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(共40张PPT)
Writing
Section B What can we learn from holiday experiences
Happy Holiday
unit 1
Lead in
What is it in the picture
Where can we see it
Do you want to see it yourself
Someone saw this deer on holiday.
Let’s see what happened.
A deer.
The zoo, the wild, on TV ...
Before reading
Where did the writer go
Guess what happened when the write saw this deer.
Scotland.
What might the writer write
What did the writer do
While reading
What did the writer do
a train to Scotland
in a comfortable house in the countryside
the forest to explore
a deer
told her parents
While reading
How many parts are there
What are the main ideas
special experience
general introdction
While reading
How and what did Gina write about her holiday
special experience
last autumn
family
train
Scotland
a house
different
time
people
transportation
accommodation
place
feeling&reason
saw a deer
general introdction
the morning on the last day
forest
to explore
noise, turn around
surprised, excited
look for food
exact time
place
reason
details
feeling
learning
While reading
How is Gina’s writing Underline good sentences or words you like.
special experience
last autumn
family
train
Scotland
a house
different
time
people
transportation
accommodation
place
feeling&reason
saw a deer
exact time
place
reason
details
feeling
learning
general introdction
vivid(生动的) language
linking words
How can we make it better
Before writing
How was your holiday My holiday was fantastic, because something unbelievable happened!
Anything spcial happened during your holiday Can’t wait to hear it!
Is it better Why
This beginning makes readers interested.
This ending interacts(互动) with readers.
Before writing
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable housein the countryside with beautiful scenery. l live in a big city, so everything seemed so different.For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, l went to theforest to explore. While there, something made anoise. l turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what l saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience l had! l really hope l can goback again.
How was your holiday My holiday was fantastic, because something unbelievable happened!
Anything spcial happened during your holiday Can’t wait to hear it!
Before writing
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable housein the countryside with beautiful scenery. l live in a big city, so everything seemed so different.For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, l went to theforest to explore. While there, something made anoise. l turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what l saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience l had! l really hope l can goback again.
How was your holiday My holiday was fantastic, because something unbelievable happened!
Anything spcial happened during your holiday Can’t wait to hear it!
Tip 1: A good structure.
special experience
general introdction
beginning
body
ending
Before writing
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable housein the countryside with beautiful scenery. l live in a big city, so everything seemed so different.For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, l went to theforest to explore. While there, something made anoise. l turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what l saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience l had! l really hope l can goback again.
How was your holiday My holiday was fantastic, because something unbelievable happened!
Anything spcial happened during your holiday Can’t wait to hear it!
How can we make it better
Its brown coat shone with sunlight, and big eyes were like stars.
When walking in it, I was like Alice in wonderland.
Give more details.
Before writing
Tip 2:
Give more details.
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable housein the countryside with beautiful scenery. l live in a big city, so everything seemed so different.For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.When walking in it, I was like Alice in wonderland.
On the last day, early in the morning, l went to theforest to explore. While there, something made anoise. l turned around and was surprised to see a deer. Its brown coat shone with sunlight, and big eyes were like stars.
I ran home and told my parents what l saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience l had! l really hope l can goback again.
How was your holiday My holiday was fantastic, because something unbelievable happened!
Anything spcial happened during your holiday Can’t wait to hear it!
Now, it’s your turn.
Before writing
Write a holiday story.
Step:1 Analyze
Type：_______________________
Person：_______________________
Tense：_______________________
Grammar：____________________
Words：_______________________
Key points：____________________
Narrative(记叙文)
the first person
about 80 words
simple past tense
past tense and present tense
an unforgettable experience
Before writing
What unforgettable holiday experiences do you have What should we write in our story
Where were you
When did it happen
How did you feel
What did you learn
Who did you go with
What did you do
Step 2: Structure
6. ____________________________________
Before writing
Where were you
When did it happen
How did you feel
What did you learn
Who did you go with
What did you do
Now, let’s make them organized.
