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教学设计
课程基本信息
学科 英语 年级 九年级 学期 春季
课题 Module 3 Life now and then Unit 2 Writing (高阶形容词、副词写作）
教学目标
通过本课的学习，同学们掌握书面表达提升微技能A.词汇升级法:1） 近义词替换2）词组替换 B.巧用连词搭桥法C.句式多样法:1） 巧用if 引导的条件状语从句2） 巧用with 表伴随结构3）巧用adj.比较级+and+adj.比较级结构 能模仿优秀作品的结构层次、表现手法、语言句式等，润色自己的书面表达。
教学内容
教学重点：书面表达提升微技能A.词汇升级法:1） 近义词替换2）词组替换 B.巧用连词搭桥法C.句式多样法:1） 巧用if 引导的条件状语从句2） 巧用with 表伴随结构3）巧用adj.比较级+and+adj.比较级结构 教学难点：书面表达提升微技能句式多样法:1） 巧用if 引导的条件状语从句2） 巧用with 表伴随结构3）巧用adj.比较级+and+adj.比较级结构
教学过程
Step 1 Revision Let’s answer some questions to go over U1. Q: How has life changed Q: Can you find some reasons to support it Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of the changing of life Let’s answer some questions to go over U2. Q:What does Mrs Li think of life today Q:Can you find some reasons to support it Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of life now and then 【教学设计】通过几个问题来回顾U1和U2的主要内容，发现贝蒂和李奶奶对今夕生活的变化有清晰的观点。并附以论据来论证自己的观点，还举了生动的例子加以佐证。通过思维导图的形式，对课文内容加以梳理。 Step 2Writing 假设你是李华，某英语报“How has life changed in my hometown ”专栏向中学生招募志愿者，需要用英语向大家介绍自己家乡人们近10年来生活的变化。请你用英语给报社写一封介绍信。要点如下： 1.选取2-3个点，突出家乡人们如今生活的变化 2.给出理由支持你的观点 3.指出变化带来的优缺点 4.得出结论 注意： 1.词数为110词左右 2.可适当增加细节，使得行文连贯 3.文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称 4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 Dear Sir/Madam, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【教学设计】该书面表达情境属于义务教育《英语课程标准》中的“人与社会”范畴，涉及“家乡和社会的变迁”。本题重点在查考能否围绕主题，在真实的生活情境中运用所学语言，发表家乡人们生活变化的观点，并有理有据，给出适当的论据支持观点。表达自己关注和热爱现在美好幸福生活的愿景。 体裁议论文时态一般过去时和一般现在时人称主要使用第一人称要点1.选取2-3个点，突出家乡人们如今生活的变化 2.给出理由支持你的观点 3.指出变化带来的优缺点 4.得出结论
列提纲： Beginning: In my opinion, life today is... Body: Give reasons/ examples Ending:Generally speaking, life today is... Step 3.以句谋篇 Task 1:连词成句 请选用方框里的关键词翻译下列句子。 convenient tiny simple once or twice generally speaking
1.过去人们常常住在小房子里。 2.过去人们吃粗茶淡饭。一年才吃上一两回肉。 3.如今交通变得越来越便捷了。 4.总的来说，我认为生活变得越来越好了。 A.Task2单句改错：请找出并改正下列句子中唯一的一处错误。 1.In my opinion,life is good today than in the past. 2. There’s fewer fear of getting ill because we know how to deal with the ordinary diseases. 3.But people don’t take as more exercise as they used to. 4.But sometimes I feel alone because she can’t come to see me often. B.句式升级：请根据要求完成下列句子。 1.What’s worse, the roofs always leaked on rainy days. (用 if 引导的条件状语从句改写句子） 2.The economy develops, rural people have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.(用with 表伴随结构改写句子） 3.I hope life in my hometown will be fantastic tomorrow.(用比较级+and+比较级改写句子) Step 4 A Sample Text 思考:这篇习作是否符合“词汇丰富，语言优美”的要求？ 【Task 3】阅读并圈划标注 1. 圈出文中使用的形容词、副词；2. 划出连接词 For many people, life is a lot easier today. My father says people lived in small houses in the countryside in the past. On rainy days, it was so bad to live in the houses. Now there are big changes.The economy develops, people have moved to big houses. In the past ,there was always traffic jam. Now people have built wide roads, the traffic is becoming better.In the past, we wrote letters to talk with others. Now, we can just call or chat with our friends on Wechat. All these are how life becomes better today and I hope our life will be better tomorrow. 