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浙江省中考英语书面表达做题技巧
书面表达是考查学生应用书面文字交流信息的能力。书面表达是学生综合运用英语能力的重要考查方式。中考要求是：
1. 学生能够根据提示和要求搜集素材；
2. 学生能够独立书写短文和短信，并能自我修改；
3. 学生能够运用一些连词或者关联连词表示顺序和逻辑关系，使短文流畅；
4. 学生能够根据图示和表格写出简单的说明文。
考情分析：
中考英语中的书面表达题，主要有“补全对话”、“看图填词”、“看图写话”、“看图作答”、“看图完成短文”、“看图完成句子”和“根据提示的内容，完成某项写作”等形式。这类题型的考试目的在于：通过书面形式测试考生口头会话和作简单书面表达的能力。
一般说来，测试的主要内容都是以日常生活为背景，进行简单的会话或写作。例如：问候、问路、看病、打电话、购物、自我介绍、便条、通知、短信等功能意念项目和简单的应用文。一个题目写10个左右的句子，字数为60－100个左右。书面表达一般分为：记叙文、说明文和应用文。
一、题型特点
1）记叙文
是以写人、叙事为主要内容的一种文体，也是英语书面表达中最普遍、最基本的文体。记叙文一般是记叙某人或者某事，多用一般过去时来记叙。记叙文要有明确的主题和中心思想，记叙文的线索要清晰。记叙文一般包括基本要素即：who（何人），what（何事），when （何时），where （何地），why （何因），how（怎么样）。写记叙文要掌握记叙事情或者人物的人称代词和动词的时态。一般记叙文用第一人称或者第三人称代词来写较好。
一、题型特点
2）说明文
是以说明为主要表达方式，用简洁明了的文字介绍事物，说明道理的文章。主要是对事物的类别、性质、特征、状态、功能等进行说明和解释。也可以对事物的发生、发展和消亡的过程进行解说的文章，都是说明文。说明文写作的目的是让读者知道、了解客观世界、掌握问题的解决办法。说明文的特点是：具有知识性、科学性、应用性、解说性、条理性。 写说明文要抓住事物的特点即本质特征，让读者获得全面深刻的认识。要安排好说明的顺序，是时间顺序还是空间顺序。要讲究说明的方法，一般写说明文用下定义、举例子、作比较、列数字、画图表和打比喻。要注意说明文的语言要准确，简洁、通俗生动。
一、题型特点
3）应用文
应用文主要包括：书信、日记、发言稿、电话记录、通知和贺卡。
①书信
书信的格式：第一种是写信人的地址和日期在右上角，收信人的地址、姓名在左上角，比收信人的地址低一行，书信的正文每一段起行都留5个字母的空间。第二种是每一段的起行都不留空间，段与段之间空一行。写地址时，小的地址在前面，大的地址在后面。第一行写门牌号，街道名称，乡镇名称。第二行写县市区省的名称。第三行写国家的名称。
一、题型特点
书信的结构：开场白和结束语
书信的称呼一般用Dear ____，例如：Dear friend，Dear Dad等。
开场白一般用：
　　Thank you for ____.
　　It’s a pleasure for me to ______.
　　How are things getting on
结束语一般用：
　　Best wishes!
　　Wish you good luck!
　　Write to me soon.
　　Hope to hear from you.
　　Give my best wishes to _____.
