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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Trying new things
专题12 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．如今，越来越多的家庭拥有了智能设备，如智能音箱、智能手表等。请你根据自己的生活体验，以“My Smart Device”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你家中的一款智能设备。内容包括：
1. 设备的名称和外观；
2. 它的主要功能；
3. 你对它的评价。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数150左右；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．新学期伊始，学校将为初一同学提供丰富多彩的俱乐部活动，很多同学都跃跃欲试想要竞选社长开设自己的俱乐部，假如你是李华，你也想成立自己的俱乐部。请写一篇英文发言稿参与竞选，说明自己想要开设的俱乐部，自己的优势及想要成为社长的原因。
提示词语：basketball, study, friendly, improve
Dear teachers and classmates,
My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to stand here running for the club president.
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3． 升入初中，丰富多彩的社团活动正在等待你的加入，音乐、科学、艺术社团……你最喜欢哪一个呢？假如你是李华，根据以下相关要求，写一封社团申请信。
1．选择社团：music、science、art、basketball…
2．理由：(1)What are you like (2)What can you do (3)What do you want to get from the club
要求：紧扣要点，意思连贯；可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
词数：
1.不少于80词；
2.文中不要出现真实校名和人名；
3.注意书写规范认真，卷面整洁。
Dear teacher,
I am Li Hua from Grade 7. I would like to
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Thank you for your reading!
Yours,
Li Hua.
4．假如你是阳光中学七年级的学生李华，你看到英语校刊Sunshine Weekly发布的一则俱乐部招新启事，请根据启事的内容与要求，用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。
JOIN A CLUB!Do you want to make friends, learn something new or have fun Here are three clubs for you—music club, English club and sports club. Which one do you want to join Write an email to tell us: —Your name, age, looks, after-school activities —The club you want to join —Why you want to join it Please send your email to sunshineweekly@ by next Friday. We hope you enjoy yourself in our clubs.
要求：
1.必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；
3.词数不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，美国学生 Peter 作为交换生(exchange student)即将来你校进行短暂的交流学习。他给你发了一封电子邮件，想要了解你们学校的情况。请根据邮件内容和你校的实际情况用英语回复。
Dear Li Hua, I am an exchange student from America. Next month, I will go to your school for study. I want to know about your school life. What subjects do you have at school What’s your favorite subject Are there any interesting clubs at your school Which club are you in How do you feel about your school life Write soon. Yours, Peter
要求：
1.内容包括所有要点并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名。
3.词数80左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
Glad to get your email.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你所在的学校设置了众多的特色社团，请你根据所给提示，以 “My School Clubs” 为题写一篇短文，向你的朋友 James 介绍2-3个你们学校的社团，以及你参加后的收获感想。
提示：
要求：1. 语言通顺， 意思连贯，条理清楚，提示供参考。
2. 词数90左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
Dear James,
There are so many colourful clubs in my school. I would like to tell you something about them.
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What about your school I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Lihua
7．为增进校园文化交流，育英中学将与结对的英国学校开展一次“云访学校”的线上活动。假如你是该校学生代表Teng Fei，请根据下面导图和问题，向他们介绍你们的学校生活。
Our School Life What is our school like (beautiful ...) What do we do at school (do exercises ...)
What subjects do we learn (Chinese …) What’s our favorite subject Why (useful ...)
What clubs do we have (the nature club …) What can we do in the clubs (watch birds …)
要求：
（1）可适当增加内容，以使行文流畅；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数60词左右，开始语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Our School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
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We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
8．步入初中生活已经一个学期了，你的朋友 Maria非常关心你的学校生活。请你根据下面的思维导图，向你的朋友介绍一下你的学校生活吧。
注意：
1. 作文中至少包含思维导图中的5个问题；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 70词左右。开头结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Maria,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是七(1)班的Li Hua，你校正在举行关于学校生活的英语征文大赛。请以“I Love My School Life”为题，根据提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍你的校园生活。
Name Li Hua
Age 13
Birthday 11.02
School big, beautiful
Favourite subject English
Club music club
… …
要求：
1. 包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 短文词数不少于60词。
I Love My School Life
Hi, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
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10．假如你是李明，你校英语读书社团正在招募新成员，你想加入该社团。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封申请信，可根据自己的实际情况补充相关信息。
提示：
(1)介绍你的基本信息；
(2)介绍你的兴趣爱好；
(3)说明你想加入该社团的理由。
要求：
(1)表达清楚，但不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校；
(2)必须包括提示中所有要点内容，可适当发挥；
(3)词数：70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Best wishes,
Li Ming
11．假如你是李平，你们学校的烹饪、读书、自然俱乐部正在招募新成员，请结合自己的实际情况，根据下面的表格给俱乐部负责人Mike写一封电子邮件，申请加入其中的一个俱乐部。
What club are you interested in cooking club, book club or nature club
Why do you want to join the club love... learn more about... ...
