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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优人教版（2024）Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．做家务是家庭成员的义务。作为家庭成员之一，你一定做过不少力所能及的家务活。请根据提示写一篇英语短文讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历，并与大家一起分享。
要点：1. Do you like doing housework Why
2. Tell us about an experience of doing housework.
3. How do you or your parents feel about it
要求：1. 包含以上所有要点；2. 语言表达准确，语句连贯、通顺；3. 80词左右。
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2．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。
要求：
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Family Memories
Hi, everyone. I am very happy to
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3．中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。请你根据所给标题和下图内容，就家务劳动写一篇英语短文发表自己的观点并投递至校英语报。
提示：（1）Do you agree with the boy’s words
（2） Do you often do housework What do you usually do
（3）Should young students learn to do housework Please give at least two reasons.
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Should Young Students Learn to Do Housework
As you can see in the picture,
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4．劳动教育是学生全面发展的重要组成部分。在日常生活中，青少年应该参加各项劳动，在实践中习得劳动知识，掌握劳动技能，形成良好的劳动习惯。假如你是英语俱乐部的成员，俱乐部这周的分享话题是“家务劳动实践”。请你参考提示信息以及自身的经历，写一篇发言稿与大家分享。
提示：
1. What kind of housework do you do and how often do you do it
2. What do you think of doing housework
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；
2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
For middle school students, doing housework should be part of life.
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5．假设你是李华。请根据邮件内容给你的英国笔友Jack回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going I saw lots of your photos on WeChat Moments (朋友圈). I think you had a very wonderful time in the City Zoo. What did you do to have fun And what do you often do with your family at weekends Do you do housework I’m looking forward to (期待) your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Jack
写作要求：
(1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)词数80左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Dear Jack,
I’m really happy to share my happy life with you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．常言道：家是心灵的港湾。请以“My sweet home”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你的家庭活动以及你对家的感受。
注意：
1.语言表达准确，语法正确，语意通顺、连贯；
2.词数80左右。
My sweet home
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7．假如你是孙丽，想重新装饰你的房间，可是又拿不定主意如何装修，于是你想请你的好朋友肖红帮忙想办法。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写一个电子邮件，说明你的想法。
房间现状 黄色，想粉刷成淡蓝色
相约时间及事项 周日上午购买所需物品：涂料、刷子、纸和胶水
记得带两把剪刀过来，选挂墙上的照片
周日下午做剪纸，粉刷墙壁
写作要求：1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi Xiao Hong,
It was fun to have an idea to decorate my room again. However, now I have no idea of how to decorate it for sure. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are yellow. I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour
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Let me know what you think.
Yours,
Sun Li
8．请根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文，以“Family Cleaning”为题，描述一次家庭大扫除活动。
要点如下：
（1）时间：周六上午；地点：家里；人物：全家人。
（2）具体分工：爸爸负责打扫地板和清理窗户，妈妈整理房间和洗衣服，我和弟弟收拾玩具和书籍。
（3）感受：我们都很有成就感，希望以后多进行这样的活动。
（4）80词左右。
Family Cleaning
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9．假如你是吉米，你的好朋友萨姆要搬进新居，他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识回复邮件，表达你的建议。
Hi, Jimmy,
You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed after school. What colour should I paint the wall What can make me feel energetic (精力旺盛的) Could you please offer me some advice
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sam
写作要求：
（1）要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）词数不少于100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.
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Yours,
Jimmy
10．英文中有句谚语“There’s no place like home (没有地方比得上家).”。假如你是Sandy， 请你以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。
写作要点：
（1）你家的环境；
（2）你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的；
（3）为了让你的家更加美好，你打算……
注意：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Home, Sweet Home
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11．随着社会的变化，越来越多的人认为中学生应当掌握基本的生活技能。假如你是李明，请你根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：independence独立 responsibility责任
More Skills, Better Life
Good morning, dear all,
I am happy to give a talk today.
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Thanks for your listening!
12．你学校正积极开展劳动的主题活动，假如你是大明，请给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，聊聊你本学期的家庭劳动计划。
内容要点：
注意：
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件中不得透露个人信息；
4. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
How is it going
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Yours,
Daming
13．为了配合学校“劳动教育月”的主题活动，学校英文报正在开展以“Doing chores makes me _____”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要点提示：
1. What kind of housework do you often do at home
2. Why do you do it
3. What can you learn from doing it
注意事项：
1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、包含提示所给的全部内容；
2. 词数不少于 70 个；
3. 文中不得透露考生本人的姓名或学校名称；
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14．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于60词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
家务不仅是“任务”，更是成长的机会。通过承担家务，我们能提升责任心，学会平衡生活和尊重他人，并为未来的独立打下坚实基础。为了让更多青少年了解家务的益处，请你根据提示及要求，以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题，写一篇英文倡议书。
提示词语：care about, busy, relax, improve, ability, responsible
提示问题：
1. What chores can we do to help parents
2. Why should we learn to help do chores
Dear students.
