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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（2024）Unit 1 Look it up!
专题11 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于中国科学家黄旭华的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇关于黄旭华的短文
1. 基本信息：中国科学家，1926年生于广东潮汕，2024年逝世。
2. 成长背景：早年对科学和工程学极感兴趣。终生致力于中国核潜艇研究。
3. 主要成就：他在核潜艇(Nuclear Submarines)方面取得成功，使中国国防(national defense)得到有力的加强。
4.荣誉与影响：获得“共和国勋章”(the Medal of the Republic)被称为“中国核潜艇之父”(Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines)。
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2．请根据下面的内容提示写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文，不少于80词。
内容包括：
（1）他是一位美国作家，写了许多著名的小说；
（2）他1835年出生于佛罗里达的农村，4岁时和家人搬到城里，12岁时父亲去世；
（3）他从童年就开始工作，曾做过许多不同的工作；
（4）他最著名的小说之一：《汤姆·索亚历险记》；
（5）他的写作才能来源于他个人的经历。
参考词汇：Mark Twain; novel; Florida; The Adventures of Tom Sawyer; personal experience
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3．钱学森是中国“两弹一星”元勋，为中国航天科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍钱学森。
姓名 钱学森
生卒日期 1911年12月11日—2009年10月31日
出生地 中国上海
教育背景 1934年毕业于上海交通大学，后赴美留学，获博士学位
主要成就 1. 参与美国早期火箭研究，1955年回到中国 2. 领导研制中国第一颗人造卫星“东方红一号”，推动导弹和空间探索领域的发展 3. 中国航天事业的奠基人，被誉为“中国航天之父”
要求：
1. 文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右。
参考词汇：aerospace science and technology航天科技
father of China’s aerospace中国航天之父
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4．下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于Mark Twain的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文。
内容包括：
1. 他是一位美国著名作家，写了许多著名的小说。
2. 1835年出生于佛罗里达州的农村，4岁时和家人搬到城里，12岁时，其父亲去世。
3. 从童年就开始工作，做过许多不同的工作。
4. 最著名的小说：《汤姆·索亚历险记》。
5. 他的写作才能不是与生俱来，而是来源于他个人的经历。
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5．你们学校正在举办“谁是最伟大的人”的投票活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下调查结果写一份调查报告，汇报同学们的选择和理由，并阐述你自己的观点和原因。
Results 30% 45% 25%
Names 达芬奇 钱学森 沈括
Basic information 意大利画家，发明家，工程师。 1911年12月11日出生于上海；2009年10月31日在北京逝世 宋朝最著名的科学家之一。
Reasons … … …
要求：
1．100词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）；
2．要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3．条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：达芬奇 Da Vinci；朝代 dynasty；《梦溪笔谈》Dream Brook Sketch；航空航天工业 aerospace industry
Dear Students,
Recently, our school has made a survey on “The Greatest Person in My Mind” among 200 students. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．请以“The Importance of Looking Up Information”为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 查找信息的工具（如词典、百科全书等）；
2. 查找信息在学习中的帮助；
3. 你对正确查找信息的看法。
要求：不少于60词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。
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7．假设你叫李俊，你的笔友David对中国诺贝尔医学奖获得者屠呦呦很感兴趣。他最近给你写了一封信，询问有关屠呦呦的情况。请给David写一封回信。
屠呦呦自幼对医学(medicine)很感兴趣，于1955年毕业于(graduated)北京医学院(Beijing Medical College)，毕业后一直从事医学研究(medical research)。她工作认真负责，不怕失败，甚至经常带病工作，致力于为中国医学做出贡献(make contributions)。
Place of birth(出生地点) Ningbo, Zhejiang Province
Date of birth(出生日期) December 30, 1930
Career(职业) a physician(医学家)
Characteristics(性格) Hard-working, creative, full of talent
Achievements(成就) the 2015 Nobel Prize in Medicine (October 5, 2015)
你的启发 (至少两点)
写作要求：
1.文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.字数要求80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear David,
Thanks for your letter.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jun
8．假如你们班正在举行英语读书节活动，你准备向同学们介绍百科全书。请你根据以下内容提示，完成你的发言稿。
内容提示：
1. 百科全书是记录人类一切知识的工具书。
2. 东方国家和西方国家都有自己的百科全书。
3. 人们可以在网络上查阅有关百科全书的信息。
4. 补充1-2点你对百科全书的看法。
要求：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；可适当发挥。
1.人称：第一人称 2.时态：一般现在时 谋篇布局
1. record记录 2. reference book 工具书 3. look up the information 查找信息 4. at once 马上 好词
1. Encyclopaedia is a reference book to record all kinds of knowledge of human beings. 百科全书是一本用来记录属于人类的所有类型知识的工具书。 2. I believe you will be interested in the encyclopaedia if you have a look at it. 我相信假如你看一看百科全书的话，你将会对它感兴趣。 好句
Dear classmates,
I am going to introduce the encyclopaedia to you.