What’s your abilities and interests I can... I am really interested in... ...
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2. 根据要求和表格中的信息，完成邮件；
3. 字迹工整，表达通顺，意思连贯；
4. 至少60词。
Dear Mike,
I want to join your club.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
12．假定你是李华，最近收到美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，要来你的学校做交换生。请你阅读后回复。词数70左右。
Dear Li Hua, I’m going to visit your school next term for an exchange visit. I’m really excited about it. I’m writing to you because I have something I’d like to know. First, can you tell me how you spend your school day It’s important for me to plan my daily routine. Second, I’m interested indifferent clubs in your school. Tell me which club I can join after school and why I hope to hear from you soon. All the best. Peter
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺、行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to hear that you will visit our school next term.
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Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
13．课后托管服务实施后，为使学校生活更加丰富多彩并营造浓厚的学习氛围，你校决定成立读书社团（book club）。假设你是 Teng Fei, 想申请加入读书社团，请你根据以下思维导图提示，用英文向读书社团负责人 Miss Gao 写一封自荐信。
写作要求:
1. 内容包括以上信息，可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名；
3. 至少60词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Miss Gao,
I am Teng Fei.
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14．青春在校园里绽放，梦想在校园里起航。校园生活是多彩的、美好的、辛苦的……。这周五你们班英语口语活动课的交流主题是“My favorite school day”。请你根据下列要点提示写一篇英语发言稿，在这周五的英语口语课上介绍你最喜欢的上学日。
要点：1. 你最喜欢的上学日是星期几；
2. 你喜欢的原因是什么；
3. 你的感受是什么。
要求：1. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，句法正确，书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
4. 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：在答题卡“My favorite school day is ...”后先把“你最喜欢的上学日”补充完整，然后再完成书面表达。
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15．为了增强学校俱乐部的吸引力，你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“My Dream Club”。请根据以下思维导图用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.可在思维导图提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数70词左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream Club
A club makes our school life colourful. There are some kinds of clubs in our school, but I hope to join a better one.
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16．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Peter写邮件介绍了他的校园生活。请你回复一封邮件，向他介绍你丰富多彩的初中校园生活。包含你的学校日一天的安排、最喜欢的科目和社团活动等相关内容。开头已经给出。
内容提示问题：
1. How do you spend your day
2. What’s your favorite subject and why
3. What can you do at your club
4. Something more about your school life.
注意：文中不得透露真实姓名和学校等信息；词数 80 左右。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
17．同学们，初中生活的画卷已缓缓展开，新篇章里藏着无限可能与精彩。请结合以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
提示：
1. What’s in your school
2. What subject do you like best And why
3. What do you often do after class —Clubs/after-school activities.
4. What do you think of your school life
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.要点齐全，适当发挥，语言通顺，表意准确，条理清晰，书写规范。
3.70词左右。
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18．同学们，七年级上学期即将过去，请以“My school life”为题向学校英语专栏投稿介绍一下自己的学校生活，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1. 你最喜欢什么科目和原因；
2. 你参加的学校的社团及活动时间；
3. 你在学校都做了哪些有趣的事情。
要求
1. 文中不要出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 词数70左右。
My school life
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19．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，某中学决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。
The plant club
时间 每周六上午八点半
活动 ◆参加关于植物的课堂 ◆去野外观察植物 ◆……
益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友
写作要求：
1.文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
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20．假如你是李华，学校音乐俱乐部正在招募新成员。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，用英语给该俱乐部的负责人Mrs. Brown写一封电子邮件，向她介绍自己并申请加入该俱乐部。
Name Li Hua
Age 13
Class Class 4, Grade 7
Why I love music ◆Exciting ◆My parents are both music lovers
What I can do ◆Sing ◆Play the violin ◆Play the guitar
要求: 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing this email to you because I want to
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
My Smart Device
Nowadays, there are more and more smart devices in our daily lives. In my family, we have a smart speaker named Xiaodu. It is really cool and useful.
