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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优译林版（2024）Unit 1 Friendship
专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．本周英语社团活动中，老师让同学们从以下三条交友名言中选出最喜欢的一条进行主题演讲。请你结合写作要点，写一篇英语演讲稿，为你的演讲做准备。
■A friend is a second self.
■A friend in need is a friend indeed.
■Only your real friends will tell you when your face is dirty.
写作要点：（1）你最喜欢以上哪一条交友名言？
（2）这条名言让你想起了哪位朋友？
（3）介绍你和这位朋友之间发生的一个故事。
写作要求：（1）文中须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My favourite saying is
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2．“有善相勉，有过相规”是对朋友最好的定义。假设你是李华，Bob 是你的好朋友，请用英语描述你和你的好朋友在性格，爱好和生活习惯方面的相同点和不同点，再谈谈近期你们一起出去郊游的情况。
相同点 不同点
性格 受欢迎 我更严肃， Bob更有趣
爱好 喜欢读书 我喜欢唱歌，但Bob 喜欢运动
活动 上周末，我和Bob 去了览山公园，做了很多有趣的事，拍了照，划了船…… (至少补充2点活动和你的感受) 今晚，我们计划去看脱口秀，因为……
写作要求：
1. 按要求完成，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数80 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考表达：In some ways, ...在某些方面；Lanshan Park览山公园
I am Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend Bob and me.
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3．请以“How to Be a Good Friend”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 好朋友应该具备哪些品质。
2. 如何成为好朋友。
3. 为什么友谊很重要。
How to Be a Good Friend
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4．假如你是腾飞，你有一个好友叫李华，他是一个友善、阳光的男孩。根据以下要点，写一篇介绍他的文章。
1、最喜欢的动物：熊猫。因为熊猫是我国国宝 (national animal)。
2、最喜欢的水果：苹果。苹果有益于身体健康。
3、学习努力，遵守学校规则。
4、爱好运动。每周星期六，天气晴朗，他与朋友骑车去公园：
上午：打篮球；下午：游泳。度过愉快的一天。
要求：1. 内容应包括所有提示要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 60-70词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! I’m Teng Fei. I have a good friend, Li Hua. He is a kind, sunny boy.
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This is my good friend. How about yours
5．假设你有一名叫南希的好朋友。请以“My best friend”为题，用英语写一篇介绍她的短文。从以下几方面介绍： 外貌、个性、爱好、梦想。
要求：
1. 短文应包括要点中所给的信息；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 字数 80 词左右。
My best friend
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6．在你的成长过程中，和朋友一起度过的时光总会让你感到开心快乐，经久难忘。你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“A sweet memory with friends”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，向广播站投稿，内容包括：
1.朋友的重要性；
2.你的亲身经历；
3.表达希望或心愿。
要求：
1.词数80—100；
2.短文需包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
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7．假设你叫李明，你的英国朋友Peter想要在中国结交更多的朋友。 请你通过电子邮件，把你最好的朋友David介绍给Peter。
提示：
(1)What does David look like
(2)What personalities does David have
(3)What’re his hobby and dream
要求：
(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括以上所有信息，并进行适 当发挥；
(3)词数80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my best friend David to you.
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I hope you can make friends with him.
Yours,
Li Ming
8．假如你是刘英，请根据表格中提供的信息写一篇短文，介绍你和你的好朋友琳达的相同之处和不同之处。80词左右。
不同点 相同点
琳达 （1）比我高，比我文静； （2）英语比我学得好； （3）喜欢看电视。 （1）黑眼睛，黑头发； （2）喜欢运动； （3）喜欢阅读，通常周末一起去图书馆。
我 （1）性格外向； （2）语文学得好； （3）喜欢上网。
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9．假设Sally是你最好的朋友。请根据以下表格的内容提示，写一篇题为“My best friend”的英文短文，介绍一下Sally。
外貌 又高又瘦，短头发，大眼睛
最喜欢的科目 数学
兴趣爱好 旅游，做美食，看电影
评价 对别人友好、有耐心；常常帮助朋友解决困难；……
要求：
1. 短文应包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：70左右。
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10．学校英语广播站正在开展以“The Story Between My Best Friend and Me”为题的征文活动。请你根据参考信息，简单描述你最好的朋友的一些显著特质（适当运用比较级或最高级），并说说你们之间的故事，尤其是难忘的或者触动你内心的故事。
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥；文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和班级。
参考信息：
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11．Andy要向自己的网友介绍他的外教Jane。请根据所给的要点提示，帮他写一个简介。
要求：(1)内容充实，覆盖要点；(2)80词左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hobbies reading, singing
Personalities pretty, helpful, friendly, clever, good at drawing
Wishes to be a good teacher
I have a new English teacher now. She is called Jane. And she is one of my good friends now.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　Do you want to be one of her friends I am sure you will like her when you see her.
