
C．Shackleton's adventure was entirely for the sake of adventure
D．Shackleton enrolled volunteers more easily
Ⅱ．应用文写作
(2023·浙江1月卷)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1．活动的过程；
2．收获与感想。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
课时分层作业(十五)
Ⅰ．
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
A A C C B B A C
Ⅱ．【参考范文】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend，I took part in an event held by the Students' Union，which is aimed at educating us more about daily biology．
Initially，I attended a lecture on the flower project．The lecturer asked us to write a review on it．Since tulips are my favorite plant，I did well and got praised．Additionally，I visited the desert exhibition．Learning much from it，I came to understand why cactuses and other dry plants have sharp leaves．Ultimately，I was introduced to a brochure about trees we usually see in life，which benefited me a lot．
Undoubtedly，I gained numerous knowledge on plants and have become interested in them through this meaningful activity．
Ⅰ．【语篇解读】　本文是一篇应用文。文章介绍了世界上四位伟大的冒险家。
1．A　[细节理解题。根据第二段中“He used a radio to ask the people of the rainforest for food and help．Many people came to meet him and guide him through the rainforest．”可知，Ed Stafford 在旅途中得到当地人的很多帮助。故选A。]
2．A　[推理判断题。根据第三段第一句可知，Gerlinde爬上了所有超过8 000米的山峰；根据第一段第一句可知Mount Qomolangma超过8 000米，所以她已经爬上了Mount Qomolangma。故选A。]
3．C　[推理判断题。根据最后一段中“Amazingly, Erik is blind and he wants other blind people to have active lives too．”可知，Erik是一个盲人，所以他在冒险中会遇到更多的挑战。故选C。]
4．C　[推理判断题。本文介绍了四位冒险家，根据Ed Stafford中“While he walked, Ed wrote a blog to tell the world about climate change and destruction of the rainforest．”；Gerlinde Kaltenbrunner 中“Now she spends her time climbing and helping a charity for poor children in Nepal．”；Meagan Mcgrath 中“Meagan Mcgrath from Canada has climbed mountains, ridden a bike across Canada and run races in the desert to raise money for the disabled．”及 Erik Weihenmayer 中“Amazingly, Erik is blind and he wants other blind people to have active lives too．He has taken groups of young blind people climbing in Nepal．”可知，他们都做了一些对社会有益的事情。故选C。]
【语篇解读】　本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了沙克尔顿爵士的冒险活动，他热爱冒险，不畏困难，由此引发了一股“冒险热”。
5．B　[推理判断题。由第一段第一句可知沙克尔顿爵士的冒险标志着纯粹的冒险活动达到了顶峰，故B项正确。]
6．B　[词义猜测题。由后面“the potential disaster as a valueadded reward in extreme travel”可知，把这个潜在的灾难看作有附加值回报的极限的旅行，由此推知这句话是在评价这次经历，故选B。]
7．A　[推理判断题。由第三段中的“Magazines promise ‘extreme’ content, television offers adventure programs, and the growing collective fascination with adventure has produced a flow of published accounts about the world's greatest adventurous journey．”可知，媒体对于冒险话题十分感兴趣，故选A。]
8．C　[细节理解题。由倒数第二段中的“his recruitment notice: ‘Men wanted for risky journey．Small wages．Bitter cold．Long months of complete darkness．Constant danger．Safe return doubtful．’”可知，他的招募布告说这种冒险是“工资少；刺骨的寒冷；漫长的黑夜；持续不断的危险；不确定是否能安全返回”。分析他的冒险招募布告里说的内容，可知他纯粹是为了在艰苦条件下进行冒险活动而冒险。故选C。]
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