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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 1 Water
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Write a passage of about 60 words on the topic “Saving water” (以“节约用水”为主题，写一篇约60词的短文)
Suggested questions:
▲Describe a water-saving experience.
▲What difficulties did you encounter and how did you deal with them
▲What did you learn from this water-saving experience
▲How will you promote water-saving in the future
Saving water
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2．Grey water is the slightly used water from sinks, showers or laundry. The graph below shows a system of grey water reuse. Please write a short paragraph with the title “How can grey water help to save water at home ” Pay attention to the use of parallel structure. 请以“How can grey water help to save water at home ”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于70，注意平行结构的使用。
How can grey water help to save water at home
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3．假设你是阳光中学的学生李华，学校正在开展“Water-our precious resource（水—我们珍贵的资源）”主题宣传活动，现招募英语宣传大使向全校同学宣传节约用水、保护水资源的理念。请根据以下要点写一封英文自荐信：
要点提示：
1. 你对水资源现状的认识, 比如水资源短缺和污染问题严重；
2. 你在日常生活中节约用水的做法, 如用洗菜水浇花、及时关水龙头等；
3. 你擅长英语, 曾在英语演讲比赛中获奖, 能熟练用英语交流；
4. 你希望通过担任宣传大使, 提高同学们的节水意识, 一起保护水资源。
要求:
1. 词数不少于60；
2. 短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear teachers,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Sunshine Middle School.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．题目：假如你是学校“水资源保护协会”主席，设计一个创新节水项目（例如：AI漏水检测系统、校园雨水花园等）。写一篇80词提案，包含：
- 项目名称与目标
- 具体实施步骤
- 预期效果
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5．假设你在学校的“水资源保护”主题活动中负责发言，请你准备一段发言稿，内容包括为什么要节约用水以及你在生活中采取的节水措施。（不少于 50 字）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．写一篇关于 “家庭节水” 的倡议书，要求：
1. 包含至少 3 条具体节水建议；
2. 运用至少 2 处平行结构；
3. 格式符合倡议书要求 (开头称呼、结尾呼吁等)。
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7．为了保护水资源，联合国将每年3月22日定为世界水日（World Water Day）。学校在这天将举办相关活动号召同学们节约用水，每个班级召开了一次“节约用水，从你我做起”的主题班会，假如你叫康康，你打算做个关于如何节约用水的演讲。请以“How to Save Water”为题，根据以下的提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：
1. 水对人类、植物和动物都很重要；
2. 介绍如何节约用水（至少三条建议）；
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water.
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8．水是生命之源，然而水污染和水资源浪费问题却日益严重。请以“How to Protect Water Resources”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何保护水资源。
内容包括：
1. 水的重要性；
2. 水资源面临的问题；
3. 如何保护水资源（至少3点建议）。
要求：词数80词左右，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。
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9．水是生命之源，动物、植物、人类都离不开水，没有水，地球上就没有生命存在。你校将举办以“Save Water”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图中的提示信息，写一篇英语演讲稿，结合生活中自己的经历谈谈你对节约用水的看法。
要求：
1.语法正确，语义连贯，字迹工整，书写规范；
2.文章中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.80词左右，不得抄袭试卷原文。
Save Water
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10．水是我们生活中最常见的东西，也是我们生活中非常重要的东西之一，所以我们要节约用水，保护水资源。假如你们校刊的英语专栏以“家庭节约用水”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你的认识和做法。
How to Save Water at Home
The importance of water valuable(珍贵的), useful, we use it to ...
How to save water at home take a quick shower, use less water, turn off the tap ...
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: first of all 首先; then 然后; in the end 最后; used water用过的水
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful.
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Let’s try our best to save water.
11．水是生命之源，每个人的日常生活都离不开水，节约用水人人有责。本期班会主题是“如何节约用水”，你将代表你们小组发言，请根据图片信息提示，以“How to Save Water”为题，写一份英语发言稿。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所给的图片信息提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数70个左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Water is important in our daily life.
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Let’s save water from now on.
12．本期班会主题是“如何节约用水”，作为组长的你将代表小组发言，请根据下列提示，以 “How to Save Water” 为题，写一篇英语发言稿。
keep water running take a . . shower collect. . . reuse water
要求：
1. 短文必须包括提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、姓名、班级等信息；
3. 词数80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总次数）。
How to Save Water
Water is around us. It’s important in our life.
