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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版（2024）Unit 1 My Dream Job
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你校英语角正在举办主题为“My dream job”的征稿活动，请你写一篇短文分享你的职业梦想。
提示：1. What is your dream job
2. Why do you want to be it
3. How can you make your dream come true
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，内容积极向上，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80-100词。
Everyone has a dream job, and my dream job is to become a/an
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2．近期，学校英语报开展了围绕“我的梦想职业”为主题的作文比赛。请你结合实际情况，围绕以下要点完成你的写作。
参考短语：be good at..., like/ enjoy doing sth., practise hard
注意：1.词数70词左右，已给出的句子不计入总词数。
2.短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥。
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job. My dream job is to be
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3．树立远大理想，营造榜样氛围。近来学校开展征文活动。请以“When Dreams Meet Heroes”为题撰写一篇英文文章投稿。内容要求包含以下表格中的所有要点，参考词汇可按需选用：
What Your dream job
Why Important people around you / role models inspiring you Reasons you admire him / her
How Ways to realize your dream
注意：
1. 词数：70 词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
参考词汇：scientist, doctor, engineer, teacher, smart, brave, hard - working, study hard, keep practicing, never give up
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
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4．假如你是张华，你的学校正在开展以“我的未来我做主”为主题的职业规划活动，现在向全校同学征集职业规划的文章。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，写一篇英语短文向学校报刊主编Amanda投稿。
参考词汇：help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on…
要求：
1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于60词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Hua
5．每个人都有自己理想的职业，并且希望成为对国家和社会有用的人。作为新时代的青少年，你理想的职业是什么呢？学校英语俱乐部正在举办题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动，请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容要点：
1. 你理想的职业并简单介绍选择此职业的原因；
2. 你为了实现这个理想职业而制定的计划 (至少两点)；
3. 你的期望。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：admire (v.崇拜) hard-working (adj.努力的) professional (adj.职业的) keep on (坚持)
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her own dream job. I want to be a/an
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6．每个人都有自己理想的职业，并且希望成为对国家和社会有用的人。你校正在开展“My Dream, Chinese Dream”系列英语演讲比赛，请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
内容包含：
1. 你理想的职业；
2. 你选择这个理想职业的原因 (兴趣爱好、经历……)；
3. 你实现这个理想职业的计划或做法 (学习、锻炼……)。
注意：
1. 词数为80个左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
admire (v. 崇拜) encourage (v. 鼓励) professional (adj. 职业的) keep on (坚持)
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her own dream job.
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7．作家列夫·托尔斯泰曾说过: “梦想是指路的明灯。没有梦想，就没有坚定的方向：没有方向就没有生活。”作为新时代的青少年，你梦想的职业是什么呢？某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. What are you going to be in the future
2. What are your reasons (原因) （share 2 reasons）
3. How can you make this dream come true (more than 2 plans)
注意:
1. 字数80字左右, 开头已经写好, 不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯:
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
My Dream Job
Dreams are different from person to person. As for me.
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8．每个人都有自己的梦想。它可能是一个职业梦想，也可能是一个想做的事情。请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇短文。
内容应包括：
1. 你的梦想工作是什么。
2. 你为什么选择这个梦想工作。
3. 你将如何为实现这个梦想工作而努力。
要求：
1. 短文应包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80-100左右。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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9．你们班就理想职业展开调查。请你根据以下提示以“Our dream jobs”为题用英文写一篇短文，向英语报刊投稿。
要点：
1. Mary：喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画，想成为一名时装设计师
2. Kate：喜爱植物，想美化城市，想成为一名园艺工人
3. Tom：喜欢做健康美味的食物，想成为一名厨师
4. You: …
注意：
1.可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.作文中不得出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名；
3.语句连贯，词数80左右 (作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Our dream jobs
Recently, we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ dream jobs.
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10．假如你们学校校报正在就“同学们的未来职业”进行主题征文，你对自己的未来是如何打算的呢？请根据表格中的要点提示，以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文去投稿。可适当发挥，词数80—120。
Dream job I want to be a / an...