Xiaodu is small and round like a cute drum. It is mainly white, with a touch-sensitive panel on the top and a speaker at the bottom. Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room.
Xiaodu has many amazing functions. First, it can play various kinds of music. Whenever I feel tired or want to relax, I just say “Xiaodu, play my favorite music”, and then beautiful melodies will fill the room. Besides, it is a great helper for my study. I can ask it questions about my homework, like grammar points or math problems. It can give clear explanations right away. Also, it can tell interesting stories. At bedtime, I often let it tell me some fairy tales to help me fall asleep.
In my opinion, Xiaodu is more than just a device. It brings much convenience and joy to our family. It makes our lives more colorful and easier. I really love my smart speaker!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：从三个方面进行写作，每方面需要具体展开。注意条理清晰、语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家中智能设备的名称和外观；
第二步，介绍此智能设备的主要功能；
第三步，对此智能设备进行评价。
[亮点词汇]
①amazing functions令人惊叹的功能
②various kinds of各种各样的
③more than just不只是
④much convenience and joy许多便利和欢乐
[高分句型]
Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room. (it作形式宾语)
2．例文
Dear teachers and classmates,
My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to stand here running for the club president. I want to start a Basketball Club because I love sports, and basketball is a great way to stay healthy, make friends, and improve teamwork skills. As the president, I will organize fun activities like friendly matches, skill training, and even study groups to help members balance sports and academics. I believe I’m a good leader because I’m friendly, responsible, and passionate about basketball. My goal is to create a club where everyone feels welcome and can improve both on and off the court.
Please vote for me! Together, we’ll make our club exciting and successful. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意不要遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单自我介绍，点明自己想开设的社团；
第二步，介绍自己想当社长的原因以及自身的优势；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家选自己。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy 保持健康
②responsible 负责的
③vote for sb 投票支持某人
[高分句型]
①I believe I’m a good leader because I’m friendly, responsible, and passionate about basketball. (that省略的宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句)
②My goal is to create a club where everyone feels welcome and can improve both on and off the court. (to do作表语，where引导定语从句)
3．例文
Dear teacher,
I am Li Hua from Grade 7. I would like to join the Music Club.
First, I am an outgoing person and enjoy singing very much. I feel happy when I hear music. Second, I can play the piano a little. I have been learning it for two years. Finally, I want to learn to sing better with others and make friends who also love music.
Joining the Music Club can help me relax after studying and learn more about music. I believe I can be a good member.
Thank you for your reading!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表达自己想要加入哪个社团；
第二步，介绍自己的性格、能力及想要从社团中获得什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play the piano弹钢琴
②make friends交朋友
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I feel happy when I hear music. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I believe I can be a good member. (宾语从句)
4．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am 13 years old, and I have a strong interest in English. In my free time, I enjoy reading English books and watching English movies.
I would like to join the English club because I want to improve my English speaking and writing skills. I believe that by joining the club, I will have more opportunities to practice English with my classmates and learn from experienced teachers. Also, I hope to make new friends who share the same interest in English.
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封电子邮件。
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，需注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要求，适当添加细节，使内容更具体、生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的。在开头介绍自己，包括姓名、年龄、兴趣爱好等，并说明写信的目的是申请加入某个俱乐部。
第二步，详细说明写作内容。根据提示内容，写明自己想加入的俱乐部，并说明加入该俱乐部的原因。例如，可以从兴趣、个人提升、结交朋友等方面展开，使文章更有说服力。
第三步，书写结语。表达对加入俱乐部的期待，并感谢对方的阅读和考虑。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
② improve my skills提高我的技能
③have more opportunities to有更多机会去……
④make new friends结交新朋友
[高分句型]
Joining the English club will give me more chances to practice my English and make new friends. (动名词作主语)
5．范文：
Dear Peter,
Glad to get your email. Welcome to our school! I’m happy to tell you about my school life. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, Math, English, History, and Science. My favorite subject is English because it helps me understand different cultures.