12．“A friend is one that knows you as you are, understands where you have been, accepts who you have become, and still, gently allows you to know. ” —William Shakspeare
俗话说，同道为朋，同志为友。在茫茫人海中，能够遇到好朋友，是一种缘分，也是一种幸运。请以“My ________ friend”为题，写一篇英文短文，分享你们之间的故事。
注意事项：
1.补全题目，如“true, best, kind, warm-hearted, helpful, patient, hard-working, generous”等；
2.分享你们之间的故事，文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My ________ friend
Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．假设你叫 Amy，你有一个香港朋友 Emily，她想要结交更多的朋友，请你通过邮件，把你的同学Kitty介绍给她。Kitty的个人信息见下表。
Basic information a 14-year-old girl, a mixed school...
Looks a round face, tall and slim...
Personality 1. honest... 2. humorous...
Future plan a social worker, grow up...
要求：1. 文章须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，省略处作适当发挥；
2. 词数90词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Emily,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my classmate Kitty to you.
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Yours,
Amy
14．你也来写一写自己和朋友之间值得记录的故事吧。下面的提示可能会帮助到你。
1. Who is your good friend
2. When did your friendship (友谊) start
3. What did you do to become good friends
4. How did you feel
要求：
1. 意思连贯，语言准确，书写规范；
2. 词数不少于80。
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15．友谊对每个人都很重要。朋友能相互帮助，共同进步；也能相互陪伴，令人身心愉悦。某英文网站正在开展以“友谊”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
参考词汇：friendly, encourage, share, help, make progress, realize (意识到), …
要求：1.可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于60词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Friendship is important to everyone.
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16．假如你是李华，某英语杂志开展以“True Friendship in My Life”为题的征文。请结合自身经历用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.朋友对你的帮助或影响；
2.你与朋友共同克服困难的一次经历；
3.你对友谊的理解。
写作要求：
1.内容全面，结构完整，语言准确，书写规范；
2.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
True Friendship in My Life
A true friend is like a mirror to your soul.
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17．朋友是我们成长过程中必不可少的陪伴者。请根据以下内容提示，用英文从目的、内容、意义等方面来写一篇关于友谊的文章。
内容提示：
Why do we need friends
Do you have any friends
What do you often do with your friends
注意：文中不能透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；标题和开头以给出，不计入总词数。
Friendship
Friends play an important role in our daily lives.
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18．友谊对于我们来说十分重要，你在生活中是如何与朋友保持良好友谊的？请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。
要点如下：
1. be good listeners...
2. stay in touch...
3. smile at friends...
4. ...
要求：
1. 短文语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息。
Friendship is important in our daily life. How to keep good friendships
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19．友谊是我们生活中的珍宝，它对每个人来说都很重要。假设你正在参加TEENS全国中学生英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点，写一篇关于“Friends”的演讲稿。
要点提示：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：necessary 必要；character 性格；interest 兴趣；maintain a friendship 维持友谊。
Dear teachers and students,
I’m very glad to be here to give a speech about friendship.
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Thanks for listening!