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.
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15．“人生在勤，不劳何获”。果戈里说过，“如果儿童不去劳动，他们就既学不会文学，也学不会音乐，也学不会体育，也学不会那些保证道德达到最高峰的礼仪。”
某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题进行征文，请你试着投稿。请先谈一谈你对于孩子做家务的看法。再说一说你在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务以及你的收获。
提示词语：learn to do, help, parents, independent...
提示问题：
1．What do you think of doing housework
2．What housework do you usually do at home
3．What do you learn from doing housework
I think doing housework is
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16．家是我们心灵的港湾，成长的摇篮，为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆，红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动，希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事（如分担家务，陪伴家人等）并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示，写文章参与此征文活动。
要求：1．80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2．书写规范，内容连贯，文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。
参考要点：
Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired…
Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills…
Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy…
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family.
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17．某英文报就中学生是否应该做家务进行征文，请根据以下内容提示问题用英文从你做家务的内容、原因及收获等方面来写一篇短文。
内容提示问题：
1. Do you think middle school student should help with housework
2. What housework do you usually do at home
3. Why do you think children should do housework
4. Something more about doing housework.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60—80；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Should We Help with Housework
As a middle school student, I think
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18．假如你是李明，请你根据以下通知给Jackson老师用英文写一封信推荐自己，积极参加评比。
包括以下内容：
（1）在家以及在校常做的劳动；
（2）最擅长的劳动项目；
（3）参与劳动的感受及收获。
Notice
Labor creates better life. Our school will hold an activity to choose “the Star of Labor”. You are welcome to recommend a star of labor in your heart.
Mr Jackson
注意：
1. 内容须包含所给要点，可适当发挥，以使行文通顺；
2. 文中不得透露真实人名、校名；
3. 词数不少于80 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr Jackson,
My name is Li Ming.
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Yours,
Li Ming
19．在你校“劳动教育月”期间，校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动，请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。
内容要点提示如下：
1在家经常做的家务劳动：
◆ fold clothes ◆ wash the dishes
◆ look after pets ◆ take out the rubbish ◆ …
2.你做家务劳动后的收获：
◆ life skills (技能) ◆ take care of ourselves ◆ understand parents
要求：
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥。
2. 不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
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20．传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，最主要是与父母构建良好的关系，家务劳动、良好沟通、尊重父母，都是良好家风的重要因素。请你以“Build Good Relationships with Parents”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1.与父母建立良好关系的重要性；
2.具体做法；
3.感悟与号召。
写作要求：
1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
2.词数90—100；
3.书写规范，卷面整洁；
4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Build Good Relationships with Parents
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Do you like doing housework I like doing housework. I often help my mother do housework when I am free. Because I think my parents are very tired after a day’s work. I want them to have a good rest.
Last Saturday, I got up early to prepare breakfast for my parents. I cooked three bowls of egg and tomato noodles, one for each of us. My parents enjoyed the meal happily. Then I washed our clothes with the help of the washing machine.
My parents were surprised and happy. I was happy, too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过回答是否喜欢做家务及原因来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述一次做家务的经历，包括时间、地点、具体任务等；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己或父母对这次做家务经历的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good rest好好休息
②with the help of 在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①I often help my mother do housework when I am free.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I got up early to prepare breakfast for my parents.（动词不定式作目的状语）
2．参考范文
Family Memories
Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share a heartwarming memory. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, my whole family gathered on our balcony to admire the full moon. My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. My younger brother and I helped mother arrange mooncakes and fruits on the table. The silver moonlight mixed with the golden lantern light created a magical atmosphere.
This memory includes my parents, grandmother, brother and me. Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. The shared laughter and stories under the moonlight will forever warm my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点名主题；
第二步，分享一件家里发生的有意义的事情；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①admire the full moon 赏月
②silver moonlight 银色月光
③be happy to do sth开心做某事
[高分句型]
①Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift.（though引导让步状语从句）
3．例文：
Should Young Students Learn to Do Housework
As you can see in the picture, a little boy who is doing housework says to his mother, “Could you please pay more ” Clearly, he does housework as a way to make money. I don’t agree with his words. I think it’s our duty to do housework.