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13．水是生命之源，但现在很多人没有节约用水的意识。请你写一篇英语作文，向大家强调节约用水的重要性。内容提示：
(1)水为什么重要。
(2)我们为什么要节约用水。
(3)日常生活中，我们可以采取哪些具体行动来节约用水。
词数80词左右。
参考词汇：important 重要的；litter around 乱扔垃圾；collect 收集
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14．阅读以下材料，然后根据材料内容，写一篇英语短文。
水是生命之源，我们的日常生活离不开水。然而，很多人没有节约用水的意识。有的人刷牙时不关水龙头，洗澡时间过长等。其实，我们可以通过一些简单的方法节约用水，比如刷牙时关上水龙头，重复利用水，缩短洗澡时间等。
要求：
1. 包含材料中的主要信息；
2. 呼吁大家节约用水；
3. 词数80左右。
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15．为了保护和宣传闽江，并呼吁大家树立节约用水的意识，学校组织了以“如何节约用水和保护水资源”为主题的春游活动。请你根据以下信息，用英文介绍此次主题活动。
Place Minjiang River
Length 562 kilometers
Time last Friday
People students in Grade 7 and Grade 8
Transportation by bus
Activities 1. a speech (演讲) on how to save water in our daily life ... 2. do something useful to protect the river... 3. ...
Feelings ...
要求：1. 根据表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现除提示词以外的姓名、校名；
4. 词数不少于80词。
To protect Minjiang River and make it known by more people, our school had a spring outing with the theme of “Save Water”.
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16．水是生命之源。3月22日是世界水日，你校将举办以“Save Water”为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，结合生活中自己的经历谈谈你对节约用水的看法。
写作要求和建议：
1. 句式多样，过渡自然，注意开头结尾。
2. 演讲格式正确。
3. 书写工整，卷面整洁, 字数100-120字
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17．请根据以下内容提示，以“How to save water at home”为题，写一篇不少于70词的短文。
提示：
1. take a shower; instead of; less water
2. pour
3. leave the tap on; save a lot of water
4. water plants with used water; make full use of
How to save water at home
Water is very valuable. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
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18．你们班举行了一次班会，会上大家就如何节约用水和保护水资源热烈讨论。请根据以下提示以“How to Save Water in Our Daily Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下节约用水的方法。
要点提示：
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Save Water in Our Daily Life
Water is important to us. We cannot live without water.
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19．假如你叫康康，你打算做个关于如何节约用水的课前演讲。请以“How to Save Water”为题，根据以下的提示内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容提示：1. 水对人类、植物和动物都很重要；
2. 介绍如何节约用水（至少三条建议）；
写作要求：1. 文中须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：bath盆浴
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water.
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20．
水对人类非常重要，而世界上的水资源是有限的，所以我们必须要养成节约用水的好习惯才能保证水资源的可持续性利用。请你结合所学知识，以“How to Save Water”为题，用英语写一篇短文，给大家介绍一些节水方法。
要点提示：
1. 记得关水龙头；
2. 快速地洗澡；
3. 重复利用水；
4. ……
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： limited有限的， if possible如果可能的话
How to Save Water
Water is important to people, but water is also limited. So we should develop a good habit of using and saving water.
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Easy steps also count. Let’s save water together.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Saving water
Once, I tried to save water by collecting water from washing vegetables to clean the floor. But it was inconvenient to carry the water. I tried many methods. Finally, I solved it by using a bucket with a handle.
I learned that every drop counts. Saving water also taught me responsibility. Small actions, like turning off the tap, can make a big difference. In the future, I’ll share my experience with others to promote water-saving.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，主题为节约用水；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括描述节水经历、遇到的困难及解决方法、从经历中学到的东西以及未来如何推广节水，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接描述一次节水经历来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“遇到的困难、解决方法、学到的经验”几个方面重点介绍这次节水经历的具体情况，并阐述未来节水推广计划；
第三步，书写结语。无单独结语，以未来节水推广计划作为文章收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①make a big difference产生很大影响
②In the future在未来
③share...with...和……分享……
[高分句型]
①Small actions, like turning off the tap, can make a big difference. (动名词短语作宾语)
2．例文
How can grey water help to save water at home
Grey water is the slightly used water from showers, baths, laundry and taps. It’s really helpful for saving water at home.
As the graph shows, grey water first goes into the “Recycled water” tank. After that, it can be reused to do many tasks. We can use it for mopping floors, flushing toilets, washing cars and watering the garden.