20．在我们成长过程中有很多重要的东西，比如time, love, books, friendship，它一定对我们的学习生活有所帮助或者产生影响，请以“The Most Important Thing in My Life”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 你生命中最重要的东西是什么；
2. 它为什么那么重要；
3. 你是怎样对待它的。
要求：
1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯，文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右。
The Most Important Thing in My Life
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参考答案及试题解析
1． Hello, everyone! My favourite saying is “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
It always reminds me of my friend Lucy. Last term, I got sick and missed a week of school. I was worried about my math homework, as I couldn’t follow the new lessons. When Lucy knew this, she came to my home every evening after school. She explained the math problems to me patiently, even staying late to make sure I understood. With her help, I caught up with my classmates quickly. Lucy’s help when I was in trouble truly shows what a real friend is. I’ll always cherish this friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，围绕“交友名言”展开，通过选定名言、关联朋友、讲述故事，传递对“真正友谊”的理解；
②时态：以一般过去时为主，详细叙述与朋友之间的过往故事；使用一般现在时表达名言对当下的影响、对友谊的认知及未来的态度，时态运用贴合逻辑，自然流畅；
③提示：文章紧扣所有写作要点，明确选定名言、关联朋友、讲述核心故事，补充细节，内容完整，故事具体，无真实信息，词数符合80词左右要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接已给开头，直接点明最喜欢的名言，并用“reminds me of my friend Lucy”快速关联到具体朋友，引出下文故事；
第二步，完整叙述故事：先交代背景，再描述朋友的行动，最后说明结果，通过“困境—帮助—结果”的叙事链，凸显名言内涵；
第三步，总结感悟：指出Lucy在“我”困境中的帮助，真正体现了名言中的“真正朋友”，并表达“会永远珍惜这份友谊”的态度，既呼应名言主题，又升华对友谊的珍视，收束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①A friend in need is a friend indeed患难见真情
②remind sb of使某人想起
③miss school缺课
④explain... patiently耐心讲解……
⑤catch up with赶上
⑥cherish friendship珍惜友谊
[高分句型]
①I was worried about my math homework, as I couldn’t follow the new lessons.（“as”引导原因状语从句）
②Lucy’s help when I was in trouble truly shows what a real friend is.（使用宾语从句）
2．例文
I am Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend Bob and me. In some ways, we are very similar. We are both popular with classmates. We also enjoy reading books. But we have differences. I am more serious, while Bob is funnier. I like singing, but Bob loves sports.
Last weekend, Bob and I went to Lanshan Park. We had a great time! We took many photos of the beautiful scenery and rowed a boat on the lake. We also had a picnic and watched birds. It was a delightful day filled with laughter and joy, as we both love being close to nature.
Tonight, we plan to watch a talk show because we both want to laugh together and enjoy our friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我和好朋友的相同点和不同点；
第二步，具体阐述我们一起参加的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be popular with受……欢迎
②enjoy doing喜欢做某事
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It was a delightful day filled with laughter and joy, as we both love being close to nature. (as引导的原因状语从句)
②Tonight, we plan to watch a talk show because we both want to laugh together and enjoy our friendship. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．例文：
To be a good friend, one should be honest, kind, and supportive. A good friend listens carefully to others’ feelings, keeps promises faithfully, and offers a hand without being asked when needed. We should respect our friends’ opinions, share joys and sorrows with them, and always be there for them in both happy and difficult times. Friendship is important because good friends make our lives brighter and help us through tough challenges. They are like family we choose for ourselves, bringing warmth to our daily lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明好朋友的品质；
第二步，具体阐述如何成为好朋友和友谊的重要性；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①listens carefully认真倾听
②both...and...……和……
③through challenges渡过难关
④keeps promises守诺
[高分句型]
①Friendship is important because good friends make our lives brighter and help us through tough challenges. (because引导原因状语从句)
②They are like family we choose for ourselves, bringing warmth to our daily lives. (含有定语从句的复合句)
4．例文
Hello! I’m Teng Fei. I have a good friend, Li Hua. He is a kind, sunny boy. His favorite animal is the panda because it is China’s national animal. He loves apples best as they are good for health. Li Hua studies very hard and always follows school rules. He also enjoys sports. Every Saturday, He rides a bike to the park with friends. They play basketball in the morning and swim in the afternoon. They usually have a wonderful day.
This is my good friend. How about yours
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，介绍李华最喜欢的动物以及水果并解释原因；
第二步，介绍李华学习努力，遵守学校规则；
第三步，介绍李华爱好运动以及每周六李华从事的活动；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for有益于
②follow school rules遵守校规
③play basketball打篮球
[高分句型]
①His favorite animal is the panda because it is China’s national animal. (because引导原因状语从句)
5．范文
My best friend
Nancy is my best friend, who is a lovely girl with big bright eyes and long black hair that shines in the sun.
What makes Nancy special is that she has a very kind heart. She is always ready to help others whenever they are in trouble. Nancy has many hobbies that make her life interesting. She loves reading books so much that she often spends hours in the library. Her dream is to become a teacher because she wants to help children learn and grow.