I often help my parents do housework. At home, I usually clean the room and make my bed. Sometimes I cook for my family. It’s very good to do chores. Firstly, it can keep us healthy and strong. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Secondly, to do housework can share our parents’ work. They must be happy if we can help them.
So I think young students should learn how to do housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，围绕中学生是否应该学做家务展开论述。
②时态：时态为一般现在时陈述观点、做法、理由。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中对男孩言论的看法、个人做家务情况、中学生应学做家务的理由的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出观点的合理性与说服力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出对男孩言论的态度及观点。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从个人做家务情况、应学做家务的理由几方面，说明观点依据。
第三步，书写结语。强调中学生应学做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①agree with同意
②duty责任
③physical exercise体育锻炼
④share分担
[高分句型]
①As you can see in the picture, a little boy who is doing housework says to his mother, “Could you please pay more ” (as you can see引出图片内容，who引导定语从句修饰男孩，开启论述)
②I think it’s our duty to do housework. (“it’s+名词+to do sth.”句型，清晰陈述观点)
③Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. (be regarded as短语，说明做家务的好处)
4．例文
For middle school students, doing housework should be part of life. It’s necessary for us to do some chores like taking out the rubbish and sweeping the floor.
As for me, I wash my socks every day and do the dishes about twice a week. I wash my clothes every Friday evening, and sometimes I cook dinner on Saturday. Every Sunday, I spend the whole afternoon cleaning up my bedroom.
Doing housework gives me a sense of pride. I can also learn some useful life skills. It also helps me relax after a day’s study.
All in all, everyone should spend some time sharing chores at home.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿，围绕“家务劳动实践”展开，分享自己的家务劳动经历与感悟；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述日常家务内容、自身感受等；
③提示：文章契合“家务劳动实践”分享主题，涵盖所做家务、频率及对做家务的看法，内容完整、逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明中学生做家务是生活一部分，说明有倒垃圾、扫地等必要家务；
第二步，详细阐述自己做的家务及频率，像每天洗袜子、一周洗两次碗等；
第三步，表达做家务的感受，包括带来自豪感、学到生活技能、有助于放松等，最后呼吁大家分担家务。
[亮点词汇]
①chore家务事
②sense of pride自豪感
③useful life skills有用的生活技能
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary for us to do some chores like taking out the rubbish and sweeping the floor.（“It’s+形容词+for sb. to do sth.”句型）
②Doing housework gives me a sense of pride.（动名词短语作主语）
③I can also learn some useful life skills.（陈述句表达收获）
④It also helps me relax after a day’s study.（说明家务对学习后放松的作用）
⑤All in all, everyone should spend some time sharing chores at home.（总结并呼吁）
5．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m really happy to share my happy life with you. Last weekend, my family and I visited the City Zoo. We watched playful monkeys climbing trees, took photos with colourful parrots, and even had a picnic near the lake. It was such a joyful day!
At weekends, I often play badminton with my dad or watch movies with my mum. Sometimes we cook together. Last Sunday, we made dumplings and it was super fun! I do housework regularly. I tidy my room, water plants, and sometimes wash dishes after meals.
What about your weekends Do you have any special family traditions Can’t wait to hear from you!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据邮件中提示的问题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己上周末在城市动物园的活动；
第二步，介绍自己和家人在周末经常进行的活动及做家务的情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①playful顽皮的
②take photos拍照
③watch movies看电影
[高分句型]
Last Sunday, we made dumplings and it was super fun! (and连接的并列句)
6．例文
My sweet home
Home is not just a building, but also a place full of love and warmth. I’m lucky to have a sweet home that brings me great happiness.
My home is a comfortable house with a small garden. In spring, colorful flowers bloom, filling the air with their sweet taste. Inside the house, the living room is always full of laughter. We often sit on the soft sofa, chatting and sharing our daily lives.
I have many wonderful memories at home. One Christmas, we decorated the Christmas tree together, and the twinkling lights made the room full of joy.