书信最后的签名是Yours, _____. / Your loving.等。
一、题型特点
4）按出题的方式分一般有看图作文和有提示作文等。
　　① 看图作文
写好这种文体的关键是正确读图。首先，要看懂图片本身所表示的具体内容，包括人物、时间、地点、事件、过程变化和结果。读图时，图片中出现的每一个细节，如数字、符号、字母等都不能轻易放过，因为里面可能有重要信息；其次，要认真分析命题人的意图及思想倾向，即命题人要用这些图片说明什么道理，表面什么态度，要达到什么目的，及要表达什么主题。
一、题型特点
②有提示作文
　　中英文提示作文是最近几年中考常考的题型，其特征是：中文提供情景内容，英语提供关键词。近年来也有用表格、图表、图示、照片等来提供提示的。实际上，看图作文就是用图画提示书面表达的内容。写有提示作文要注意两个方面：一是内容；二是表达。内容要包括所有要点，如果遗漏要点，就会丢分。知道了要写什么，最难的就是表达了。表达时要求用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯，句型、短语使用准确，如果能正确运用较复杂的句子，内容做适当的发挥，就更能够提高作文的质量了。
一、题型特点
1）正确审题，确定内容要点
首先要细读每一项提示，把握短文的写作要点和写作体裁，看一看是要求写记叙文、说明文还是应用文，这是必须把握的要点，否则就是我们平时所说的跑题了。另外要根据所给的提示列出写作要点，根据中文内容和情景扩展思路，扩充句子的内容。然后用所给的英语关键词和短语，写出自己能够驾驭的句子（自己能够正确应用的句子），连词成句、组句成段、段落成文。
二、 做书面表达题的步骤：
2） 草拟提纲
在认真审题和确定写作要点的基础上，可以对主题要点进行适当地引申和扩展，可以提出各种联想和论点，并从所给提示的内容要点出发，围绕着关键的信息开拓思路，发挥联想，记录自己想象到的内容和要点。然后草拟提纲，列出各个要点，针对要点进行扩充，务必要充分运用自己熟悉的短语和句子来写。
二、 做书面表达题的步骤：
3） 写出每一段的主题句
在列好提纲的基础上，把列出的短语和简单的句子扩充为更为完整的概括性句子就成了这一个段落的主题句。要保证该句子语法结构完整，内容高度概括、用词简洁明了。主题句一般放在段落的开头。
二、 做书面表达题的步骤：
4）参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成段落
围绕着各段的主题句，进行2－3个句子的阐述，可以举例或者进一步推理说明，来支持主题句，表达一个完整的意思。各个段落之间要层次分明，避免重复和交叉。句子和句子之间、段落和段落之间要有自然的过渡和衔接。
切忌把中文的提示内容和情景逐词逐句去翻译。要用自己熟悉的词汇和句型来表达思想内容，平时多训练用不同的句型和句子结构来表达同一个内容。还要注意简单句和复合句的交替使用，使文章句型多样化和语言知识丰富化，这样才能获得高分。
二、 做书面表达题的步骤：
5）认真检查修改草稿
按照上面的步骤完成草稿以后，不要急着往试卷上誊写。要仔细检查和修改，主要检查：主题是否准确、信息要点是否齐全、句子连接是否流畅、句子的时态是否正确、语态是否正确、句子的主语和谓语是否一致、名词的单复数是否正确、单词拼写是否有错误、短语的固定搭配是否正确、标点符号是否正确、字数是否够等。然后认认真真誊写在试卷上面。
二、 做书面表达题的步骤：
1）要注意看清题目的要求与提供的情景，需用哪些习惯用语，哪种时态，根据词数限制，应选用哪一种表达方式为最佳。
2）表达要正确，要注意英美人的习惯用语，切忌随心所欲，用中文去对照英文进行翻译。尤其是写对话时，更要注意在不同情境下的客套话或交际用语等。
三、书面表达解题技巧：
3）遇到自己不会的词语和句子，先想一想是否可以用其它的词语或句子来代替，换一种说法来写，可能会写得更好。不写没有把握的句子，切忌为使文章生动，在句中随意增加自己无把握的词，导致中文式英语而影响考试成绩。
三、书面表达解题技巧：
4）在写应用文类命题作文或对话时，应注意应用文的格式、人称、动词的时态等用法；写短文或对话时，要注意切题，有的同学，尤其是英语基础较好的同学，洋洋洒洒写了很多，可能已经离开主题了，也可能词数过多了，这些都有可能导致失分。写得多出错的可能也大，所以要注意要求的词数，不要超出词数要求过多。
三、书面表达解题技巧：专题5 书面表达25篇
（浙江中考真题+名校模拟）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2025·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你正在参与校报主题为“A good way to relax”的征稿活动。请根据以下相关信息，结合自身体验，选择一种放松的方式完成投稿。
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2．（2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs
注意：
（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2023·浙江湖州·中考真题）幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve，share，have fun，be thankful to
注意：（1）词数：80—100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Happiness is everywhere around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2023·浙江衢州·中考真题）善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以 “Work Together，Enjoy Teamwork ”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
Teamwork Activities
● take part in a ball match ● prepare for a party ● clean the classroom ● make a poster (海报) ● make a survey (调查) ● join in a relay race (接力赛) ● do social practice (社会实践) ● ...