【教学设计】通过圈划，发现此文本中的形容词用词重复，句型单一，连接词不够丰富。不符合“词汇丰富，语言优美”的要求。 Step 5 Polish your Writing 为了提升文本的档次，可以采用写作微技能1：词汇升级法。Tip: 近义词替换或者词组替换。Good 一词可以用wonderful、perfect、excellent、marvelous、superb、fantastic、amazing、terrific、 fabulous 等高阶形容词进行替换。bad 一词可以用terrible、awful替换。big changes可以升级为great、amazing、enormous、fabulous changes。better 可以升级为more wonderful、splendid、fantastic、terrific等词 迁移运用：词汇升级法 【Task 4】请改写下面这段话，让词汇表达更丰富！ My father says people lived in tiny cottages in the countryside in the past. In the past ,there was always traffic jam. Now people have built wide roads, the traffic is becoming convenient.In the past, we wrote letters to communicate with others. Now, we can just call or chat with our friends on Wechat. 【教学设计】本段语篇重复使用了三个in the past，两个now，用词比较重复。可以用used to,once, but, now, nowadays等词替换。 【Task 5】请改写下面这段话，让连词架起沟通的桥梁吧！微技能2：巧用连词搭桥法 ...people lived in tiny cottages in the countryside. And the roofs always leaked on rainy days. Great things have taken place. The economy develops, rural people have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.And micro-wave ovens and automatic dishwashers have become popular. 【教学设计】我们可以把 and 替换为moreover, besides, what’s more, in addition, not only...but also, furthermore ,as well (as)等连词。Tip 2: 巧用连词，逻辑更严谨 微技能3:句型多变法 词汇升级后，我们可以运用各种写作技巧，使得句型多变。 Tip 3: 巧用if 引导的条件状语从句 If it was a rainy weather, the roofs always leaked. Tip 4: 巧用with 表伴随结构 With the development of economy, ... With many cement rural roads having been built, ... Tip 5: 巧用adj.比较级+adj. 比较级结构 ....have become more and more popular. ...the traffic is becoming more and more convenient. ...our life will be more and more fantastic tomorrow. Step 6. Make a Summary 微技能1：词汇升级法 Tip1: 近义词替换或者词组替换 微技能2：巧用连词搭桥法 Tip 2: 巧用连词，逻辑更严谨 微技能3:句型多变法 Tip 3: 巧用if 引导的条件状语从句 If it was a rainy weather, the roofs always leaked. Tip 4: 巧用with 表伴随结构 With the development of economy, ... With many cement rural roads having been built, ... Tip 5: 巧用adj.比较级+adj. 比较级结构 ...our life will be more and more fantastic tomorrow. Step 7 Homework 【Task 6】请运用今天学到的微技能对这篇学生习作进行美化。 For many people, life is easy today. Medicine and food are good, and people are getting healthy and living munication is changing fast. Today, people can talk with friends all over the world. Not all changes are good ones. More people drive cars.Fewer people ride bikes.They are not very fit. Traffic makes the roads crowded, and it also makes bad pollution. We must do something. Checklist: 1. Have you used a wide range of words 是否用了丰富的词汇？ 2.Have you used some proper conjunctions 是否用了恰当的连词？ 3. Have you used varied sentence patterns 是否用了多样化的句式？

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