Instead of using fresh water for these things, reusing grey water cuts down our need for clean water. By recycling grey water in this way, we make good use of water. This not only saves a lot of fresh water but also helps us live an eco-friendly life at home.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：围绕“灰水助力家庭节水”，介绍灰水来源、回收流程及回用用途，体现节水意义，信息基于图表及主题展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明灰水概念及对家庭节水有帮助，引出下文；
第二步，详细阐述灰水可用来做什么；
第三步，总结重复使用灰水的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①slightly used water轻度使用过的水
②recycled water回收水
③cut down减少
④make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①We can use it for mopping floors, flushing toilets, washing cars and watering the garden.(并列结构)
②This not only saves a lot of fresh water but also helps us live an eco-friendly life at home.(并列结构)
3．例文：
Dear teachers,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Sunshine Middle School. Water is necessary for life, yet we’re facing severe shortages and pollution.
In my daily life, I always turn off the tap while brushing my teeth. I also collect rainwater to water plants.
I’m good at English and once won a prize in an English speech contest. I can communicate fluently in English.
I hope to be the publicity ambassador. By sharing my experiences and knowledge, I aim to raise students’ awareness of water-saving and work together to protect our precious water resources.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍并点明背景，李华表明身份并阐述水对生命至关重要，但目前面临水资源短缺和污染问题。
第二步，分享个人节水实践、个人优势和申请的意愿、目标。
第三步，表达期待回复的心情。
[亮点词汇]
① daily life日常生活
② awareness of 对……的意识
[高分句型]
By sharing my experiences and knowledge, I aim to raise students’ awareness of water-saving and work together to protect our precious water resources.（不定式短语作目的状语）
4．例文
I’m thrilled to introduce our AI Water Leak Detection System! Its goal is to reduce water waste by 30% in a year.
First, we’ll install sensors in all pipes. These sensors will monitor water flow and detect leaks in real-time. Next, we’ll connect the sensors to an AI system. The AI will analyze the data and send alerts to our team when a leak is detected. Finally, our team will fix the leaks immediately.
We expect this system to reduce water waste significantly and increase water conservation on campus.
Let’s work together to protect our precious water resources!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍创新节水项目的名称及目标；
第二步，介绍实施的具体步骤；
第三步，介绍期望达到的效果。
[亮点词汇]
①be thrilled to do sth做某事很激动
②expect sb to do sth期望某人做某事
[高分句型]
The AI will analyze the data and send alerts to our team when a leak is detected. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5．参考范文
Ladies and gentlemen, Water is vital for all life on Earth. However, fresh water resources are limited. We can only use 0.3% of the world’s fresh water directly. That’s why it’s crucial to save water. In my daily life, I always turn off the tap when I’m brushing my teeth. I also take shorter showers and collect rainwater to water plants. I believe that everyone can make a difference by taking small steps. Thank you.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作需要围绕“水资源保护”展开，文章内容需要涵盖水资源的重要性、淡水短缺现状、个人节水做法及呼吁，考生应注意结合数据增强说服力，适当补充日常节水细节，注意字数要求。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出水对地球所有生命的重要性，同时点出淡水资源有限的现状；
第二步，具体阐述内容。先通过“仅0.3%的淡水可直接使用”的数据强调节水的必要性，再介绍自己日常生活中的节水做法；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁每个人通过小行动为节水做贡献，礼貌结束演讲。
［亮点词汇］
①vital至关重要的
②fresh water resources淡水资源
③limited有限的
④crucial关键的
⑤collect rainwater收集雨水
［高分句型］
①That’s why it’s crucial to save water.（why引导的表语从句）
②I believe that everyone can make a difference by taking small steps.（that引导的宾语从句）
③In my daily life, I always turn off the tap when I’m brushing my teeth.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．【范文 1】
A Proposal for Saving Water at Home
Dear family members,
Fresh water is precious, but it’s being wasted every day—while brushing teeth, washing dishes, or taking showers. Let’s work together to save water at home, starting today!
First, let’s change our habits in the bathroom. Turn off the tap while brushing teeth, take showers under 5 minutes, and replace old showerheads with water-saving ones. These small steps can cut our bathroom water use by half!
Second, let’s reuse water in the kitchen. Save water from washing vegetables to water the plants on the balcony, use a basin to wash dishes instead of running the tap, and store leftover drinking water in a bottle for later. Reusing water is easy and smart!
Finally, let’s check for leaks regularly. Look for dripping taps in the kitchen, wet spots under the sink, or leaking hoses in the garden. Fixing a small leak can save up to 50 liters a day—that’s like 100 bottles of water!