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
（2）词数：90 110。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：
teamwork （团队合作） work with （与……合作）
team spirit （团队精神） make an effort to （努力去……）
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5．（2023·浙江丽水·中考真题）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories
Feelings
注意： 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2023·浙江台州·中考真题）假设你叫李辉，你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动，请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括如下：
内容要点 参考词汇
Where will we go ·Hehe Ancient Street ·take the bus
How will we go there ·interview…
What will we do ·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there ·learn more about…… ·…
When and where will we meet ·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意：（1）邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
（3）词数 80～100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith, How’s it going ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hui
7．（2023·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
TO LiPing@ SUBJECT C U soon! Hi Li Ping Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
8．（2023·浙江温州·中考真题）请根据以下征文海报，结合所提示的六类英语作业，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你最喜爱的一类作业及理由，并例举一次相关作业经历谈谈你从中得到的收获。
English homeworkhelps me LEVEL UP! What kind of English homework do you like best Write and share! Send it to hoppyhomework@
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：110词左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
English Homework Helps Me Level Up_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2023·浙江绍兴·中考真题）你校英语文化节举办了主题为“Sharing My Hometown”的短视频征集活动，你所在组的作品成功入选。请根据下表信息写一篇发言稿，在英语课上分享你们的创作历程及收获。
Process Gains
●make a plan ●collect information ●create a video ●understand local culture better ●…
注意：（1）发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你们的收获至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：收获gain
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
10．（2023·浙江金华·中考真题）假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining)，来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息，并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail，谈谈你的理解。
内容要点 写作参考
About the sentence written by Lu You in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out
Your understanding never give up, find a way out, ...
注意：
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~100；
4.正文首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2023·浙江宁波·中考真题）为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日（中国旅游日）开展了丰富多彩的文化活动（cultural activities）。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80—100；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
When What I did What I learned Feelings
in the morning visit Ningbo Museum the long history of the city ...
at noon make Ningbo Tangyuan a symbol of family get-togethers
in the afternoon ... ...
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2023·浙江·中考真题）在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中，你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究，经过探究与实践，你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表)，假设你是李华，请选择其中一个节日，用英语写一篇短文，在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流。
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject the Lantern Festival the Dragon Boat Festival
Methods(How we did it) watch a lantern show … visit a local museum …
Information(What we’ve learned) History about 2,000 years about 2,000 years
Time the 15th day of the first lunar month the 5th day of the fifth lunar month
Celebrations riddle(谜语) games … boat races …
Food tangyuan zongzi
… … …
A New Plan(What we’ll do) … …
注意：
(1) 短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3) 词数：80~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
13．（2025·浙江宁波·二模）假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Anna即将来中国参加夏令营活动。请根据以下信息写一封邮件，为她推荐一个合适的夏令营并给出理由。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所选夏令营中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右，邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to know that you are coming to China!
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．（2025·浙江杭州·一模）假设你是李华，上周五你和同学们参加了学校开展的“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”环保活动。请根据下图信息给某英语报ENVIRONMENT栏目的编辑写一封邮件，谈谈这次活动的过程及你的感想。
要点如下：
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.词数为100词左右。
Dear editor,
Our school had an environmental protection activity last Friday. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2025·浙江杭州·模拟预测）学校正在举行主题为“AI changes our life”的演讲活动。请从下表中选择至少两个方面，写一篇英文演讲稿，阐述你的看法，也可自行补充其他方面。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数80左右；演讲稿的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How AI changes our life Examples
help us study better practice speaking English; ...
help us stay healthy make exercise plans; …
help us live easily control the things like lights at home; ...
… …
Hello, everyone! As we all know, AI has greatly changed our life.
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Thanks for your listening.
16．（2025·浙江·三模）学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Delicious Memory”的英文小报，现向全校同学征稿。请你参考海报内容要点，选择一种食物，写一篇英语短文，讲述你与它之间的故事，并分享它对你的特殊意义。
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2） 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The food that brings back a special memory for me is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．（2025·浙江绍兴·三模）假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Lily 下个月要来中国旅游。她想了解中国人平时在节假日里喜欢做的休闲活动，希望你帮她推荐一个有趣的活动。请你写一封邮件给她，介绍一种中国人喜欢的节日休闲方式，并说明它的内容、乐趣及推荐理由。
I want to know some fun activities that Chinese people like to do during holidays.