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9．假设你是Lisa，在今天的文学课上，老师要求每人写一篇关于自己最喜欢的伟人的文章。请根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍莎士比亚。要求：80词左右。
William Shakespeare
(1564-1616)
Birthplace: Britain
What he was: writer
What he did:37 plays and more than 154 poems
Famous works: Hamlet; Rameo and Juliet
William Shakespeare
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10．下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于爱迪生(Thomas Edison)的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇文章介绍爱迪生。
1.爱迪生是最伟大的科学家和发明家之一； 2.爱迪生1847年2月出生于美国，他从小就对科学感兴趣； 3.爱迪生一生工作勤奋，经常夜以继日地工作，从不放弃，他有两千多项发明，其中包括电灯(the electric light)、留声机 (the phonograph) 等，他的发明改变了世界。 4.你从爱迪生身上可以学到什么？
参考词汇：发明：invention
要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Thomas Edison
Thomas Edison is one of the greatest inventors and scientists in the world.
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11．学习完八年级第一单元课文，你们班级准备制作一本英文的百科全书，其中要写一篇关于Neil Armstrong的简介，请你根据如下表格进行编写：
Neil Armstrong
Job Astronaut (宇航员)
Birth time &place 1930; the US
Work experience 1. want to fly; from an early age 2. at the age of 16; become a pilot (飞行员) 3. fly to the Moon; July 1969 4.become the first person to walk on the Moon; 20 July 1969
Death time August 25, 2012
要求：包含信息表内容，清晰合理，书写工整，70词左右。
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12．你知道马克·吐温吗？他是美国著名的作家，他写了许多著名的小说。请根据下面的中文提示，写一篇英文短文介绍一下马克·吐温。
要求：语法正确、逻辑合理，80词左右，可根据提示内容适当发挥。
提示：
1. 美国著名的作家，写了许多著名的小说；
2. 1835年出生于佛罗里达的乡村，4岁时全家搬到城里，12岁时父亲去世；
3. 从童年就开始工作，做过不同的工作。他最著名的小说之一是《汤姆·索亚历险记》；
4. 他写作的才能并不是从小就有，而是来自于他个人的经历。
生词提示：
马克·吐温Mark Twain，小说novel，佛罗里达Florida，《汤姆·索亚历险记》The Adventures of Tom Sawyer，个人的经历personal experiences
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参考答案及试题解析
1．【参考范文】
Huang Xuhua (1926-2024), a well-known Chinese scientist, was born in Guangdong Province. From an early age, he showed great interest in science and engineering, and he was unusually talented in solving difficult problems.
He devoted his life to developing China’s first nuclear submarines. Building submarines was extremely challenging work, and he faced many problems. However, he never gave up. His efforts and knowledge played an important role in the success of China’s nuclear submarine project. Thanks to his work, China now has powerful submarines that can protect the country well, and his work has made great contributions to China’s national defense.