Step 2: Structure
special experience
general introdction
beginning
body
ending
Where were you
When did it happen
How did you feel
What did you learn
Who did you go with
What did you do
Before writing
Before writing
Step 3: Language
What did you learn
experience
peace
remind
ready
get together
forget
How did you feel
breath
easily
sick
especially
strange
fantastic
comfortable
bored
What did you do
scenery
landscape
camp
steamed chicken soup
silk
rainbow
artwork
Who did you go with
family
friend
classmate
guide
Where were you
station
square
town
hotel
palace
countryside
When did it happen
vacation
morning
noon
afternoon
special experience
general introdction
beginning
body
ending
Before writing
Where were you
station
square
town
hotel
palace
countryside
What did you do
scenery
landscape
camp
steamed chicken soup
silk
rainbow
artwork
When did it happen
vacation
morning
noon
afternoon
Who did you go with
family
friend
classmate
guide
What did you learn
experience
peace
remind
ready
get together
forget
How did you feel
breath
easily
sick
especially
strange
fantastic
comfortable
bored
While writing
Step 4: Sample
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Type：_______________________
Person：_______________________
Tense：_______________________
Grammar：____________________
Words：_______________________
Key points：____________________
Narrative(记叙文)
the first person
about 80 words
past tense and present tense
an unforgettable experience
simple past tense
This summer, I went on a short holiday to Chengdu with my parents.
We stayed in a tall hotel with a great view and everyone was happy about it. We took the metro everywhere. It was very cheap, clean, and easy to use. We visited some museums and some historic sites. We took lots of photos. We also tried some Sichuan dishes. They were very spicy, but delicious. On the last day, we decided to buy something for our friends, so we went shopping along Chunxi Road.
It was such a great experience!
While writing
Step 5: Write.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Type：_______________________
Person：_______________________
Tense：_______________________
Grammar：____________________
Words：_______________________
Key points：____________________
Narrative(记叙文)
the first person
about 80 words
past tense and present tense
an unforgettable experience
simple past tense
clear frame
（结构清晰）
complete content
（内容完整）
Rich language
（语言）
good adjectives
(好的形容词)
good phrases
（好的词组）
use clauses
（使用从句）
use linking
words
（使用连接词）
Correct grammar
（语法）
correct tense
(时态)
spelling words
（单词拼写）
punctuations
（标点符号）
Good handwriting
（书写）
clean and neat
(干净整洁)
Frame and content
(结构和内容)
After writing
Step 6: Check.
After writing
Share your stories in class.
Vote for the most intersting and the most surprising holiday.
The Most
Interesting
The Most
Surprising
Reflect
Happy Holiday
Thanks
1 countryside /'k ntrisa d/ n. 乡村；农村（教材P9）
· The countryside is so beautiful in spring, with all the flowers in bloom. 春天的乡村如此美丽，所有的花朵都开放了。
· We decided to spend the weekend in the countryside to escape the city’s noise and pollution. 我们决定在乡村度过周末，逃离城市的噪音和污染。
· The countryside scenery in this part of the country is breathtaking. 这个国家这一地区的乡村风光美得令人窒息。
Language points
归纳拓展
countryside 作不可数名词，意为“乡村；农村”。
常用短语：in the countryside 在乡村；
countryside scenery 乡村风光。
Language points
1 countryside /'k ntrisa d/ n. 乡村；农村（教材P9）
1: Every one of them loves the ____________ (乡村) life.
2: When I was a child, I lived in a small village __________ the countryside.
2: 花香让我想起了我的农村岁月。
The smell of these flowers reminds me of __________
__________ __________ __________ ____________.
countryside
in
my
years in the countryside
Language points
2 surprised /s 'pra zd/ adj. 惊奇的；惊讶的（教材P9）
· We are surprised to find that Jimmy has already left. 我们惊奇地发现吉米已经走了。
· I was surprised that these houses could last for such a long time. 我很惊讶，这些房子能存在这么长时间。
Language points
· What a surprising result! We thought Class One would win, but Class Two was the winner. 多么出人意料的结果啊! 我们以为一班会赢，但二班赢了。
· To her surprise, the book was very interesting.