I love my home. It’s not only a shelter but also a place where I can always feel safe and loved.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕“我的温馨家庭”展开，描述家庭环境、家庭活动以及对家的感受；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述家庭的常规状态、活动等；使用一般过去时讲述过去在家庭中的经历（如圣诞节的回忆）；
③提示：文章符合题目要求，包含家庭环境、家庭活动、家庭回忆以及对家的感受，内容完整，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明家是充满爱与温暖的地方，表明自己拥有温馨的家并带来幸福，介绍家的整体属性（如房子带小花园）；
第二步，描述家庭环境，包括房子外小花园春天的景象，以及客厅常有的欢乐氛围、家人日常活动（坐在沙发聊天分享）；
第三步，讲述在家的美好回忆（如圣诞节一起装饰圣诞树）；
第四步，阐述对家的感受，说明家不仅是住所，更是能感受安全与爱的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①not just...but also... 不仅......而且
②be full of充满
③share分享
④decorate装饰
⑤shelter住所
[高分句型]
①Home is not just a building, but also a place full of love and warmth.（not just...but also...连接并列成分）
②When we decorated the Christmas tree together, the twinkling lights made the room full of joy.（when引导时间状语从句 ）
③It’s not only a shelter but also a place where I can always feel safe and loved.（not only...but also...连接并列成分，“where”引导定语从句）
7．例文：
Hi Xiao Hong,
It was fun to have an idea to decorate my room again. However, now I have no idea of how to decorate it for sure. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are yellow. I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour
Do you have time this Sunday I’d like to invite you to go shopping on the Sunday morning. We can meet at the paint shop and choose necessary things together, such as the paint, two brushes, paper and glue. Then in the afternoon, we will paint the walls and make paper cutting artworks.
By the way, I'd love two pairs of scissors we used for paper cutting last time in your room. Can you bring them After painting, could you help choose some photos to hang on the walls
Let me know what you think.
Yours,
Sun Li
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件，请求朋友帮忙装饰房间。
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中房间现状、相约事项、周日下午计划的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出请求帮忙的意图与具体安排。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出请求朋友帮忙装饰房间的意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从房间现状、周日安排方面，说明装饰计划与需求。
第三步，书写结语。期待朋友回应，结束邮件。
[亮点词汇]
①decorate装饰
②paint shop涂料店
③paper cutting artworks剪纸作品
④hang on the walls挂在墙上
[高分句型]
①I want to paint the walls light blue. What do you think about the colour (直接陈述想法并询问意见，开启互动)
②We can meet at the paint shop and choose necessary things together, such as the paint, two brushes, paper and glue. (such as举例说明购物内容，清晰具体)
③Can you bring them After painting, could you help choose some photos to hang on the walls (连续疑问句，明确请求朋友帮忙的细节)
8．例文
Family Cleaning
Last Saturday morning, my family had a big cleanup at home. Everyone took part in it.
First, we divided the tasks. My father was in charge of sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. My mother tidied up the rooms and did the laundry. My little brother and I were responsible for putting away toys and books. During the cleaning, though we were a bit tired, there was laughter all the time.
Finally, our home became clean and tidy. We all felt a strong sense of achievement. I hope we can have more such meaningful activities in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：讲述上周六早上家里进行大扫除的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明时间和事件，即上周六早上全家进行大扫除，每个人都参与其中。
第二步，中间详细描述大扫除的过程，包括任务分配、每个人负责的工作以及打扫时的氛围。
第三步，结尾说明大扫除后的结果和大家的感受，并表达对未来有更多此类活动的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up清扫
②divided分配
③responsible负责的
④achievement成就
[高分句型]
During the cleaning, though we were a bit tired, there was laughter all the time.（运用“though”引导的让步状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.
A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace to your mind and body. As a middle school student, you always have much pressure and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much schoolwork makes you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom. You can also hang some pictures of nature on the wall. It’s also a good idea to put some flowers by the window. They can make the room full of life and make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will be helpful and that you will enjoy your new life!
Yours,
Jimmy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：向朋友就新卧室的布置给出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明得知朋友搬入新公寓有了自己的卧室，引出下文建议；
第二步，中间具体给出卧室布置建议，包括刷墙颜色、放置绿植、挂自然主题画、窗边放花等及原因；
第三步，结尾表达希望建议有帮助及祝愿朋友享受新生活。
[亮点词汇]
①relaxed放松的
②energetic精力充沛的
③pressure压力
④enjoy享受
[高分句型]
①A bedroom should make you feel relaxed.（此句使用“make+宾语+形容词”结构，简洁表达卧室应有的作用。）
②Blue can bring peace to your mind and body.（运用“bring sth. to sth.”结构，清晰说明蓝色的作用，使表达准确。）
10．例文：
Home, Sweet Home
There is an old saying, “East or west, home is the best.” I live in a house in the countryside. There’s a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom in it. There’re some trees and flowers around my house. The air is really clean. And I often hear birds sing.
