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应用文写作指导
征文投稿
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华，学校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期学生社会实践活动的建议。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 活动建议；
2. 活动意义；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
投稿是向报刊、杂志、电(视)台有目的性地、具有较强针对性地发表自己看法的一种应用文体。常见的作文形式是“征文”和“参赛”，内容分为写人和叙事。
Analysis （审 题）
体裁
主题
时态
人称
1.一般现在时,
将来时
要点
征文投稿类应用文
2.第一人称
1.活动概述及建议；
2. 活动意义；
3. 你的期待。
暑期学生社会实践活动的建议。
the structure of the submission article
01
the submission
article
02
the purpose of writing
03
Describe the specific situation.
summary
交代背景，引出话题，点明主题
事件描述
期盼、祝福、呼吁等
社会实践活动
社会责任感
分享我的想法
提高人们的意识
指导居民进行……
培养责任感
承担责任
实践经历
产生积极的影响
灌输...精神给学生
传递善意给...
磨练社交技能
Useful expressions
social practice activities
a sense of social responsibility
share my ideas
raise people’s awareness
guide residents to do ...
develop/foster /cultivate a sense of duty
take/shoulder responsibility for...
hands-on experiences
make a positive impact
instill...spirit to students
spread kindness to...
sharpen social skills
1.交代背景，引出话题/主题呈现
I’d like to submit / share an article entitled ....（主题）, which I’m sure will catch your attention.
我想提交一篇题为....的文章，我相信会引起你的注意。
v. 递交；主张；建议
I’d like to share my ideas on Core of English Writing Skills, which I’m sure will catch your attention.
我想分享一篇关于英语写作技巧的核心的文章，我相信会引起你的注意。
得知学校正征集暑期社会实践的建议，我想分享自己的想法，希望能为我们策划一次有意义的暑期活动出一份力。
Knowing the school is collecting suggestions for summer social practice , I’d like to share my ideas, hoping to contribute a little to a meaningful summer activity for us.
得知学校正在寻求暑期社会实践活动的想法，我迫不及待地想分享我的想法，让我们的假期变得有意义。
Learning the school is seeking ideas for summer social practice, I’m eager to share mine to make our vacation meaningful.
听说学校正在收集一场别开生面的暑期社会实践活动的建议，我难掩激动之情地分享我的想法。
参考句式：Hardly could I hide my excitement to share my ideas when hearing...
Hardly could I hide my excitement to share my ideas when hearing our school is collecting suggestions about a unique summer social practice.
2.活动概述、活动过程和意义
建议句型：
1 I would like to suggest / propose /
2 recommend that... I believe it would be beneficial to...
3 Perhaps it would be worth considering...
4 I think it might be helpful to...
5 I recommend adding... to enhance
6 It might be advisable to...
7 I suggest revising the... to make it more concise.
8 It is worth noting that...
9 We could consider the option of ...
2.活动概述、活动过程和意义
1.我建议开展一个“社区环境保护活动”
I would like to propose launching a "Community Environmental Protection Activity."
I recommend that we launch a "Community Environmental Protection Activity." I believe it would be beneficial to us students.
2. 我建议我们启动一个“社区环保活动”。我相信这对我们的学生是有益的。
3.我们将捡拾公园和街道上的垃圾；同时我们将张贴海报来告知教导居民垃圾分类。
We’ll pick up litter in local parks and along streets while putting up posters to guide residents about waste sorting.
2.活动概述、活动过程和意义
表达意义：
1. This practical activity has significantly enhanced our hands-on skills and cultivated a strong sense of responsibility.
2. This field practice successfully bridged the gap between abstract textbook knowledge and practical applications, making theoretical concepts more understandable.
3. It not only strengthened our sense of social responsibility but also reflected the active role of young people in serving society.
4. In conclusion, this practical activity is of great significance as it enriches our life experience and broadens our cognitive horizons.
2.活动概述、活动过程和意义
这项活动可以使我们的社区更干净，提高人们的环保意识，同时教会我们对公共空间负责。
This activity can make our community cleaner and raise people’s environmental awareness, while also teaching us to take responsibility for public spaces.
This activity would allow us to contribute to our community while developing practical skills and social responsibility.
这项活动将使我们能够为社区做出贡献，同时培养实用技能和社会责任感。
3.总结，期望
期待活动开启：
I am really looking forward to this activity.
I have high expectations for this event.
I anticipate the activity with great eagerness.
I am eagerly anticipating this event.
I am full of anticipation for this event.
I am excited about the upcoming activity.
I can hardly wait for this event to start.
期待自己收获：
I am anticipating personal growth and learning through my participation in …..
I expect to gain valuable insights and experiences from …..
I am looking forward to harvesting knowledge and skills from …..
My participation in …..is an opportunity for me to enrich myself and broaden my horizons.
I am eager to take advantage of the learning opportunities presented by …..
I am expecting to make meaningful connections and gain practical knowledge through …..
I hope to come out of [event] with a newfound understanding and a richer perspective.
I am optimistic that …..will provide me with the tools and insights I need to further my personal and professional development.
3.总结，期望
3.总结，期望
① I am really looking forward to more people participaging in this activity.
我期待更多的同学参加这个活动。
② All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
总之，现在是我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。保护海洋就是保护我们自己。
③ Let’s work together to do....
让我们一起努力去做……
我期待着看到许多同学参加。
I am looking forward to seeing many classmates take part.
I am anticipating to see many classmates take part.
Let’s work together to make the community warmer and our own vacation more meaningful with love and responsibility.
让我们共同努力，用爱与责任让社区变得更温暖，也让我们的假期更有意义。
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to share my idea for the summer social practice, hoping it can enrich our vacation.
I would like to propose launching a "Community Environmental Protection Activity." First, we’ll pick up litter in parks and along streets; then, we’ll design and put up posters to guide neighbors about waste sorting. This activity can make our community cleaner and raise people’s environmental awareness, while also teaching us to take responsibility for public spaces. It would be a meaningful opportunity for us to make a positive impact and grow as individuals.
I am looking forward to seeing many classmates take part. Let’s work together to make the community warmer and our own vacation more meaningful with love and responsibility.
参考范文
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．读报的经历；
2．喜爱的栏目；
3．期望和祝福。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。
课后练习
Dear Editor,
I’d like to submit an article entitled Youth and Me which I’m sure will catch your attention.
Nowadays, when we are reading Youth , a wide variety of topics appeared in our view. More and more students are becoming increasingly interested in reading Youth. The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows. For one thing, the content attract senior students, leading us into the outer world as a silent friend. For another, I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news. Even more impressive is that Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years.
In my view, it’s so many regular readers of Youth that make such huge progress. Hope more readers can participate in the interaction and share their own stories.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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