Abilities I’m good at... / I do well in...
Reasons makes me feel... / I enjoy...
Ways I plan / want / expect to / I’m going to...
My Dream Job_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．随着社会的发展和科技的进步，未来职场上的竞争会变得越来越激烈，有一个明确的职业生涯规划变得尤为重要。亲爱的同学，你是否对自己未来的职业有过规划呢？近期学校将以“My Dream Job”为主题，进行一场英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。
参考信息：
1. 你的理想职业是什么？为什么它是你的理想职业？
2. 你打算为你的理想职业作哪些准备？
3. ……
写作要求：
1. 词数：80-120词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、班级、校名和其它真实信息。
Dear teachers and students! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future.
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12．你校人生规划课程组将要组织一次征文比赛活动，主题是“My dream job”，请写一篇征文稿，包括你的理想职业，你选择此职业的原因及如何实现你的职业理想等。
注意：
1. 不得出现真实的校名、地名和人名；
2. 不少于80 词。
My dream job
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13．为了解青少年的就业意向，一家英文杂志World Teens正在组织征文比赛。请你以“My dream job”为题写一篇短文参加此项活动。
内容包括：
1.你的选择；
2.你选择的理由；
3.你准备如何实现你的梦想。
注意：
1.词数80 — 100，题目已给出，不计入总词数；
2.不得出现个人信息，如姓名、校名等。
My dream job
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14．某学校英语社团要举行以“My dream job”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下表提示内容，选择你喜欢的一份职业，从自己选择这份职业的原因、以及你如何实现梦想等方面写一份英语演讲稿，谈论你的理想职业。
要求：1、文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
2、表格中的内容供参考，可适当发挥；
3、词数：90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dream job: Guide Reasons: Personality: active, ... Hobbies: travelling, ... Experiences: travel a lot, ... Plans: 1.study hard 2.... Dream job: Cartoonist Reasons: Personality: quiet, ... Hobbies:drawing, ... Experiences: win ...prize for, ... Plans: 1. take art classes 2.... Dream job: ... Reasons: Personality: ..., ... Hobbies: ..., ... Experiences: ..., ... Plans: 1. ... 2. ...
My Dream Job
Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My dream job”. When I grow up, I hope to be a(n) ______________________________________________________________
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Thanks for listening.
15．梦想，是对未来的一种期望，是人生的目标，是一种信仰，梦想是助人成功的基石，是催人奋进的动力，是勇往直前的源泉。人人都有梦想，有人想当医生，有人想当作家，有人想当科学家。在青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你根据以下提示，以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你的梦想。内容包括：
1. 你未来想从事的职业；
2. 你想从事这个职业的理由；
3. 你的感想。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，包含以上所有信息，可根据需要作适当的发挥。
2. 80词左右。
Students always have dreams for the future. What’s your dream job when you grow up For me, I hope to be__________________________________________________________________
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job, and my dream job is to become a teacher. I believe teaching is not only a job, but also a way to help others and make a difference in their lives.
Teachers play an important role in our lives. They teach us knowledge, help us solve problems, and encourage us to be better. I want to be a teacher because I hope to inspire students, just like my teachers inspire me.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school. I’ll learn more about different subjects and practice speaking clearly. Also, I’ll be kind and patient, ready to listen to students. I believe that with hard work, I can be a good teacher and help many students.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：围绕“我的理想工作”，从工作的意义、职业的作用、选择该工作的原因，到为实现梦想的行动规划来写。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开篇点明主旨，说明自己的梦想工作是什么；
第二步：阐述工作的意义以及该职业在生活中的重要作用；
第三步：讲述为实现梦想的行动，完善梦想实现的路径 。
【亮点词汇】
①make a difference 有影响
②not only... but also... 不仅……而且……
【高分句型】
①I believe teaching is not only a job, but also a way to help others and make a difference in their lives.（省略that引导的宾语从句 ）
②I want to be a teacher because I hope to inspire students, just like my teachers inspire me.（because引导的原因状语从句 ）
2．
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job. My dream job is to be a teacher.