There are many interesting clubs in our school, like the Basketball Club, the Dance Club, and the Science Club. I’m a member of the Science Club. We do lots of exciting experiments and learn new things.
I feel very happy with my school life. The teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. You’ll enjoy your time here for sure.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己有哪些科目以及自己最喜欢的科目；
第二步，介绍自己学校的俱乐部以及自己在什么俱乐部；
第三步，最后对于学校生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① such as比如
② lots of大量的
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because it helps me understand different cultures.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．例文：
Dear James,
There are so many colourful clubs in my school. I would like to tell you something about them.
Culture Club is a popular club. Here students can learn a lot about different Chinese festivals and activities. For example, we always put up paper-cuts on windows in the spring festival. We’re so proud of our Chinese culture.
If you're interested in how to keep healthy, it’s good to join the Health Club. You can learn how to have a healthy diet and lifestyle here. And I’m a member of the Fashion Club. I can design clothes with different styles by myself. Now I have the courage to show my idea and try to enjoy the beauty of the world.
General speaking, colourful clubs are of great help to us and we really enjoy our school life.
What about your school I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Lihua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“My School Clubs”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍“文化俱乐部”和“健康俱乐部”，并谈谈自己参加了什么俱乐部；
第三步，讲述自己的收获和感想，并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①learn a lot about学习很多关于……的内容
②for example比如
③put up张贴
④be proud of为……感到自豪
⑤be good to对……有益
[高分句型]
①If you're interested in how to keep healthy, it’s good to join the Health Club.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文：
Our School Life
Hello, everyone, I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
My school is beautiful and great. There are many modern buildings. We spend most of our time having classes in the classroom building. We do exercises and raise the flag on the sports field. In the dining hall, we can have all kinds of delicious food. It’s my favorite place. For subjects, we have Chinese, maths, English, history, biology, geography, IT, PE and so on. My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. For clubs, we have many different fun clubs. I join the nature club. In the club we can watch the birds and collect plants and insects. It’s fun.
We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点围绕学校环境、在校活动、学习科目、最喜欢的科目及原因、学校社团及社团活动展开，考生需涵盖这些要点，可适当增添内容让文章更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步：使用给定的开头引出主题；
第二步：先描述学校的样子，接着列举在校做的事，然后介绍学习的科目，再说明最喜欢的科目及原因，最后介绍社团及社团活动；
第三步：用给定的句子结尾，表达对学校生活的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
②do exercises 做锻炼
③all kinds of 各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many modern buildings. （there be句型）
②My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. （because引导原因状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Maria,
I hope this letter finds you well. I want to share my school life with you. My school is not big, but it is very beautiful. My favorite subject is English, because I think it’s very useful. I joined the English club. I can practice my spoken English and make many new friends there. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon every day. To make my school life meaningful, I’ve been involved in community service projects organized by the school. I hope this gives you a glimpse into my school life. I’m looking forward to hearing about your experiences as well.
Warm regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，希望分享学校生活；
第二步，具体阐述学校生活；
第三步，期待对方的分享。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②look forward to期待
③as well也
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is English, because I think it’s very useful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②To make my school life meaningful, I’ve been involved in community service projects organized by the school. (不定式作目的状语)
9．例文
I Love My School Life
Hi, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I’m 13 years old, and my birthday is on November 2nd. I study at a big and beautiful school. My favourite subject is English because I enjoy learning new words and speaking with my friends in English.
I’m also a member of the music club, where I have a great time playing music with my classmates. My school life is full of fun and challenges, and I enjoy every moment of it.
