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Unit 1 Happy Holiday单元话题写作讲解与小练
内容概括
写作任务分析
例文分析
素材积累
写作小练习
写作讲解
一. 写作任务分析
本单元具体谈论和探讨了人们在假日的经历和活动，表达自己对假日的感受，以及假日经历带来的益处。同学们经过本单元的学习，要求能够用所学的知识来讲述在假期的一些故事和经历，表达对假期的感受，总结假日经历的收获。
二. 例文分析。
例文1：
A trip to Beijing
Last week I went to Beijing with my parents on vacation. We went there by plane and stayed there for a week. We had a great time there.
We visited quite a few places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. We also took a lot of photos in those places. Beijing is a beautiful city. I could hear birds singing in the trees, which sounded very peaceful. Besides, the food there was delicious and the people were very friendly.
I thought the trip was rewarding and I learned a lot from the trip. I hope I can go there again.
【分析】
1. 第一段
Last week I went to Beijing with my parents on vacation. We went there by plane and stayed there for a week. We had a great time there.
开门见山，交代了这次旅行活动的核心要素：人物(I, my parents)、时间(Last week)、地点(Beijing)、事件(on vacation)。接着补充了交通方式(by plane)和停留时间(for a week)。最后一句是中心句，表达此次旅行的总体感受(We had a great time there)，总领全文。
2. 第二段
We visited quite a few places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. We also took a lot of photos in those places. Beijing is a beautiful city. I could hear birds singing in the trees, which sounded very peaceful. Besides, the food there was delicious and the people were very friendly.
这是文章最核心的部分，详细描述了在北京的具体活动。先写观光活动(visited places,took photos)，再写整体印象(beautiful city)，最后写感官体验(hear birds singing)和人文体验(food,people)。
3. 第三段
I thought the trip was rewarding and I learned a lot from the trip. I hope I can go there again.
简洁有力地总结全文。先表达个人感受(thought the trip was rewarding)，再写收获(learned a lot)，最后以美好的愿望结尾(hope I can go there again)，升华了情感，
4. 本文恰当的使用了一些连接词如：such as举例，also表示递进，besides表示补充，使段落内容连贯有序。从体裁上看本文是一篇记叙文，文章很好的交代了记叙文的一些要素。时态方面为“一般过去时”，时态选择正确。
三、素材积累。
（1）开头进行背景引入，交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物，人物对假日经历的总体感受。
例句：
Last summer, my parents and I went to a summer camp in the mountains. It was the most exciting holiday I’ve ever had.去年夏天，我和父母去了山里的夏令营。这是我度过的最激动人心的假期。
During the National Day holiday, my friends and I visited some ancient buildings in Xi’an. 国庆节期间，我和朋友参观了西安的一些古建筑。
替换素材
Mount Huangshan 黄山
ancient buildings古建筑
summer camp夏令营
festival节日
forest森林
Red Square红场
Victory Museum胜利博物馆
the mountains山区
Moscow莫斯科、Red Square红场、Victory Museum胜利博物馆
something某事
anything任何事
someone某人
everyone每个人
nothing没有什么
went hiking in the mountains 去山里徒步
visited my grandparents 拜访祖父母
went to a strawberry festival参加节日
went camping/hiking露营/徒步
（2）对事件展开详细的描述。可以按时间顺序或事件发展顺序，描述关键活动和经历，讲述细节内容
例句：
In the morning, we hiked to the top of the mountain and saw the sea of clouds—it was so beautiful that it took my breath away! Then we met a local guide who told us stories about the ancient trees. Later, we tried some special noodles in a small restaurant—everything tasted delicious! 早上，我们徒步到山顶，看到了云海——它太美了，让我大吃一惊！然后我们遇到了一位当地导游，他给我们讲了古树的故事。后来，我们在一家小餐馆尝试了一些特色面条——一切都很好吃！
替换素材
took photos 拍照
tried local dishes 尝试当地美食
explored the forest 探索森林
got together to sing and dance 聚在一起唱歌跳舞
visited ancient buildings/towers参观古建筑
saw the Guest-Greeting Pine 迎客松
heard stories about the war/heared an accordion 手风琴
met someone interesting 遇到有趣的人
saw something amazing 看到神奇的事物
（3）表达对假日的感受。
例句：
I felt so lucky to see the deer in the forest—it was a moment I’ll never forget.在森林里看到鹿，我感到很幸运——这是我永远不会忘记的一刻。
This holiday was fantastic, and I hope I can go back again someday.
这个假期太棒了，我希望有一天我能再回来。
Even though I felt sick after eating too much ice cream, it was still an unforgettable experience.尽管我吃了太多冰淇淋后感到恶心，但这仍然是一次难忘的经历。
It was the most unforgettable holiday because I saw something amazing.
这是最难忘的假期，因为我看到了一些令人惊叹的东西。
My holiday in Moscow was full of surprises—let me tell you about it.
我在莫斯科的假期充满了惊喜——让我来告诉你吧。
替换素材
fantastic极好的
amazing令人惊叹的
relaxing放松的
surprised惊讶的
sick不舒服的
peaceful平静的
took my breath away令人惊叹
remind us of war提醒我们战争
felt excited about对…… 感到兴奋
tasted delicious尝起来美味
made friends with与…… 交朋友
（4）总结一下对此次经历的感受与启示。抒发感情或表达愿望，呼应开头、升华主题。
示例：
This holiday taught me that amazing things can happen when you explore new places!
这个假期教会了我，当你探索新的地方时，会发生惊人的事情！
Traveling taught me that meeting new people and trying new things can be really fun.
旅行教会了我认识新朋友和尝试新事物真的很有趣。
This trip reminded me that peace is precious and we should never forget history.
这次旅行提醒我，和平是宝贵的，我们永远不应该忘记历史。
I realized that holidays are not just about relaxing—they’re about making new discoveries.我意识到假期不仅仅是为了放松，而是为了发现新事物。
（5）时间或者顺序连接词
in the morning/afternoon/evening在早上 / 下午 / 晚上
first...then...finally首先…… 然后…… 最后
later/after that后来/在那之后
First, Then, Later, Finally
四. 写作小练习
1．彼得暑假去大连度假了，请根据下表中所给的信息介绍他度假的情况。
Date July
Together with parents
Place the famous beach
Weather cool, sunny
Food delicious seafood
People friendly
Activities walk along the beach, play volleyball, go swimming, take photos, watch a dolphin show, feed the dolphins
Feeling tired, happy
要求：
1. 语言通顺，基本无语法及单词拼写错误；注意使用正确的时态；
2. 80词以上，开头已给出，不记入总词数。
Peter went to Dalian during his summer vacation.
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参考答案
1. 参考例文 ：
Peter went to Dalian during his summer vacation. He stayed there in July with his parents. They visited the famous beach. The weather there was cool and sunny. The seafood was delicious, and the local people were very friendly.
During the trip, Peter did many fun activities. He walked along the beach, played volleyball, and went swimming in the sea. He also took beautiful photos and watched an exciting dolphin show. The most unforgettable part was feeding the dolphins—it was an amazing experience!
After a busy and exciting vacation, Peter felt a little tired but very happy. He enjoyed his time in Dalian and hoped to visit again next summer.

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