I am good at communicating with others and enjoy helping students solve problems. Teaching can let me share knowledge and watch students grow, which makes me feel meaningful. I know it’s not easy, so I will study hard to get more knowledge. I also plan to practise teaching by helping my classmates with their lessons after school.
I hope my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：文章紧扣主题，明确梦想职业是教师，阐述了自己的优势以及为实现梦想将努力学习、练习教学的计划，内容完整，逻辑清晰，词数符合要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接已给句子，直接点明自己的梦想职业是教师，引出下文；
第二步，说明自己适合当教师的原因，并阐述为实现梦想的具体行动；
第三步，结尾表达希望梦想成真的愿望，收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with与……交流
②solve problems解决问题
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①Teaching can let me share knowledge and watch students grow, which makes me feel meaningful.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
② I hope my dream will come true one day.（宾语从句）
3．例文
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes. I want to be a teacher in the future.
My dream is inspired by my English teacher. She is very smart, kind and hard-working. I admire her because she always helps us patiently and makes learning fun. To realize my dream, I will study hard, especially in all subjects. I will also read more books to learn more knowledge. Most importantly, I will never give up and keep practicing my teaching skills.
I believe my dream will come true.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，介绍你的梦想职业；
第二步，介绍你的榜样及原因；
第三步，实现梦想的具体做法。
【亮点词汇】①be inspired by被……激励
②patiently耐心地
③give up放弃
【高分句型】I admire her because she always helps us patiently and makes learning fun. （because引导的原因状语从句）
4．例文
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.
My dream is to become a doctor. The main reason is that I want to help others recover from illnesses and bring hope to patients and their families. To achieve this goal, I need to possess good qualities like patience and responsibility. I’m studying science subjects hard at school to lay a solid foundation. In my spare time, I often read medical books and volunteer at the community clinic to gain practical experience.
I believe with continuous effort, I can realize my dream and make a difference in people’s lives.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的理想职业——医生；
第二步，介绍自己想当医生的原因、具备的品质以及如何实现自己的梦想；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth.想要做某事
②recover from illnesses从疾病中康复
③make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
The main reason is that I want to help others recover from illnesses and bring hope to patients and their families. (that引导的表语从句)
5．例文
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her own dream job. I want to be a/an teacher.
I admire teachers because they help students grow and make our country stronger. To be a good teacher, I have a plan. First, I will work hard to study all the subjects in school, especially English and Chinese. Second, I will read many books to learn more and become professional. Even if it’s difficult, I will continue to learn.
I believe if I work hard, I can become a great teacher and help many students in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想职业及选择此职业的原因；
第二步，具体阐述自己为实现梦想而制定的计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
②continue to do sth继续做某事
③in the future将来
[高分句型]
①I admire teachers because they help students grow and make our country stronger. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I believe if I work hard, I can become a great teacher and help many students in the future. (if引导的条件状语从句)
6．参考范文
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her own dream job. My dream job is to be a volleyball player.
I love volleyball very much. I was chosen for the school volleyball team at the age of ten because I was taller than many other students at that time. I began to practise playing volleyball. I admire the Chinese women’s national team. Their spirit encourages me all the time.
I will keep on training to improve my skills. I want to join the professional volleyball team, and then the national team. I hope to win the Olympic gold medal for China.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：需包含梦想职业、热爱原因、经历及未来目标等要点，通过个人经历和目标阐述梦想，结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明梦想职业是成为排球运动员；
第二步，讲述十岁时因身高被选入学校排球队并开始练习的经历，表达对中国女排的敬佩及她们精神的激励作用；
第三步，阐述未来计划，包括持续训练提升技能、加入职业队和国家队，希望为中国赢得奥运金牌。
[亮点词汇]
①admire敬佩
②encourages鼓励
③keep on training持续训练
[高分句型]
①I was chosen for the school volleyball team at the age of ten because I was taller than many other students at that time. (because引导原因状语从句)
7．例文：
My Dream Job Dreams are different from person to person. As for me, my dream job is to be a teacher in the future. There are several reasons.