I feel very lucky to have such a good friend, and we always have a wonderful time together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中好朋友的介绍要点， 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、个性、爱好、梦想”几个方面重点介绍好朋友的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble陷入困境
②love doing sth.喜欢做某事
③have a wonderful time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①What makes Nancy special is that she has a very kind heart. (what引导的主语从句)
②Nancy has many hobbies that make her life interesting. (that引导的定语从句)
6．例文
A sweet memory with friends
Life is a blank sheet of paper written by moments, and it is these sweet moments with friends that give it color.
Friends are very important in our life. They can share our happiness and sadness. They can support us when we are in need. I have a friend like this. We have known each other since we were very young. We often play together. She showed me that there’s always someone who has my back. I remember one time, I was very sad because I failed an exam. She was there for me. She comforted me and encouraged me to study harder. I will never forget that moment.
I hope we can be friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍朋友的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己和朋友之间的经历；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①in need处于困境
②each other彼此
③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①They can support us when we are in need. (when引导时间状语从句)
②She showed me that there’s always someone who has my back. (who引导定语从句)
7．例文
Dear Peter,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my best friend David to you.
David is 16 years old. He is of medium height. He has short black hair and bright eyes. David is very friendly and always ready to help others. He has a good sense of humour. He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy. He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends. He never says a bad word about others. His hobby is playing basketball, and he dreams of becoming a professional basketball player in the future.
I hope you can make friends with him.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示完成写作，注意涵盖全部信息，并适当增加细节；要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的 (已给出)；
第二步，具体介绍David的外貌，性格以及爱好和梦想；
第三步，书写结语 (已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①be of medium height中等身高
②be ready to help others愿意帮助别人
③professional basketball player职业篮球运动员
④make friends with和某人交朋友
[高分句型]
①David is very friendly and always ready to help others. (and并列句)
②I hope you can make friends with him. (省略that的宾语从句)
8．例文
My friend and I
Hello, everyone! My name is Liu Ying. I want to tell you something about my best friend Linda and me.
In some ways, we are the same. We both have black eyes and black hair. We both like sports and reading. At weekends we usually go to the library together.
But in some ways we are different. She is taller and quieter than me. She is better at English than me. She likes watching TV. But I’m a little more outgoing than her. I like going online in my free time. And I’m good at Chinese.
We often help each other and I hope we can be friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中琳达和我的相同点和不同点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍琳达和我的相同点和不同点；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth.想要做某事
②at weekends在周末
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①She is taller and quieter than me.（比较级+than句型）
②We often help each other and I hope we can be friends forever.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．例文
My best friend
Sally is my best friend. She is tall and thin with short hair and big eyes. Her favourite subject is maths. Sally likes travelling and is good at making delicious food as well. And she often watches movies in her free time.
Sally is friendly and patient with others. She often helps friends with their trouble. She tries her best to make people around her happy. I am glad to have such a good friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明Sally是最好的朋友，并介绍其外貌特征、最喜欢的科目与兴趣爱好；
第二步，讲述其性格特征，并分享自己对她的评价。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at 擅长
② as well 也
③ in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
④ be patient with 对……有耐心
⑤ help sb. with 帮某人做某事
⑥ try one’s best to do 尽力做某事
[高分句型]
① She is tall and thin with short hair and big eyes. (介词短语作伴随状语)
10．例文
The Story Between My Best Friend and Me
My best friend is Lily. She has bigger eyes and longer hair than me. She is also more outgoing. We both like game shows and sports. We often play badminton together. And neither of us likes watching TV.
We have a lot of warm stories. Once, I failed an important exam. I was so sad that I didn’t want to talk to anyone. But Lily was there to listen. She cared about my feelings and helped me with my study. She told me that failure is the mother of success.
That’s the story between my best friend and me. It’s full of love and warmth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己和好朋友的故事，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯并适当运用比较级或最高级。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好朋友的外貌特征和兴趣爱好；
第二步，介绍自己与好朋友之间的故事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to sb和某人交谈
②care about关心
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I was so sad that I didn’t want to talk to anyone. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②She told me that failure is the mother of success. (that引导的宾语从句)
11．例文
I have a new English teacher now. She is called Jane. And she is one of my good friends now.
Jane is a pretty girl with a round face and big eyes. She wears glasses and the glasses make her look clever. She has long hair. Jane likes reading and singing. She is a helpful and friendly teacher. Jane is good at teaching. And she is also good at drawing. Jane says she wants to be a good teacher and make friends with us.