Flying kites ·popular in spring ·fun, relaxing, and good for health ·enjoy nature Watching traditional shows ·include opera, puppet (木偶) shows, and dragon dances ·often held in squares or theaters ·show Chinese culture
要求：
(1)邮件需包含所选活动至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文章不得出现真实姓名等个人信息；
(3)词数：80-100 词(邮件的称呼和落款计入总词数)。
Dear Lily,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to China soon! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
18．（2025·浙江宁波·三模）假设你是李明，想邀请Peter去科技馆参加以“AI changes the future”为主题的展览(exhibition)。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件，介绍本次展览的基本信息以及活动内容，并谈谈想要参加本次展览的原因。
When 10:00 a. m.—3:00p. m. June 27th
Where at the science museum
What learn the AI history enjoy robot performances …
Why become interested in AI technology…
注意：
1.邮件中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m writing to invite you to an exhibition themed “AI changes the future”.
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Yours,
Li Ming
19．（2025·浙江温州·三模）假如你是张华，你的美国笔友Jim想了解五、六月的节日活动。请根据以下相关信息，选择其中一个节日，给他回一封邮件介绍你的活动并说说你的感受。
May and June are the months of Mother’s Day and Father’s Day.
Can you tell me what you usually do to celebrate the festivals in China
Mother’s day ①Cook breakfast for mom ②Send mom flowers ③… Father’s Day ①Help dad wash the car ②Watch a ball game with dad ③…
要求：
1. 文章需包含所选的某一个节日的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share with you what I do to celebrate ______________ Day.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
20．（2025·浙江舟山·三模）假如你是赵磊，你的美国好友Sam即将来你的学校学习，他对你校的拓展课程很感兴趣。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向他推荐一个合适的拓展课程。
I’m interested in Chinese culture, and I like to learn…
Chinese fairy tales●have humorous teachers ●watch films about these tales ●perform on the stage Arts and crafts (手工艺)●visit some local museums ●enjoy the stories behind them ●experience the making process
注意：
1. 邮件需包含所选拓展课程的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右；邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to our school soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhao Lei
21．（2025·浙江杭州·三模）成长路上，我们都在努力让自己变得更好。你曾经为提升自己做过一些努力吗？请根据以下征文海报，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获，并谈谈你在这方面的计划。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better.
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22．（2025·浙江杭州·三模）时代在发展，我们的生活也发生着日新月异的变化。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示要点，以“Changes Around Me”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活和学习中发生的变化。
要点如下：
1. 你过去的生活和学习是什么样的？
2. 你的生活和学习发生了哪些变化？
3. 你怎样看待这些变化？
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 词数为100词左右。
Changes Around Me
Great changes have taken place in my life and study. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
23．（2025·浙江温州·三模）学校英语周刊正在举行题为“Life skills for the future”的征文活动。你认为什么生活技能最重要？请从下图中选择一项技能，说明你的选择理由，并谈谈你平时是如何提升这项技能的。也可自行补充其他生活技能。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
（2）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Life skills are important for our future.
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24．（2025·浙江杭州·三模）中考在即，在紧张备考的同时，睡眠健康同样不容忽视。假设你是初中生李华，你校英语社为了解学生的睡眠情况，帮助同学们进一步关注睡眠健康，开展了“Sleep Well, Live Better”的主题活动，并进行了问卷调查。请基于以下调查表，撰写一篇英文投稿，反馈你的睡眠情况，分享你对睡眠健康的看法，并谈一谈你的下一步计划。
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
(2) 词数80左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
25．（2025·浙江绍兴·三模）假如你是张涛，你的美国笔友Mary想了解五、六月的节日活动。请根据以下相关信息，选择其中一个节日，给她回一封邮件介绍你的活动并说说你的感受。
Mary and Jane are the months of Mother’s Day and Father’s Day. Can you tell me what you usually do to celebrate the festivals in China
Mother’s day①Cook breakfast for mom ②Send mom flowers ③… Father’s Day①Help dad wash the car ②Watch a ball game with dad ③…
要求：1. 文章需包含所选的某一个节日的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to share with you what I do to celebrate ______________ Day.
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Yours,
Zhang Tao
《专题10 书面表达25篇（浙江中考真题名校模拟）》参考答案
1．例文
A good way to relax
There are many ways to get relaxed. For me, I’d like to do sports when I am busy or tired.
As you know, our schoolwork is always heavy, so sometimes I want to stay away from it, especially on weekends. I will ask my friends or my father to play basketball with me, which is good for my health. We always play against each other for about one and a half hours. Although I feel tired after the game, it makes me full of energy and strong. I am a super boy again. This is my way to get relaxed. Would you like to share your good ways with me
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍运动是自己放松的方式；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己的运动方式以及做运动的好处；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away from远离
②be good for对……有好处
③each other互相
[高分句型]
①I will ask my friends or my father to play basketball with me, which is good for my health.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Although I feel tired after the game, it makes me full of energy and strong.（although引导的让步状语从句）
2．例文①
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文②
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析] （以例文①为例）
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向她推荐一个学校；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句)
3．例文
Happiness is everywhere around us. When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life.