Huang won many awards for his outstanding achievements. In 2019, he received the Medal of the Republic, one of China’s highest honours. People call him the Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：“一般过去时”；
③提示：覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，语言简练准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对文章的主人公进行简单介绍。介绍基本信息和成长背景；
第二步，具体阐述其主要成就与贡献以及产生的影响；
第三步，详细介绍获得的荣誉。
[亮点词汇]
①well-known知名的
②from an early age从年轻时开始
③thanks to由于
[高分句型]
Thanks to his work, China now has powerful submarines that can protect the country well, and his work has made great contributions to China’s national defense.（定语从句）
2．【参考范文】
Mark Twain is an American writer. He wrote many famous novels. Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the city with his family at the age of four. His father died when he was 12 years old. He began working when he was a child and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn’t show his writing ability from an early age, and it came from his personal experiences.
Mark Twain was hardworking and smart. His works are full of humor and popular in the whole world.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的细节，适当补充内容，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍马克·吐温的作家身份；
第二步，具体叙述马克·吐温的早年生活情况；
第三步，介绍马克·吐温的主要作品，并总结他的精神品质。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②begin doing sth.开始做某事
③come from来自
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①His father died when he was 12 years old. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②The Adventures of Tom sawyer is one of his most famous novels in the world. (one of the+最高级+名词复数)
3．例文
Qian Xuesen was one of China’s greatest scientists. Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education. After getting his PhD, he became an important rocket scientist in the USA.
In 1955, Qian returned to China. He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology. Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1. His work laid the foundation for China’s achievements in missiles and space exploration.
Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”. His spirit continues to inspire China’s young generations today. He passed away in 2009, but his contributions will never be forgotten.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍中国伟大科学家钱学森的生平事迹、贡献及影响；
②时态：以一般过去时为主，描述钱学森的出生、求学、回国、工作及逝世等生平事件；使用一般现在时强调其地位、精神的延续性和贡献的不朽性；
③提示：文章围绕钱学森展开，包含其基本生平、回国后的贡献、历史地位及精神影响，内容完整，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明钱学森是中国最伟大的科学家之一，简述早期经历；
第二步，讲述其为中国导弹和太空探索成就奠定基础，突出核心贡献；
第三步，总结其“中国航天之父”的地位，说明其精神对当代中国青年的激励作用，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①further education深造
②devote oneself to致力于
③aerospace航天
④lay the foundation for 为……奠定基础
⑤pass away逝世
⑥contributions贡献
[高分句型]
①Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education.（过去分词“Born”作状语）
②He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology.（“devote oneself to” 短语，体现其对航天事业的专注和奉献）
③Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1.（“Under his leadership”介词短语作状语）
④Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”.（“be known as”结构，明确其历史地位）
4．例文
Mark Twain was a very famous American writer. He was unusually talented in writing and wrote many famous novels. He was born in a small village in Florida in 1835. When he was 4 years old, he and his family moved to the city. Sadly, his father died when he was 12.
From an early age, he started to work. He did many different jobs to make money. One of his most famous books is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. This book made him very popular and won him lots of praise.
Mark Twain spent all his life writing. His writing ability came from his rich personal experiences rather than innate talent. He made great contributions to American literature and played an important role in the world of books.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要逐句翻译，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明马克 吐温的核心身份（美国著名作家）及写作成就（写了许多著名小说，提及写作才能特点）；
第二步，具体阐述马克 吐温的生平经历；
第三步，介绍其代表作品《汤姆 索亚历险记》及作品影响力，补充写作才能的来源，最后总结他对美国文学的贡献及在文学界的地位。
[亮点词汇]
① be talented in 在……方面有天赋
② from an early age 从小
③ make money 赚钱
④ make contributions to 为……做贡献
[高分句型]
① When he was 4 years old, he and his family moved to the city.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Sadly, his father died when he was 12.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ He did many different jobs to make money.（不定式作目的状语）
5．例文：
Dear Students,
Recently, our school has made a survey on “The Greatest Person in My Mind” among 200 students. The results show that the most popular figure is Qian Xuesen, receiving 45% of the votes, Leonardo da Vinci with 30%, and Shen Kuo with 25%. Qian Xuesen, who was born in 1911, is remembered as a great scientist in the aerospace industry. Many students admire him because he dedicated his life to the development of science and technology, making China stronger and more advanced in space exploration. Leonardo da Vinci, an Italian painter and inventor. He is famous for his incredible artistic talent and inventions. Shen Kuo, a scholar from the Song Dynasty, is known for his work in astronomy and other sciences. His influence can still be seen today. I think Qian Xuesen is the greatest due to his crucial role in advancing China’s technology, inspiring future scientists.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应当注意不要遗漏题目要求中的每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，直接说明本次调查报告的主题是“谁是最伟大的人”。