Do you want to be one of her friends I am sure you will like her when you see her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从外貌、爱好、性格及愿望等方面介绍外教Jane；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②want to be想成为
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①She wears glasses and the glasses make her look clever. (and连接的并列句)
②Jane says she wants to be a good teacher and make friends with us. (宾语从句)
12．例文：
My best friend
Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you.
My best friend is someone who has always been by my side. My best friend is Linda. She is much quieter and taller than me. She has long brown hair and bright blue eyes. She is very kind and always ready to help others. We met in primary school and have been inseparable since then. We like to do our homework together after school and we always help each other. We both like playing tennis, too.
We share many happy memories together, and I am grateful to have her in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，引出“我”的朋友；
第二步，具体阐述朋友的外貌及“我们”之间的故事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①by one’s side在某人身边
②inseparable形影不离
③each other彼此
④be grateful to感激
[高分句型]
①Friends are like umbrellas. Whether it’s sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you. (whether引导的让步状语从句)
②My best friend is someone who has always been by my side. (who引导的定语从句)
13．例文
Dear Emily,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my classmate Kitty to you. Kitty is a 14-year-old girl. She studies hard at a mixed school. She likes both her teachers and her classmates very much.
Kitty is a lovely girl with a round face. She is tall and slim. She has short hair with big bright eyes. She often wears a smile on her face. Her teachers all think that she is a friendly girl.
She is also an honest girl, so I can tell her everything about myself. She can always keep secrets for her friends. Her friends usually think they can trust her all the time. What’s more, she has a good sense of humour. When something worries me, she tries her best to make me happy. Last week, she told funny jokes to cheer me up after I failed in the football match. I think she is a true friend.
She likes to help others, so she hopes to be a social worker in the future. When she grows up, she would like to help more people in some poor areas to improve their life.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Kitty的个人信息，包括年龄、学校及外貌；
第二步，介绍Kitty的性格特点；
第三步，介绍Kitty的未来计划。
[亮点词汇]
① keep secrets保密
② all the time一直
③ try one’s best to do尽力做某事
④ grow up长大
[高分句型]
① Her teachers all think that she is a friendly girl.（that引导的宾语从句）
② When something worries me, she tries her best to make me happy.（when引导的时间状语从句）
14．例文
My best friend is Lily.
We met in Grade 7 when we became classmates. At first, we didn’t talk much, but one day, she helped me with a math problem. After that, we often studied and played together. We share secrets, laugh a lot, and support each other. Once, I was sad about a test, and she cheered me up.
I feel lucky to have such a kind friend. Our friendship makes me happy and confident. I hope we can stay friends forever!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己的朋友是莉莉；
第二步，介绍自己与莉莉成为朋友的时间和契机；
第三步，写出自己的感受及愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①helped me with a math problem帮我解了一道数学题
②support each other相互支持
③cheered me up使我振作
④makes me happy and confident让我快乐和自信
[高分句型]
①We met in Grade 7 when we became classmates. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope we can stay friends forever! (省略that的宾语从句)
15．例文
Friendship is important to everyone. My best friend is Lucy. She is outgoing and always ready to help others. Last term, I failed a math test and felt very sad. Lucy noticed my mood and came to comfort me. She spent her free time helping me review difficult problems and encouraged me not to give up. With her help, I made great progress in the next exam.
From this experience, I realized that true friends support each other through thick and thin. Friendship is not just about having fun but also about growing together. I’m lucky to have Lucy, and I’ll always cherish our friendship!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的好朋友及她的性格；
第二步，介绍自己和好朋友之间最难忘的经历；
第三步，介绍自己从这次经历中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
① give up放弃
② make great progress取得巨大进步
③ through thick and thin同甘共苦
④ have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
From this experience, I realized that true friends support each other through thick and thin.（that引导的宾语从句）
16． True Friendship in My Life
A true friend is like a mirror to your soul. In my life, my best friend Xiaoming has always supported me. When I failed in math last term, he patiently helped me review lessons after school, which improved my grades significantly.
Last winter, we joined a hiking trip together. Halfway up the mountain, I twisted my ankle. Though tired himself, Xiaoming insisted on carrying my backpack and encouraged me until we reached the top. His kindness taught me that friendship means standing by each other in tough times.