In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be hospitalized for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother and talked with me every day. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed, and I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述对幸福的理解；
第二步，讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①the sense of……的感觉
②have to不得不
③care about关心
[高分句型]
①When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction.（when引导时间状语从句）
4．例文
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life. I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children’s social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第二步，讲述自己的经历和从中学到了什么；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……重要
②in fact事实上
③take part in参加
④all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school.（动词不定式作定语）
② I remembered that I took part in a football match last month.（宾语从句）
5．例文：
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack courage缺乏勇气
②with the help of在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (that引导定语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our trip to Hehe Ancient Street.
We are going there by bus. When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past. Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists. These activities will surely help us learn more about the history of the ancient street and sense the beauty of Hehe Culture. Besides, it offers us a good chance to do community service.
Would you like to come If yes, please meet us at 9:00 on Friday morning at the school gate.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述活动的时间、地点、内容以及活动意义；
第三步，期盼对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②plan to do计划做某事
③the beauty of……的美丽
④offer sb sth提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past.（非谓语作状语）
②Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists.（动词不定式表目的）
7．例文
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Li Ping
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；
第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心；
第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do迫不及待做
②as well as和，以及
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. （so引导并列句）
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．例文：
English Homework Helps Me Level Up
My favourite kind of English homework is acting out a play. It can help improve my language skills and make me confident.
When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six. It was a big challenge. Firstly, I read the play with group members and we shared our understanding of the play. Then, we chose our roles and practised the lines a lot. My spoken English has improved. In the end, we put on a great show and won praise. Now I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据海报中的内容讲述自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业是什么；
第二步，讲述自己做这项英语作业的示例；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
②in the end最后
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 8, my teacher asked us to act out the play Romeo and Juliet in a group of six.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Now I’m interested in acting and feel brave enough to show myself in front of the public.(and连接的并列句)
9．One possible version
Hi, everyone! I am happy here to share our experience in making a video of Sharing My Hometown. To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan carefully. After that, we made every effort to collect information in different ways. For example, we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people. Using the information we had collected, we created an English video, which was later chosen as one of the best works to introduce our hometown.
From this experience, we have gained a lot. Above all, we now understand our local culture better. In addition, our English has improved greatly. Last but not least, we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!
Thanks for your listening!
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍你们的创作历程；
第二步，说明你们的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①make every effort to do尽最大努力去做某事
②for example例如
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①we talked to our elders, who told us stories about traditional food and famous people.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）
②we’ve realized how important good teamwork is!（how引导的宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize. So we should never give up and try to find a way out.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you,
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍关于“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”的基本信息；
第二步，结合自身例子说明这个诗句的含义；
第三步，最后说明自己的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①keep doing sth一直做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句）
11．例文
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city. At noon, we made Ningbo Tangyuan (Dumplings). We learned it was a symbol of family get-togethers. In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city.
These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格提示介绍一天做的事情和自己学到的东西；
第二步，表达自己的个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②a symbol of……的象征
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts.（and连接两个并列结构）
12．Possible versions:
Version 1
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Lantern Festival. We’ve collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It’s celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. It’s a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles. This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That’s all. Thank you!
Version 2
Dear classmates, I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Dragon Boat Festival. To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about culture and customs.
We’ve learned a lot about the festival. With a history of about 2,000 years, the Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. People usually celebrate it by watching boat races. Zongzi is the most traditional food that is eaten to honour the great poet Qu Yuan.
Next, we plan to learn how to make zongzi, and produce an English video to make the festival known by more people around the world.
That’s all. Thank you!
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从“元宵节”和“端午节”中选择一个节日叙述；
第二步，根据表格提示具体阐述你们的研究成果。
第三步，介绍下阶段计划。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②focus on专注于
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. （when引导的时间状语从句）
13．例文
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to know that you are coming to China! As for the summer camp, I think you should join Camp A.