There are four people in my family. They’re my parents, my sister and me. We’re helpful and friendly. And we always help and get on well with each other.
I’m happy I have a good family. I will try my best to do more housework and farm work. And I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future. I’m sure my home will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“你家的环境”“你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，表达你让家更加美好的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在
②living room客厅
③get on well with相处得好
④each other相互
⑤try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事
⑥in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①There’s a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom in it. (There be句型)
②I’m happy I have a good family. (宾语从句)
③And I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
11．例文
More Skills, Better LifeGood morning, dear all,
I am happy to give a talk today. Do you have any life skills As for me, I have some life skills, such as cooking and washing my clothes.
Why should we learn some life skills First of all, it can make us live by ourselves. We can take care of ourselves when our parents are not at home. What’s more, it can help us to share the housework with our parents. In this way, our family will be full of joy. Last but not least, I think that the more life skills we learn, the better our future will be.
So we should learn more life skills and live more happily.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图给出的要点，可适当进行补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述掌握更多基本生活技能的好处；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①life skills生活技能
②take care of照顾
③last but not least最后但同样重要的
[高分句型]
①We can take care of ourselves when our parents are not at home. (时间状语从句)
②Last but not least, I think that the more life skills we learn, the better our future will be. (宾语从句)
12．例文：
Dear Tom,
How is it going My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. First, I’ll help with daily chores like sweeping floors and washing dishes every day. Second, I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills. Finally, I’ll cook simple meals twice a week to share the burden. Through these activities, I hope to become more responsible and independent. What’s your plan I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Daming
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：需包含所有图片要点（日常家务种类/做家务的频率/将要学的家庭劳动），不得透露个人信息。
［写作步骤］
第一步：明确邮件目的（响应劳动主题活动，分享计划）；
第二步：分点展开（家务→种植→烹饪）+ 补充细节（频率/目的）；
第三步：结尾（询问对方计划，保持互动性）。
［亮点词汇］
① promote labor education 推广劳动教育
② share the burden 分担责任
③ independent 独立
［高分句型］
① I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills.（不定式作目的状语）
② My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. (含有so的并列句)
13．例文
Housework makes me independent
Housework is important for our family life. I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.
I help by cleaning my room and doing the dishes. Sometimes, when Mom and Dad are busy, I even help cook our meals!
I learn a lot from doing chores. It teaches me many important life skills such as cooking and repairing things. Now I become more and more independent. Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better.
All in all, chores are not just work for me, they are a way to enjoy time with family. I love being a helper at home!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“家务对我们的家庭生活很重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你经常做的家务是哪些、做家务的原因及感悟等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn...from...从……学到……
②more and more independent越来越独立
[高分句型]
①I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy. (宾语从句）
②Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better. (动名词作主语)
14．例文
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. We can clean rooms, wash dishes, take out the trash and make beds. These small actions show our love. Why should we learn to do chores First, parents are busy every day. Helping them relax makes the family happier. Second, doing chores improves our ability to be responsible. For example, managing time between study and chores teaches us balance. Finally, it prepares us for future independence.
Let’s start today! Even simple chores can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己可以在家做的家务，并解释为什么要学会帮忙做家务；
第三步，号召大家都参与，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take out带出去
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①Helping them relax makes the family happier.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s start today!（祈使句）
15．例文
I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. It’s not just about helping parents but also a valuable way to learn and grow.
At home, I usually do several kinds of housework. I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. Also, I like to help with cooking. Sometimes I wash vegetables and learn to make simple dishes. Additionally, I take care of watering the plants.
From doing these housework tasks, I’ve learned a lot. I’ve learned how to be more independent. It also makes me understand my parents’ hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达对于孩子做家务的看法；
第二步，介绍自己在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务，例如扫地、做饭、洗菜、给植物浇水等；
第三步，表达做家务的收获，比如学会独立、理解父母的辛苦等。
[亮点词汇]
①a way to do sth. 做某事的方法
②valuable 宝贵的
③sweep the floor 扫地
④help with cooking 帮忙做饭
⑤additionally 另外
⑥take care of 照顾
⑦water the plants 给植物浇水
[高分句型]
①I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. (动词不定式表目的)
16．例文
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family.
Last month, I decided to help my parents more. I started by sweeping the floor and cleaning the house. At first, it was tiring, but I soon got used to it. Later, I also tried cooking dinner. Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied.