Water is life. Without it, there’s no fresh food, no clean clothes, no happy moments at home. Let’s be water savers, one drop at a time.
Save water, save our home!
Liu Yang【范文 1】
A Proposal for Water Conservation in Daily Life
Dear friends,
Did you know that over 70% of the earth is water, but only 3% is fresh and usable At home, we can make a big difference by changing our daily habits. Let’s protect water together!
Let’s start with small actions. When washing hands, turn off the tap while soaping; when cleaning the floor, use a wet cloth instead of a bucket of water; when filling the kettle, boil only as much as you need. These tiny changes add up to huge savings.
We can also get creative with water. Collect rainwater in a big barrel to clean windows, use water from rinsing fruits to feed the fish, and save water from boiling eggs to water the flowers. It’s fun to find new ways to reuse water!
Finally, let’s teach each other. Tell your little brother not to play with the tap, show your parents how to fix a dripping faucet, and share water-saving tips with your neighbors. When we all join in, our efforts multiply!
Water connects us all. Let’s promise to care for it, today and always.
Be a water hero—start at home!
Chen Jia
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生需包含至少3条具体的节水建议，并运用至少2处平行结构，同时确保格式符合倡议书的要求，包括开头称呼和结尾呼吁等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过简述水资源的珍贵性，引出家庭节水的重要性，进而引出下文具体的节水建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。运用平行结构，从不同方面（如日常用水习惯、节水设备使用、水资源再利用等）提出至少3条具体的节水建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达对大家积极响应节水倡议的期望，呼吁大家共同行动起来，为保护水资源贡献力量。
[亮点词汇]
①make a big difference 有重大影响
②add up to 达到；总计为
③get creative with 创造性地使用……
④join in 加入
[高分句型]
①Did you know that over 70% of the earth is water, but only 3% is fresh and usable （宾语从句）
②When washing hands, turn off the tap while soaping; when cleaning the floor, use a wet cloth instead of a bucket of water; when filling the kettle, boil only as much as you need.（时间状语从句的省略形式）
7．例文
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water. Water is so important for us and we should save water.
Animals, plants and people all need water. If there is no water, we can’t live. So what should we do to save water First, we should turn off the tap after we use the water. Second, we should take a shower but not a bath. Third, we can reuse water, such as using the water from washing vegetables to water the flowers.
Water is so valuable for us. Let’s save every drop of water!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作主题；
第二步，说明水的重要性；
第三步，提出节约用水的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off the tap 关掉水龙头
②take a shower 淋浴
③reuse water 重复利用水
[高分句型]
①If there is no water, we can’t live. （if引导条件状语从句）
②First, we should turn off the tap after we use the water.（after引导时间状语从句）
8．例文：
How to Protect Water Resources
Water is important for all life. Without it, humans, animals, and plants cannot survive.
However, water pollution and waste are serious problems today. Many rivers and lakes are polluted by factories and litter. People also waste water in daily life.
To protect water resources, we should save water, turn off taps and reuse water when possible. Besides, we should reduce pollution and avoid throwing trash into rivers. In addition to it, we can teach others the importance of water protection.
Let’s act now to protect our precious water!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何保护水资源的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请以‘How to Protect Water Resources’为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何保护水资源。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“水的重要性、 水资源面临的问题、 如何保护水资源等”几个方面重点介绍如何保护水资源的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“让我们现在就行动起来保护我们宝贵的水资源吧”的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关上；
②avoid doing sth避免做某事；
③in addition to除了……之外；
④let sb do sth让某人做某事。
[高分句型]
①To protect water resources, we should save water, turn off taps and reuse water when possible. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Let’s act now to protect our precious water! (祈使句)
9．例文
Save Water Ladies and gentlemen,Water is essential for all living things, and without it, life on Earth would cease to exist. As we all know, water resources are limited, and it is our responsibility to conserve them.
I have realized the importance of conserving water through my daily life experiences. For example, I used to leave the tap running while brushing my teeth, but now I turn it off to save water. I also encourage my family to reuse water whenever possible, such as using leftover water from washing vegetables to water plants.
Let us all take action to save water and protect our planet for future generations. Every drop counts, and together, we can make a difference.