I’m proud to be a student at this wonderful school!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示内容，简要介绍个人信息、学校特点、最喜欢的学科及课外活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍自己的个人信息，包括班级、年龄和生日；
第二步，描述学校的特点；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢的学科和参加的社团活动，并给出理由；
第四步，表达对学校生活的热爱和自豪感。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②in English用英语
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①My favourite subject is English because I enjoy learning new words and speaking with my friends in English. (原因状语从句)
②I’m also a member of the music club, where I have a great time playing music with my classmates. (非限制性定语从句)
10．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Ming. I’m thirteen years old. I am writing to express my interest in joining the English Reading Club. I have many hobbies. Such as running, drawing and so on. I am very interested in reading English as well, so I am eager to join this club. For one thing, reading challenging English books will help improve my English level. For another, I can make more friends and share my ideas with them. I would be grateful if you could consider my application.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己的信息并表明写信目的；
第二步，表明自己想加入社团的原因；
第三步，表示期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be eager to do sth渴望做某事
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①For one thing, reading challenging English books will help improve my English level. (动名词作主语)
②I would be grateful if you could consider my application. (if引导的条件状语从句)
11．例文
Dear Mike,
I want to join your book club. I love reading books and I want to learn more about different cultures and stories. I can read English books very well and I have already read many books in my free time. I am really interested in discussing books with others and sharing my thoughts. Joining the book club will help me improve my reading and communication skills. I believe I will enjoy and learn a lot.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己对什么俱乐部感兴趣；
第二步，描述自己为什么想要加入这个俱乐部；
第三步，描述自己的能力和兴趣。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③help sb do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
I believe I will enjoy and learn a lot. (省略that的宾语从句)
12．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to hear that you will visit our school next term. We start school at 8 a. m. in the morning and have classes until lunchtime. After lunch, we have 4 classes and then school finishes at 5:30 p. m.. Then we can study in the classroom or go to a club.
There are many clubs at our school. You can join the Art Club if you like drawing. They meet after school and make beautiful pictures. Or, if you like playing sports, the Sports Club is a good choice. It’s fun and exciting. You can take exercise and make new friends, too. Also, you can learn something about teamwork and learn to have a healthy lifestyle. I hope you have a great time here!
Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据Peter询问的课程安排进行详细介绍；
第三步，介绍学校的社团并给出自己的建议，书写结语，期待对方的来访。
[亮点词汇]
①until lunchtime 直到午餐时间
②a good choice 一个好的选择
③take exercise 做锻炼
[高分句型]
①You can join the Art Club if you like drawing. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope you have a great time here! (省略that的宾语从句)
13．例文
Dear Miss Gao,
I am Teng Fei. I want to join the book club. My name is Tang Fei. I’m 13 years old. I’m in Class Eight, Grade Seven. I like reading, in my spare time, I read a lot of books. If I join a book club, I can act out stories, discuss books and share my thoughts about them. I think reading not only broadens my horizons, but also increases my knowledge. So I’m looking forward to joining the book club. I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，作者想要加入读书俱乐部；
第二步，具体阐述自己的基本信息；
第三步，期盼收到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①in my spare time在我的空闲时间
②a lot of许多
③look forward to期待某事
[高分句型]
①If I join a book club, I can act out stories, discuss books and share my thoughts about them. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I think reading not only broadens my horizons, but also increases my knowledge. (not only...but also句型)
14．例文：
Boys and girls，
My favorite school day is Monday. Let me tell you why I like Monday best.
Every Monday morning, we raise the national flag on the playground. I love this activity. There is a history class on Monday afternoon. History is my favorite subject because I want to know more about the past. And I like music a lot. I enjoy singing and playing the guitar in the music club on Monday. I can also make new friends there.
What a fun day! I really like every Monday!
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己最喜欢的上学日；
第二步，描述自己喜欢的原因；
第三步，描述自己的感受；
第四步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①like sth. best 最喜欢某物
②enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
③make new friends 交新朋友
[高分句型]
①History is my favorite subject because I want to know more about the past. (because引导原因状语从句)
②What a fun day! (what引导的感叹句)
15． 例文
My Dream Club
A club makes our school life colourful. There are some kinds of clubs in our school, but I hope to join a better one. I want to start a club called “Science and Future”. In this club, we will have many interesting activities. We can do experiments together and learn about new scientific discoveries. We will also invite scientists to give us lectures and share their experiences.
In addition, we plan to organize field trips to visit science museums and research centers. Through these trips, we can see how science is applied in real life and get inspired by the amazing achievements.