To me, true friendship isn’t about gifts or fun moments, but about trust, support, and growing together through challenges. Like sunlight warming the heart, it makes life brighter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文；
②时态：以一般过去时（叙述经历）和一般现在时（表达观点）为主；
③提示：需包含朋友帮助、共同克服困难的经历、对友谊的理解 。
[写作步骤 ]
第一步：引入主题 ，用比喻句开头，点明友谊的重要性。简述朋友对自己的帮助（学习支持）。
第二步：详述经历，描述具体事件（登山受伤），突出朋友的行动和品质。通过细节增强画面感。
第三步：总结升华。用对比句（isn’t...but...）阐明对友谊的理解。结尾比喻（sunlight）呼应开头，深化主题。
[亮点词汇]
① significantly显著地
② insisted on坚持
③ through challenges跨越挑战
[高分句型]
①When I failed in math last term, he patiently helped me review lessons after school, which improved my grades significantly.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Though tired himself, Xiaoming insisted on carrying my backpack.(though引导的让步状语从句)
③True friendship isn’t about gifts or fun moments, but about trust, support, and growing together through challenges. (not...but...并列结构)
17．例文
Friendship
Friends play an important role in our daily lives. When we are happy, we need a good friend to share our joy when we are down, we also need a friend to listen to me or just stay with me. I think if you want a friend, you should be a friend first.
I have a good friend named Xiao Ming. I often play basketball with him after school. I’m good at English, I often help him with his English and he is good at math. When I meet some difficult math problems, he always teaches me how to work them out.
I hope we’ll remain friends forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，不要遗漏，注意上下文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明为什么需要朋友；
第二步，讲述自己有几个朋友并和朋友经常做什么；
第三步，表达期待和祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①need...to...需要
②stay with...和……待在一起
③play sth with sb和某人一起玩
[高分句型]
When I meet some difficult math problems, he always teaches me how to work them out. (when引导时间状语从句)
18．例文
Friendship is important in our daily life. How to keep good friendships
First of all, we have to be a good listener. We should listen carefully to our friends’ ideas and suggestions. Second, we should stay in touch with our friends. Usually we need to make more phone calls and contact WeChat. Third, we should smile at our friends, because smile is the best communication language. Finally, when our friends are in trouble, we should help them in time. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示内容完成写作，注意要包含题干中的所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，做一个好的倾听者；
第二步，和朋友保持联系；
第三步，对朋友微笑。
最后，朋友遇到麻烦应及时帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① stay in touch保持联系
② in trouble处于困境中
③ in time及时
[高分句型]
① Finally, when our friends are in trouble, we should help them in time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. （谚语）
19．例文
Dear teachers and students,
I’m very glad to be here to give a speech about friendship. Friendship is of great importance to everyone. It’s very important to think twice when we choose a friend. We could choose friends with good characters or the same interests. Good friends always share happiness and sadness with each other. Whenever we meet with trouble, friends will give us a helping hand. They are always there to listen to our problems and give us advice. However, it’s not easy to maintain a friendship. We should be kind to our friends and ready to help them when they are in need. In this way, we can make our friendship last long. Remember: a friend in need is a friend indeed!
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求写一篇关于“Friends”的演讲稿，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达要做一个关于友谊的演讲；
第二步，从如何选择朋友、朋友的重要性及如何维持友谊等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①think twice三思
②give sb a helping hand帮助某人
③be kind to sb对某人友善
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to think twice when we choose a friend. (when引导时间状语从句)
②it’s not easy to maintain a friendship. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真主语)
20．例文
The Most Important Thing in My Life
In my opinion, the most important thing in my life is time. No matter how long one may live, his life has only a certain number of years. And once the time goes by, nobody can get in back.
Even though he is the richest person in the world, he cannot afford to waste time, because it means that he is wasting his own life.
The only thing we can do is making full use of our time. If we can finish more work with less time, we will have more time than other people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己生命中最重要的东西。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你生命中最重要的东西是什么；
第二步，介绍它为什么那么重要；
第三步，介绍你是怎样对待它的。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion以我来看
②go by流逝
③make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Even though he is the richest person in the world, he cannot afford to waste time, because it means that he is wasting his own life.(even though引导的让步状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句)
②If we can finish more work with less time, we will have more time than other people.(if引导的条件状语从句)
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