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：根据提示内容结合个人经历，谈谈对节约用水的看法，并呼吁大家共同行动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，强调水的重要性；
第二步，结合个人经历，谈谈对节约用水的看法；
第三步，呼吁大家共同行动，节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
① essential 必要的
② conserve 节约
③ make a difference起作用，有影响
[高分句型]
① Water is essential for all living things, and without it, life on Earth would cease to exist.（and连接并列句）
② I have realized the importance of conserving water through my daily life experiences.（运用现在完成时）
③ Let us all take action to save water and protect our planet for future generations.（祈使句）
10．例文
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful. We use it to do lots of things in our life. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
First of all, we should take a quick shower because it uses less water. Then turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. In the end, remember to water plants with used water. It can make full use of water. In these ways, we can save a lot of water.
Let’s try our best to save water.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可以适当增加写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接使用已给出的首句，说明水的珍贵性和用途；
第二步，具体阐述一些保护水资源和节约用水的方法；
第三步，最后呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①It is important for us to save water. （it is＋adj＋to do sth句型）
②Let’s try our best to save water.（祈使句）
11．例文
How to Save Water
Water is important in our daily life. However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.
First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands. It’s a waste of water. Second, remember to turn off the tap after using it. A small action can make a big difference. Third, don’t throw away water bottles with water in them. We can collect the water for later use. Last but not least, we can reuse rainwater to water flowers. It’s a good way to save water.
Let’s save water from now on.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，围绕“如何节约用水”展开；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于阐述日常节约用水的做法；
③提示：需根据图片信息提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要围绕节约用水的方法展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明水在日常生活中的重要性，引出节约用水的必要性；
第二步，依次阐述具体的节约用水方法，对应图片信息；
第三步，结尾呼吁大家从现在开始节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
① water shortage 水资源短缺
②turn off 关闭
③throw away 扔掉
④last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.（so连接因果并列句）
②First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands.（when引导的时间状语从句）
12．例文
How to Save Water
Water is around us. It’s important in our life. However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.
First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands. It’s a waste of water. Second, take a quick shower instead of a long one. Shorter showers can save a lot of water. Third, don’t throw away water bottles with water in them. We can collect the water for later use. Last but not least, we can reuse rainwater to water flowers. It’s a good way to save water.
Let’s save water from now on.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，围绕“如何节约用水”展开；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于阐述日常节约用水的做法；
③提示：需根据图片信息提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要围绕节约用水的方法展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明水在日常生活中的重要性，引出节约用水的必要性；
第二步，依次阐述具体的节约用水方法，对应图片信息；
第三步，结尾呼吁大家从现在开始节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①water shortage 水资源短缺
②throw away 扔掉
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.（so连接因果并列句）
②First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands.（when引导的时间状语从句）
13．范文：
Water is very important to life. We need it to drink, cook, and keep clean. Without water, plants, animals, and humans cannot survive.
However, many people waste water. Some leave the tap running while brushing their teeth, and others litter around, polluting rivers and lakes. If we don’t save water now, there may not be enough in the future. But there are easy ways to save water. We can turn off the tap when brushing teeth. Reusing water is much better. Taking short showers also helps a lot.
Small actions make a big difference. Let’s protect water together!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明水的重要性；
第二步，阐述节约用水的原因；
第三步，提出日常生活中节约用水的具体措施。
[亮点词汇]
① save water节约用水
② turn off关掉
③ make a big difference有很大影响
[高分句型]
①If we don’t save water now, there may not be enough in the future.（if引导条件状语从句）
②We can turn off the tap when brushing teeth.（when引导时间状语从句）
14．例文
Water is very important to our lives. We use it to drink, cook and clean every day. However, many people don’t know the importance of saving water. Some don’t turn off the tap while brushing teeth. Others take really long showers. This is a big problem.
But there are easy ways to save water. We can turn off the tap when brushing teeth. Reusing water is much better. Taking short showers also helps a lot.
Let’s all start saving water from now on. Every drop counts. Saving water is not only for us but also for our future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：围绕材料内容写作，可适当补充，使文章内容更充实；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍水对我们的重要性以及指出很多人没有节约用水的意识；
第二步，给出一些节约用水的建议；
第三步，呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②from now on从现在开始
③not only … but also …不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①But there are easy ways to save water. (there be句型)
②Taking short showers also helps a lot. (动名词作主语)
③Let’s all start saving water from now on. (祈使句)
15．例文
To protect Minjiang River and make it known by more people, our school had a spring outing with the theme of “Save Water”. Last Friday, students in Grade 7 and 8 took a bus to Minjiang River, which is 562 kilometers long.
During the activity, we first listened to a speech about saving water in daily life, such as turning off taps and reusing water. Then, we did something useful to protect the river. Some students picked up litter along the bank, while others handed out leaflets to remind people not to pollute the water. Finally, we discussed more ideas to protect water resources.