第二步，具体按照表格内容，通过对“达芬奇”、“钱学森”、“沈括”三位名人的投票结果描述，呈现出学生们对“钱学森”的偏好。
第三步，书写结语，表达伟大科学家钱学森对国家的突出贡献的崇敬之情。
[亮点词汇]
①make a survey做调查
②admire钦佩
③is famous for因……而闻名
[高分句型]
①Many students admire him because he dedicated his life to the development of science and technology, making China stronger and more advanced in space exploration.（原因状语从句）
②I think Qian Xuesen is the greatest due to his crucial role in advancing China’s technology, inspiring future scientists.（宾语从句）
6．例文：
The Importance of Looking Up Information
Looking up information is very important for us. We can use many tools to find answers, like dictionaries, encyclopedias, and especially the Internet. These tools give us a lot of knowledge quickly.
When we study, looking up information helps a lot. If we don’t understand a word, we can check the dictionary. If we need to know more about a topic, we can look it up online or in books. This helps us solve problems and learn better.
I think it’s important to look up information correctly. We should use reliable sources, like good websites or books. Also, we shouldn’t just copy everything; we should think about it and understand it ourselves. This is the best way to learn.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明查找信息很重要，并介绍查找信息的工具；
第二步，讲述查找信息在学习中的帮助；
第三步，表达自己对“正确查找信息”的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of 大量的
② need to do 需要做某事
③ know more about 需要了解更多关于……
④ the best way to do 做某事的最佳方式
[高分句型]
① When we study, looking up information helps a lot. (when引导时间状语从句)
② If we don’t understand a word, we can check the dictionary. (if引导条件状语从句)
③ I think it’s important to look up information correctly. (省略that的宾语从句)
7．例文：
Dear David,
Thanks for your letter. You said you were interested in Tu Youyou. Now I’ll tell you something about her.
Tu Youyou is a famous female physician. She was born on December 30, 1930 in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province. She has been very interested in medicine since childhood. She graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1955. She has been engaged in medical research since graduation. This is her favorite job. She works hard and she is creative. She is not afraid of failure, and even often works with illness. She often works day and night. She is full of talent. She devoted herself to the research a drug which is useful for cancer patients. After years of unremitting efforts, she finally succeeded. And in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize in Medicine. She has made great contributions to Chinese medicine.
I am really proud of her. I will study hard and try to get into my dream university. I also want to be a useful person to society in the future, just like her.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jun
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍要告诉一些关于屠呦呦的事情；
第二步，具体介绍屠呦呦的情况；
第三步，最后介绍自己的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in对……感兴趣
② be full of 充满
③ graduate from毕业于
[高分句型]
① She devotes herself to the research a drug which is useful for cancer patients. (which引导的定语从句)
② You said you were interested in Tu Youyou. (宾语从句)
8．例文
Dear classmates,
I am going to introduce the encyclopaedia to you. Encyclopaedia is a reference book to record all kinds of knowledge of human beings. Both western countries and eastern countries have their own encyclopaedias. People can look up the information about encyclopaedia on the Internet, and it is very convenient.
I think encyclopaedia is very useful and helpful. People can know a lot of knowledge from it. If there is something I am not sure, I will look it up in the encyclopaedia at once.
I believe you will be interested in the encyclopaedia if you have a look at it. That’s all. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意书写工整、逻辑通顺，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍百科全书；
第二步，阐述自己对百科全书的看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of 各种各样的
②both…and…两者都
③look up查找
④at once立刻
⑤be interested in感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I think encyclopaedia is very useful and helpful.（省略that的宾语从句）
②If there is something I am not sure, I will look it up in the encyclopaedia at once.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．范文
William Shakespeare
William Shakespeare was one of the greatest men in the world. He was born in Britain in 1564 and died at the age of 52. He was a great writer. During his whole life, he wrote 37 plays and more than 154 poems. Hamlet and Romeo and Juliet are two of his famous works. I like him very much and I dream of being a good writer one day too. I will keep learning from him and working hard to make my dream come true.