Firstly, teachers play an important role in shaping the future of society. By educating and guiding students, they help build a brighter tomorrow. Secondly, I enjoy comunicating with children. Their curiosity and energy constantly inspire me to be better.
To make this dream come true, I have several plans in place. Firstly, I will focus on my studies and work hard to achieve my goals. Secondly, I plan to participate in some activities related to teaching. Additionally, I will actively seek help from experienced teachers and attend workshops to continuously improve my teaching skills. By doing these, I am confident that I can turn my dream of becoming a teacher into a reality.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我的梦想是什么，引出下文；
第二步，说明自己选择教师这项工作的原因；
第三步，介绍如何实现梦想，并总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① in the future 将来
② play an important role 起重要作用
③ improve my teaching skills 提高我的教学技能
[高分句型]
① As for me, my dream job is to be a teacher in the future.（动词不定式短语作表语）
② By doing these, I am confident that I can turn my dream of becoming a teacher into a reality.（宾语从句）
8．例文
My Dream Job
My dream job is to become an environmental scientist. I am deeply interested in nature and care about the future of our planet. I want to help solve serious problems like climate change and pollution.
I believe this job is very meaningful because it allows me to contribute to a healthier world. I love learning about science, especially biology and chemistry, and I am eager to protect wildlife. I hope to work on projects that create sustainable solutions.
To reach my goal, I will study hard in all my science classes, especially in high school. I also plan to read more books about environmental protection and join relevant clubs. I will work hard to enter a good university and major in environmental science. I am determined to make my dream a reality.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“梦想职业”展开；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时描述梦想和兴趣，一般将来时说明为实现梦想所做的努力；
③ 结构：采用“三段式”结构：介绍梦想职业—说明原因—阐述努力方向。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，直接写明你的梦想职业是什么；
第二步：说明你选择该职业的原因，包括兴趣、价值观或人生理想等；
第三步：描述你将采取哪些具体行动来实现这一梦想，如学习计划、参加活动、目标院校等。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② care about 关心
③ be eager to do sth 渴望做某事
④ work on 致力于
⑤ major in 主修
[高分句型]
① I am deeply interested in nature and care about the future of our planet.（并列谓语结构）
② I believe this job is very meaningful because it allows me to contribute to a healthier world.（because引导原因状语从句）
③ To reach my goal, I will study hard in all my science classes.（不定式短语作目的状语）
④ I hope to work on projects that create sustainable solutions.（that引导的定语从句）
9．参考范文
Our dream jobs
Recently, we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ dream jobs. Mary wants to be a fashion designer, because she likes beautiful clothes. She is good at drawing as well. Kate hopes to be a gardener. She is keen on plants. She wants to make the city more beautiful. Tom likes cooking healthy and delicious food for others, so he hopes to be a cook in the future. My dream is to be a teacher. I love children very much.
I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Mary和Kate及Tom的喜好及梦想；
第二步，介绍自己的喜好及梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①a fashion designer时尚设计师
②healthy and delicious food健康和美味的食物
[高分句型]
①I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future.（省略that引导的宾语从句）
10．
例文
My Dream Job
I want to be a doctor in the future. I’m good at biology and I have a strong interest in medical knowledge. I enjoy helping others and making them healthy. To achieve this goal, I plan to study hard in school and get good grades. I will also read a lot of medical books and attend some medical lectures. I believe that with my efforts, I can become a good doctor and contribute to the health of society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。点出未来的工作；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“能力、原因、方式”等角度具体描述；
第三步，书写结语。表明自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have a strong interest in对……有浓厚的兴趣
②with my efforts在我的努力下
[高分句型]
To achieve this goal, I plan to study hard in school and get good grades. (动词不定式作目的状语)
11．例文
Dear teachers and students! It’s my honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about my dream job in the future.
My dream job is to become a software engineer. I have always been fascinated by technology and how it can solve real-world problems. I believe that as a software engineer, I can create innovative solutions that make people’s lives easier and more efficient.
To achieve this dream, I plan to study computer science in college. I am also committed to staying updated with the latest technological advancements by reading industry journals and attending tech conferences.