I believe this club will not only help us develop our interest in science but also prepare us for the future. It will be a great platform for us to explore the wonders of science and technology. I hope more and more students will join our club and make it a success.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个俱乐部的名字；
第二步，根据提示具体描述你的梦想俱乐部；
第三步，最后表达感受以及希望。
[亮点词汇]
① in addition此外
② plan to do sth计划做某事
③ prepare...for...为……做准备
[高分句型]
I believe this club will not only help us develop our interest in science but also prepare us for the future.（宾语从句）
16．例文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
I start my day early with a nutritious breakfast, heading to school around 7:30 a.m. Classes begin at 8:00 and we have seven periods in total, including diverse subjects like Math, English, Science, and History. Lunch break is from 12:00 to 1:00, where I enjoy chatting with friends and sharing stories.
My favorite subject is Science, especially Physics. I find the laws of nature fascinating and the experiments we conduct in class are always thrilling. It ignites my curiosity and fuels my aspiration to explore the unknown.
After school, I head to the Robotics Club, where I can build and program robots. It’s both challenging and rewarding, teaching me teamwork and problem-solving skills. Our club even participated in a regional competition last term, which was an exhilarating experience.
Overall, my school life is fulfilling. Every day brings new learning and adventures.
Yours, Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己学校一天的安排；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目；
第三步，介绍自己的社团活动；
第四步，写结束语，对自己一天的学校生活进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①head to去往……
②chat with sb.和某人聊天
[高分句型]
①Our club even participated in a regional competition last term, which was an exhilarating experience.（非限制性定语从句）
17．例文
This is my first term at my new school. I live a happy life here.
My school is big and beautiful. It has a big playground, a library with lots of books, and classrooms full of friends. My favorite subject is math because it’s useful and interesting. After class, I join the Chess Club. It’s fun to play against my friends. Sometimes, I also do sports like basketball with my classmates.
I think my school life is great. I learn new things every day and make lots of friends.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校生活，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍喜欢的科目和原因，课后活动等信息；
第三步，点评学校生活，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②full of充满
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is math because it's useful and interesting.（原因状语从句）
18．范文：
My school life
I enjoy my school life very much. My favorite subject is English because I like learning new words and speaking with my friends in English. I am also a member of the basketball club, and we practice every Wednesday afternoon. Besides, I take part in the school music club, where we play different instruments together. Last week, we held a small concert, and I performed with my friends. These activities make my school life fun and exciting.
I look forward to more interesting things at school!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述日常的学校生活和兴趣。
③ 提示：根据题目要求，简洁明了地表达自己喜欢的科目、参加的活动和有趣的事情，确保内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要描述自己喜欢的学科及原因；
第二步，提到参加的学校社团并简述活动安排；
第三步，描述自己在学校参加的有趣活动；
第四步，结尾强调学校生活的乐趣，展现对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① in English用英语
② take part in 参加
[高分句型]
Besides, I take part in the school music club, where we play different instruments together. (非限制性定语从句)
19．One possible version:
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
We meet at 8:30 a. m. every Saturday morning. There are lots of different activities in the club. You can have classes about plants. You can go to the wild to watch different plants. You can even grow some plants yourself!
In the club, you can learn more about plants and make new friends with the same hobby. You can also get close to nature and have a good time.
Come and join us! Let’s share the joy of learning about plants together.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍植物俱乐部的时间和各项活动；
第二步，介绍参加植物俱乐部的益处；
第三步，对加入俱乐部表示欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to接近，靠近
②have a good time玩得开心
③the joy of ……的快乐
[高分句型]
There are lots of different activities in the club. （there be句型）
20．例文
Dear Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing this email to you because I want to join the school club.
My name is Li Hua. I’m a 13-year-old girl. I’m in Class 4, Grade 7. I love music very much because it’s exciting and my parents are both music lovers. I can sing a lot of songs. I can play the violin very well. And I am very good at playing the guitar. If I can join the school music club, I’ll be very happy.
My telephone number is 1850633299. Please call me. Many thanks to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，注意电子邮件格式要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用已给开头，点题说明邮件内容；
第二步，详细介绍自己的基本情况、爱好特长等；
第三步，结尾表达想加入俱乐部的愿望和对负责人的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多；很多
②play the violin拉小提琴
③be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①I love music very much because it’s exciting and my parents are both music lovers. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②If I can join the school music club, I’ll be very happy. (if引导的条件状语从句)
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