Here are my reasons. Firstly, you can expect to learn a lot about the history. Nanjing is a city with a rich culture dating back hundreds of years. Secondly, you can visit ancient walls and Qinhuai River, where you can explore both ancient towns and modern life. Finally, you’ll try delicious local food, such as Nanjing salted Duck and Tofu Pudding. The cost is only 150 dollars for 2 days. Nanjing is also one of the top 10 popular places for foreign tourists in 2024.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件写作；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写邮件时选其一进行介绍，注意包含图示中的所有细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，寒暄，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍一个夏令营的信息；
第三步，书写结语，祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① hundreds of数以百计的
② both…and…既……又……
③ such as例如
[高分句型]
① Secondly, you can visit ancient walls and Qinhuai River, where you can explore both ancient towns and modern life.（定语从句）
② I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time there.（宾语从句）
14．One possible version:
Dear editor,
Our school had an environmental protection activity last Friday. I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in the activity. At first, my classmates and I walked to my school or rode to school instead of taking a bus or a car. When we arrived, we listened to a speech about how to protect the environment. After that, we planted many trees. Then we helped spread low carbon awareness. We learned how to save the earth. We also knew how to live a low-carbon life. We realized that we should stop wasting.
Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of low-carbon life. From now on, I’ll try my best to make a greater contribution to building a beautiful city.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，介绍我们学校举办了环保活动；
②第二步，详细介绍了参加环保活动的一天的经历；
③第三步，介绍自己参加活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth很高兴做某事
②instead of代替做某事
③try one’s best尽最大努力
[高分句型]
①When we arrived, we listened to a speech about how to protect the environment. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②We realized that we should stop wasting. (that引导的宾语从句)
15．例文
Hello, everyone! As we all know, AI has greatly changed our life.
First, AI helps us study better. We can practice speaking English with AI apps that correct our pronunciation instantly. Some AI tools even create personalized study plans based on our weaknesses. Second, AI makes our life easier. Smart home devices like AI-controlled lights save energy automatically. Voice assistants can set reminders, play music, or answer questions hands-free. Moreover, AI improves healthcare. Fitness apps track our exercise and suggest workouts. Some hospitals use AI to analyze medical scans faster than doctors.
However, we should use AI wisely and not depend on it completely. The real power comes when humans and AI work together.
Thanks for your listening.
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步：介绍人工智能是如何改变我们的生活的；
第三步：呼吁大家理智使用人工智能，并承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①practice speaking English练习说英语
②based on基于
③improves healthcare改善医疗保健
④depend on依赖
[高分句型]
①We can practice speaking English with AI apps that correct our pronunciation instantly. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
②The real power comes when humans and AI work together. (when引导的时间状语从句)
16．例文：
The food that brings back a special memory for me is dumplings.
Every New Year’s Eve, my family would get together around the table to make dumplings. The kitchen was filled with laughter and chatter. We’d shape the dough, stuff the fillings, and chat about our hopes for the new year.
One year, I hid a coin in one of the dumplings as a little game. My father happened to bite into it, and his eyes sparkled with joy. That moment of surprise and shared happiness has been etched in my memory.
For me, dumplings are more than just food. They stand for family togetherness, warmth, and the joy of celebrating traditions.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：围绕特定食物展开，讲述与之相关的特殊记忆及意义，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明能唤起特殊记忆的食物是饺子；
第二步，具体描述在新年夜全家一起包饺子的场景，以及藏硬币游戏的有趣经历；
第三步，阐述饺子对自己而言超越食物本身的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①get together聚在一起
②be filled with充满
③happen to碰巧
[高分句型]
①Every New Year’s Eve, my family would get together around the table to make dumplings. (动词不定式表示目的)
②That moment of surprise and shared happiness has been etched in my memory. (现在完成时的被动语态)
17．范文
Dear Lily,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to China soon! I’d like to tell you about a fun activity Chinese people enjoy during holidays—flying kites.
Flying kites is very popular in spring, especially in parks or open areas. People bring colorful kites in the shape of birds, butterflies, or dragons. It’s really fun to see them flying high in the sky! This activity is not only relaxing but also good for your health. Many families and friends fly kites together to enjoy nature and spend time outdoors.
I believe you’ll love this activity. I hope you can try it when you visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“放风筝的内容”、“乐趣”以及“推荐的理由”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth很高兴做某事
②would like to do sth想要做某事
③flying kites放风筝
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
⑤be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①It’s really fun to see them flying high in the sky! (It作形式主语的句型)
②I believe you’ll love this activity.(宾语从句)
③I hope you can try it when you visit! (when引导的时间状语从句)
18．例文
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m writing to invite you to an exhibition themed “AI changes the future”. It will be held at the science museum from 10:00 a. m. to 3:00 p. m., on June 27th.
During the exhibition, we can not only get to know the history of AI, but also enjoy the exci

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