I realized that helping my family is not only our duty but also a great way to show love. It brings us closer and makes everyone happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍自己为家庭做贡献的一次经历；
第三步，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①get used to习惯于
②decide to do sth决定做某事
③at first起初
[高分句型]
①Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. (although引导让步状语从句)
②When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. (when引导时间状语从句)
17．例文
Should We Help with Housework
As a middle school student, I think we should definitely help with housework. It’s not only a way to share the burden with our parents but also a chance to learn life skills.
I usually do chores like sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and folding clothes. Sometimes I cook simple meals on weekends, such as making noodles or fried eggs. These tasks make me feel independent.
Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. Cooking also helps me understand the effort behind each meal, making me more thankful. Moreover, doing housework together can strengthen family bonds. Last week, my mom and I baked cookies while chatting—it was fun and meaningful.
All in all, housework is more than just labor; it’s a lesson in growing up. Every chore we do brings us closer to being responsible and caring individuals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接回应题目问题，为全文奠定基调；
第二步，列举自己常做的家务，体现“怎么做”；
第三步，从责任、感恩、家庭关系三方面论证做家务的意义；
第四步，总结全文，升华做家务的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②all in all 总之
[高分句型]
①Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. (when引导的时间状语从句)
18．例文
My name is Li Ming. I’m glad to know that our school is organizing a competition called “the Star of Labor”. I would like to be the Star of Labor.
Being laborious and helpful, I often help with cooking and cleaning at home and I take care of our class garden as well as organize books in the library at school. My best skill is gardening. So many beautiful flowers have I grown in our school garden that it’s my honor to be named “the best gardener”. It is through labor that I’ve learned responsibility and teamwork. It makes me happy to contribute to my family and school. I believe I deserve this honor.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍在家以及在校常做的劳动；
第二步，介绍最擅长的劳动项目；
第三步，表达参与劳动的感受及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do想要做某事
②take care of照顾，照料
③contribute to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to know that our school is organizing a competition called “the Star of Labor”. (that引导的宾语从句)
②So many beautiful flowers have I grown in our school garden that it’s my honor to be named “the best gardener”. (so...that引导的倒装句)
19．例文：
These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents.
I often help with housework at home. I usually fold clothes and take out the rubbish. I also enjoy looking after pets. I feed them and play with them. I often wash the dishes after dinner. When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.
I learn a lot from doing these chores. I learn some important life skills and I am able to take better care of myself. I also understand my parents more. They work hard every day and still manage to keep the house clean and comfortable. I am proud to help them with housework.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己经常做的家务内容；
第三步，介绍从做家务中取得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①help with sth帮忙做某事
②learn a lot from从……中学到很多
③manage to do sth设法做成某事
④be proud do sth做某事很骄傲
[高分句型]
When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.（when引导时间状语从句）
20．
Build Good Relationships with Parents Building good relationships with parents is of great significance. It not only ensures a harmonious family environment but also contributes to our personal growth and emotional well-being. A warm and loving bond with parents provides us with a sense of security and support.
To build such relationships, we can start by helping with housework. It shows our consideration and reduces parents’ burden. Also, maintaining open and honest communication is key. We should share our feelings and listen to theirs patiently. Most importantly, we must respect parents’ opinions and decisions, even if we disagree sometimes.
In conclusion, good parent-child relationships are the foundation of a happy life. Let’s take action now to build and cherish these precious relationships.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：全文主要使用一般现在时。
③提示：写作时内容涵盖重要性、具体做法和感悟号召，无遗漏，同时适当拓展细节，增强文章丰富度，且无语法和拼写错误 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接阐述与父母建立良好关系的重要意义，强调其对家庭环境、个人成长和情感健康的积极影响，为下文论述具体做法做好铺垫。
第二步，分点说明建立良好关系的具体方式。先提出帮忙做家务，体现对父母的体谅；接着强调保持坦诚沟通，分享感受并耐心倾听；最后指出要尊重父母意见，即使存在分歧，使论述全面且具有实用性。
第三步，结尾段总结良好亲子关系是幸福生活的基础，并发出号召，增强文章的感染力和号召力。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great significance非常重要
②contribute to有助于，对……有贡献
③burden负担
[高分句型]
①Building good relationships with parents is of great significance.（动名词作主语）
②It not only ensures a harmonious family environment but also contributes to our personal growth and emotional well-being.（运用not only...but also...结构）
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