In conclusion, becoming a software engineer is my dream job because it combines my passion for technology with the opportunity to make a positive impact on society. I am determined to work hard and prepare myself to achieve this goal.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的理想职业、为什么选择这个职业以及为实现这个职业所做的准备。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的理想职业；
第二步，解释为什么选择这个职业；
第三步，描述为实现这个职业所做的准备；
第四步，总结并表达决心。
[亮点词汇]
①fascinated by 对……着迷
②innovative solutions 创新的解决方案
③practical experience 实践经验
④continuous learning 持续学习
[高分句型]
①I believe that as a software engineer, I can create innovative solutions that make people’s lives easier and more efficient. (that引导的宾语从句)
②I am determined to work hard and prepare myself to achieve this goal. (不定式作目的状语)
12．参考例文：
My dream job
Everyone has a dream, so do I. I want to be a teacher. I’m going to work in Beijing and teach math in a middle school. Do you know why I want to be a teacher Because we can learn all kinds of knowledge with the help of the teachers. When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us. They do many things for us as our parents do. We all like them very much. My teachers are also very kind and care about me. So it’s my dream to be a teacher.
How can I make my dream come true First, I must try my best to study hard at all subjects. Second, I will read more books, such as math, English, history, science and so on. Finally, I’m going to enter a good university to study math.
I must work hard to realize my dream. I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it. Let’s fight for our dreams!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直切主题。介绍自己理想的职业和喜欢这个职业的原因；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述你将如何实现自己的理想；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下
②care about关心
③come true实现
④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
13．例文
My dream job
Everybody has their dream job and mine is a doctor. Last year my father fell ill and was sent to hospital. I often went there to take care of him. There I met many people who were terribly ill. It was horrible to see them live in such pain. I really want to help people like them. That’s why I want to be a doctor.
In order to realize my dream, I need a good education. So from now on I will work harder at school. Only in this way can I go to a good college and prepare myself for my dream job.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；
第二步，具体介绍选择这样的梦想的原因；
第三步，介绍如何实现梦想的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① take care of照顾
② in order to为了
③ from now on从现在起
[高分句型]
① There I met many people who were terribly ill.（who引导的定语从句）
② That’s why I want to be a doctor.（why引导的表语从句）
14．例文：
My Dream Job
Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My dream job”. When I grow up, I hope to be a teacher in the future because I love working with children, sharing my knowledge, and making a positive contribution to society. I believe that education is the key to success, and I want to help my students reach their full potential. What’s more, I have several hobbies and experiences that have helped me to develop the skills that I need to be a teacher. I enjoy reading, writing, and playing music.
To realize my dream, I will work hard to enter a good university to equip myself with knowledge such as psychology, education theory and teaching skills. I believe I will be a good teacher through efforts.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要向同学介绍我的理想职业；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍选择这个职业原因和你适合这个职业的方面；
第三步，介绍你如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①make a positive contribution to society为社会做出积极贡献
②the key to success成功的关键
③reach their full potential充分发挥他们的潜力
④equip使有知识和技能
⑤efforts努力
[高分句型]
①When I grow up, I hope to be a teacher in the future because I love working with children, sharing my knowledge, and making a positive contribution to society. (时间状语从句，原因状语从句)
②What’s more, I have several hobbies and experiences that have helped me to develop the skills that I need to be a teacher. (定语从句)
15．例文
Students always have dreams for the future. What’s your dream job when you grow up For me, I hope to be a doctor.
First, both my father and mother are doctors. When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. Second, the doctors work in the front line to fight against the serious illness. They move me a lot. Third, the doctors use their knowledge to help people have better lives. I dream of becoming one of them.
I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. I also plan to read more books about medicine. Then I will know better about the job. I’m sure I will be a good doctor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的两个要点，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。阐述想要从事的职业；
②第二步，具体阐述你想从事这个职业的理由；
③第三步，阐述你的感想，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①both…and…两者都
②take an interest in对……感兴趣
③fight against 反抗
④plan to计划
[高分句型]
①When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
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