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What kind of letters or cards have you received Do you know what a thank-you email is
Importance and purpose of thank-you emails
Why do we write thank-you emails Why are they important
Thank-you emails are a great way to express gratitude.
They help us build strong relationships.
Writing a thank-you email
Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can.
Greeting and opening
Closing and signature
Body of the email
Structure of a thank-you email
Imagine you are Eric. You have just come back from Beijing. Now, you want to write a thank-you email to your host family. What should you include in the email Look at the texts on pages 69 and 73, and then discuss in groups.
Brainstorming
1. What are you most grateful for
(e.g. being wonderful hosts, showing you around)
2. What was the most enjoyable part of the trip
(e.g. food / places of interest)
3. What have you learnt about Chinese history and culture
4. What have you done since you returned to the UK
5. What do you miss most about Beijing
Step 1 Plan
Make an outline of the thank-you email.
Step 2 Write
文体：
人称：
时态：
写作要点：
应用文
第一人称
一般现在时/
一般过去时/现在完成时
表达感谢
How is everything I hope you are well.
I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my stay in Beijing. You were wonderful hosts, and I am so grateful that you took care of me. You made me feel part of the family!
I really enjoyed the amazing family dinners, and I learnt so much about Chinese culture from you. I still remember the day we visited the Great Wall. It was one of the best days in my life!
I really miss all the delicious food in Beijing, especially your home-cooked dumplings. Since I returned to London, I haven’t had any good Chinese food. I wish I can go back to China again soon. It was an unforgettable experience.
I do hope that you can come and visit London sometime too!
Check and revise
Dimensions Criteria Scores
Structure I presented the information in a clear and logical way.
Content I used appropriate expressions for greetings and sign-offs.
I used appropriate vocabulary to describe Eric's experiences and feelings about the trip.
Language I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
The subjects and verbs in each sentence agree.
5= Excellent 4= Good 3= Acceptable 2= Needs improvement 1= Not good Homework
基础作业
将修改后的感谢信工整地抄写在作业本上，注意书写规范和格式正确。
拓展作业
1.给曾经帮助过自己的老师、同学或朋友写一封感谢信，实际运用所学知识，表达自己的感激之情。
2.收集一些优秀的感谢信，分析它们的特点，整理成一份小报告，下节课与同学们分享。
content /9k ntent/ n. 内容
You should write down your ideas and then organize the content into paragraphs.
feeling /9fi:lIN/ n. 感觉；感情
It was a strange feeling—I was both nervous and excited at the same time.
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