This trip made us realize the importance of saving water. We learned practical ways to help and felt proud of contributing to environmental protection. Let’s work together to save every drop of water!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的时间、地点、人物及交通方式等信息；
第二步，介绍具体的活动内容；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②pick up捡起
③hand out分发
[高分句型]
Last Friday, students in Grade 7 and 8 took a bus to Minjiang River, which is 562 kilometers long. (which引导的定语从句)
16．One possible version
As the saying goes water is the source of life. It is no exaggeration to say that people can not live without water. However there is a growing concern that the water available is becoming less and less.
As we all know the world population is growing rapidly. At the same time the development of industry needs much more water. Therefore water is becoming scarce and water crisis are becoming more and more serious.
So we should no longer waste water. Instead we should save it. For example we can recycle water. We can reuse the water after washing our faces to clean the floor and water flowers and so on. Only by saving water can we save ourselves.
So dear friend please do not let our tears become the last drop of water on our planet. Thank you.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示要点进行书写，注意语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍节约用水的重要性；
第二步：介绍出现的问题；
第三步：介绍在生活中如何节约用水；
第四步：呼吁大家一起参与节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know据我们所知
②at the same time同时
③more and more...越来越……
④for example例如
[高分句型]
①It is no exaggeration to say that people can not live without water.(宾语从句)
②So dear friend please do not let our tears become the last drop of water on our planet.(Let型祈使句)
17．例文：
How to save water at home
Water is very valuable. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
First, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath, because it uses less water. Next, ask your family members not to pour waste water into rivers. Dirty water may pollute rivers. Then, don’t leave the tap on when you brush your teeth. In this way we can save a lot of water. Finally, remember to water plants with used water. It can make full use of water.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求中已给出的单词，考生应充分利用。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图，表达节约用水的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从淋浴，阻止废水排入江河，刷牙关闭水龙头，用用过的水给植物浇水等方面介绍节约用水的方法；
第三步，书写结语。提出倡议，呼吁大家节约用水。
【亮点词汇】①instead of代替，而不是
②pour sth. into sth.把某物倒入某物
③make full use of充分利用
【高分句型】①First, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath, because it uses less water.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Then, don’t leave the tap on when we brush the teeth.（when引导时间状语从句）
18．例文
How to Save Water in Our Daily Life
Water is important to us. We cannot live without water. Here are some simple ways to save water in our daily life.
First, reuse water whenever possible. For example, use the water from washing vegetables to water plants or flush toilets. Second, turn off the tap immediately after brushing teeth or washing hands. Don’t let the water run endlessly. Third, take a quick shower instead of a long one. Shorter showers can save a lot of water.
By following these steps, we can all contribute to protecting our precious water resources. Let’s start saving water today for a better future!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分别从循环使用水，及时关水和快速洗澡说明如何节约用水。
第二步，呼吁大家要节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①For example 例如
②instead of 而不是
③contribute to 对……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①Second, turn off the tap immediately after brushing teeth or washing hands.（祈使句）
19．例文：
How to Save Water
Hello, I am Kangkang. We all need water. Water is so important for us and we should save water.
Animals, plants and people all need water. If there is no water, we can’t live. So what should we do to save water First, we should turn off the tap after we use the water. Second, we should take a shower but not a bath. Third, we can reuse water, such as using the water from washing vegetables to sweep the floor.
Water is so valuable for us. Let’s work together to make a difference.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
④ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明水的重要性；
第二步，提出三条节约用水的建议；
第三步，总结并呼吁大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
① save water 节约用水
② turn off 关闭
③ reuse 重复使用
④ take a shower 淋浴
[高分句型]
If there is no water, we can’t live.（if引导条件状语从句）
20．例文
How to Save Water
Water is important to people, but water is also limited. So we should develop a good habit of using and saving water. Here are some tips for you.
First, remember to turn off the tap after you use it. You should not keep the water running when you do not use it. Second, try to take a quick shower, and don’t take a bath if possible. Third, reuse water if possible. We can collect the washing water and use it to sweep the floor. Fourth, collect rainwater. We can use it to clean rooms or water flowers.
Easy steps also count. Let’s start saving water from now on.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明水的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述一些保护水资源和节约用水的方法；
第三步，最后呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do sth.记得做某事
②take a bath洗澡
③if possible如果可能的话
[高分句型]
①You should not keep the water running when you do not use it. (when引导的时间状语从句）
②Let’s start saving water from now on. （祈使句）
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