令她惊讶的是，这本书很有趣。
· He decided to make dinner by himself to surprise his family.
他决定自己做晚饭，给家人一个惊喜。
Language points
归纳拓展
surprised 作形容词，意为“惊奇的；惊讶的”。
常见用法：be surprised to do sth. 惊讶地做某事；be
surprised + that 从句 惊讶……；be surprised at sth. 对某事感到惊讶。
surprising 作形容词，意为“令人吃惊的”，指事物所具有的特征，可作定语和表语。常见用法：It’s surprising that...……令人惊讶。
Language points
2 surprised /s 'pra zd/ adj. 惊奇的；惊讶的（教材P9）
1）作名词，意为“惊讶；惊奇”。
to one’s surprise 令某人惊奇的是；
in surprise 惊奇地；give sb. a surprise 给某人一个惊喜。
（2）作动词，意为“使惊奇；使诧异”。
surprise sb. 使某人惊讶。
Language points
2 surprised /s 'pra zd/ adj. 惊奇的；惊讶的（教材P9）
1: I was ___________ (surprise) to see James’ name there!
2: It’s very ___________ (surprise) that the 65-year-old man likes online shopping so much.
3: There are many interesting things along the way, and there will be ___________ surprise at the end of the trail.
4: Philip was surprised ___________ (find) that their father was talking to the police and a woman outside their house.
surprised
surprising
a
to find
Language points
3 probably /'pr b bli/ adv. 很可能；大概（教材P9）
· Cindy, you are probably right this time.辛迪，你这次很可能是对的。
· He probably kept your examination papers.
他可能保留了你的试卷。
· We all know that a poor lifestyle will probably lead to sickness in the end. 我们都知道，不良的生活方式最终可能会导致疾病。
Language points
· It is probable that it will rain today.
今天很可能会下雨。
· It is possible to get there by bus.
乘公共汽车到那里是有可能的。
Language points
3 probably /'pr b bli/ adv. 很可能；大概（教材P9）
归纳拓展
probably 作副词，意为“很可能；大概”，主要用在系动词、助动词和情态动词之后，行为动词之前。
probable 作形容词，意为“很可能发生的”，主要用来作定语和表语，并构成一些固定句式，如：It is probable to do .../It is probable that... 表示“某事很可能发生”。
possible 作形容词，意为“可能”，其表达的可能性较probable 小。
Language points
3 probably /'pr b bli/ adv. 很可能；大概（教材P9）
1: If you are not careful enough, you’ll ___________ (probable) make mistakes
2: The dark clouds show that a storm now looks very ___________ /'pr b bl/.
3: 你可能知道思考对大脑有好处。
__________ __________ ___________ __________ thinking is good for the brain.
probably
probable
You probably know that
Language points
4:他们很可能会赢这场比赛。
_______ __________ __________ __________ they will win the match.
It is probable that
4 look for 寻找（教材P9）
· Jim is looking for a new book in the bookstore.
吉姆正在书店找一本新书。
· We found a great new restaurant near the office.
我们在办公室附近发现了一家很好的新餐馆。
· It is interesting to look after animals because they are cute.
因为动物们很可爱，所以照顾动物是有趣的。
Language points
· I am looking forward to enjoying a big dinner with my friends tonight.
我期待今晚和朋友们一起享用一顿丰盛的晚餐。
归纳拓展 look 构成的动词短语还有：
look after 照顾；照料 look like 看上去像
look forward to 盼望；期待 look around 环顾；游览
Language points
4 look for 寻找（教材P9）
look for 意为“寻找”，指寻找的行为和过程。
find 意为“找到；发现”，表示寻找的结果。
辨析: look for 与find
Language points
4 look for 寻找（教材P9）
1: Vivian always looks __________ new ways to learn about the history.
2: The two countries are looking forward to __________ (improve) their relationship.
3: My dog is ill. My friend Jenny agrees to help me __________ _________ （照顾） my dog.
for
improving
look after
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