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍莎士比亚；
时态：时态为“一般过去式和一般现在时为主，可能用到一般将来时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍莎士比亚的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。突出介绍威廉·莎士比亚是世界上最伟大的人物之一，引出重点介绍的内容：莎士比亚的生平；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从生卒、职业、成就及重要作品等方面来介绍莎士比亚。
第三步，书写总结。表达自己的情感，非常喜欢莎士比亚，希望有一天也能成为一名好作家。
[亮点词汇]
at the age of在……岁时
dream of梦想，渴望
keep doing sth.继续做某事
learn from sb.向某人学习
work hard努力学习
make my dream come true让我的梦想成真
[高分句型]
①William Shakespeare was one of the greatest men in the world.（one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数）
② I like him very much and I dream of being a good writer one day too.（并列句）
③ I will keep learning from him and working hard to make my dream come true.（动词不定式作目的状语）
10．例文
Thomas Edison
Thomas Edison is one of the greatest inventors and scientists in the world.
He was born in the United States in February 1847. At the age of 8, he went to school. From an early age, he was interested in science and showed great intelligence. Edison worked hard all his life, often working day and night without giving up. He had more than 2, 000 inventions, including the electric light, phonograph and so on. His invention changed the world. He died in 1931 at the age of 84.
From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life, just as his famous saying Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine per cent perspiration. I will learn from him and be a hard-working learner.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：本文以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍爱迪生，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示爱迪生是最伟大的科学家和发明家之一；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍爱迪生的生平；
第三步，介绍你从爱迪生身上可以学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①Edison worked hard all his life, often working day and night without giving up. (现在分词作状语以及动名词作宾语)
②I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.(表语从句)
11．例文：
Neil Armstrong was a famous astronaut. He was born in 1930, the US.
He had a dream when he was very young. He wanted to fly from an early age. Neil Armstrong studied hard at school. He read many books on science and space. Finally, he became a pilot at the age of 16. He still worked very hard. He flew to the Moon in July, 1969. More importantly, he became the first person to walk on the Moon on 20 July of 1969. Unluckily, he passed away on August 25, 2012. People will remember him forever.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，根据表格内容进行人物介绍；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时” ；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中有关Neil Armstrong的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“班级准备制作一本英文的百科全书，其中要写一篇关于Neil Armstrong的简介，请你根据如下表格进行编写”根据表格内容直接介绍Neil Armstrong的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“职业、出生年龄、出生地点、小时候的梦想、工作主要经历和离世”几个方面介绍Neil Armstrong的相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“人们永远记住他”的情感。
[亮点词汇]
① be born 出生
② at the age of 在……岁时
③ study hard学习认真
④ the first person to do sth做某事第一人
⑤ more importantly更重要的是
[高分句型]
① He had a dream when he was very young.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② More importantly, he became the first person to walk on the Moon on 20 July of 1969.（“the first person to do sth”表达“做某事第一人”句型常用短语）
12．例文：
Mark Twain was an American writer. He wrote many famous novels. He was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the city with his family at the age of four. His father died when he was 12 years old. He began working when he was a child and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom sawyer is one of his most famous novels in the world. He didn’t show his writing talent from an early age. His excellent writing ability came from his personal experiences.
Mark Twain was hardworking and smart. His works are full of humor and popular in the whole world.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的细节，适当补充内容，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍马克·吐温的作家身份；
第二步，具体叙述马克·吐温的早年生活情况；
第三步，介绍马克·吐温的主要作品，并总结他的精神品质。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在几岁时
②talent天赋，才能
③come from来自
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①The Adventures of Tom sawyer is one of his most famous novels in the world.（one of the+最高级+名词复数）
②His father died when he was 12 years old.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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